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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Wheatley says this when he realizes he needs administrative permission for his rockets.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Wheatley says this when he realizes he needs administrative permission for to access his own rockets.
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* PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure: During the climax of the fic when Wheatley's suggestion to leave the resident of Eaden at [=GLaDoS's=] mercy causes Chell to give up on Wheatley and leaves him behind in pursuit of her other friends. Fortunately this is mended when Wheatley returns and performs a HeroicSacrifice to save Chell and all the other trapped members of the Eaden community.
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* PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure: During the climax of the fic when fic, Wheatley's suggestion to leave the resident residents of Eaden at [=GLaDoS's=] mercy causes Chell to give up on Wheatley and leaves leave him behind in pursuit of her other friends. Fortunately this is mended when Wheatley returns and performs a HeroicSacrifice to save Chell and all the other trapped members of the Eaden community.
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* ProphecyTwist: Before the events of Portal II, the [[spoiler:[[OracularUrchin Oracle Turret]] tells Wheatley he will [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity 'rise above us all.']]]]
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* ProphecyTwist: Before the events of Portal II, ''Portal 2'', the [[spoiler:[[OracularUrchin Oracle Turret]] tells Wheatley he will [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity 'rise above us all.']]]]']]]] Which could ''also'' hint at [[spoiler:him ending up in space.]]
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StephenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StephenMerchant, Creator/StephenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
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* PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure: During the climax of the fic when Wheatley's suggestion to leave the resident of Eaden at [=GLaDoS's=] cause mercy causes Chell to give up on Wheatley and leaves him behind in pursuit of her other friends. Fortunately this is mended when Wheatley returns back and performs a HeroicSacrifice to save Chell and all the other trapped members of the Eaden community.
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* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:GLaDOS kidnaps the entire town of Eaden, Chell’s adopted home, in order to blackmail her into testing.]]
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* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:GLaDOS [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] kidnaps the entire town of Eaden, Chell’s adopted home, in order to blackmail her into testing.]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Exactly What It Says On The Trope.]] Blue and Orange do not see or understand things like humans do. For example, [[spoiler: when GLaDOS sends them to the surface and]] they come across a pool of water, they actually find it incredibly disconcerting to find it is ''not'' lethal and seems to serve no purpose.
* BrainUploading: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley and GLaDOS are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
* CanNotSpitItOut: At no point during the story do the characters or narration mention GLaDOS by name, referring to her largely as "Her", barring a brief mention of her full name. [[spoiler:Also, no one uses the word "love" to refer to Chell and Wheatley's relationship, though just about everyone in Eaden already thinks they're dating.]]
* BrainUploading: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley and GLaDOS are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
* CanNotSpitItOut: At no point during the story do the characters or narration mention GLaDOS by name, referring to her largely as "Her", barring a brief mention of her full name. [[spoiler:Also, no one uses the word "love" to refer to Chell and Wheatley's relationship, though just about everyone in Eaden already thinks they're dating.]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Exactly What It Says On The Trope.]] Blue and Orange do not see or understand things like humans do. For example, [[spoiler: when GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] sends them to the surface and]] they come across a pool of water, they actually find it incredibly disconcerting to find it is ''not'' lethal and seems to serve no purpose.
* BrainUploading: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley andGLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
* CanNotSpitItOut: At no point during the story do the characters or narration mentionGLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] by name, referring to her largely as "Her", barring a brief mention of her full name. [[spoiler:Also, no one uses the word "love" to refer to Chell and Wheatley's relationship, though just about everyone in Eaden already thinks they're dating.]]
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: At one point GLaDOS makes this her intention for Wheatley and Chell.
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: At one point GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] makes this her intention for Wheatley and Chell.
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* CuttingTheKnot: Chell uses a homemade explosive as a way to “manually override” walls in the facility and rescue Wheatley from GLaDOS.
* DeathByIrony: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to give GLaDOS all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
* DeathByIrony: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to give GLaDOS all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
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* CuttingTheKnot: Chell uses a homemade explosive as a way to “manually override” walls in the facility and rescue Wheatley from GLaDOS.
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* DeathByIrony: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to giveGLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Wheatley's redemption comes at a hefty cost, but his courage to face death and separation from Chell wins the safety of Eaden. And thanks to Caroline, Wheatley is granted his original human body and a life with Chell, while GLaDOS gets to go on testing, far, far away from them.]]
* EasilyForgiven: Rather pointedly averted, as with InformedFlaw below. The only reason Chell responds to Wheatley's distress call in the first place is because she is aware that there were [[BrainwashedAndCrazy extenuating circumstances]] the first time he betrayed her (and because he's obviously being [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]] by GLaDOS); after [[spoiler: he nearly betrays her again]] (keyword: ''nearly'') she makes it clear that he has exactly one more chance left; and after [[spoiler: he blows ''that'' chance]] she cuts ties with him completely. [[spoiler: He immediately pulls a HeroicSacrifice and redeems himself, but still.]]
* EasilyForgiven: Rather pointedly averted, as with InformedFlaw below. The only reason Chell responds to Wheatley's distress call in the first place is because she is aware that there were [[BrainwashedAndCrazy extenuating circumstances]] the first time he betrayed her (and because he's obviously being [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]] by GLaDOS); after [[spoiler: he nearly betrays her again]] (keyword: ''nearly'') she makes it clear that he has exactly one more chance left; and after [[spoiler: he blows ''that'' chance]] she cuts ties with him completely. [[spoiler: He immediately pulls a HeroicSacrifice and redeems himself, but still.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Wheatley's redemption comes at a hefty cost, but his courage to face death and separation from Chell wins the safety of Eaden. And thanks to Caroline, Wheatley is granted his original human body and a life with Chell, while GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] gets to go on testing, far, far away from them.]]
* EasilyForgiven: Rather pointedly averted, as with InformedFlaw below. The only reason Chell responds to Wheatley's distress call in the first place is because she is aware that there were [[BrainwashedAndCrazy extenuating circumstances]] the first time he betrayed her (and because he's obviously being [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]] byGLaDOS); [=GLaDOS=]); after [[spoiler: he nearly betrays her again]] (keyword: ''nearly'') she makes it clear that he has exactly one more chance left; and after [[spoiler: he blows ''that'' chance]] she cuts ties with him completely. [[spoiler: He immediately pulls a HeroicSacrifice and redeems himself, but still.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: At one point, Wheatley asks the Hatfield twins which one is the evil twin. [[spoiler:It later turns out that Foxglove has an "evil twin" in GLaDOS.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: At one point, Wheatley asks the Hatfield twins which one is the evil twin. [[spoiler:It later turns out that Foxglove has an "evil twin" in GLaDOS.[=GLaDOS=].]]
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* HelplessGoodSide: [[spoiler:Subverted. Caroline turns out to be far from helpless, and, while still a saint compared to GLaDOS, perhaps not all that good either.]]
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* HelplessGoodSide: [[spoiler:Subverted. Caroline turns out to be far from helpless, and, while still a saint compared to GLaDOS, [=GLaDOS=], perhaps not all that good either.]]
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* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
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* HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
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** Cynically played with in the case of GLaDOS- because of her inability to accept her humanity [[spoiler:as Wheatley eventually does, and her repeated, futile attempts to delete Caroline]], it's heavily implied that she is [[spoiler:[[DontYouDarePityMe doomed to live a limited half-life]] [[LeaveMeAlone for all eternity]]]]. An extremely well-done BeYourself aesop.
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** Cynically played with in the case of GLaDOS- [=GLaDOS=] - because of her inability to accept her humanity [[spoiler:as Wheatley eventually does, and her repeated, futile attempts to delete Caroline]], it's heavily implied that she is [[spoiler:[[DontYouDarePityMe doomed to live a limited half-life]] [[LeaveMeAlone for all eternity]]]]. An extremely well-done BeYourself aesop.
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* RebuiltPedestal: Chell becomes outraged and disillusioned with Wheatley when [[DirtyCoward he suggests to abandon the residents of Eaden]] and just have the two escape together. Her entire journey in the facility continues to have her question whether or not a robot like Wheatley is capable of emotions at all. Fortunately this is cleared up when Wheatley returns and saved her and the other Eaden inhabitants by sacrificing himself to shut down GLaDoS.
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* RebuiltPedestal: Chell becomes outraged and disillusioned with Wheatley when [[DirtyCoward he suggests to abandon the residents of Eaden]] and just have the two escape together. Her entire journey in the facility continues to have her question whether or not a robot like Wheatley is capable of emotions at all. Fortunately this is cleared up when Wheatley returns and saved her and the other Eaden inhabitants by sacrificing himself to shut down GLaDoS.[=GLaDOS=].
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* TarotMotifs: Mentioned in the chapter "The Oracle." The Oracle Turret does a Tarot reading for Wheatley, and it's very clear that Wheatley is TheFool, Chell is [[TheDeterminator Strength]], and GLaDOS is [[MyBelovedSmother The Empress.]]
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* TarotMotifs: Mentioned in the chapter "The Oracle." The Oracle Turret does a Tarot reading for Wheatley, and it's very clear that Wheatley is TheFool, Chell is [[TheDeterminator Strength]], and GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] is [[MyBelovedSmother The Empress.]]
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* TemptingFate: [[spoiler: Cubicle-drone]] Wheatley does this in a flashback by stating that he '(doesn't) have anything life-altering planned in the forseeable future.'
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* TemptingFate: [[spoiler: Cubicle-drone]] Wheatley does this in a flashback by stating that he '(doesn't) have anything life-altering planned in the forseeable foreseeable future.'
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: GLaDOS to Wheatley, [[spoiler: after Wheatley transfers himself back to Aperture.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''GLaDOS''': "I can see that spending all that time out there with her has had a bad influence on you. You were the dumbest thing in the entire facility before, but this is just embarrassing. What are you trying to do? Save her? Or are you just trying to prove you're human? Please. You're not human. You're not even a functional machine. You're just an experiment that went horribly, horribly wrong. Let's face it, around here, that doesn't exactly make you unique."]]
--> [[spoiler:'''GLaDOS''': "I can see that spending all that time out there with her has had a bad influence on you. You were the dumbest thing in the entire facility before, but this is just embarrassing. What are you trying to do? Save her? Or are you just trying to prove you're human? Please. You're not human. You're not even a functional machine. You're just an experiment that went horribly, horribly wrong. Let's face it, around here, that doesn't exactly make you unique."]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] to Wheatley, [[spoiler: after Wheatley transfers himself back to Aperture.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''GLaDOS''': [[spoiler:'''[=GLaDOS=]''': "I can see that spending all that time out there with her has had a bad influence on you. You were the dumbest thing in the entire facility before, but this is just embarrassing. What are you trying to do? Save her? Or are you just trying to prove you're human? Please. You're not human. You're not even a functional machine. You're just an experiment that went horribly, horribly wrong. Let's face it, around here, that doesn't exactly make you unique."]]
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* WalkingDisasterArea: GLaDOS eventually decides that Chell is one of these- she doesn't even have to ''try'' to end up destroying everything she touches.
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* WalkingDisasterArea: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] eventually decides that Chell is one of these- she doesn't even have to ''try'' to end up destroying everything she touches.
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Blue Sky is a VideoGame/{{Portal}} fanfic by Waffles, and is hosted on both livejournal and Fanfiction.Net. A [[FandomSpecificPlot Humanized Wheatley fic]], it spans 15 chapters and it's one of the longest Portal fanfictions on FFN, clocking in at 176,808 words.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StevenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StevenMerchant, StephenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[http://clawr-island.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]].
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i [[https://soundcloud.com/cafechan/from-the-monster-with-love From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[http://clawr-island.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]].
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* PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure: During the climax of the fic when Wheatley's suggestion to leave the resident of Eaden at [=GLaDoS's=] cause Chell to give up on Wheatley and leaves him behind in pursuit of her other friends. Fortunately this is mended when Wheatley returns back and performs a HeroicSacrifice to save Chell and all the other trapped members of the Eaden community.
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** Wheatley's backstory, however, provides a rare inversion of this trope: [[spoiler: He was originally a human, but the Aperture scientists uploaded his brain into a computer and then cut his brain apart so it would fit into the programming they needed of him.]]
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** Wheatley's backstory, however, provides a rare inversion of this trope: [[spoiler: He was originally a human, but the Aperture scientists uploaded his brain into a computer and then cut his brain mind apart so it would fit into the programming they needed of him.]]
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** Later, this exchange takes place between Wheatley and [[spoiler:Caroline]]
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* TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything: In-universe, Wheatley lampshades this Aperture Science Mk. IV Personality Core Emergency Protocol: ''What To Do in Case of Catastrophic Circumstances Not Included in the Manual, Such as Being Knocked Out Of Lunar Orbit By a Meteor''
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* TheDevTeamThinksOfEverything: DevelopersForesight: In-universe, Wheatley lampshades this Aperture Science Mk. IV Personality Core Emergency Protocol: ''What To Do in Case of Catastrophic Circumstances Not Included in the Manual, Such as Being Knocked Out Of Lunar Orbit By a Meteor''
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[spoiler:[[http://clawr-island.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]]]].
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[spoiler:[[http://clawr-island.[[http://clawr-island.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]]]].
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* [[spoiler:BrainUploading]]: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley and GLaDOS are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
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* [[spoiler:BrainUploading]]: BrainUploading: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley and GLaDOS are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
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* {{Cutting the Knot}}: Chell uses a homemade explosive as a way to “manually override” walls in the facility and rescue Wheatley from GLaDOS.
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* {{Death by Irony}}: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to give GLaDOS all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
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* {{Death by Irony}}: CuttingTheKnot: Chell uses a homemade explosive as a way to “manually override” walls in the facility and rescue Wheatley from GLaDOS.
* DeathByIrony: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to give GLaDOS all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
* DeathByIrony: Invoked and executed by Wheatley as he proceeds [[spoiler: to give GLaDOS all his “terrible ideas” and switch her off. He points out that if she had never tried to murder all the Aperture employees there would have been no need for him in the first place.]]
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* DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife: Wheatley.
** [[GeniusDitz He]] finds [[LargeHamRadio it.]] Among other things.
** [[GeniusDitz He]] finds [[LargeHamRadio it.]] Among other things.
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* {{Doomed Hometown}}: [[spoiler:GLaDOS kidnaps the entire town of Eaden, Chell’s adopted home, in order to blackmail her into testing.]]
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* [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler First Act Spoiler]]: Wheatley acquires a HardLight "human" body, leaving his core body behind, in chapter three.
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** Wheatley at one point says "[[ATaleOfTwoCities It is a far, far better thing that I do now, than I have ever done]]." He [[ShoutOut misattributes the quote,]] but [[spoiler: later he sacrifices himself for Chell and Eaden, much like Sydney Carton did for Lucie Manette.]]
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** Wheatley at one point says "[[ATaleOfTwoCities "[[Literature/ATaleOfTwoCities It is a far, far better thing that I do now, than I have ever done]]." He [[ShoutOut misattributes the quote,]] but [[spoiler: later he sacrifices himself for Chell and Eaden, much like Sydney Carton did for Lucie Manette.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Go Out With a Smile}}]]: [[spoiler:Wheatley’s last moment in his hard-light body.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Go Out With GilliganCut: Wheatley confidently insists that he can handle Garret's digital moonshine. The scene then cuts directly to [[CantHoldHisLiquor a Smile}}]]: rambling, drunken monologue.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: Chell has little use for social niceties, such as conversation, and has a strong ruthless streak. She's also merciless in dealing with threats, and not above using Wheatley as a frightened, shaking mouthpiece to warn Aaron of the dangers of "the northeast" in her place.
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Wheatley’s last moment in his hard-light body.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: Chell has little use for social niceties, such as conversation, and has a strong ruthless streak. She's also merciless in dealing with threats, and not above using Wheatley as a frightened, shaking mouthpiece to warn Aaron of the dangers of "the northeast" in her place.
* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Wheatley’s last moment in his hard-light body.]]
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* GilliganCut: Wheatley confidently insists that he can handle Garret's digital moonshine. The scene then cuts directly to [[CantHoldHisLiquor a rambling, drunken monologue.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: Chell has little use for social niceties, such as conversation, and has a strong ruthless streak. She's also merciless in dealing with threats, and not above using Wheatley as a frightened, shaking mouthpiece to warn Aaron of the dangers of "the northeast" in her place.
* GoodIsNotNice: Chell has little use for social niceties, such as conversation, and has a strong ruthless streak. She's also merciless in dealing with threats, and not above using Wheatley as a frightened, shaking mouthpiece to warn Aaron of the dangers of "the northeast" in her place.
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* [[spoiler:HelplessGoodSide]]: [[spoiler:Subverted. Caroline turns out to be far from helpless, and, while still a saint compared to GLaDOS, perhaps not all that good either.]]
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler:As of his rescue of Chell, Wheatley became just a bundle of files in a dormant mainframe. It didn't stick.]]
* HostageSituation[=/=]IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] captures everyone from Eaden and holds them hostage so that Chell will do the tests and cooperate.]]
* [[HeWhoMustNotBeNamed She Who Must Not Be Named]]: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler:As of his rescue of Chell, Wheatley became just a bundle of files in a dormant mainframe. It didn't stick.]]
* HostageSituation[=/=]IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] captures everyone from Eaden and holds them hostage so that Chell will do the tests and cooperate.]]
* [[HeWhoMustNotBeNamed She Who Must Not Be Named]]: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
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* [[spoiler:HelplessGoodSide]]: HelplessGoodSide: [[spoiler:Subverted. Caroline turns out to be far from helpless, and, while still a saint compared to GLaDOS, perhaps not all that good either.]]
*[[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:As of his rescue of Chell, Wheatley became just a bundle of files in a dormant mainframe. It didn't stick.]]
*HostageSituation[=/=]IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] captures everyone from Eaden and holds them hostage so that Chell will do the tests and cooperate.]]
* [[HeWhoMustNotBeNamed She Who Must Not Be Named]]:HeWhoMustNotBeNamed: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.Place''.
* HostageSituation: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] captures everyone from Eaden and holds them hostage so that Chell will do the tests and cooperate.]]
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* HostageSituation: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] captures everyone from Eaden and holds them hostage so that Chell will do the tests and cooperate.]]
* ImaginaryFriend: Linnell, Ellie Otten’s stuffed vortigaunt and best friend.
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* ImaginaryFriend: Linnell, Ellie Otten’s stuffed vortigaunt and best friend.
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* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Wheatley's first conversation with [=GLaDOS=] and his last both involve suggesting she relax and the various way she could do it.]]
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* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Wheatley's first conversation with [=GLaDOS=] and his last both involve suggesting she relax and the various way ways she could do it.]]
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* [[spoiler:BrainUploading]]: [[spoiler:Both Wheatley and GLaDOS are the result of a version of this procedure. Wheatley also undergoes the process in reverse at the very end, an example of NeuralImplanting.]]
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* RobotNames: Wheatley's complete identification code, according to Aperture Science, is 00004/[F]AS[IV][=IDPC241105=]/AS[I]HRAD -- which is short for "#4, Filetype: Aperture Science (4) Intelligence Dampening Personality Core (November 24, 2005); Aperture Science Interface: Human Relations Avatar Device". All AI he meets acknowledges him as this, though one kindly abbreviates it to "00004."
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* RobotNames: Wheatley's complete identification code, according to Aperture Science, is 00004/[F]AS[IV][=IDPC241105=]/AS[I]HRAD -- which is short for "#4, Filetype: Aperture Science (4) Intelligence Dampening Personality Core (November 24, 2005); Aperture Science Interface: Human Relations Avatar Device". All AI AIs he meets acknowledges him as this, though one kindly abbreviates it to "00004."
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* RobotNames: Wheatley's complete identification code, according to Aperture Science, is 00004/[F]AS[IV][=IDPC241105=]/AS[I]HRAD -- a random string of numbers and letters with no hyphen, but brackets and slashes galore. All AI he meets acknowledges him as this, though one kindly abbreviates it to "00004."
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* RobotNames: Wheatley's complete identification code, according to Aperture Science, is 00004/[F]AS[IV][=IDPC241105=]/AS[I]HRAD -- a random string of numbers and letters with no hyphen, but brackets and slashes galore.which is short for "#4, Filetype: Aperture Science (4) Intelligence Dampening Personality Core (November 24, 2005); Aperture Science Interface: Human Relations Avatar Device". All AI he meets acknowledges him as this, though one kindly abbreviates it to "00004."
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* [[HeWhoMustNotBeNamed She Who Must Not Be Named]]: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
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* [[HeWhoMustNotBeNamed She Who Must Not Be Named]]: GLaDOS is never addressed as such, except technically when she's referred to by her full designation. Instead, she's referred to simply as ''She'' or ''Her''. The Aperture facility is sometimes given this treatment as well, with it simply being called ''There'' or ''That Place''.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StevenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Wheatley's human body is based off of his voice actor, StevenMerchant, who stands 6'7". Chell, meanwhile, is "not particularly tall."
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* BilingualBonus: [[spoiler: Caroline's song in chapter 15. To be fair, it's a bit less touchy feely than the one from the game]]
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* BilingualBonus: [[spoiler: Caroline's song in chapter 15. To be fair, it's a bit less touchy feely than the one from the game]]game]].
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* ShoutOut: Twins Jason and Max tell Chell they thought she was dead. What's her response? [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "I got better"]]
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[[caption-width-right:254:One of many many ''many'' pieces of fanart floating around Website/{{Tumblr}}. See the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/ImageLinks/BlueSky Image Page]] for more.]]
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[[caption-width-right:254:One of many many ''many'' pieces of fanart floating around Website/{{Tumblr}}. See the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/ImageLinks/BlueSky [[ImageLinks/BlueSky Image Page]] for more.]]
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* MeaningfulName: The town of [[Literature/TheBible Eaden]], an example of human civilization after the apocalyptic Combine invasion, comes from a half decayed sign that originally read "Dead End."
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* MeaningfulName: The town of [[Literature/TheBible Eaden]], an example of human civilization after the apocalyptic Combine invasion, comes from [[SignsOfDisrepair a half decayed sign sign]] that originally read "Dead End."
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A [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/BlueSky character page]] has finally been made but is currently under construction and in need of assistance.
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A [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Characters/BlueSky [[Characters/BlueSky character page]] has finally been made but is currently under construction and in need of assistance.
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-> "Meteors, signals, apologies, and that tricky little thing called humanity- four years after the events of Portal II, Wheatley’s been handed a second chance, but it’s not going to be plain sailing…"
-> "Meteors, signals, apologies, and that tricky little thing called humanity- four years after the events of Portal II, Wheatley’s been handed a second chance, but it’s not going to be plain sailing…"
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-> "Meteors, signals, apologies, and that tricky little thing called humanity- four years after the events of Portal II, Wheatley’s been handed a second chance, but it’s not going to be plainsailing…"sailing
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-> "Meteors, signals, apologies, and that tricky little thing called humanity- four years after the events of Portal II, Wheatley’s been handed a second chance, but it’s not going to be plain
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No need to edit just to point out that they missed their planned date. (They\'ve also pointed out that they now have no ETA for chapter 2, just \"soonish\", so we don\'t need to list a date anyway.)
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Currently, there is a [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/ project underway]] to convert the nearly 180,000 word story into a fan-produced audiobook, fully-cast and unabridged. The creators began to publish the podfic online, one chapter at a time, on April 5th, 2014, and there was much rejoicing. Chapter One of the podcast [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/post/81811373196/this-time-it-should-work-for-those-without has been released]], with chapter two's planned release date being June 2014. Note the key word, "[[ScheduleSlip planned.]]"
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Currently, there is a [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/ project underway]] to convert the nearly 180,000 word story into a fan-produced audiobook, fully-cast and unabridged. The creators began to publish the podfic online, one chapter at a time, on April 5th, 2014, and there was much rejoicing. Chapter One of the podcast [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/post/81811373196/this-time-it-should-work-for-those-without has been released]], with chapter two's planned release date being June 2014. Note the key word, "[[ScheduleSlip planned.]]"
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Currently, there is a [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/ project underway]] to convert the nearly 180,000 word story into a fan-produced audiobook, fully-cast and unabridged. The creators began to publish the podfic online, one chapter at a time, on April 5th, 2014, and there was much rejoicing. Chapter One of the podcast [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/post/81811373196/this-time-it-should-work-for-those-without has been released]], with chapter two's planned release date being June 2014.
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Currently, there is a [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/ project underway]] to convert the nearly 180,000 word story into a fan-produced audiobook, fully-cast and unabridged. The creators began to publish the podfic online, one chapter at a time, on April 5th, 2014, and there was much rejoicing. Chapter One of the podcast [[http://podsky.tumblr.com/post/81811373196/this-time-it-should-work-for-those-without has been released]], with chapter two's planned release date being June 2014.
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* EasilyForgiven: Rather pointedly averted, as with InformedFlaw below. The only reason Chell responds to Wheatley's distress call in the first place is because she is aware that there were [[BrainwashedAndCrazy extenuating circumstances]] the first time he betrayed her (and because he's obviously being [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]] by GLaDOS); after [[spoiler: he nearly betrays her again]] (keyword: ''nearly'') she makes it clear that he has exactly one more chance left; and after [[spoiler: he blows ''that'' chance]] she cuts ties with him completely. [[spoiler: He immediately pulls a HeroicSacrifice and redeems himself, but still.]]
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[spoiler:[[http://literallymeulin.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]]]].
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Check out the ImageLinks/BlueSky image page for lots and lots of fanart. It has two Fanmixes, ''The Blue Sky Fanmix of Musical Brazillance'', and ''Blue Sky Music Madness.'' The former was compiled by the author's writing partner, and the latter is made up of fan suggestions. Both are located and available for download [[http://marshwiggledyke.livejournal.com/20850.html here]]. It also has its own original fan-written song, [[http://cafechan.tumblr.com/post/14702715569/haha-oh-lord-im-just-gonna-upload-this-before-i From the Monster, With Love,]] and [[spoiler:[[http://literallymeulin.[[spoiler:[[http://clawr-island.tumblr.com/post/13195267575 a sung version of the in-universe turret song]]]].