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** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail, with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While a Smurf rights group warns the possibility of liberating the babies from the nursery after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's meant to be seen as a bad thing that "the precious babies could be taken away".
** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail, with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While a Smurf rights group warns the possibility of liberating the babies from the nursery after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's meant to be seen as a bad thing that "the precious babies could be taken away".
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on ''Franchise/TheSmurfs'' franchise by {{Creator/Peyo}}. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on ''Franchise/TheSmurfs'' franchise by {{Creator/Peyo}}. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], [[spoiler:taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]]. The story ends with the babies (which are now at a head count of 4, by the way) snuggling together and restoring their broken hearts from the torture they've been through at the hands of cruel humans... aside from the incompetence of the narrator and the Blue Moon Nursery, of course.
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The story is fairly slice-of-life based based, but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], [[spoiler:taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]]. The story ends with the babies (which are now at a head count of 4, by the way) snuggling together and restoring their broken hearts from the torture they've been through at the hands of cruel humans... aside from the incompetence of the narrator and the Blue Moon Nursery, of course.
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if i remember correctly, this trope only regards actual unicorns
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* UnicornsAreSacred: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
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** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail detail, with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While a Smurf rights group threatens to liberate the babies from the nursery after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's meant to be seen as a bad thing that "the precious babies could be taken away".
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While a Smurf rights group threatens to liberate warns the possibility of liberating the babies from the nursery after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's meant to be seen as a bad thing that "the precious babies could be taken away".
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While the narrator does have a moment where e feels Blueberry is better off without him after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's quickly brushed aside and is meant to be seen as a bad thing that "his baby could be taken away".
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While a Smurf rights group threatens to liberate the narrator does have a moment where e feels Blueberry is better off without him babies from the nursery after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's quickly brushed aside and is meant to be seen as a bad thing that "his baby "the precious babies could be taken away".
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While the narrator does have a moment where Blueberry is better off without him after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's quickly brushed aside and is meant to be seen as a bad thing that "his baby could be taken away".
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While the narrator does have a moment where e feels Blueberry is better off without him after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's quickly brushed aside and is meant to be seen as a bad thing that "his baby could be taken away".
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* AbandonedPetInABox: The story begins with the narrator coming home to a wooden box containing a baby Smurf inside. He decides to adopt him almost immediately.
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider giving away the baby smurfs to a village where they can be with other smurfs.
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** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider giving away that the baby smurfs should be given to a village where they can be with other smurfs. While the narrator does have a moment where Blueberry is better off without him after Strawberry and Pom-Pom are rescued, it's quickly brushed aside and is meant to be seen as a bad thing that "his baby could be taken away".
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Unlike the other baby Smurfs, who are given names such as Blueberry, Dewdrop, Strawberry, and Pom-Pom, the Smurf Runt is only ever called "the Runt".
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* BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter including but not limited to burns from a laundry dryer on the Smurf Runt, various torture-inflicted bruises on Pom-Pom and Strawberry, and the long-withered skeleton of Snickers.
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* BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter including but not limited to burns from a laundry dryer on the Smurf Runt, various torture-inflicted bruises on Pom-Pom and Strawberry, and the [[spoiler:the long-withered skeleton of Snickers.Snickers]].
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* BrokenAesop: The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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* BrokenAesop: BrokenAesop:
** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say theleast.least.
** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider giving away the baby smurfs to a village where they can be with other smurfs.
** The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the
** Even after events such as Tattlerette making a speech about how smurfs should not be trafficked and the scenes that serve evidence that smurfs are not fit to be raised by humans, neither the narrator nor the nursery staff consider giving away the baby smurfs to a village where they can be with other smurfs.
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* AuthorAppeal: There are many moments where the narrator primarily fixates on Smurf tails, primarily poking and prodding them.
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* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs describing the ColdBloodedTorture of baby smurfs.
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* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he the narrator first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs describing the ColdBloodedTorture of baby smurfs.
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* DarkFic: Gradually escalates from a Fanfic/MyLittleDashie-esque adoption story into a series of rescues from disturbing smuggling rings, getting into gruesome accidents, and witnessing graphically-detailed torture and cruelty.
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* DarkFic: Gradually escalates from a Fanfic/MyLittleDashie-esque adoption story into a series of grim events such as rescues from disturbing smuggling rings, getting into gruesome accidents, and witnessing graphically-detailed torture and cruelty.
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The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], [[spoiler:taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]]. The story ends with the babies (which are now at a head count of 4, by the way) snuggling together and restoring their broken hearts from the torture they've been through at the hands of cruel humans... aside from the narrator and the Blue Moon Nursery, of course.
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The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], [[spoiler:taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]]. The story ends with the babies (which are now at a head count of 4, by the way) snuggling together and restoring their broken hearts from the torture they've been through at the hands of cruel humans... aside from the incompetence of the narrator and the Blue Moon Nursery, of course.
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* DarkFic: Gradually escalates from a Fanfic/MyLittleDashie-esque adoption story into a series of rescues from disturbing smuggling rings, getting into gruesome accidents, and witnessing graphically-detailed torture and cruelty.
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* PoliceAreUseless: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
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* PoliceAreUseless: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient sapient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
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%%* BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
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Commented out a ZCE.
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* BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit with a couple of uncomfortable moments, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look at the author’s psyche.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit with a couple of uncomfortable moments, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look at much darker territory involving, among other things, the author’s psyche.graphic torture of innocent babies.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look at the author’s psyche.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, with a couple of uncomfortable moments, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look at the author’s psyche.
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Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs endure. The story makes it out like the narrator is just a titular Blue Moon Nursery patron, asking them for advice, getting proper care from the facility to working for them and acting as a leader out of nowhere.
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* KarmaHoudini: The smurfnapper escapes before authorities can catch him, though the victims are left behind to be retrieved.
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* MoodWhiplash: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
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* MoodWhiplash: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them [[spoiler: one of them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
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[[caption-width-right:350:This is the most normal image I could find to put here.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:This is the most normal image I we could find to put here.]]
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on Franchise/TheSmurfs franchise by {{Creator/Peyo}}. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on Franchise/TheSmurfs ''Franchise/TheSmurfs'' franchise by {{Creator/Peyo}}. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs of the torture of baby smurfs.
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* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs of describing the torture ColdBloodedTorture of baby smurfs.
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* BrokenAesop: The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail, sending a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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* BrokenAesop: The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail, sending detail with pictures of said tortures accompanying them. It sends a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] Franchise/TheSmurfs franchise by Peyo.{{Creator/Peyo}}. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "BlueBuddies", based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website "BlueBuddies", "[=BlueBuddies=]", based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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* BrokenAesop: The author persuades its readers that the torture of smurfs, baby smurfs especially, is a repugnant act... only to then proceed to describe the horrors they went through in great detail, sending a ''very'' mixed message, to say the least.
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* Crapsack World: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
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* Crapsack World: CrapsackWorld: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.destroyed.
* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs of the torture of baby smurfs.
* DescriptionPorn: In the beginning, when he first receives a baby smurf, he seems to be fixated on their tails, calling them "bulbous". It could be easily tossed aside as a mere quirk, but as the story moves into darker territory, there are paragraphs upon paragraphs of the torture of baby smurfs.
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* Unicorns Are Sacred: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
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* Unicorns Are Sacred: TorturePorn: Rightly so, with [[WouldHurtAChild baby smurfs]] as its main target, no less.
* UnicornsAreSacred: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyondredemption.redemption.
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* UnicornsAreSacred: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website {{BlueBuddies,}} based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website {{BlueBuddies,}} "BlueBuddies", based on the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
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* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BloodierAndGorier Bloodier and Gorier]]: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BrokenAngel Broken Angel]]: One of the babies, Pom-Pom, has his tail taken from him which the story describes as being one of the most important features of a smurf they can hardly live without.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome]]: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look of the author’s psyche.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ColdBloodedTorture Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The kidnapper of the baby smurfs (or “smurfnapper” as the story calls it, because of course it does) does exactly this to his victims.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FromBadToWorse From Bad To Worse]]: While initially the babies are hurt on accident, the injuring (and eventual murder) of these babies gets more twisted and intentional as time goes on.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: The narrator, sometimes through his own mistakes and sometimes not, leads to the babies constantly being hurt and almost killed. He reminisces on this frequently.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KickTheDog Kick the Dog]]: The smurfnapper is shown in gratuitous detail to harm the babies to the brink of death, [[spoiler:even over that brink once with baby Snickers]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MoodWhiplash Mood Whiplash]]: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoliceAreUseless Police Are Useless]]: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TortureCellar Torture Cellar]]: While the descriptions of the smurfnapper’s work station are few (due in part to the author not being the most technical artist), it is implied he has an entire area scoped out with devices to hurt the small blue creatures.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnicornsAreSacred Unicorns Are Sacred]]: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BrokenAngel Broken Angel]]: One of the babies, Pom-Pom, has his tail taken from him which the story describes as being one of the most important features of a smurf they can hardly live without.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome]]: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look of the author’s psyche.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ColdBloodedTorture Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The kidnapper of the baby smurfs (or “smurfnapper” as the story calls it, because of course it does) does exactly this to his victims.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FromBadToWorse From Bad To Worse]]: While initially the babies are hurt on accident, the injuring (and eventual murder) of these babies gets more twisted and intentional as time goes on.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: The narrator, sometimes through his own mistakes and sometimes not, leads to the babies constantly being hurt and almost killed. He reminisces on this frequently.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KickTheDog Kick the Dog]]: The smurfnapper is shown in gratuitous detail to harm the babies to the brink of death, [[spoiler:even over that brink once with baby Snickers]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MoodWhiplash Mood Whiplash]]: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoliceAreUseless Police Are Useless]]: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TortureCellar Torture Cellar]]: While the descriptions of the smurfnapper’s work station are few (due in part to the author not being the most technical artist), it is implied he has an entire area scoped out with devices to hurt the small blue creatures.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnicornsAreSacred Unicorns Are Sacred]]: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
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* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BloodierAndGorier Bloodier and Gorier]]: BloodierAndGorier: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BrokenAngel Broken Angel]]: BrokenAngel: One of the babies, Pom-Pom, has his tail taken from him which the story describes as being one of the most important features of a smurf they can hardly live without.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome]]: CerebusSyndrome: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look of at the author’s psyche.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ColdBloodedTorture Cold-Blooded Torture]]: ColdBloodedTorture: The kidnapper of the baby smurfs (or “smurfnapper” as the story calls it, because of course it does) does exactly this to his victims.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: World: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FromBadToWorse From Bad To Worse]]: FromBadToWorse: While initially the babies are hurt on accident, the injuring (and ([[spoiler:and eventual murder) murder]]) of these babies gets more twisted and intentional as time goes on.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: GuiltComplex: The narrator, sometimes through his own mistakes and sometimes not, leads to the babies constantly being hurt and almost killed. He reminisces on this frequently.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KickTheDog Kick the Dog]]: KickTheDog: The smurfnapper is shown in gratuitous detail to harm the babies to the brink of death, [[spoiler:even over that brink once with baby Snickers]].
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MoodWhiplash Mood Whiplash]]: MoodWhiplash: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoliceAreUseless Police Are Useless]]: PoliceAreUseless: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TortureCellar Torture Cellar]]: TortureCellar: While the descriptions of the smurfnapper’s work station are few (due in part to the author not being the most technical artist), it is implied he has an entire area scoped out with devices to hurt the small blue creatures.
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnicornsAreSacred Unicorns Are Sacred]]: Sacred: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website 'BlueBuddies,' based on the Smurfs comics and cartoons by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs endure.
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]].
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs endure.
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]].
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website 'BlueBuddies,' {{BlueBuddies,}} based on the Smurfs comics and cartoons [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/TheSmurfs Smurfs]] franchise by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfsendure.
endure. The story makes it out like the narrator is just a titular Blue Moon Nursery patron, asking them for advice, getting proper care from the facility to working for them and acting as a leader out of nowhere.
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]],taking [[spoiler:taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]].threat]]. The story ends with the babies (which are now at a head count of 4, by the way) snuggling together and restoring their broken hearts from the torture they've been through at the hands of cruel humans... aside from the narrator and the Blue Moon Nursery, of course.
The work has gained notoriety for being regarded as thinly veiled fetish content, with many critics pointing out the questionable way the injuring of its infant characters is written, with a heavy focus on portraying their pain and only slight notions to their joy or recovery.
!!''Blue Moon Nursery'' contains examples of:
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BloodierAndGorier Bloodier and Gorier]]: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BrokenAngel Broken Angel]]: One of the babies, Pom-Pom, has his tail taken from him which the story describes as being one of the most important features of a smurf they can hardly live without.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome]]: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look of the author’s psyche.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ColdBloodedTorture Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The kidnapper of the baby smurfs (or “smurfnapper” as the story calls it, because of course it does) does exactly this to his victims.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FromBadToWorse From Bad To Worse]]: While initially the babies are hurt on accident, the injuring (and eventual murder) of these babies gets more twisted and intentional as time goes on.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: The narrator, sometimes through his own mistakes and sometimes not, leads to the babies constantly being hurt and almost killed. He reminisces on this frequently.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KickTheDog Kick the Dog]]: The smurfnapper is shown in gratuitous detail to harm the babies to the brink of death, [[spoiler:even over that brink once with baby Snickers]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MoodWhiplash Mood Whiplash]]: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoliceAreUseless Police Are Useless]]: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TortureCellar Torture Cellar]]: While the descriptions of the smurfnapper’s work station are few (due in part to the author not being the most technical artist), it is implied he has an entire area scoped out with devices to hurt the small blue creatures.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnicornsAreSacred Unicorns Are Sacred]]: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]],
The work has gained notoriety for being regarded as thinly veiled fetish content, with many critics pointing out the questionable way the injuring of its infant characters is written, with a heavy focus on portraying their pain and only slight notions to their joy or recovery.
!!''Blue Moon Nursery'' contains examples of:
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BloodierAndGorier Bloodier and Gorier]]: Unlike the original Smurfs franchise, this story contains subject matter and imagery Peyo would be rolling in his grave over.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BrokenAngel Broken Angel]]: One of the babies, Pom-Pom, has his tail taken from him which the story describes as being one of the most important features of a smurf they can hardly live without.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome]]: The posts start out lighthearted, albeit cringe enough, but slowly devolve into an in-depth look of the author’s psyche.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ColdBloodedTorture Cold-Blooded Torture]]: The kidnapper of the baby smurfs (or “smurfnapper” as the story calls it, because of course it does) does exactly this to his victims.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: From the view of the smurfs, at least. In this world, smurfs are essentially treated like a slave race where their children can be taken and sold for the entertainment of humans, and their villages from the source material are implied to have all been destroyed.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FromBadToWorse From Bad To Worse]]: While initially the babies are hurt on accident, the injuring (and eventual murder) of these babies gets more twisted and intentional as time goes on.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GuiltComplex Guilt Complex]]: The narrator, sometimes through his own mistakes and sometimes not, leads to the babies constantly being hurt and almost killed. He reminisces on this frequently.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KickTheDog Kick the Dog]]: The smurfnapper is shown in gratuitous detail to harm the babies to the brink of death, [[spoiler:even over that brink once with baby Snickers]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MoodWhiplash Mood Whiplash]]: One post will be about the babies getting bathtime, while the next is [[spoiler:them being burned alive in a laundry dryer]].
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoliceAreUseless Police Are Useless]]: Either the narrator or an organization called S.M.U.R.F. are always the ones to save the baby smurfs in peril. Law enforcement seems to care very little about the children of these sentient beings that are known to exist with the same feelings and thoughts as humans.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TortureCellar Torture Cellar]]: While the descriptions of the smurfnapper’s work station are few (due in part to the author not being the most technical artist), it is implied he has an entire area scoped out with devices to hurt the small blue creatures.
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnicornsAreSacred Unicorns Are Sacred]]: The narrator of the story makes it very clear that smurfs (especially the baby variety) are the most innocent, loving creatures on the planet, and anyone who harms them is beyond redemption.
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''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website 'BlueBuddies,' based on the Smurfs comics and cartoons by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs endure.
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]].
[[caption-width-right:350:This is the most normal image I could find to put here.]]
''Blue Moon Nursery'' is a Smurfs fanfiction written by Smurf in Hand for the website 'BlueBuddies,' based on the Smurfs comics and cartoons by Peyo. Unlike most fanfiction, instead of being published on a website purposely designed for uploading stories, the fanfic is told through multiple posts in a thread, interjected by other users throughout. It has gained somewhat of an infamous cult following thanks to Youtuber/Twitch Streamer [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISG5FDKZEro DeadwingDork]] as well as a few others.
Plot Synopsis: The story starts out innocently enough, with the narrator detailing how he has had the pleasure of taking in a baby smurf to love and care for. Things quickly change, however, when he finds another baby smurf in an abandoned warehouse, forgotten by an animal smuggler. This would be the beginning of the story detailing the horrible pain these baby smurfs endure.
The story is fairly slice-of-life based but wastes no time telling the reader about all of the terrible things humans do to these creatures, such as [[spoiler:leaving them in a dryer on accident, nearly scalding them to death]], [[spoiler:kidnapping them from their human owners and sending them videos of the torture the kidnapper forces them to endure]], taking the babies from their smurf parents to sell off as pets]] and [[spoiler: killing them as a form of threat]].
