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* PrecisionFStrike: This occurs a bit. For example, Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.
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* PrecisionFStrike: This occurs a bit. For example, Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.chapter.
* WhatHaveIDone: Bluestar throughout the fic.
* WhatHaveIDone: Bluestar throughout the fic.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Brightheart is not mawled by dogs and partially blinded.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Brightheart is not mawled mauled by dogs and partially blinded.
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* LikeASonToMe: Bluestar views Fireheart as a substitute child.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Inverted. Bluestar views Fireheart as a substitute child.
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* ArtisticLicenseAnimalCare: Fireheart mentions that he was seperated from his mother at one moon (four weeks). While kittens can be seperated at six to eight weeks, they ideally should stay with their mother for six to twelve weeks.
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* ArtisticLicenseAnimalCare: Fireheart mentions that he was seperated from his mother at one moon (four weeks).weeks) and he says that this is normal for kittypets. While kittens can be seperated at six to eight weeks, they ideally should stay with their mother for six to twelve weeks.
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* ParentalAbandonment: One reason that Fireheart attaches to Bluestar is because he was separated from his mother at one moon.
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* ArtisticLicenseAnimalCare: Fireheard mentions that he was seperated from his mother at one moon (four weeks). While kittens can be seperated at six to eight weeks, they ideally should stay with their mother for six to twelve weeks.
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* ArtisticLicenseAnimalCare: Fireheard Fireheart mentions that he was seperated from his mother at one moon (four weeks). While kittens can be seperated at six to eight weeks, they ideally should stay with their mother for six to twelve weeks.
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* ArtisticLicenseAnimalCare: Fireheard mentions that he was seperated from his mother at one moon (four weeks). While kittens can be seperated at six to eight weeks, they ideally should stay with their mother for six to twelve weeks.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Brightheart is not mawled by dogs and partially blinded.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Bluestar tells Fireheart that he has a "[[labelnote:kit face]]babyface[[/labelnote]]".
* IWantGrandkids: Fireheart's ParentalSubstitute Bluestar is eager for him to have kits with Sandstorm.
* IWantGrandkids: Fireheart's ParentalSubstitute Bluestar is eager for him to have kits with Sandstorm.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.
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* PrecisionFStrike: This occurs a bit. For example, Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: [=ThunderClan=] attacks [=WindClan]= in ''A Dangerous Path''.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: [=ThunderClan=] attacks [=WindClan]= [=WindClan=] in ''A Dangerous Path''.Path''.
* ParentalSubstitute: Inverted. Bluestar views Fireheart as a substitute child.
* PrecisionFStrike: Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.
* ParentalSubstitute: Inverted. Bluestar views Fireheart as a substitute child.
* PrecisionFStrike: Mudclaw calls Fireheart a "cowardly piece of fox dung" in the second chapter.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13199677/1/Bitter-Repercussions Bitter Repercussions]]'' is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfic by [=TheShadowedWarrior=].
The story begins during ''A Dangerous Path''. Fireheart listens to Bluestar's orders and attacks [=WindClan=] unprovoked. However, Fireheart is seriously injured in the attack. While Cinderpelt struggles to heal Fireheart, Bluestar faces the reality of her decisions.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: [=ThunderClan=] attacks [=WindClan]= in ''A Dangerous Path''.
The story begins during ''A Dangerous Path''. Fireheart listens to Bluestar's orders and attacks [=WindClan=] unprovoked. However, Fireheart is seriously injured in the attack. While Cinderpelt struggles to heal Fireheart, Bluestar faces the reality of her decisions.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: [=ThunderClan=] attacks [=WindClan]= in ''A Dangerous Path''.
