Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 80 (click to see context) from:
** For Megatron's gladiator battle, Optimus wore [[Film/{{Transformers}} Bayverse Optimus' flame decals]].
to:
** For Megatron's gladiator battle, Optimus wore [[Film/{{Transformers}} [[Film/TransformersFilmSeries Bayverse Optimus' flame decals]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5570629?view_full_work=true Battlesleep]] is a WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Reyairia/pseuds/Reyairia Reyairia]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/zuzeca/pseuds/zuzeca zuzeca]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
to:
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5570629?view_full_work=true Battlesleep]] is a WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated ''WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated'' fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Reyairia/pseuds/Reyairia Reyairia]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/zuzeca/pseuds/zuzeca zuzeca]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5570629?view_full_work=true Battlesleep]] written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Reyairia/pseuds/Reyairia Reyairia]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/zuzeca/pseuds/zuzeca zuzeca]] is a WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated fanfiction.
to:
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5570629?view_full_work=true Battlesleep]] is a WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Reyairia/pseuds/Reyairia Reyairia]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/zuzeca/pseuds/zuzeca zuzeca]] is on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
Megatron escaping from prison was, of course, Sentinel’s frag-up. What Optimus didn’t count on was being kidnapped by the warlord on his way out.
Now, halfway across the galaxy, Optimus must discover the reason behind Megatron’s reluctance to kill him, and with it aWesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated fanfiction.
secret of his species’ biology that may hold the key to peace between Autobots and Decepticons.
Megatron escaping from prison was, of course, Sentinel’s frag-up. What Optimus didn’t count on was being kidnapped by the warlord on his way out.
Now, halfway across the galaxy, Optimus must discover the reason behind Megatron’s reluctance to kill him, and with it a
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
* TheAlcatraz: Trypicon Prison was supposed to be this for the Decepticons in custody. But due to the [[CardboardPrison incompetence]] of Sentinel and the team assigned there (Megatron stated the previous warden was much more competent but assassinated by Shockwave due to this), they escaped with Optimus kidnapped on the Steelhaven.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Since sexual relations worked differently for these robot aliens, it hinted to be this way. Since the Autobots truly believed they are an OneGenderRace - specifically only having a valve which Sari reacted with shock that they are basically lesbians -, they have sexual relations for the fun of it.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Since sexual relations worked differently for these robot aliens, it hinted to be this way. Since the Autobots truly believed they are an OneGenderRace - specifically only having a valve which Sari reacted with shock that they are basically lesbians -, they have sexual relations for the fun of it.
to:
* TheAlcatraz: Trypicon Prison was supposed to be this for the Decepticons in custody. But custody, but due to the [[CardboardPrison incompetence]] of Sentinel and the team assigned there (Megatron stated the previous warden was much more competent but assassinated by Shockwave due to this), they the 'Cons escaped with Optimus kidnapped on the Steelhaven.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Since sexual relationsworked work differently for these robot aliens, it hinted to be this way. Since the Autobots truly believed they are an OneGenderRace - specifically only having a valve valve, which Sari reacted with shock that they are basically lesbians towards -, they have sexual relations for the fun of it.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Since sexual relations
Changed line(s) 8,9 (click to see context) from:
* BarBrawl: Bulkhead created one to get his team and himself out of the bar. It worked since most Decepticons are apparently AmazonChaser, most like him. While Strika won't admit it, she found him attractive because of it.
* BeastAndBeauty: What comes off with Optimus and Megatron. They aren’t trying to change each other as much as they are trying to understand the other. It’s actually getting to know each other was when the two fell in love. Although the bookstore scene was a reference to Orion Pax, reviewers point it was WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast library scene.
* BeastAndBeauty: What comes off with Optimus and Megatron. They aren’t trying to change each other as much as they are trying to understand the other. It’s actually getting to know each other was when the two fell in love. Although the bookstore scene was a reference to Orion Pax, reviewers point it was WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast library scene.
to:
* BarBrawl: Bulkhead created one to get his team and himself out of the bar. It worked since most Decepticons are apparently AmazonChaser, most like him.AmazonChaser[=s=]. While Strika won't admit it, she found him attractive because of it.
* BeastAndBeauty: What comes off with Optimus and Megatron. They aren’t trying to change each other as much as they are trying to understand the other. It’s actually getting to know each other was when the two fell in love. Although the bookstore scene was a reference to Orion Pax, reviewers point it wasWesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast basically the library scene.scene from ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''.
* BeastAndBeauty: What comes off with Optimus and Megatron. They aren’t trying to change each other as much as they are trying to understand the other. It’s actually getting to know each other was when the two fell in love. Although the bookstore scene was a reference to Orion Pax, reviewers point it was
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
* BelligerentSexualTension: Both Optimus and Megatron are in denial about their growing feelings though the former does have the right to be suspicious.
to:
* BelligerentSexualTension: Both Optimus and Megatron are in denial about their growing feelings feelings, though the former does have the right to be suspicious.
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
** It's a lot more complicated. While human analog would make sense as readers tried to break it down but the authors flat out stated it's more complicated and not meant to be read as part of human biology by any means.
to:
** It's a lot more complicated. While human analog would make sense as readers tried to break it down down, but [[WordOfGod the authors flat out have explicitly stated it's more complicated and not meant to be read as part of human biology by any means. means.]]
Changed line(s) 17,18 (click to see context) from:
* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Autobots and Decepticons or rather groundframes and flightframes is this. Groundframes are bright and colorful to attract a mate while flightframes are huge. Optimus noted that this sexual dimorphism made humans looked subtle by comparison.
* BlackAndGrayMorality: The conflict between the Decepticons and Autobots comes off like this. The Autobots do have questionable methods while the Decepticons are evil in their behavior and actions. Because of the latter, the Autobots find it hard to forgive the actions, especially when they actively play a part in the tragedy. Megatron believed it's GrayAndGreyMorality with the way he espoused his ideals.
* BlackAndGrayMorality: The conflict between the Decepticons and Autobots comes off like this. The Autobots do have questionable methods while the Decepticons are evil in their behavior and actions. Because of the latter, the Autobots find it hard to forgive the actions, especially when they actively play a part in the tragedy. Megatron believed it's GrayAndGreyMorality with the way he espoused his ideals.
to:
* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Autobots and Decepticons Decepticons, or rather groundframes and flightframes is this. flightframes, qualify as an example for Cybertronians. Groundframes are bright and colorful to attract a mate while flightframes are huge.huge and bulky. Optimus noted that this sexual dimorphism made humans looked subtle by comparison.
* BlackAndGrayMorality: The conflict between the Decepticons and Autobots comes off like this. The Autobots do have questionablemethods methods, while the Decepticons are evil in their behavior and actions. Because of the latter, the Autobots find it hard to forgive the actions, actions of the 'Cons, especially when they actively play a part in the tragedy. Megatron believed it's GrayAndGreyMorality with the way he espoused his ideals.
* BlackAndGrayMorality: The conflict between the Decepticons and Autobots comes off like this. The Autobots do have questionable
Changed line(s) 21 (click to see context) from:
* {{Bowdlerize}}: InUniverse discussion. The Decepticons and Autobots censored stuff differently, the former censoring kisses and hugs and the latter sex. To prevent fraternization.
to:
* {{Bowdlerize}}: InUniverse discussion. The Decepticons and Autobots censored stuff differently, the former censoring kisses and hugs and the latter sex. To sex, to prevent fraternization.
Changed line(s) 24,25 (click to see context) from:
** Cyclonus' backstory is not the same as in the ''Animated'' continuity, but rather his IDW counterpart.
** The Decepticons are a different species in the ''Animated'' continuity but not this one where they are merely the other half of the same species.
** The Decepticons are a different species in the ''Animated'' continuity but not this one where they are merely the other half of the same species.
to:
** Cyclonus' backstory is not the same as in the ''Animated'' continuity, but is rather based on that of his his IDW counterpart.
** The Decepticons are a different species in the ''Animated''continuity continuity, but not this one one, where they are merely the other half of the same species.
** The Decepticons are a different species in the ''Animated''
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
* CharacterDevelopment: Sentinel goes from a judgmental narrow-minded guy who has potential but wasting it from his sheer arrogance into a more responsible and open-minded guy. Though his reactions are still priceless.
to:
* CharacterDevelopment: Sentinel goes from a judgmental judgmental, narrow-minded guy individual who has potential but wasting wasted it from his sheer arrogance into a more responsible and open-minded guy. Though bot. That being said, his reactions are still priceless.
Changed line(s) 38,39 (click to see context) from:
* DiscountLesbians: Averted. Lugnut and Strika are in a committed relationship while Sentinel is implied to ''only'' be attracted to other Autobots. Shockwave is Transgender and is in love with Blurr.
* DisneyDeath: Blurr barely managed to escape his death by trash compactor and incinerator.
* DisneyDeath: Blurr barely managed to escape his death by trash compactor and incinerator.
to:
* DiscountLesbians: Averted. Lugnut and Strika are in a committed relationship while Sentinel is implied to ''only'' be attracted to other Autobots. Shockwave is Transgender transgender and is in love with Blurr.
* DisneyDeath: Blurr barely managed to escape his death by trash compactor andincinerator. incinerator here
* DisneyDeath: Blurr barely managed to escape his death by trash compactor and
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* {{Dystopia}}: Both the Armada and Cybertron. Cybertron suppressed true history and don't let the Autobots decide for themselves what they can buy such as porn and sex toys. Armada was overrun by too much sex and violence and not enough sanity.
to:
* {{Dystopia}}: Both the Armada and Cybertron. Cybertron suppressed its true history and don't let the Autobots decide for themselves what they can buy such as porn and sex toys. Armada was overrun by too much sex and violence and not enough sanity.
Changed line(s) 43 (click to see context) from:
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Both Megazarak and Megatron are murderous tyrannous warlords but even they disapprove of rape. Not that they do anything to stop the Armada from running amok with rape and murder.
to:
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Both Megazarak and Megatron are murderous tyrannous warlords warlords, but even they disapprove of rape. Not that they do anything to stop the Armada from running amok with rape and murder.
Changed line(s) 52 (click to see context) from:
* GreaterScopeVillain: Megazarak theorized the All Spark was given to the Cybertronians by enemies unknown seemingly to destroy the infrastructure of the Cybertronian world. Because the groundframes and flightframes were meant to coexist and bring the next generation together. If that is no longer needed, how could coexistence be possible? While Cyclonus doesn't have the exact same idea, he and many others are suspicious of the All Spark and didn't trust it one bit.
to:
* GreaterScopeVillain: Megazarak theorized the All Spark was given to the Cybertronians by enemies unknown seemingly to destroy the infrastructure of the Cybertronian world. Because the groundframes and flightframes were meant to coexist and bring the next generation together. If that is no longer needed, how could coexistence be possible? While Cyclonus doesn't have the exact same idea, he and many others are suspicious of the All Spark Allspark and didn't trust it one bit.
Changed line(s) 60,61 (click to see context) from:
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in on Strika and Lugnut’s sexcapades and they don’t even try to stop when people see them.
* IncompetenceInc: Just spread to the entire race of Decepticons and Autobots. The author stated the Decepticons are stupidly incompetent and the Autobots are incompetently stupid so they are complementary. There are sane and competent ones but those guys felt SurroundedByIdiots.
* IncompetenceInc: Just spread to the entire race of Decepticons and Autobots. The author stated the Decepticons are stupidly incompetent and the Autobots are incompetently stupid so they are complementary. There are sane and competent ones but those guys felt SurroundedByIdiots.
to:
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in on Strika and Lugnut’s sexcapades and [[CoitusUninterruptus they don’t even try to stop when people see them.
them.]]
* IncompetenceInc: Just spread to the entire race of Decepticons and Autobots. The author stated the Decepticons are stupidly incompetent and the Autobots are incompetentlystupid stupid, so they are complementary. There are sane and competent ones ones, but those guys felt are basically SurroundedByIdiots.
* IncompetenceInc: Just spread to the entire race of Decepticons and Autobots. The author stated the Decepticons are stupidly incompetent and the Autobots are incompetently
Changed line(s) 64,65 (click to see context) from:
* InstantWebHit: A Decepticon recorded the BarBrawl that Bulkhead instigated and other Decepticons loves it.
* LongLived: The Cybertronians who can live upon millions and millions of years. They can get so old in the case of pre-All Spark. In fact, Optimus was surprised to learn Silverbolt was older than he was.
* LongLived: The Cybertronians who can live upon millions and millions of years. They can get so old in the case of pre-All Spark. In fact, Optimus was surprised to learn Silverbolt was older than he was.
to:
* InstantWebHit: A Decepticon recorded the BarBrawl that Bulkhead instigated and other Decepticons loves loved it.
* LongLived: The Cybertronians who can live upon millions and millions of years. They can get so old in the case ofpre-All Spark. In fact, bots born before the Allspark's appearance that Optimus was surprised to learn Silverbolt was older than he was.
* LongLived: The Cybertronians who can live upon millions and millions of years. They can get so old in the case of
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* LoveRedeems: Examined, deconstructed, played with. Battlesleep seemed to be cured by having an attraction to a groundframe, igniting the protective coding. However, not much more is known.
to:
* LoveRedeems: Examined, deconstructed, and played with. Battlesleep seemed to be cured by having an attraction to a groundframe, igniting the protective coding. However, not much more is known.
Changed line(s) 113 (click to see context) from:
* TalkingInBed: During and after the sex, Minimus and Megazarak discusses politics and somewhat strike a deal.
to:
* TalkingInBed: During and after the their sex, Minimus and Megazarak discusses politics and somewhat strike a deal.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
plagiarized description
Changed line(s) 3,6 (click to see context) from:
Megatron escaping from prison was, of course, Sentinel’s frag-up. What Optimus didn’t count on was being kidnapped by the warlord on his way out.
Now, halfway across the galaxy, Optimus must discover the reason behind Megatron’s reluctance to kill him, and with it a secret of his species’ biology that may hold the key to peace between Autobots and Decepticons.
Now, halfway across the galaxy, Optimus must discover the reason behind Megatron’s reluctance to kill him, and with it a secret of his species’ biology that may hold the key to peace between Autobots and Decepticons.
to:
Now, halfway across the galaxy, Optimus must discover the reason behind Megatron’s reluctance to kill him, and with it a secret of his species’ biology that may hold the key to peace between Autobots and Decepticons.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not enough context (ZCE), Fixing indentation
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* BizarreAlienSexes: It's a lot more complicated. While human analog would make sense as readers tried to break it down but the authors flat out stated it's more complicated and not meant to be read as part of human biology by any means.
to:
* BizarreAlienSexes: BizarreAlienSexes:
** It's a lot more complicated. While human analog would make sense as readers tried to break it down but the authors flat out stated it's more complicated and not meant to be read as part of human biology by any means.
** It's a lot more complicated. While human analog would make sense as readers tried to break it down but the authors flat out stated it's more complicated and not meant to be read as part of human biology by any means.
Changed line(s) 32,33 (click to see context) from:
* CharacterDevelopment:
** Sentinel goes from a judgmental narrow-minded guy who has potential but wasting it from his sheer arrogance into a more responsible and open-minded guy. Though his reactions are still priceless.
** Sentinel goes from a judgmental narrow-minded guy who has potential but wasting it from his sheer arrogance into a more responsible and open-minded guy. Though his reactions are still priceless.
to:
* CharacterDevelopment:
**CharacterDevelopment: Sentinel goes from a judgmental narrow-minded guy who has potential but wasting it from his sheer arrogance into a more responsible and open-minded guy. Though his reactions are still priceless.
**
Changed line(s) 35 (click to see context) from:
* CloudCuckooLander: Most of the characters are quirky.
to:
Changed line(s) 56 (click to see context) from:
* HiddenDepths / BigEgoHiddenDepths:
to:
* HiddenDepths / BigEgoHiddenDepths: HiddenDepths:
Changed line(s) 99 (click to see context) from:
* SickeningSweethearts: Downplayed. Megazarak and Minimus subtly flirt (Minimus even flatout asked Megazarak to stay with them, not just because the war would be ending in the near future, but he wanted them to stay close) in full view of the Optimus team that annoys them. For them, it’s more that their leader loves a former Decepticon that gripes at them where their displays of love was an icing to a terrible cake.
to:
* SickeningSweethearts: SickeningSweethearts:
** Downplayed. Megazarak and Minimus subtly flirt (Minimus even flatout asked Megazarak to stay with them, not just because the war would be ending in the near future, but he wanted them to stay close) in full view of the Optimus team that annoys them. For them, it’s more that their leader loves a former Decepticon that gripes at them where their displays of love was an icing to a terrible cake.
** Downplayed. Megazarak and Minimus subtly flirt (Minimus even flatout asked Megazarak to stay with them, not just because the war would be ending in the near future, but he wanted them to stay close) in full view of the Optimus team that annoys them. For them, it’s more that their leader loves a former Decepticon that gripes at them where their displays of love was an icing to a terrible cake.
Changed line(s) 108 (click to see context) from:
* SterilityPlague: Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies. Silverbolt pointed out it doesn’t have to be romantic.
to:
* SterilityPlague: SterilityPlague:
** Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies. Silverbolt pointed out it doesn’t have to be romantic.
** Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies. Silverbolt pointed out it doesn’t have to be romantic.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Dewicked trope
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* DiscountLesbians: Averted. Lugnut and Strika are in a committed relationship while Sentinel is implied to ''only'' be attracted to other Autobots. Shockwave is {{Transgender}} and is in love with Blurr.
to:
* DiscountLesbians: Averted. Lugnut and Strika are in a committed relationship while Sentinel is implied to ''only'' be attracted to other Autobots. Shockwave is {{Transgender}} Transgender and is in love with Blurr.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ItsNotPornItsArt: For one movie, Optimus stated that it was a historical film which Megatron was amused about. The film in question, according to the authors, was based on Film/{{Barbarella}}. It did strike a conversation about censorship between the two factions about the same movie.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* {{Bowderize}}: InUniverse discussion. The Decepticons and Autobots censored stuff differently, the former censoring kisses and hugs and the latter sex. To prevent fraternization.
to:
* {{Bowderize}}: {{Bowdlerize}}: InUniverse discussion. The Decepticons and Autobots censored stuff differently, the former censoring kisses and hugs and the latter sex. To prevent fraternization.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* {{Bowderize}}: InUniverse discussion. The Decepticons and Autobots censored stuff differently, the former censoring kisses and hugs and the latter sex. To prevent fraternization.
Added DiffLines:
* FakeAFight: What ended up happening between Megatron and Optimus’ gladiatorial match. Optimus was outmatched by his experienced opponent but Megatron recognizes his ingenuity and cleverness. Officially, Optimus lost but to them, it’s a draw in some ways.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* SterilityPlague: Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies.
to:
* SterilityPlague: Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies. Silverbolt pointed out it doesn’t have to be romantic.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 60,61 (click to see context) from:
** Blitzwing is a talented poet as he can write his knowledge bout economics in it.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in Strika and Lugnut’s sexcapades.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in Strika and Lugnut’s sexcapades.
to:
** Blitzwing is a talented poet as he can write his knowledge bout about economics in it.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in on Strika and Lugnut’ssexcapades.sexcapades and they don’t even try to stop when people see them.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Poor Optimus walked in on Strika and Lugnut’s
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 105 (click to see context) from:
* SterilityPlague: Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition.
to:
* SterilityPlague: Battlesleep. Not much is known but almost all Decepticons have this. The ones who could not deal with it try to either kill the one they were attracted to (Shockwave) or simply embrace it (Megazarak). It's implied to be a function in which flightframes are violent as a result. Not that it justifies the actions they took of their own volition. What can be boiled down to by Silverbolt was the frames meet, grow respect and possibly love each other, Battlesleep cured, sex, then babies.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Aside from some annoyances, Lugnut and Strika. Decepticons even wrote love ballads in their name.