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* PetTheDog: When Harry and Hermione get into an argument with Ron about Bart, Madame Pince shows up after Ron leaves to tell them off, but when she sees Harry comforting a crying Hermione, she simply walks off instead of butting in.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Bart was (implied to be) born on 1 April 1982, so he should be roughly two years younger than Harry. The story makes them the same age out of convenience.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Bart was (implied to be) born on 1 April 1982, so he should be roughly two years younger than Harry. The story makes them the same age out of convenience.
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* PetTheDog: When Harry and Hermione get into an argument with Ron about Bart, Madame Pince shows up after Ron leaves to tell them off, but when she sees Harry comforting a crying Hermione, she simply walks off instead of butting in.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Bart was (implied to be) born on 1 April 1982, so he should be roughly two years younger than Harry. The story makes them the same age out of convenience.
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Bart was (implied to be) born on 1 April 1982, so he should be roughly two years younger than Harry. The story makes them the same age out of convenience.
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* BookEnds: Bart and Gemma watch the original ''Star Wars'' trilogy through Book 2, wrapping it up in the last chapter.
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:Filch is brutally killed by the Basilisk in Book 2]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Filch is brutally killed by the Basilisk in Book 2]].
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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Seraphinus Boot, at Ilvermorny.
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Currently on [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheChamberOfSecrets the second book]] (''Underneath Slytherin's Surface''), it can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13232971/1/Bart-Simpson-and-the-Boy-Who-Lived-The-Series here.]]
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Currently on at the tail-end of [[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheChamberOfSecrets the second book]] (''Underneath Slytherin's Surface''), it can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13232971/1/Bart-Simpson-and-the-Boy-Who-Lived-The-Series here.]]
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* SecretKeeper: Dumbledore has the [[spoiler:five]] students who fought the Basilisk and the Diary Horcrux sign a nondisclosure agreement regarding Voldemort's true identity, as he feels few would believe them and Voldemort's supporters might send assassins after them.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: [[spoiler:Rather than run the risk of assuming that the Mirror of Erised can protect the Philosopher's Stone from Voldemort (or anyone else), Dumbledore places a decoy stone inside the mirror and keeps the real one in his desk. He also lures Gilderoy Lockhart to a publicity stunt and tricks him into confessing to his crimes in front of the Aurors by spiking his drink with Veritaserum rather than have him teach at Hogwarts. In the second book, he lures Lucius Malfoy into a trap and has him arrested for conspiracy to murder, rather than simply letting him off with a warning for planting Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: [[spoiler:Rather AdaptationalIntelligence:
**[[spoiler:Rather than run the risk of assuming that the Mirror of Erised can protect the Philosopher's Stone from Voldemort (or anyone else), Dumbledore places a decoy stone inside the mirror and keeps the real one in hisdesk. He desk.]]
**[[spoiler:He also lures Gilderoy Lockhart to a publicity stunt and tricks him into confessing to his crimes in front of the Aurors by spiking his drink with Veritaserum rather than have him teach atHogwarts. In Hogwarts.]]
**[[spoiler:In the second book, he lures Lucius Malfoy into a trap and has him arrested for conspiracy to murder, rather than simply letting him off with a warning for planting Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley.]]
**[[spoiler:Rather than run the risk of assuming that the Mirror of Erised can protect the Philosopher's Stone from Voldemort (or anyone else), Dumbledore places a decoy stone inside the mirror and keeps the real one in his
**[[spoiler:He also lures Gilderoy Lockhart to a publicity stunt and tricks him into confessing to his crimes in front of the Aurors by spiking his drink with Veritaserum rather than have him teach at
**[[spoiler:In the second book, he lures Lucius Malfoy into a trap and has him arrested for conspiracy to murder, rather than simply letting him off with a warning for planting Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: [[spoiler:Rather than run the risk of assuming that the Mirror of Erised can protect the Philosopher's Stone from Voldemort (or anyone else), Dumbledore places a decoy stone inside the mirror and keeps the real one in his desk. He also lures Gilderoy Lockhart to a publicity stunt and tricks him into confessing to his crimes in front of the Aurors by spiking his drink with Veritaserum rather than have him teach at Hogwarts.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: [[spoiler:Rather than run the risk of assuming that the Mirror of Erised can protect the Philosopher's Stone from Voldemort (or anyone else), Dumbledore places a decoy stone inside the mirror and keeps the real one in his desk. He also lures Gilderoy Lockhart to a publicity stunt and tricks him into confessing to his crimes in front of the Aurors by spiking his drink with Veritaserum rather than have him teach at Hogwarts. In the second book, he lures Lucius Malfoy into a trap and has him arrested for conspiracy to murder, rather than simply letting him off with a warning for planting Tom Riddle's diary on Ginny Weasley.]]
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** Ron Weasley is stubbornly prejudiced against Slytherin, to the point of treating Bart with contempt simply ''because'' he's in Slytherin. Even the fact that Bart openly hates Draco Malfoy does nothing to hamper this; and when Hermione calls him out on his prejudice, Ron lashes out at her, accusing ''her'' of being pro-Slytherin and refusing to apologize when Harry berates him for it. [[CharacterDevelopment However, he slightly softens his attitude towards Bart later on.]]
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** Ron Weasley is stubbornly prejudiced against Slytherin, to the point of treating Bart with contempt simply ''because'' he's in Slytherin. Even the fact that Bart openly hates Draco Malfoy does nothing to hamper this; and when Hermione calls him out on his prejudice, Ron lashes out at her, accusing ''her'' of being pro-Slytherin and refusing to apologize when Harry berates him for it. [[CharacterDevelopment However, he slightly softens his attitude towards Bart later on.]]
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** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, she cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
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** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, she [[spoiler:she]] cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In Book 2, Bart finds out that Dumbledore has been offering potions to students - so he concludes that Dumbledore is a drug dealer.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In Book 2, Bart finds out that Dumbledore has been offering potions to students - so he concludes that Dumbledore is a drug dealer.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In Book 2, Bart finds out that Dumbledore has been offering potions to students - so he concludes that Dumbledore is a drug dealer.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: In Book 2, Bart finds out that Dumbledore has been offering potions to students - so he concludes that Dumbledore is a drug dealer.
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** Ron Weasley's attitude towards Bart progresses from complete contempt to mere dislike.
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** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, they cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
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** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, they she cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
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* AdaptationalKarma: [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy gets ''arrested'' for his crimes instead of simply being sacked as a school governor (and losing a slave) at the end of Book 2.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Gemma teaches Bart Occlumency so that Dumbledore and Snape will have a harder time getting inside his head (and thus, damage her influence over him), and also warns him not to look them in the eye.
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** Gemma teaches Bart Occlumency so that Dumbledore and Snape will have a harder time getting inside his head (and thus, damage her influence over him), and also warns him not to look them in theeye.eye.
** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, they cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
** Gemma teaches Bart Occlumency so that Dumbledore and Snape will have a harder time getting inside his head (and thus, damage her influence over him), and also warns him not to look them in the
** When [[spoiler:Violet Parkinson]] dropped the Riddle Diary in Ginny Wesley's cauldron, they cast a Silencing Charm upon it beforehand to ensure no one heard the ''thunk''.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Willy Widdershins was instructed by Lucius Malfoy to kill Ginny Weasley if she survived her encounter with the Diary Horcrux, in exchange for having his debts paid off, with the added caveat of being obliged to make an Unbreakable Vow not to out Lucius if he was ever caught.]]
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** Bart serves as one to Draco Malfoy, as well: both are blonde, blue-eyed jerks with a sizable contempt for the rules, a love of Quidditch, high ambition, and a penchant for showing off. However, Malfoy is a rich, spoiled snob who thinks his wealth and connections make him untouchable, is rather cowardly, lacks any moral scruples, and ultimately can't back up his boasts; Bart comes from a working-class family who pulls pranks simply because he enjoys it, is ''not'' afraid to pick a fight, has a hidden softer side, and can walk his talk.
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** Bart serves as one to Draco Malfoy, as well: both are blonde, blue-eyed blonde jerks with a sizable contempt for the rules, a love of Quidditch, high ambition, and a penchant for showing off. However, Malfoy is a rich, spoiled snob who thinks his wealth and connections make him untouchable, is rather cowardly, lacks any moral scruples, and ultimately can't back up his boasts; Bart comes from a working-class family who pulls pranks simply because he enjoys it, is ''not'' afraid to pick a fight, has a hidden softer side, and can walk his talk.
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* CallBack: Bart says he needs to get more exam tips from the centaurs at the end of Book 1 [[spoiler: - he does in Book 2]]!
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* CallBack: BrickJoke: Bart says he needs to get more exam tips from the centaurs at the end of Book 1 [[spoiler: - he does in Book 2]]!
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* InsaneTrollLogic: In Book 2, Bart finds out that Dumbledore has been offering potions to students - so he concludes that Dumbledore is a drug dealer.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Slytherin's Basilisk is immune to the crowing of a rooster in this fic.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: The Farleys are cordial towards, if not downright casual with, their house elf.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: The Farleys are cordial towards, if not downright casual with, their [[ReallyGetsAround house elf.elf]].
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* RefugeInAudacity: Bart lives on this trope, but the most notable example is when [[spoiler: he, Jake Farley and the Farley house-elf steal an [[CoolCar Aston Martin V8]] in broad daylight - and nobody spots them!]]
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* RefugeInAudacity: Bart lives on this trope, but the most notable example is when [[spoiler: he, Jake Farley and the [[ReallyGetsAround Farley house-elf]] steal an [[CoolCar Aston Martin V8]] in broad daylight - and nobody spots them!]]
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* RefugeInAudacity: Bart lives on this trope, but the most notable example is when [[spoiler: he, Jake Farley and the Farley house-elf steal an [[CoolCar Aston Martin V8]] in broad daylight - and nobody spots them!]]
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* CallBack: Bart says he needs to get more exam tips from the centaurs at the end of Book 1 - [[spoiler:he does in Book 2]]!
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* CallBack: Bart says he needs to get more exam tips from the centaurs at the end of Book 1 [[spoiler: - [[spoiler:he he does in Book 2]]!
