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It's a short story, as shown through word counter and this trope list, so this gets double quotes.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] ''WesternAnimation/{{Bambi}}'' fanfic written by Creator/BagelBrain.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: The story claims that Flower, even when becoming a giant to stand up to Ronno, is so docile that he couldn't even attempt to form malice in his heart.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: TheIncorruptible: The story claims that Flower, even when becoming a giant to stand up to Ronno, is so docile that he couldn't even attempt to form malice in his heart.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] Disney/{{Bambi}} fanfic written by Creator/BagelBrain.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] Disney/{{Bambi}} ''WesternAnimation/{{Bambi}}'' fanfic written by Creator/BagelBrain.
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* CallBack: The story makes a nod to the dream of his mother Bambi had in ''Disney/BambiII''.
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* CallBack: The story makes a nod to the dream of his mother Bambi had in ''Disney/BambiII''.''WesternAnimation/BambiII''.
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* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Like with Bagel Brain's previous story ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'', averted, its implied that Bambi and friends live somewhere in the forests of Maine, with the writing making a reference to the Mount Katahdin region.
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* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Like with Bagel Brain's previous story ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'', averted, as its implied that Bambi and friends live somewhere in the forests of Maine, with the writing making a reference to the Mount Katahdin region.
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* GentleGiant: To stand up to a bullying Ronno, Bambi gives Flower the idea to make himself grow into an absolutely massive size thats likened to the height of Mount Katahdin. However, Flower doesn't show the slightest sign of aggression in this form, Despite this, Ronno is understandably terrified by what he sees unfold before him and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere hightails it out of there.]]
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* GentleGiant: To stand up to a bullying Ronno, Bambi gives Flower the idea to make himself grow into an absolutely massive size thats likened to the height of Mount Katahdin.Katahdin (which, for the record, is a whopping 5,267 feet in height). However, Flower doesn't show the slightest sign of aggression in this form, Despite this, Ronno is understandably terrified by what he sees unfold before him and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere hightails it out of there.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: While the loose story beats are the same in the 2018 edition, it adds a new scene where Bambi briefly encounters Friend Owl and helps out Flower against a bullying Ronno.
* AstralProjection: The story depicts Bambi and friends interacting in the Worlds of Dreams this way, as their spirits linger about free of their bodies until they awaken.
* AstralProjection: The story depicts Bambi and friends interacting in the Worlds of Dreams this way, as their spirits linger about free of their bodies until they awaken.
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* AdaptationExpansion: While the loose story beats are the same in the 2018 edition, it adds a new scene scenes where Bambi briefly encounters an awake Friend Owl and helps out Flower against a bullying Ronno.
* AstralProjection: The story depicts Bambi and friends interacting in theWorlds World of Dreams this way, as their spirits linger about free of their bodies until they awaken.
* AstralProjection: The story depicts Bambi and friends interacting in the
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* ShortStory: The story clocks in around 2,300 words.
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* ShortStory: The story clocks in around 2,300 words. The 2010 draft is even shorter.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] Disney/{{Bambi}} fanfic written by Bagel Brain.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] Disney/{{Bambi}} fanfic written by Bagel Brain.
Creator/BagelBrain.
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You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990989/1/Bambi-s-Dream-Redux here.]]
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You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990989/1/Bambi-s-Dream-Redux here.]] The original 2010 story can also be read [[https://web.archive.org/web/20120420211616/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6597714/1/Bambis_Dream here.]]
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* ShortStory: The story clocks in around 2,300 words.
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* AstralProjection: The story depicts Bambi and friends interacting in the Worlds of Dreams this way, as their spirits linger about free of their bodies until they awaken.
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* DreamLand: The bulk of the story is set in what's called "The World of Dreams". The story seems to depict it not as a separate location from the real world but experiencing the real world in a whole different plane of existence.
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* TheCameo: The Great Prince of the Forest appears in the beginning and ending, and Friend Owl, Thumper and his sisters make brief appearances early on.
* CarnivoreConfusion: The story works around the idea of Friend Owl being a predator bird living around animals that would be his prey in real life by showing him only eating insects at night (which is TruthInTelevision, as large insects are indeed on the menu for owls).
* CarnivoreConfusion: The story works around the idea of Friend Owl being a predator bird living around animals that would be his prey in real life by showing him only eating insects at night (which is TruthInTelevision, as large insects are indeed on the menu for owls).
* {{Irony}}: The story notes that Flower, even when in the world of dreams, still likes to take naps in there.
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* ShoutOut: The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name ("The Plausible Impossible") from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The story makes a brief reference to PandorasBox early on.
** The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name ("The Plausible Impossible") from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
** The story makes a brief reference to PandorasBox early on.
** The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name ("The Plausible Impossible") from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
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* ShoutOut: The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
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* ShoutOut: The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name ("The Plausible Impossible") from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
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* ShoutOut: The line "at an impossible-or shall we say plausible impossible-speed" is a reference to the title of a classic episode of the same name from the ''Series/WaltDisneyPresents'' TV show.
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* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: The 2018 versions heavily rewrites the entire story and adds two new scenes to it. The author claims the original draft still exists despite being deleted years ago, but he decided to revise it for republication instead of just posting it as it originally was.
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* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: The 2018 versions version heavily rewrites the entire story and adds two new scenes to it. The author claims the original draft still exists despite being deleted years ago, but he decided to revise it for republication instead of just posting it as it originally was.
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* GentleGiant: To stand up to a bullying Ronno, Bambi gives Flower the idea to make himself grow into an absolutely massive size thats likened to the height of Mount Katahdin. However Flower doesn't show the slightest sign of aggression in this form, Despite this, Ronno is understandably terrified by what he sees unfold before him and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere hightails it out of there.]]
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* GentleGiant: To stand up to a bullying Ronno, Bambi gives Flower the idea to make himself grow into an absolutely massive size thats likened to the height of Mount Katahdin. However However, Flower doesn't show the slightest sign of aggression in this form, Despite this, Ronno is understandably terrified by what he sees unfold before him and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere hightails it out of there.]]
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The scene of Bambi encountering Faline is very blatant about how he's feeling about the whole thing, especially since the world of dreams allows his form to exaggerate these feelings in a way he could never do in the real world. The story even notes this by saying "To say the least, subtlety was not his strong suit."
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The scene of Bambi encountering Faline is very blatant about how he's feeling about the whole thing, especially since the world of dreams allows his form to exaggerate these feelings in a way he could never do in the real world. The story even [[LampshadeHanging notes this this]] by saying "To say the least, subtlety was not his strong suit."
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* IncorruptablePurePureness: The story claims that Flower, even when becoming a giant to stand up to Ronno, is so docile that he couldn't even attempt to form malice in his heart.
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* IncorruptablePurePureness: IncorruptiblePurePureness: The story claims that Flower, even when becoming a giant to stand up to Ronno, is so docile that he couldn't even attempt to form malice in his heart.
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* IncorruptablePurePureness: The story claims that Flower, even when becoming a giant to stand up to Ronno, is so docile that he couldn't even attempt to form malice in his heart.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Ronno flees in terror at the sight of Flower becoming the size of a mountain in front of him.
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* NoAntagonist: The 2010 version didn't have any villain. Averted in the 2018 revision, which adds a minor conflict in the form of Ronno bullying a helpless Flower.
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* GeorgeLucasAlteredVersion: The 2018 versions heavily rewrites the entire story and adds two new scenes to it. The author claims the original draft still exists despite being deleted years ago, but he decided to revise it for republication instead of just posting it as it originally was.
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* AdaptationExpansion: While the loose story beats are the same in the 2018 edition, it adds a new scene where Bambi briefly encounters Friend Owl and helps out Flower against a bullying Ronno.
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* GentleGiant: To stand up to a bullying Ronno, Bambi gives Flower the idea to make himself grow into an absolutely massive size thats likened to the height of Mount Katahdin. However Flower doesn't show the slightest sign of aggression in this form, Despite this, Ronno is understandably terrified by what he sees unfold before him and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere hightails it out of there.]]
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KickTheDog: When Bambi encounters Flower and Ronno, [[TheBully Ronno]] is seen using the poor skunk kit to basically play tennis with himself. While Flower isn't in any danger of being physically hurt due to it being a dream, its clearly not a pleasant experience for him.
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RandomEventsPlot: The story is a loose string of events tied together by Bambi experiencing a dream.
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SilenceIsGolden: The story was written to not have a single line of spoken dialogue in it.
*SuperSpeedSomethingElseAlsoRises: The scene of Bambi encountering Faline is very blatant about how he's feeling about the whole thing, especially since the world of dreams allows his form to exaggerate these feelings in a way he could never do in the real world. The story even notes this by saying "To say the least, subtlety was not his strong suit."
* SuperSpeed: In the World of Dreams, Bambi (and friends) are capable of moving at blinding speed due to them lacking any physical form.
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''Bambi's Dream'' is a 2018[[note]]originally published in 2010, revised in mid 2018[[/note]] Disney/{{Bambi}} fanfic written by Bagel Brain.
The story is a wordless stream of conscious plot involving Bambi entering the world of dreams and taking part in several shenanigans in it.
You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990989/1/Bambi-s-Dream-Redux here.]]
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* CallBack: The story makes a nod to the dream of his mother Bambi had in ''Disney/BambiII''.
* CallForward: The line "like the forest fire that so far he could scarcely imagine in his mind." is a forward nod to the climatic forest fire of the first movie.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: It's about Bambi having a dream.
* GentleGiant: To stand
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* RandomEventsPlot:
* SilenceIsGolden:
* SomethingElseAlsoRises:
* SuperSpeed
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Like with Bagel Brain's previous story ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'', averted, its implied that Bambi and friends live somewhere in the forests of Maine, with the writing making a reference to the Mount Katahdin region.
The story is a wordless stream of conscious plot involving Bambi entering the world of dreams and taking part in several shenanigans in it.
You can read it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12990989/1/Bambi-s-Dream-Redux here.]]
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* CallBack: The story makes a nod to the dream of his mother Bambi had in ''Disney/BambiII''.
* CallForward: The line "like the forest fire that so far he could scarcely imagine in his mind." is a forward nod to the climatic forest fire of the first movie.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: It's about Bambi having a dream.
* GentleGiant: To stand
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* RandomEventsPlot:
* SilenceIsGolden:
* SomethingElseAlsoRises:
* SuperSpeed
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Like with Bagel Brain's previous story ''Fanfic/CreamedCherries'', averted, its implied that Bambi and friends live somewhere in the forests of Maine, with the writing making a reference to the Mount Katahdin region.
