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* ButchLesbian: Delilah is far from traditionally feminine, and it's all but stated that she's had her share of female ex-lovers.
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* CourtroomAntics: Comes with the territory. It's even one of the tags on the AO3 version.
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* CourtroomAntics: Comes with the territory. It's even one of the tags on the AO3 Website/AO3 version.
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* AscendedExtra: Eric and Delilah themselves, who were ''extremely'' minor characters in ''{{Fanfic/Born to Be Wilde}}'', mainly serving to advertise this fic. Kyle [=VanDal=] had a slightly bigger role, but not nearly as prominent as [[TheRival the one he has here]].
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* CourtroomAntics: But of course. It's even one of the tags on the AO3 version.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: You can expect the lead attorney at any given time to constantly make snarky and disparaging remarks in their head. Unless that lead attorney is Delilah, in which case she'll sometimes follow it up by [[NoVerbalFilter immediately saying the same thing out loud]].
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Goes out of its way to avert this, in a manner not dissimilar to the ''Ace Attorney'' games. While the story technically takes place during the TimeSkip between ''{{Fanfic/Born to Be Wilde}}'' and ''[[Fanfic/TheDarkSideoftheMoonZootopia The Dark Side of the Moon]]'', it mostly ignores both in favor of forming its own continuity with a new OC cast who weren't really around for all that anyway. Any major characters making a return such as [[spoiler: Lucy Sang]] are reintroduced to the new players to keep everyone on the same page. So aside from the occasional [[TheCameo Cameo]] or ContinuityNod, it remains accessible for anyone not familiar with those works.
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*** Likewise, Eric and Delilah's bicker over whether to call the procedure "Summation Examination" or "Closing Argument" also references the different translations of the game.
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*** Likewise, Eric and Delilah's bicker bickering over whether to call the procedure "Summation Examination" or "Closing Argument" also references the different translations of the game.
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* PragmaticAdaptation: The story's writing style aims to be as true to text as possible. This includes things like actual self-revising descriptions in the Court Record and marking testimony and intentionally marking pauses where the player would present evidence. Overall, it almost resembles a playthrough of an Ace Attorney game moreso than a fanfiction. That being said, it does take certain divergences on account of it not being actually interactive. For example, during the first trial, the player would usually be asked to name the victim and present some form of evidence as an introduction to the controls of the game. In the first chapter, however, the judge skips that part completely as the reader has no input or control, rendering a tutorial pointless.
