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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Luna and Celestia give one to Dawnbringer. Then Dawnbringer returns the favor a minute later when he figures out how to create a volcano.]] And ''then'' Twilight gives a final one to Dawnbringer immediately after her ascension]]
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* AmbitionIsEvil: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] is driven by a desire for power for no other reason than satisfying his own ego.
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: The main holdup to Twilight and Luna's relationship is this fact, which Luna already suffered the pain of with a previous lover. [[spoiler: Twilight convinces her to stop worrying about it... which becomes a moot point after her own ascension.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Luna blames herself for not stopping [[spoiler: Dawnbringer from opening the first rift]], though Celestia is quick to tell her that she did the best she could in the circumstances.
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* TemptingFate: As noted in the page quote, Celestia does this when she says there won't be any trouble while she's gone.
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* VillainOverride: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] does this with Midnight Dream after the latter is captured in order to taunt Luna, with the process rendering Midnight Dream completely catatonic afterwards.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler: Trixie and the changeling prisoner.]]
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** Trixie will [[MassEffect2 [[VideoGame/MassEffect2 wreak a just revenge]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH-8fzQechY upon you and your people!]]
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* TimeSkip: There's a three month skip in the final chapter.
* TitleDrop: In the final chapter, Celestia tells Twilight about [[spoiler: her new ability to control the Aurora.]]
* TimeSkip: There's a three month skip in the final chapter.
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* [[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: Twilight Sparkle, Luna, and [[spoiler: Celestia]] all get in on the action.
* AllYourBasAreBelongToUs: [[spoiler: When Dawnbringer takes Canterlot. Subverted, in that Celestia and Luna allowed him to take it so they could wipe out his army and kill him in a single blow.]]
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*AllYourBasAreBelongToUs: AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: [[spoiler: When Dawnbringer takes Canterlot. Subverted, in that Celestia and Luna allowed him to take it so they could wipe out his army and kill him in a single blow.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Luna's attacks consist mostly of moonlight and shadows.
* DeathFromAbove: Happens multiple times, usually when alicorns or [[spoiler: dragons]] are involved.
* [[DeityOfHumanOrigin Deity Of Pony Origin]]: Luna and Celestia's origins. [[spoiler: Also happens to Dawnbringer and Twilight.]]
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer summons a massive horde of them]].
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer is one to Twilight Sparkle.]]
* FinalBattle: Fought outside [[spoilers: the ruins of Canterlot.]]
* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler: Luna obliterates the entire city of Canterlot with an ''orbital strike'' to kill Dawnbringer. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero It fails]].]]
* KillItWithFire: When [[spoiler: Celestia and the dragons]] show up.
* MindRape: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] is fond of doing this to ponies, although only the results are ever shown.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Luna attempts to kill [[spoiler: Dawnbringer via ColonyDrop, she accidentally gives him the desperation he needs to ascend and become an alicorn.]]
* Rousing Speech: Celestia gives one before the final battle.
* RoyalBrat: [[spoiler: Cadence and Blueblood]] both turn out to be this.
* ShockAndAwe: Luna unleashes this on a ''massive'' scale.
* ShooOutTheClowns: Spike doesn't show up after [[spoiler: the first rift is opened]] until the very end.
* ShoutOut: Multiple.
** Trixie will [[MassEffect2 wreak a just revenge]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH-8fzQechY upon you and your people!]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8duFbuiWiWc A worthy effort,]] [[Warcraft3 but futile.]]
* DarkIsNotEvil: Luna's attacks consist mostly of moonlight and shadows.
* DeathFromAbove: Happens multiple times, usually when alicorns or [[spoiler: dragons]] are involved.
* [[DeityOfHumanOrigin Deity Of Pony Origin]]: Luna and Celestia's origins. [[spoiler: Also happens to Dawnbringer and Twilight.]]
* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer summons a massive horde of them]].
* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer is one to Twilight Sparkle.]]
* FinalBattle: Fought outside [[spoilers: the ruins of Canterlot.]]
* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler: Luna obliterates the entire city of Canterlot with an ''orbital strike'' to kill Dawnbringer. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero It fails]].]]
* KillItWithFire: When [[spoiler: Celestia and the dragons]] show up.
* MindRape: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] is fond of doing this to ponies, although only the results are ever shown.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When Luna attempts to kill [[spoiler: Dawnbringer via ColonyDrop, she accidentally gives him the desperation he needs to ascend and become an alicorn.]]
* Rousing Speech: Celestia gives one before the final battle.
* RoyalBrat: [[spoiler: Cadence and Blueblood]] both turn out to be this.
* ShockAndAwe: Luna unleashes this on a ''massive'' scale.
* ShooOutTheClowns: Spike doesn't show up after [[spoiler: the first rift is opened]] until the very end.
* ShoutOut: Multiple.
** Trixie will [[MassEffect2 wreak a just revenge]] [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH-8fzQechY upon you and your people!]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8duFbuiWiWc A worthy effort,]] [[Warcraft3 but futile.]]
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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] starts doing this near the end of the story.
* [[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: Twilight Sparkle, Luna, and [[spoiler: Celestia]] all get in on the action.
* AllYourBasAreBelongToUs: [[spoiler: When Dawnbringer takes Canterlot. Subverted, in that Celestia and Luna allowed him to take it so they could wipe out his army and kill him in a single blow.]]
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: Discord's plan will lead to a universal class-5, although Dawnbringer is probably unaware of that fact.]]
* AxCrazy: Midnight Dream.
* BadassBoast: Luna gives a serious one to [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] right before the final battle.
--> "Your life is the blink of an eye. I have slain more creatures than you could even imagine. I saved this world, and then brought it to its knees. Your power means ''nothing'' to me!"
* BenevolentPrecursors: Harmony seems to be one.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]]
* BiggerBad: [[spoiler: Discord]]
* BigDamnHeroes: [[Celestia shows up to save the day leading a flight of ''dragons''.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Midnight Dream]], although he wasn't really that sane to start with.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Luna and Celestia give one to Dawnbringer. Then Dawnbringer returns the favor a minute later when he figures out how to create a volcano.]]
* DarkFic: The plot begins with a pony being sacrificed in a ritual.[[spoiler: By the end of the story, Canterlot has been utterly destroyed.]]
* AGodAmI: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] starts doing this near the end of the story.
* [[ActionGirl Action Mare]]: Twilight Sparkle, Luna, and [[spoiler: Celestia]] all get in on the action.
* AllYourBasAreBelongToUs: [[spoiler: When Dawnbringer takes Canterlot. Subverted, in that Celestia and Luna allowed him to take it so they could wipe out his army and kill him in a single blow.]]
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler: Discord's plan will lead to a universal class-5, although Dawnbringer is probably unaware of that fact.]]
* AxCrazy: Midnight Dream.
* BadassBoast: Luna gives a serious one to [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]] right before the final battle.
--> "Your life is the blink of an eye. I have slain more creatures than you could even imagine. I saved this world, and then brought it to its knees. Your power means ''nothing'' to me!"
* BenevolentPrecursors: Harmony seems to be one.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Dawnbringer]]
* BiggerBad: [[spoiler: Discord]]
* BigDamnHeroes: [[Celestia shows up to save the day leading a flight of ''dragons''.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Midnight Dream]], although he wasn't really that sane to start with.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Luna and Celestia give one to Dawnbringer. Then Dawnbringer returns the favor a minute later when he figures out how to create a volcano.]]
* DarkFic: The plot begins with a pony being sacrificed in a ritual.[[spoiler: By the end of the story, Canterlot has been utterly destroyed.]]
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-> "Besides, I think we've met our disaster quota for the year. [[TemptingFate I don't expect any trouble while I'm gone]]."\\\
-- ""Princess Celestia""
A fanfic by [=PonyholicsAnonymous=].
In the years since her return, Luna has failed to reconnect with Equestrian society, and is once again becoming distant from her sister. Celestia takes advantage of a foreign crisis to leave Equestria, forcing Luna to rule alone for a time. She calls on Twilight Sparkle to advise Luna, hoping her protege can teach her a few lessons about friendship while she helps Luna rule.
However, all is not well in the city of Canterlot. The night after Celestia departs, the body of a pony is discovered in the city, sacrificed in an arcane ritual using knowledge that only the royal sisters should possess. Twilight and Luna race to stop the killer before he strikes again, while attempting to discover his ultimate nefarious purpose.
The completed story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22706/aurora here]].
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-> "Besides, I think we've met our disaster quota for the year. [[TemptingFate I don't expect any trouble while I'm gone]]."\\\
-- ""Princess Celestia""
A fanfic by [=PonyholicsAnonymous=].
In the years since her return, Luna has failed to reconnect with Equestrian society, and is once again becoming distant from her sister. Celestia takes advantage of a foreign crisis to leave Equestria, forcing Luna to rule alone for a time. She calls on Twilight Sparkle to advise Luna, hoping her protege can teach her a few lessons about friendship while she helps Luna rule.
However, all is not well in the city of Canterlot. The night after Celestia departs, the body of a pony is discovered in the city, sacrificed in an arcane ritual using knowledge that only the royal sisters should possess. Twilight and Luna race to stop the killer before he strikes again, while attempting to discover his ultimate nefarious purpose.
The completed story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22706/aurora here]].
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