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* KudzuPlot: Thanks to the story's slow pacing, lots of characters haven't had all their behavior explained yet. See also AllJustADream and OntologicalMystery.
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* MalevolentMaskedMan: [[spoiler:The "plague doctor," though "malevolent" remains to be seen]].
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* MalevolentMaskedMan: [[spoiler:The "plague doctor," though "malevolent" remains doctor". Though Daemon of Decay hinted that he may not be malevolent-by which we mean that [[EpilepticTrees when one user suggested that because the possible "Shadow" that may or may not be real qualified as a plague]], he might be trying to help, Daemon of Decay simply said "I wonder..." and then posted an image of Celestia with a trolling expression. So it could go either way.]]
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Twilight [[spoiler: and all of Equestria '''could''' beseen]].at the mercy of some kind of shadow... [[ParanoiaFuel or she could just be crazy.]] Who knows?]]
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Twilight [[spoiler: and all of Equestria '''could''' be
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* BigBad: It's ''someone''. It's difficult to say who or what it is for sure, (or even if it's all just in Twilight's head) but the closest we have to this trope is either [[spoiler: Other Twilight,]] or the [[spoiler: being wearing the plague doctor outfit]].
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* BigBad: It's ''someone''. It's difficult to say who or what it is for sure, (or even if it's all just in Twilight's head) but the closest we have to this trope is either [[spoiler: Other Twilight,]] or the [[spoiler: being wearing the plague doctor outfit]]."plague doctor"]].
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* ManInTheMirrorTalksBack: Occurs in chapter 5.
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Read it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/75199/asylum here.]]
]] It also has its own Blog/AskAPony [[http://askasylumtwilight.tumblr.com/ here]].
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* BerserkButton: Whatever you do, don't hurt [[spoiler:Fluttershy]] in front of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]] [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] WILL hurt you. For that matter, don't even try to interact with her since [[spoiler:Dash]] is likely to take it the wrong way.
* RecursiveFanfiction: This has inspired a few.
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* WhamLine: “Would Spoken by Rarity as Twilight sees her attending to a catatonic earth pony [[spoiler:or at least hornless]] filly:
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* BerserkButton: Whatever you do, don't hurt [[spoiler:Fluttershy]] in front of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]] [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] WILL hurt you.
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* BigBad: It's ''someone''. It's difficult to say who or what it is for sure, (or even if it's all just in Twilight's head) but the closest we have to this trope is either [[spoiler: Other Twilight,]] or the [[spoiler: being wearing the plague doctor outfit]].
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* AlternateUniverse: Where (seemingly) a majority of ''Asylum'' takes place.
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* AlternateUniverse: Where (seemingly) a majority of ''Asylum'' takes place. place.
* BigBad: It's ''someone''. It's difficult to say who or what it is for sure, but the closest we have to this trope is either [[spoiler: Other Twilight,]] or the [[spoiler: being wearing the plague doctor outfit]].
* BigBad: It's ''someone''. It's difficult to say who or what it is for sure, but the closest we have to this trope is either [[spoiler: Other Twilight,]] or the [[spoiler: being wearing the plague doctor outfit]].
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* WhamLine: “Would you like that, [[spoiler:Sweetie?]]”
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* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43, although this was a joke by the author]].
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* EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie]] has a nasty one on her cutie mark; we have yet to find out how she got it.
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* EveryScarHasAStory: [[spoiler: Pinkie Pie]] has a nasty one on her cutie mark; we have yet mark. [[spoiler:She got it after accidentally starting a house fire when trying to find make a cake for her first party after seeing the Sonic Rainboom; her father barely got her (and the rest of the family) out how safely, and she got it.developed an intense fear of hurting other ponies when she attempts to make them happier]].
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** Chapter 12 ends with Twilight hearing [[spoiler: Princess Celestia's]] voice in the bathroom.
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].nonexistent]].
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* AlternateUniverse: Where (seemingly) a majority of ''Asylum'' takes place.
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* InsaneEqualsViolent: As seen in Chapter 6, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is a good example of this, shown to be [[spoiler: throwing soup in Dr. Appeljack's face, and then attacking her for pretty much no reason.]]
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* InsaneEqualsViolent: As seen in Chapter 6, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is a good example of this, shown to be [[spoiler: throwing soup in Dr. Appeljack's Applejack's face, and then attacking her for pretty much no reason.]]
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
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* InsaneEqualsViolent: As seen in Chapter 6, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is a good example of this, shown to be [[spoiler: throwing soup in Dr. Appeljack's face, and then attacking her for pretty much no reason.]]
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** In chapter 8, Twilight has woken up back in her library, and assumes that the hospital was just a bad dream. [[spoiler: But someone comes to try and prove her wrong...]]
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* OlderThanTheyLook: According to a comment of the author's, [[spoiler: Fluttershy is 43]].
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* HopeSpot: Twilight would sometimes get a sense of comfort from elements of the world she woke up in are more familiar to her world before it hits her with a cold reminder that she isn't in her world anymore. One example is when she sees Pinkie Pie the first time (since she first woke up in the hospital) and is relieved that she is the same pony (sans her now alway straight hair she knew from Ponyville. [[spoiler:The one difference that killed it was a massive scar covering Pinkie's cutie mark.]]
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* HopeSpot: Twilight would sometimes get a sense of comfort from elements of the world she woke up in are more familiar to her world before it hits her with a cold reminder that she isn't in her world anymore. One example is when she sees Pinkie Pie the first time (since she first woke up in the hospital) and is relieved that she is the same pony (sans her now alway always straight hair hair) she knew from Ponyville. [[spoiler:The one difference that killed it was a massive scar covering Pinkie's cutie mark.]]
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
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* HopeSpot: Twilight would sometimes get a sense of familiarity comfort from elements of the world she woke up in are more familiar to her world before it hits her with a cold reminder that she isn't in her world anymore. One example is when she sees Pinkie Pie the first time (since she first woke up in the hospital) and is relieved that she is the same pony (sans her now alway straight hair she knew from Ponyville. [[spoiler:The one difference that killed it was a massive scar covering Pinkie's cutie mark.]]
* OntologicalMystery: In a way.
* [[WholeEpisodeFlashback Whole Episode]] BackStory: Most of chapter 3 has Applejack explain how she became a doctor and became Twilight's friend in this world.
* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
* OntologicalMystery: In a way.
* [[WholeEpisodeFlashback Whole Episode]] BackStory: Most of chapter 3 has Applejack explain how she became a doctor and became Twilight's friend in this world.
* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
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* CuckooNest: Twilight wakes up in a padded cell of a psychiatric hospital in restraints. She is told she is crazy, but she doesn't believe them.
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* CuckooNest: Twilight wakes up is in a padded cell of a psychiatric hospital in restraints. She and is told she is crazy, but crazy. However, she doesn't believe them.
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[[WMG: This fanfic contains examples of:]]
* AllJustADream: According to the doctors of Broadhoof Memorial, most of Twilight's life has been this.
* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
[[WMG: This fanfic contains examples of:]]
* AllJustADream: According to the doctors of Broadhoof Memorial, most of Twilight's life has been this.
* YouWakeUpInARoom: The way the fic starts. Also, while Twilight retains all memory of her life as Celestia's student, any memory of having been living in an asylum for (presumably) a decade is [[OntologicalMystery completely nonexistant]].
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When Twilight Sparkle slipped beneath the covers last night everything had been fine. She had friends whom she loved, a teacher she adored, and a bright future ahead of her. But when she woke up, her blankets and quilts had been replaced by hospital gowns and padded restraints. Everything is wrong and nothing makes sense; even her friends have changed. The doctors, they keep telling her she is sick, that none of it was real and it was all in her head. But they’re lying. She remembers a life far beyond the hospital walls. She couldn't have made it all up on her own. They must be lying… right?
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When Twilight Sparkle slipped beneath the covers last night everything had been fine. She had friends whom she loved, a teacher she adored, and a bright future ahead of her. But when she woke up, her blankets and quilts had been replaced by hospital gowns and padded restraints. Everything is wrong and nothing makes sense; even her friends have changed. The doctors, they keep telling her she is sick, that none of it was real and it was all in her head. But they’re lying. She remembers a life far beyond the hospital walls. She couldn't have made it all up on her own. They must be lying… right?right?
Read it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/75199/asylum here.]]
Read it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/75199/asylum here.]]
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A [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] fan fiction by Daemon of Decay.
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A [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan fiction by Daemon of Decay.
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A [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] fan fiction by Daemon of Decay.
When Twilight Sparkle slipped beneath the covers last night everything had been fine. She had friends whom she loved, a teacher she adored, and a bright future ahead of her. But when she woke up, her blankets and quilts had been replaced by hospital gowns and padded restraints. Everything is wrong and nothing makes sense; even her friends have changed. The doctors, they keep telling her she is sick, that none of it was real and it was all in her head. But they’re lying. She remembers a life far beyond the hospital walls. She couldn't have made it all up on her own. They must be lying… right?
When Twilight Sparkle slipped beneath the covers last night everything had been fine. She had friends whom she loved, a teacher she adored, and a bright future ahead of her. But when she woke up, her blankets and quilts had been replaced by hospital gowns and padded restraints. Everything is wrong and nothing makes sense; even her friends have changed. The doctors, they keep telling her she is sick, that none of it was real and it was all in her head. But they’re lying. She remembers a life far beyond the hospital walls. She couldn't have made it all up on her own. They must be lying… right?
