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* PowerIncontinence: Both Madoka and Sayaka suffer from this after Isshin teaches them how to unlock their natural powers, but events leave him with no opportunity to give them lessons on how to ''control'' them. Sayaka just makes her surroundings [[MakingASplash very wet]] whenever she gets upset, but Madoka's lack of control over her [[TheEmpath empathic]] abilities causes her to occasionally create emotional feedback loops by abosrbing strong emotions from someone nearby and broadcasting them back out, causing the original emotion to get stronger and then absorbing the newly-strengthened emotion and broadcasting ''that'', ''ad infinium'' until someone outside the loop knocks her out. After a particularly bad episode with Homura's guilt and regret, Urahara ties one of [[PowerLimiter Kenpachi's eyepatches]] to Madoka's hand to seal her powers.
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''As N Approaches Infinity'' is a fan fiction story available on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11116656/1/As-N-Approaches-Infinity fanfiction.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3553727/ AO3]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/150452/Corisanna Corisanna]]. It is a Manga/{{Bleach}} and Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover.

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''As N Approaches Infinity'' is a fan fiction story available on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11116656/1/As-N-Approaches-Infinity fanfiction.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3553727/ AO3]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/150452/Corisanna Corisanna]]. It is a Manga/{{Bleach}} and Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica crossover.
crossover. [[DeadFic It hasn't updated since March 2021.]]
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* MeaningfulEcho: In chapter 21, when Ichigo realizes Homura is blaming herself for failing to save her friends, he asks her [[ArmorPiercingQuestion "But is that a realistic thing to expect of yourself?"]] In chapter 38, Homura turns the question back on the next timeline's Ichigo when he's blaming himself for failing to protect his sisters while he was depowered.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Very downplayed example, but in ''Madoka Magica'', the Incubator is explicitly an [[StarfishAliens extraterrestrial entity]] from an unknown planet contracting sentient lifeforms throughout the universe. Here, it is adapted into the cosmology of ''Bleach'' and thus is a spirit from an unknown dimension when it first reveals itself to Yuzu and Karin, who have more knowledge of the spirit world than most girls it contracts. Homura mentally lampshades this as it being another example of the Incubator's ExactWords, since technically speaking, a spiritual race from another dimension ''is'' still an alien.


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* OutsideContextProblem: The Incubator is this for the cast and world of ''Bleach'' in many regards; whilst adapted to fit into the setting of ''Bleach'' as a spirit from another dimension (its origins as an extraterrestrial creature being a misinterpretation from its usual ExactWords), much of the direct plot stems just from figuring out how it and its Contract system works using the spiritual-and-science system of ''Bleach'' to match it. While it is noted to be a spirit of some sort thanks to Tomohisa, it simply does not ''act'' like any Shinigami, Hollow, Fullbringer, or Quincy type of spirit, having no reiatsu to sense whatsoever and the contracted Magical Girls' abilities matching mixed aspects of all four spirit types. And of course, with a near endless supply of bodies that can be created from ambient reishi, ''destroying'' the Incubator permanently is an uphill battle.
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* ConnectedAllAlong: Bethany, the girl who would become Elsa Maria, was one of the girls in Kazamino that Kyoko clashed with.

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** The description of the rooms leading up to the central chamber of Witch Alexandria's labyrinth is inscribed with hidden text [[Literature/HarryPotter "thief you have been warned beware"]] If you recognize the quote fragment, you should know it ends with "…of finding more than treasure there." They do.

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** The description of the rooms leading up to the central chamber of Witch Alexandria's labyrinth is inscribed with hidden text [[Literature/HarryPotter "thief you have been warned beware"]] beware"]]. If you recognize the quote fragment, you should know it ends with "…of finding more than treasure there." They do.


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** The phrase "bite her head off" serves as this for Homura because it reminds her of the timelines where Mami literally had her head bitten off by the Sweets Witch. When Sayaka says this to her in the middle of scolding her for being too angry with Nagisa, Homura freezes, [[ThousandYardStare stares at Mami for a long moment]], then walks out of Urahara's shop. Urahara and Toshiro later tell the girls to ''never'' use this phrase around Homura.
** Kyoko is triggered by the sound of young children crying because it reminds her of her dead little sister Momo. Already on edge from the memories of [[spoiler:her time as a Witch]] and Urahara refusing to let her leave his shop, listening to Tatsuya crying was enough to send her spiraling so badly [[spoiler:it nearly triggered another transformation into a Witch]].

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* InSpiteOfANail: As of Timeline X + N + 1, the plot of [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi Magica]] is occurring mostly as it does in canon, only slightly slower due to the Incubator sending Soju to Mitakihara. [[spoiler: As of Chapter 77, the Dawn of Hyades descends upon Asunaro.]]

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* InSpiteOfANail: As of Timeline X + N + 1, the plot of [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi Magica]] is occurring mostly as it does in canon, only slightly slower due to the Incubator sending Soju to Mitakihara. [[spoiler: As [[spoiler:As of Chapter 77, the Dawn of Hyades descends upon Asunaro.]]



** This almost happens to [[spoiler:Sayaka]] in Chapter 70, after [[spoiler:Kyōko is turned into a Witch and Mami and Tōshirō are pulled into her labyrinth. The Incubator points out that Mami has just learned the AwfulTruth about Magical girls' fates by witnessing her own former partner become a Witch, and is likely to fall into despair herself, leaving Tōshirō to fight two powerful Witches alone. It tries to use this to push Sayaka into contracting so she can save Tōshirō. Luckily, Homura shows up before the Incubator could force her hand]].



* RefusalOfTheCall: When Uryu does research into the possibility of Quincy girls being contracted, Ryuuken notes when Uryu was born, his wife Kanae confessed that she had been approached the Incubator when she was young, and that she had considered making a contract, but ultimately refused and that she was relieved that she had. At the time, Ryuuken had thought it was just something brought on by childbirth, but now thinks he owes her an apology.

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* RefusalOfTheCall: When Uryu does research into the possibility of Quincy girls being contracted, Ryuuken notes when Uryu was born, his wife Kanae confessed that she had been approached the Incubator when she was young, and that she had considered making a contract, but ultimately refused and that she was relieved that she had. At the time, Ryuuken had thought it was just something delirium brought on by childbirth, but now thinks he owes her an apology.



* SirSwearsALot: Karin, Jinta, Ichigo's Hollow, Kyōko (Until Tatsuya starts picking it up).

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* SirSwearsALot: Karin, Jinta, Ichigo's Hollow, Kyōko (Until (until Tatsuya starts picking it up).

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* TheGadfly /{{Troll}}: Urahara.



* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day; Homura mentions that she stopping counting exactly how many cycles she's been through somewhere around the forties, and that was a long while ago. It's made clear that this is particularly hard on her, as the loop only exists because she keeps deliberately hitting the ResetButton.

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* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day; Homura mentions that she stopping stopped counting exactly how many cycles she's been through somewhere around in the forties, and that was a long while ago. It's made clear that this is particularly hard on her, as the loop only exists because she keeps deliberately hitting the ResetButton.



* TheHeartless: Witches and Hollows. It's speculated that the former are even a specific type of the latter.



* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she hasn't run into this situation before. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood]].
* ItsAlwaysSpring: Homura ruminates at one point that thanks to the time loops, she's spent at least several years in a nonstop spring, and things like summer or winter are starting to feel way too abstract.

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* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she hasn't run into this situation before.wouldn't arise up there. Mami also once encountered a ghost on a vacation before her parents died, but assumed she just imagined it. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood]].
* ItsAlwaysSpring: Homura ruminates at one point that thanks to the time loops, she's spent at least several years in a nonstop spring, and things like the concept of actually experiencing summer or winter are again is starting to feel way too abstract.



* TheNicknamer: Ichigo call Homura ''Stopwatch.'' While Sayaka calls Yoruichi ''Midnight the Conqueror'' and Homura ''Stranger Danger''.



* ParentsAsPeople: According to Homura, despite their [[ParentalNeglect treatment of her]] Sayaka's parents ''do'' love her but are terrible at expressing it. It's heavily implied that she's witnessed their distraught reactions when Sayaka dies in previous timelines.
* ParentalNeglect: Sayaka's parents are guilty of this. It eventually causes their daughter to run away.

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* ParentsAsPeople: According to Homura, despite their [[ParentalNeglect treatment of her]] Sayaka's parents ''do'' love her but are terrible at expressing it. It's heavily implied that she's witnessed their distraught reactions when whenever Sayaka dies in previous timelines.
* ParentalNeglect: Sayaka's parents are guilty of this.tend to act distantly, and seem to only bother to put up a good family image for people from work. It eventually causes their daughter to run away.



* SpannerInTheWorks: For all the firepower and tactics that Homura's new allies bring, the single biggest trump card is Orihime's ability to cleanse Soul Gems and revert Grief Seeds. Mami and Kyoko handle the AwfulTruth about Witches far better mainly due to learning about it, as a temporary escape from the Incubator's system.

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* SpannerInTheWorks: For all the firepower and tactics that Homura's new allies bring, the single biggest trump card is Orihime's ability to cleanse Soul Gems and revert Grief Seeds. Mami and Kyoko handle the AwfulTruth about Witches far better mainly due to learning about it, this power, as a temporary escape from the Incubator's system.



** Similarly, spiritually experienced characters tend be surprised by the sheer amout of spiritual power Madoka has, and compares its power and volume to Ichigo's.

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** Similarly, spiritually experienced characters tend be surprised by the sheer amout of spiritual power Madoka has, and compares comparing its power and volume to Ichigo's.



* TheGadfly /{{Troll}}: Urahara.
* TheHeartless: Witches and Hollows. It's speculated that the former are even a specific type of the latter
* TheNicknamer: Ichigo call Homura ''Stopwatch.'' While Sayaka calls Yoruichi ''Midnight the Conqueror'' and Homura ''Stranger Danger''.



* TooMuchAlike: As multiple characters point out, this is the reason Homura and Urahara have so much trouble cooperating with each other. Both are incredibly calculating and perceptive, aiming to be in control of a situation in order to achieve benevolent goals, but this generally makes them butt heads when it comes to larger strategy. Urahara knowing this and trying to treat Homura similarly to himself doesn't really help; despite appearances, she's far more emotionally invested, and just trying to appeal to surface-level logical arguements makes Homura take his apparent detachment at face value.

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* TooMuchAlike: As multiple characters point out, this is the reason Homura and Urahara have so much trouble cooperating with each other. Both are incredibly calculating and perceptive, aiming to be in control of a situation in order to achieve benevolent goals, but this generally makes them butt heads when it comes to larger strategy. Urahara knowing realizing this and trying to treat Homura similarly to himself similarity doesn't really help; despite appearances, she's far more emotionally invested, help, given his issues with self-awareness. At one point he tries to appeal to Homura using the logical arguments that he would value, failing to comprehend that like himself, Homura is fairly sentimental and emotional under the calm exterior; just trying to appeal to surface-level logical arguements logic makes Homura take his apparent detachment at face value.



* {{Understatement}}: The framing device opens with Homura starting to inform Urahara's group about the situation, claiming that there's a threat on the lives of the Kurasaki twins. Upon finishing her recap of the first timeline's CataclysmClimax, which involved [[spoiler:the Incubator killing most of the ''Bleach'' cast and creating a King's Key]], Homura muses that she's probably picked up Urahara's habit of underselling a problem.

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* TrustPassword: As only Homura has RippleEffectProofMemory, Urahara has everyone write a bunch of notes addressed to themselves, filled with things only they could possibly know, and stores them in Homura's shield. In the next timeline, she simply has to pass out all the notes to quickly get everyone on board and up to speed.
* {{Understatement}}: The framing device FlashForward opens with Homura starting to inform Urahara's group about the situation, claiming that there's a threat on the lives of the Kurasaki twins. Upon finishing her recap of the first timeline's CataclysmClimax, which involved [[spoiler:the Incubator killing most of the ''Bleach'' cast and creating a King's Key]], Homura muses that she's probably picked up Urahara's habit of underselling a problem.



** Chapters 69-70, [[spoiler:Kyōko finally appears...and it is discovered that someone has been killing the witches in Kazamino, leaving none for her, and fuelled by half-mad desperation, attacks Tōshirō and Mami, quickly turning into a Witch.]]

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** Chapters 69-70, [[spoiler:Kyōko finally appears...and it is discovered that someone has been killing the witches in Kazamino, leaving none for her, and fuelled fueled by half-mad desperation, attacks Tōshirō and Mami, quickly turning into a Witch.]]

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* AdultsAreUseless: Played with. Adults with no knowledge of the spirit world are of no help and are all Homura knows. She has to learn that the {{Shinigami}} adults avert this trope.

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* AdultsAreUseless: Played with. Adults with no knowledge of the spirit world are of no help and are all Homura knows. She has to learn that the {{Shinigami}} adults avert this trope.trope; her usual stab at a plausible cover story fails because these authority figures are actually willing and able to dig deeper.



** [[spoiler:Karin's labyrinth has many.]]

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** [[spoiler:Karin's [[spoiler:Karin]]'s labyrinth has many.]]



*** [[spoiler:As with the earlier room, the shrine to Ichigo has bows and quivers to refer to his Quincy heritage. Swords refer to his shinigami heritage.]]

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*** [[spoiler:As with the earlier room, the shrine to Ichigo has bows and quivers to refer to his Quincy heritage. Swords heritage, as well as swords to refer to his shinigami heritage.]]



* DeathByAdaptation: Homura's parents. Then again, their canon status is unknown.

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* DeathByAdaptation: Homura's parents.parents, who passed away years before she became a magical girl. Then again, their canon status is unknown.



** Similarly, Kyubey states to the twins that it comes from a higher spiritual dimension. Homura muses that while it normally claims to be an alien, she's only heard it claim to be from another world, and she just assumed that meant extraterrestial; until she learned of the shinigami, she wouldn't have realized there's a difference. And that's assuming it's being truthful to begin with.

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** Similarly, Kyubey states to the twins that it comes from a higher spiritual dimension. Homura muses that while it normally that, assuming it's being truthful, this might not contradict its earlier claims to be of being an alien, she's only heard it claim to be alien; it's still from another world, world in a sense, and she she'd always just assumed that it meant extraterrestial; until extraterrestrial. Until she learned of the shinigami, she wouldn't have realized there's a difference. And that's assuming it's being truthful to begin with.



* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: Featured in Witch Alexandria's [[spoiler: Karin's]] labyrinth, as an art gallery about what she wanted to do when she grows up.

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* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: Featured in Witch Alexandria's Alexandria/ [[spoiler: Karin's]] Karin]]'s labyrinth, as an art gallery about what she wanted to do when she grows up.



** Homura in particular is quite experienced at making the call to "put her out of her misery". Several shinigami note that it usually takes years or decades to get so coldly rational about this, which raises uncomfortable questions about Homura's mental state.

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** Homura in particular is quite experienced at making the call to "put her out of her misery". Several shinigami note that it usually takes years or decades to get so coldly rational about this, which raises uncomfortable questions about [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior Homura's mental state.state]].



** People when Homura proves she really does have stolen mundane weaponry stashed in her shield.

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** People are generally taken aback when Homura proves she really does have stolen mundane weaponry stashed in her shield.



* {{Shinigami}}: Courtesy of Manga/{{Bleach}}
* ShellShockedVeteran: Homura.

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* {{Shinigami}}: Courtesy of Manga/{{Bleach}}
Manga/{{Bleach}}.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Homura.Homura usually keeps a tight lid on her emotions, but underneath it's clear that she's barely suppressing a nervous breakdown, fueled by despair at being unable to stop her friends from dying over and over again. The Kurosakis get protective towards her because of this, given that she's only 14.



* SpannerInTheWorks: For all the firepower and tactics that Homura's new allies bring, the single biggest trump card is Orihime's ability to cleanse Soul Gems and revert Grief Seeds. Mami and Kyoko handle the AwfulTruth about Witches far better mainly due to learning about it, as a temporary escape from the Incubator's system.



* TheHeartless: Witches and Hollows.

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* TheHeartless: Witches and Hollows. It's speculated that the former are even a specific type of the latter



* TooMuchAlike: As multiple characters point out, this is the reason Homura and Urahara have so much trouble cooperating with each other.

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* TooMuchAlike: As multiple characters point out, this is the reason Homura and Urahara have so much trouble cooperating with each other. Both are incredibly calculating and perceptive, aiming to be in control of a situation in order to achieve benevolent goals, but this generally makes them butt heads when it comes to larger strategy. Urahara knowing this and trying to treat Homura similarly to himself doesn't really help; despite appearances, she's far more emotionally invested, and just trying to appeal to surface-level logical arguements makes Homura take his apparent detachment at face value.



* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Homura has a good mask, but the Bleach adults with military experience can see through it enough to be disturbed even before TheReveal of why she acts that way.

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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Homura has a good mask, but the Bleach ''Bleach'' adults with military experience can see through it enough to be disturbed even before TheReveal of why she acts that way.



* WrongGenreSavvy: Sayaka, even without contracting, occasionally gets too excited and jumps to the wrong conclusion mid-exposition. When Homura finally reveals her time powers, Sayaka initially assumes that she hid it because it's like Sailer Pluto where using the ability would kill her. And with ''Sailer Moon'' still on her mind, Sayaka then thinks that Homura is a KidFromTheFuture, reasoning that Ichigo and Rukia would be her parents, before Homura can clarify that she only traveled back a few weeks.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Sayaka, even without contracting, occasionally gets too excited and jumps to the wrong conclusion mid-exposition. When Homura finally reveals her time powers, Sayaka initially assumes that she hid it because it's like Sailer Pluto where using the ability would kill her. And with ''Sailer Moon'' still on her mind, Sayaka then thinks that Homura is a KidFromTheFuture, reasoning that Ichigo and Rukia would be her parents, before Homura can clarify irately clarifies that she only traveled back a few weeks.

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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Homura tends to get irrationally short-tempered and angry around Nagisa Momoe, the magical girl who usually turns into the Witch that kills Mami. While Homura doesn't believe in blaming girls for what their Witches do, she finds it difficult to keep her temper in check around a constant reminder of her onetime-mentor's death, especially when she learns that Momoe's wish was incredibly short-sighted.



* AnimalEspionage: Yoruichi accompanies Homura back to Mitakihara in her cat form, posing as the girl's unassuming pet while investigating the Incubator's schemes and brainstorming ideas with Homura. They concoct a story about how [[EvilDetectingDog some cats are supernaturally sensative]], allowing Yoruichi to fight the InvisibleToNormals Incubator if necessary.

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* AnimalEspionage: Yoruichi accompanies Homura back to Mitakihara in her cat form, posing as the girl's unassuming pet while investigating the Incubator's schemes and brainstorming ideas with Homura. They concoct a story about how [[EvilDetectingDog some cats are supernaturally sensative]], sensitive]], allowing Yoruichi to fight the InvisibleToNormals Incubator if necessary.



* ChildSoldier: Homura calls herself this much to the concern of [[spoiler: Yoruichi]].

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* ChildSoldier: Homura calls herself this this, much to the concern of [[spoiler: Yoruichi]].Yoruichi.



* CoverBlowingSuperpower: The powers and abilities of Homura's shinigami allies in the second timeline would inherently give away to the Incubator who they are and what they are capable of, and has been one of their main challenges to keep secret.

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* CoverBlowingSuperpower: The powers and abilities of Homura's shinigami allies in the second timeline would inherently give away to the Incubator who they are and what they are capable of, and has been one of their main challenges to keep secret. While they've successfully passed themselves off as mere humans with spiritual powers, there's only so many allies they can bring in before the Incubator would realize that the shinigami are involved.



** Urahara's ''entire character'' gets hit with this during the second arc. Him being an AntiHero? It makes Homura wary of him. BunnyEarsLawyer he is...which thoroughly annoys Homura to no end, as while she knows that Kisuke is intelligent, him behaving in more comical manners infuriates her. Him being CrazyPrepared in canon concerning Aizen's plans made sense because he had over a century to thoroughly study the problem. The Incubator's plans involve even more scientific complexity regarding the Magical Girls, and as an OutsideContextProblem that Urahara didn't even know about, unlike Yhwach (Whom Urahara had basic knowledge of), he needs just as much time to study it, which he can't do in the six weeks allotted before Homura can turn back time. This causes him to be put off-guard when [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Ayase Soju]] shows up, as he didn't take her appearance into account. Him being a MysteriousBacker only adds to Homura's reasons of not fully trusting him. His SinkOrSwimMentor tactics, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Benihime herself, are '''not''' going to work for Homura like they did with Ichigo. Overall, the situation is one that Urahara has to adjust to, his tactics may have worked in Bleach canon, but for PMMM canon, he is out of his depth.

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** Urahara's ''entire character'' gets hit with this during the second arc. Him being an AntiHero? It makes Homura wary of him. BunnyEarsLawyer he is...which thoroughly annoys Homura to no end, as while she knows that Kisuke is intelligent, him behaving in more comical manners infuriates her. Him being CrazyPrepared in canon concerning Aizen's plans made sense because he had over a century to thoroughly study the problem. The Incubator's plans involve even more scientific complexity regarding the Magical Girls, and as an OutsideContextProblem that Urahara didn't even know about, unlike Yhwach (Whom (whom Urahara had basic knowledge of), he needs just as much time to study it, which he can't do in the six weeks allotted before Homura can turn back time. This causes him to be put off-guard when [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Ayase Soju]] shows up, as he he's still in the process of learning about the whole situation and didn't take her appearance into account. anticipate a rogue magical girl antagonizing them. Him being a MysteriousBacker only adds to Homura's reasons of not fully trusting him.him, when he can't afford to lose her trust at all. His SinkOrSwimMentor tactics, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by Benihime herself, are '''not''' going to work for Homura like they did with Ichigo. Overall, the situation is one that Urahara has to adjust to, to; his tactics may have worked in Bleach ''Bleach'' canon, but for PMMM ''PMMM'' canon, he is out of his depth.



** Similarly, Kyubey states to the twins that it comes from a higher spiritual dimension. Homura muses that while it normally claims to be an alien, she's only heard it claim to be from another world, and she just assumed that meant extraterrestial; until she learned of the shinigami, she wouldn't have realized there's a difference. And that's assuming it's being truthful to begin with.



* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: Featured in Witch Alexandria's [[spoiler: Karin's]] labyrinth.

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* FondMemoriesThatCouldHaveBeen: Featured in Witch Alexandria's [[spoiler: Karin's]] labyrinth.labyrinth, as an art gallery about what she wanted to do when she grows up.



* GenghisGambit: Urahara goes out of his way to deliver certain bits of exposition in harsh and unpleasant ways, and doesn't really bother to keep his manipulative tendencies in check; he figures that everyone having a shared dislike of him would foster a sense of unity in the group, and the more friendly people can smooth over any other infighting. As time goes on, numerous characters call out his attitude as incredibly short-sighted; magical girls have already suffered enough manipulations from the Incubator, and adding onto their trust issues means they probably won't listen even when he's trying to be honest and delicate. In a moment of introspection, Urahara himself wonders if he's ultimately doing it out of a case of ComplexityAddiction.

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* GenghisGambit: Urahara goes out of his way to deliver certain bits of exposition in harsh and unpleasant ways, and doesn't really bother to keep his manipulative tendencies in check; he figures that everyone having a shared dislike of him would foster a sense of unity in the group, and the more friendly people can smooth over any other infighting. As time goes on, numerous characters call out his attitude as incredibly short-sighted; foolish and counter-productive; magical girls have already suffered enough manipulations from the Incubator, and adding onto their trust issues means they probably won't listen even when he's trying to be honest and delicate. In a moment of introspection, Urahara himself wonders if he's ultimately doing it out of a case of ComplexityAddiction.
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Magical girls can easily heal themselves given a bit of time, and do so far more instinctively than shinigami. Homura is hit with a number of fatal wounds at one point, including a bit of her ''brain'' leaking out, and still keeps on fighting until she's forced to retreat. While she only avoids death thanks to Orihime's healing, Toshiro notes that she had to survive injuries that would've killed a shinigami several times over just to make it that far.



* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day; Homura mentions that she stopping counting how long she's been in the loop, only vaguely remembering that the fortieth cycle was a while ago. It's made clear that this is particularly hard on her, as the loop only exists because she keeps delibrately hitting the ResetButton.

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* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day; Homura mentions that she stopping counting exactly how long many cycles she's been in through somewhere around the loop, only vaguely remembering forties, and that the fortieth cycle was a long while ago. It's made clear that this is particularly hard on her, as the loop only exists because she keeps delibrately deliberately hitting the ResetButton.



* IHatePastMe: After learning of the whole time mess, Sayaka bitters muses that the past iterations of herself must've been incredibly stupid to keep on not listening to Homura and then dying or Witching out, over and over again. She also realizes that her teasing nickname for Homura, "Stranger Danger", is probably InnocentlyInsensitive as well.



* IWasJustJoking: After learning about Homura's TimeStandsStill ability in the first timeline, Karin glumly mutters that it'd be great if she could just go back in time and prevent [[spoiler:Yuzu's death]]. Homura awkwardly looks away and goes silent at that, causing everyone present to realize that she can actually do it.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she hasn't run into this situation before. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood.]]

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* IWasJustJoking: After learning about Homura's TimeStandsStill ability in the first timeline, Karin glumly mutters that it'd be great if she could just outright go back in time and prevent [[spoiler:Yuzu's death]]. Homura awkwardly looks away and goes silent at that, causing everyone present to realize that she can actually do it.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she hasn't run into this situation before. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood.]]childhood]].
* ItsAlwaysSpring: Homura ruminates at one point that thanks to the time loops, she's spent at least several years in a nonstop spring, and things like summer or winter are starting to feel way too abstract.



* MakingASplash: Sayaka starts learning how to use magic without contracting, which manifests as water appearing out of nowhere. Homura isn't really surprised, given that Sayaka's Witch form is a mermaid, but Toshiro insists that such advanced and unconscious control over moisture is actually very concerning.



* MercyKill /IDidWhatIHadToDo: Invoked by characters fighting and defeating Witches.

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* MercyKill /IDidWhatIHadToDo: / IDidWhatIHadToDo: Invoked by characters fighting and defeating Witches.Witches, as they're miserable and dangerous creatures with apparently no way to return to their original selves.
** Homura in particular is quite experienced at making the call to "put her out of her misery". Several shinigami note that it usually takes years or decades to get so coldly rational about this, which raises uncomfortable questions about Homura's mental state.



* ParentsAsPeople: According to Homura, despite their [[ParentalNeglect treatment of her]] Sayaka's parents ''do'' love her but are terrible at expressing it.

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* ParentsAsPeople: According to Homura, despite their [[ParentalNeglect treatment of her]] Sayaka's parents ''do'' love her but are terrible at expressing it. It's heavily implied that she's witnessed their distraught reactions when Sayaka dies in previous timelines.



* ResetButtonSuicideMission: At the end of the first timeline, [[spoiler:Urahara accepts that he will likely die protecting Homura long enough for her to initiate her time travel.]]

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* ResetButtonSuicideMission: At the end of the first timeline, [[spoiler:Urahara accepts that he and Orihime will likely die protecting Homura long enough for her to initiate her time travel.]]



* ThatsNoMoon: Homura at the end of the the first arc: "Those aren't wings. [[spoiler:That's the Incubator]]."

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* ThatsNoMoon: Homura at the end of the the first arc: arc, upon seeing something connected to the [[spoiler:Hogyoku]] above Karakura: "Those aren't wings. [[spoiler:That's the Incubator]]."


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* {{Understatement}}: The framing device opens with Homura starting to inform Urahara's group about the situation, claiming that there's a threat on the lives of the Kurasaki twins. Upon finishing her recap of the first timeline's CataclysmClimax, which involved [[spoiler:the Incubator killing most of the ''Bleach'' cast and creating a King's Key]], Homura muses that she's probably picked up Urahara's habit of underselling a problem.
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* WrongGenreSavy: Sayaka, even without contracting, occasionally gets too excited and jumps to the wrong conclusion mid-exposition. When Homura finally reveals her time powers, Sayaka initially assumes that she hid it because it's like Sailer Pluto where using the ability would kill her. And with ''Sailer Moon'' still on her mind, Sayaka then thinks that Homura is a KidFromTheFuture, reasoning that Ichigo and Rukia would be her parents, before Homura can clarify that she only traveled back a few weeks.

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* WrongGenreSavy: WrongGenreSavvy: Sayaka, even without contracting, occasionally gets too excited and jumps to the wrong conclusion mid-exposition. When Homura finally reveals her time powers, Sayaka initially assumes that she hid it because it's like Sailer Pluto where using the ability would kill her. And with ''Sailer Moon'' still on her mind, Sayaka then thinks that Homura is a KidFromTheFuture, reasoning that Ichigo and Rukia would be her parents, before Homura can clarify that she only traveled back a few weeks.

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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: [[spoiler:Karin]] turns into a Witch out of despair from [[spoiler:Yuzu's death]]. It's subsequently discovered that Orihime has the unique ability to reverse the process, but unfortunately [[spoiler:Karin]] fully remembers the entire thing, and remains suicidally depressed. In the next timeline, [[spoiler:Kyoko]] goes through a similar ordeal, and while she handles it much better, she's still very obviously horrified.



* AnimalEspionage: Yoruichi infiltrates Mitakihara in her cat form.

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* AnimalEspionage: Yoruichi infiltrates accompanies Homura back to Mitakihara in her cat form.form, posing as the girl's unassuming pet while investigating the Incubator's schemes and brainstorming ideas with Homura. They concoct a story about how [[EvilDetectingDog some cats are supernaturally sensative]], allowing Yoruichi to fight the InvisibleToNormals Incubator if necessary.



* ArmorPiercingResponse: Homura and Yoruichi get into a discussion about her unhealthy single-minded drive to save Madoka, with the former insisting that after so much fighting, she no longer views herself as a child, but rather a soldier. Yoruichi gently points out that "a child soldier is still a child, you know".



* GenghisGambit: Urahara goes out of his way to deliver certain bits of exposition in harsh and unpleasant ways, and doesn't really bother to keep his manipulative tendencies in check; he figures that everyone having a shared dislike of him would foster a sense of unity in the group, and the more friendly people can smooth over any other infighting. As time goes on, numerous characters call out his attitude as incredibly short-sighted; magical girls have already suffered enough manipulations from the Incubator, and adding onto their trust issues means they probably won't listen even when he's trying to be honest and delicate. In a moment of introspection, Urahara himself wonders if he's ultimately doing it out of a case of ComplexityAddiction.



* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day. Includes a ResetButton.

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* GroundhogDayLoop: Over six weeks instead of one day. Includes day; Homura mentions that she stopping counting how long she's been in the loop, only vaguely remembering that the fortieth cycle was a while ago. It's made clear that this is particularly hard on her, as the loop only exists because she keeps delibrately hitting the ResetButton.



* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she wouldn't have found out about it before. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood.]]

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* ISeeDeadPeople: Homura is surprised to find that she can see spirits in Karakura; it's explained that the Mitakihara region is low on spiritual energy, so it's to be expected that she wouldn't have found out about it hasn't run into this situation before. [[spoiler:More surprisingly, Madoka's father Tomohisa is just spiritually aware enough to see ghosts; he and Junko moved to Mitakihara in the first place so their kids could have a normal childhood.]]



** Chapter 59, [[spoiler: Kisuke reveals to Hitsugaya that while it is likely that Madoka could survive past Homura's turnback point in the current timeline, if Homura wants her to be saved, then they need to be able to eliminate the Incubator for good. Hence, why Homura needs to continue going back in time, six weeks is nowhere near long enough to gather the information to devise the means of doing so.]]

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** Chapter 59, [[spoiler: Kisuke reveals to Hitsugaya that while it is likely that Madoka could survive past Homura's turnback point in the current timeline, if Homura wants her to be saved, then they need to be able to eliminate the Incubator for good. Hence, why Homura needs to continue going back in time, six weeks is nowhere near long enough to gather the information to devise the means of doing so.so, and it's entirely possible that continuing past the turnback point would cause Homura to lose that power entirely.]]



** Chapters 69-70, [[spoiler:Kyōko finally appears...and it is discovered that someone has been killing the witches in Kazamino, leaving none for her, and in a desperate attempt, attacks Tōshirō and Mami, quickly turning into a Witch.]]

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** Chapters 69-70, [[spoiler:Kyōko finally appears...and it is discovered that someone has been killing the witches in Kazamino, leaving none for her, and in a desperate attempt, fuelled by half-mad desperation, attacks Tōshirō and Mami, quickly turning into a Witch.]]



* YouAreNotAlone: Various characters keep trying to convince Homura that she doesn't have to shoulder everything by herself any more. Problem is, she's spent several subjective years doing everything alone, and she finds it difficult to fully accept.

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* YouAreNotAlone: Various characters keep trying to convince Homura that she doesn't have to shoulder everything by herself any more. Problem is, she's spent several subjective years doing everything alone, and she finds it this new mindset difficult to fully accept.

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