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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: King Andrias is choked into near unconsciousness and has his throat ripped out by his own father]]. Considering the terrible things he's done, it's hard to feel sorry for him.
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* OffingTheOffspring: After being beaten into submission by his own prisoners, [[spoiler: King Andrias is strangled to death by Aldrich]].
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** [[spoiler: In chapter 111, Aldrich makes good on that promise]].
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* MentalHealthRecoveryArc: The whole story is basically about how the girls recover from their abuse at Andrias's hand.
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* MentalHealthRecoveryArc: The whole story is basically about how the girls recover from their abuse at King Andrias's hand.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After robit Andrias' attack left his back broken and himself crippled, he apologized to Jenny for his actions and asked them to protect the girls, knowing he won't be forgiven.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:After robit robot Andrias' attack left his back broken and himself crippled, he apologized to Jenny for his actions and asked them to protect the girls, knowing he won't be forgiven.]]
* MentalHealthRecoveryArc: The whole story is basically about how the girls recover from their abuse at Andrias's hand.
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* NeverendingTerror: Even after the girls escape from Andrias for months, they still have intensive fear about many things related to their past abuse.
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* NeverendingTerror: Even after the girls escape from Andrias for months, they still have intensive fear trauma about many things related to their past abuse.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Mr. X's assistant Jenny loses their voice years ago due to an incident.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Mr. X's assistant Jenny loses their voice years ago ago, due to an incident.
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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Anne, Sasha and Marcy become this to one another due to being the only comfort during their abuse at Andrias' hand.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: [[spoiler: In the mindscape of the Core, the normally ruthless and unflinching King Andrias is immediately cowed into submission by Aldrich.]]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: [[spoiler: In the mindscape of the Core, the normally ruthless and unflinching King Andrias is immediately cowed into submission by Aldrich.Aldrich after the former refused to leave after being ordered to.]]
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*PragmaticVillainy: [[spoiler: Aldrich is less hostile towards Marcy and even gives her painkillers when she needed it, but it's not out of the kindness of his heart. He just doesn't believe always resorting to violence is the best way to manipulate people into doing things they normally wouldn't do.]]
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* {{Synchronization}}: Due to circumstances being different than in canon, [[spoiler: Marcy is able to interact with Darcy directly. However they are still linked, so if Marcy tries to hurt Darcy, she will feel the effect. This also means Marcy feels every hit during Mrs. Waybright's fight with Darcy.]]
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Aldrich threatens to do this to King Andrias the moment he is given any reason to think his son will fail again.]]
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* BrokenFaceplate: During their fight, [[spoiler:Mrs. Waybright strikes Darcy's helmet so hard a chunk falls off, leaving Marcy's dulled eye exposed.]]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: [[spoiler: In the mindscape of the Core, the normally ruthless and unflinching King Andrias is immediately cowed into submission by Aldrich.]]
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** When [[spoiler: Darcy]] tries to kidnap Sasha, Mrs. Waybright comes rushing in with a baseball bat.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: [[spoiler:In the show, Dr. Jan and Teri first meet up during the first portal test and are shown to be in friendly terms since then. Here, it's implied they met long ago and have entered a romantic relationship.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: [[spoiler:In the show, Dr. Jan and Teri Terri first meet up during the first portal test and are shown to be in friendly terms since then. Here, it's implied they met long ago and have entered a romantic relationship.]]
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* ScrubbingOffTheTrauma: [[spoiler:After learning the parents have watched the girls' sex tape, Sasha hides behind the toilet, claiming she is made filthy by King Andrias.]]
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* CentralTheme: Recovery of trauma. The girls has been through the process of healing, yet it's not linear. It bounces front and back and they require lot of effort to recover.
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* CentralTheme: Recovery of trauma. The girls has been through the process of healing, yet it's not linear. It bounces front and back and they require lot of effort to recover.recover from their abuse.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The fic currently sits at 600k words and is still growing.
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* TraumaCongaLine: {{Deconstructed}}. The trio's treatment during their six-month stay in Amphibia is nothing but full of hurt and depress. By the time the girls returned to Earth, they had severely poor mental state and scared of anything that triggers their trauma.
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* YouMonster:
** Nearly everyone in this story call King Andrias a monster for his horrible abuse to the girls.
** At one instance, Oum calls Mr. X this.
** Nearly everyone in this story call King Andrias a monster for his horrible abuse to the girls.
** At one instance, Oum calls Mr. X this.
