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* PacManFever: Simon gets killed by an alien (or zombie, depending on what version you're reading) in Call of Duty, a shooter series based off of real life military conflicts against entirely human enemies.
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%%* CluelessAesop: Oh Lord, don't get us started.
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* AnAesop: The whole thing is allegedly intended as an anti-rape piece.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ian might have been a villain in canon, but he wasn't the kind of person to turn himself into a small animal so he could torture, rape and kill other small animals.
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* FailedASpotCheck: the other chipmunks don't hear Brittany's ear-shatteringly loud screams as she is raped and tortured in the bathroom all night long. Snoop Dogg, on the other hand, is somehow aware of what's going on, but [[ContrivedCoincidence is unable to return home until the appropriate moment in the plot.]]
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* FailedASpotCheck: the The other chipmunks don't hear Brittany's ear-shatteringly loud screams as she is raped and tortured in the bathroom all night long. Snoop Dogg, on the other hand, is somehow aware of what's going on, but [[ContrivedCoincidence is unable to return home until the appropriate moment in the plot.]]long.
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* BringMeMyBrownPants: when they see the damage that's been done to Brittany, Alvin shits himself and Theodore throws up.
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* BringMeMyBrownPants: when When they see the damage that's been done to Brittany, Alvin shits himself and Theodore throws up.
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* GassHole: Theodore - it's stated in his character bio that he farts too much and "takes shits on the toilet like a fuckin buffalo".
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* GassHole: Theodore - -- it's stated in his character bio that he farts too much and "takes shits on the toilet like a fuckin buffalo".
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-> '''Ian:''' I can think of something else that's going to kill you, Like MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !
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-> '''Ian:''' I can think of something else that's going to kill you, Like MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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* CluelessAesop: Oh Lord, don't get us started.
* ComedicSociopathy: Ian.
* ContentWarnings: See the quote at the top of this page.
* ComedicSociopathy: Ian.
* ContentWarnings: See the quote at the top of this page.
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* CrackFic: Ian turning into a chipmunk is just the beginning.
* DarkFic: For starters, Brittany gets ''raped''.
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* {{OOC}}: ''Incredibly''.
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* PrisonRape: In one version (no longer available online), this eventually ends up happening to Ian.
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* StealthParody: Confirmed by the author.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: The author's notes.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: The Chipmunks' reaction to the rape.
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* {{Unishment}}: Ian retaliates against Snoop Dogg by promising to never again buy one of his CDs.
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* {{Unishment}}: Ian retaliates against Snoop Dogg by promising to never again buy one of his CDs.[=CD=]s.
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* {{Unishment}}: Ian retaliates against Snoop Dogg by promising to never again buy one of his CDs.
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* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: Ian is naked when the Munkifyer wears off and he turns human again - to the dismay of Snoop Dogg.
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner:
-> '''Ian:''' Hey Simon, You playing Call of Duty?
-> '''Simon:''' Yeah, that son of a bitch zombie killed me.
-> '''Ian:''' I can think of something else that's going to kill you, Like MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !
-> '''Ian:''' Hey Simon, You playing Call of Duty?
-> '''Simon:''' Yeah, that son of a bitch zombie killed me.
-> '''Ian:''' I can think of something else that's going to kill you, Like MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !
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* HollywoodHealing: Brittany is at the point of death after having been raped and tortured all night long, but Alvin promptly heals her after uncuffing her.
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* HollywoodHealing: HealingHands: Brittany is at the point of death after having been raped and tortured all night long, but Alvin promptly heals her after uncuffing her.
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* HealingHands: Brittany is at the point of death after having been raped and tortured all night long, but Alvin promptly heals her after uncuffing her.
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* HealingHands: HollywoodHealing: Brittany is at the point of death after having been raped and tortured all night long, but Alvin promptly heals her after uncuffing her.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Ian describes London as "in the desert an there are tigers an its a nude city so ther're naked hoes everywhere showin off there gozangas". It's pretty clear he's just making shit up at that point.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Ian describes London as "in the desert an there are tigers an its a nude city so ther're naked hoes everywhere showin off there gozangas". [[BlatantLies It's pretty clear he's just making shit up at that point.]]
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* BringMeMyBrownPants: when they see the damage that's been done to Brittany, Alvin shits himself and Theodore throws up.
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* EvilLaugh: Brittany's screams as she is raped and tortured all night long only make Kwah laugh louder.
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* SpottingTheThread: Eleanor is able to figure out that "Kwah" is Ian when the latter tells her she's fat after she refuses to have sex with him.
* SpottingTheThread: Eleanor is able to figure out that "Kwah" is Ian when the latter tells her she's fat after she refuses to have sex with him.
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* HealingHands: Brittany is at the point of death after having been raped and tortured all night long, but Alvin promptly heals her after uncuffing her.
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* {{Understatement}}: Brittany points out that flushing Eleanor down the toilet is "NOT NICE".
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* FailedASpotCheck: the other chipmunks don't hear Brittany's earth-shattering screams as she is raped and tortured in the bathroom for hours.
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* FailedASpotCheck: the other chipmunks don't hear Brittany's earth-shattering ear-shatteringly loud screams as she is raped and tortured in the bathroom for hours.all night long. Snoop Dogg, on the other hand, is somehow aware of what's going on, but [[ContrivedCoincidence is unable to return home until the appropriate moment in the plot.]]
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** In particular we are told that
--> Theodor was normally a big gallot whimpy Chipmunk. But piss him off and he's fucking DANGEROUS
--> Theodor was normally a big gallot whimpy Chipmunk. But piss him off and he's fucking DANGEROUS
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* LawOfInverseFertility: Theodore gets Eleanor pregnant the first time they have sex.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Snoop Dogg is unable to come to the rescue of the munks until the appropriate moment in the plot because a 747 crashes on the highway in front of him, producing a traffic jam.
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* CorruptTheCutie: When he [[ParentalAbandonment abandons]] the Chipmunks for a week, Dave (without explanation) leaves a porno video running on the tv, which inspires the innocent chimpunks to start an orgy.
