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** Everyone attacking Luz at the supermarket have this expression when [[spoiler:her cousin Riley]] goes in for the kill... only for Luz to demonstrate just how strong her HealingFactor is when she [[PullsThemselfTogether puts herself back together again]] after being blown up and hits her RageBreakingPoint.
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** Everyone attacking Luz at the supermarket have this expression when [[spoiler:her cousin Riley]] goes in for the kill... only for Luz to demonstrate just how strong her HealingFactor is when she [[PullsThemselfTogether [[PullingThemselfTogether puts herself back together again]] after being blown up and hits her RageBreakingPoint.
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* MassOhCrap: [[spoiler:The 20 teenagers that killed some of Luz's new friends at summer camp have this reaction after Luz easier kills one of their own and makes it clear can and ''will'' kill the rest of them]].
** [[spoiler:Everyone fighting Luz at the supermarket have this expression when she PullsThemselfTogether after being blown up by her cousin]].
** [[spoiler:Everyone fighting Luz at the supermarket have this expression when she PullsThemselfTogether after being blown up by her cousin]].
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* MassOhCrap: [[spoiler:The MassOhCrap:
** The 20teenagers teenagers, led by Kennedy Jenkins, have this reaction when Luz ''easily'' kills one of their comrades, making clear that killed some of Luz's new she's on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge for how they [[spoiler:slaughtered her friends at summer camp have this reaction after Luz easier kills one of their own and makes it clear she can and ''will'' kill the rest of them]].
** [[spoiler:Everyone fightingthem]].
**Everyone attacking Luz at the supermarket have this expression when [[spoiler:her cousin Riley]] goes in for the kill... only for Luz to demonstrate just how strong her HealingFactor is when shePullsThemselfTogether [[PullsThemselfTogether puts herself back together again]] after being blown up by and hits her cousin]].RageBreakingPoint.
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* SpiritAdvisor: Ever since he died at All Might's hands, All For One presents himself as this to Luz, since he's literally stuck in her head.
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* SpiritAdvisor: SpiritAdvisor:
** Ever since he died at All Might's hands, All For One presents himself as an EvilMentor version of this to Luz, since he's literally stuck in herhead.head.
** [[spoiler:Yoichi is shaping up to be this to Amity.]]
** Ever since he died at All Might's hands, All For One presents himself as an EvilMentor version of this to Luz, since he's literally stuck in her
** [[spoiler:Yoichi is shaping up to be this to Amity.]]
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* SharpDressedMan: The Governor is described as wearing a black two-piece suit, with a white dress shirt underneath, and a black tie. All For One dresses similarly.
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* TournamentArc: Amity takes part in one during the first half of Season 3 in The Underdark City to win enough money to get her mother a birthday present she sought. [[spoiler:Its also a DeadlyGame where can literally get away with murder, with the corpses being used to create Nomu.]]
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* TournamentArc: Amity takes part in one during the first half of Season 3 in The Underdark City to win enough money to get her mother a birthday present she sought. [[spoiler:Its also a DeadlyGame where you can literally get away with murder, with the corpses being used to create Nomu.]]
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** Even All For One has one. The flashback in chapter 27 shows us how bleak his childhood was with his younger brother. They were 12-year old street urchins that wore nothing but rags and where forced to shelter in rundown houses with no adults to look after them. They often went without food for a week with Yoichi getting excited at getting fed an un-moldy but stale loaf of bread instead of half-eaten or rotten meals.
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** Even All For One has one. The flashback in chapter 27 shows us how bleak his childhood was with his younger brother.brother in the Mutant Realm. They were 12-year old street urchins that wore nothing but rags and where forced to shelter in rundown houses with no adults to look after them. They often went without food for a week with Yoichi getting excited at getting fed an un-moldy but stale loaf of bread instead of half-eaten or rotten meals.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast:
** Luz has been bullied and excluded for being weird, Latina and having ADHD her entire life. She also lost her beloved father at a young age in a car crash when on the way to daycare and believes that her antics are a burden to others.
** Raised in an abusive household, Riley wanted nothing more than to escape her parents but she never thought she'd be able to due to being financially dependent on them until Riley gained a Quirk from the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, the power to turn anything she touched with her bare hands into bombs. This includes people, as she found out first-hand while having a fight with her abusive father and turning him into bloody chunks, losing her right eye in the explosion. The next day, she was then kicked out of her house by her mother for that, not believing he abused her. After a while of couch surfing, Riley was taken in by the Wittebane Mega Church, but they didn't save her from homelessness out of a PetTheDog moment, instead there's the catch of turning her into their personal assassin. She didn't see any other option than homelessness or ending up dead in a ditch by the ChurchMilitant.
** Amity is bullied by her older siblings and neglected by her father, [[spoiler:due to having a Quirk from an experiment by All For One]]. This is also the reason she has few friends in her life.
** Eda was cursed as a child [[spoiler:and unintentionally led All For One to the Boiling Isles where he and Belos fought a war for control of the land many of her people dying to the process.]]
** Even All For One has one. The flashback in chapter 27 shows us how bleak his childhood was with his younger brother. They were 12-year old street urchins that wore nothing but rags and where forced to shelter in rundown houses with no adults to look after them. They often went without food for a week with Yoichi getting excited at getting fed an un-moldy but stale loaf of bread instead of half-eaten or rotten meals.
** Luz has been bullied and excluded for being weird, Latina and having ADHD her entire life. She also lost her beloved father at a young age in a car crash when on the way to daycare and believes that her antics are a burden to others.
** Raised in an abusive household, Riley wanted nothing more than to escape her parents but she never thought she'd be able to due to being financially dependent on them until Riley gained a Quirk from the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, the power to turn anything she touched with her bare hands into bombs. This includes people, as she found out first-hand while having a fight with her abusive father and turning him into bloody chunks, losing her right eye in the explosion. The next day, she was then kicked out of her house by her mother for that, not believing he abused her. After a while of couch surfing, Riley was taken in by the Wittebane Mega Church, but they didn't save her from homelessness out of a PetTheDog moment, instead there's the catch of turning her into their personal assassin. She didn't see any other option than homelessness or ending up dead in a ditch by the ChurchMilitant.
** Amity is bullied by her older siblings and neglected by her father, [[spoiler:due to having a Quirk from an experiment by All For One]]. This is also the reason she has few friends in her life.
** Eda was cursed as a child [[spoiler:and unintentionally led All For One to the Boiling Isles where he and Belos fought a war for control of the land many of her people dying to the process.]]
** Even All For One has one. The flashback in chapter 27 shows us how bleak his childhood was with his younger brother. They were 12-year old street urchins that wore nothing but rags and where forced to shelter in rundown houses with no adults to look after them. They often went without food for a week with Yoichi getting excited at getting fed an un-moldy but stale loaf of bread instead of half-eaten or rotten meals.
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* AccidentalMurder:
** Luz Noceda's first confirmed kill is Cody Johnson, which was unintentional, [[PowerParasite who died from brain damage after Luz took his Quirk]].
** In chapter 22, Luz also accidently kills a teenaged boy while stealing his "[[PlayingWithFire Flamethrower]]" Quirk. [[spoiler:Also many civilians get killed in the crossfire of her fights against the Wittebane assassins in the Battle of Gravesfield.]]
** In the Underdark Tournament, [[spoiler:Amity]] accidently kills her opponent in the first round with her SuperStrength, much to her horror.
** Luz Noceda's first confirmed kill is Cody Johnson, which was unintentional, [[PowerParasite who died from brain damage after Luz took his Quirk]].
** In chapter 22, Luz also accidently kills a teenaged boy while stealing his "[[PlayingWithFire Flamethrower]]" Quirk. [[spoiler:Also many civilians get killed in the crossfire of her fights against the Wittebane assassins in the Battle of Gravesfield.]]
** In the Underdark Tournament, [[spoiler:Amity]] accidently kills her opponent in the first round with her SuperStrength, much to her horror.
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* VillainousLineage: The Wittebane Clan, descendants of Belos, are a family of Witch Hunters during Salem Times. After the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, they're trying to get all the families in Gravesfield who were once families of witch hunters together to start [[FantasticRacism "hunting those who were cursed by the devil."]] Unfortunately, [[TokenGoodTeammate Token Good Teammates]] like [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Julia]] and [[WhiteSheep Caleb]] don't last long.
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* VillainousLineage: The [[spoiler:The Wittebane Clan, descendants of Emperor Belos, are a family of Witch Hunters during Salem Times. After the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent, they're trying to get all the families in Gravesfield who were once families of witch hunters together to start [[FantasticRacism "hunting those who were cursed by the devil."]] Unfortunately, [[TokenGoodTeammate Token Good Teammates]] like [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Julia]] and [[WhiteSheep Caleb]] don't last long.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom:
** Camila may have been the one to send Luz to Summer Camp, but she knew nothing about it being turned into a Death Camp for superhumans. [[spoiler:There Luz witnesses the murders of her new friends and kills both in self-defence and revenge with her, causing the deterioration of Luz's mental state and becomes more easily influenced by [[EvilMentor All For One]].]]
** All Might may have done his world a favour putting down All For One in their FinalBattle before the story events of ''My Hero Academia'' starts, [[spoiler:he unknowingly caused a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent in Luz's world when All For One's Quirk transferred into the girl, setting off the story's bloody events.]]
** 24 years before the start of the story Eda discovered the Mutant Realm aka the ''My Hero Academia'' world. While there King was captured by All For One and got his hands on his Titan Blood. Even after she rescued him and returned to their home world, the supervillain acquired the means to follow her back to the Boiling Isles and waged a 10-year long war for control of the land that resulted in many casualties of her people, something that haunts her to this day.
** Tyler Wittebane sending his assassins to try and kill Luz ends up escalating the CollateralDamage in Gravesfield to the point that [[spoiler:it ends up being turned into a giant crater after only 4 hours, destroying his ancestral home and killing off nearly all his people]]. Though, he considers it to be WorthIt, [[spoiler:Not knowing that Luz survived al that and is now coming for him in the Demon Realm.]].
** [[spoiler:Aiya Kagurami ended up giving birth to Yoichi and Rikitasu Shigaraki, the latter of whom would grow up to be none other than All For One - which might not have been so bad if she hadn't died in childbirth, leaving him and his brother to grow up on the streets.]]
** Camila may have been the one to send Luz to Summer Camp, but she knew nothing about it being turned into a Death Camp for superhumans. [[spoiler:There Luz witnesses the murders of her new friends and kills both in self-defence and revenge with her, causing the deterioration of Luz's mental state and becomes more easily influenced by [[EvilMentor All For One]].]]
** All Might may have done his world a favour putting down All For One in their FinalBattle before the story events of ''My Hero Academia'' starts, [[spoiler:he unknowingly caused a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent in Luz's world when All For One's Quirk transferred into the girl, setting off the story's bloody events.]]
** 24 years before the start of the story Eda discovered the Mutant Realm aka the ''My Hero Academia'' world. While there King was captured by All For One and got his hands on his Titan Blood. Even after she rescued him and returned to their home world, the supervillain acquired the means to follow her back to the Boiling Isles and waged a 10-year long war for control of the land that resulted in many casualties of her people, something that haunts her to this day.
** Tyler Wittebane sending his assassins to try and kill Luz ends up escalating the CollateralDamage in Gravesfield to the point that [[spoiler:it ends up being turned into a giant crater after only 4 hours, destroying his ancestral home and killing off nearly all his people]]. Though, he considers it to be WorthIt, [[spoiler:Not knowing that Luz survived al that and is now coming for him in the Demon Realm.]].
** [[spoiler:Aiya Kagurami ended up giving birth to Yoichi and Rikitasu Shigaraki, the latter of whom would grow up to be none other than All For One - which might not have been so bad if she hadn't died in childbirth, leaving him and his brother to grow up on the streets.]]
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** Despite being a religious woman, Camila didn't have Luz baptized as a baby, much to her own mother's chagrin, because she wanted Luz to make that choice, and not force her to go to church.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain:
** Luz was seconds away from peacefully surrendering to the police, where the DirtyCop chief was most likely planning on arresting her on trumped up charges to put her away for a long time, when Riley chooses to go in for the kill with her Bomb Touch power. [[spoiler:Not only does this fail to murder her cousin but makes her decide to fuck self-control and goes into a murderous blind rage.]]
** Tyler Wittebane sending Quirk user assassins after Luz only succeeds in making her stronger, thanks to her PowerParasite ability stealing their Quirks, but more willing to kill him.
** Luz was seconds away from peacefully surrendering to the police, where the DirtyCop chief was most likely planning on arresting her on trumped up charges to put her away for a long time, when Riley chooses to go in for the kill with her Bomb Touch power. [[spoiler:Not only does this fail to murder her cousin but makes her decide to fuck self-control and goes into a murderous blind rage.]]
** Tyler Wittebane sending Quirk user assassins after Luz only succeeds in making her stronger, thanks to her PowerParasite ability stealing their Quirks, but more willing to kill him.
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* WeCanRuleTogether:
** In the past, All For One offered this to O'clock, who recently graduated. [[spoiler:After the young hero refused, All For One killed him and stole his Quirk.]]
** All For One also offered this to his brother who also naturally refused. He even intended to give him a copy of the [[LongLived Life Force]] Quirk to make their rule over Japan long lasting.
** In the past, All For One offered this to O'clock, who recently graduated. [[spoiler:After the young hero refused, All For One killed him and stole his Quirk.]]
** All For One also offered this to his brother who also naturally refused. He even intended to give him a copy of the [[LongLived Life Force]] Quirk to make their rule over Japan long lasting.
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This fanfic can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14146275/1/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia here]] on Platform/FanFictionDotNet, [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/323839388-all-for-luz-the-owl-house-x-mha here]] on Platform/{{Wattpad}}, Quotev [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15248168/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia/1 here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. It is currently on hiatus.
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This fanfic can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14146275/1/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia here]] on Platform/FanFictionDotNet, [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/323839388-all-for-luz-the-owl-house-x-mha here]] on Platform/{{Wattpad}}, Quotev [[https://www.quotev.com/story/15248168/All-For-Luz-The-Owl-House-x-My-Hero-Academia/1 here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42252129/chapters/106089384 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. It is currently on hiatus.
hiatus and undergoing a rewrite.
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* WouldHurtAChild:
** Tyler Wittebane has no problems hiring hitmen to go after Luz [[FantasticRacism because she has superpowers]] who were all willing to try and kill the 14-year old, for $10 billion. [[spoiler:"Try" being the key word here as Luz kills them first and [[PowerParasite steals most of their Quirks]].]]
** [[DirtyCop Sheriff Johnson]] tried to have Luz gunned down even when she was surrendering. [[spoiler:[[BullyingTheDragon Big mistake]] as she finally snaps and [[LudicrousGibs wipes him and his squad out]].]]
** [[spoiler:A 24 year-old King]] has no problems throwing down with Toshiko, a teenaged girl, even before he knew she had powerful Quirks that allowed her to contend with his might.
** Aiya was just 16 years old when [[spoiler:Tamashiki Shigaraki]] sexually assaulted her.
** When [[BearsAreBadNews Hindter]] hears his opponent, Amity Blight, is a teenager, it doesn't make him pause or even consider going easy on the child.
--> '''Hindter''': I'm gonna rip out ya insides, little brat. Easiest 100 Snails I'll ever make.
** All For One's canon grooming of Tenko and turning him into Tomura qualifies as this, as any chance Tenko had at a normal life was taken from him the second the BigBad found him. [[spoiler:He also intends to use Luz as his own personal SoulJar, if he can't reach Tomura back in his world quick enough. Its also revealed that he did Quirk experiments on witch children when he invaded the Boiling Isles.]]
** Tyler Wittebane has no problems hiring hitmen to go after Luz [[FantasticRacism because she has superpowers]] who were all willing to try and kill the 14-year old, for $10 billion. [[spoiler:"Try" being the key word here as Luz kills them first and [[PowerParasite steals most of their Quirks]].]]
** [[DirtyCop Sheriff Johnson]] tried to have Luz gunned down even when she was surrendering. [[spoiler:[[BullyingTheDragon Big mistake]] as she finally snaps and [[LudicrousGibs wipes him and his squad out]].]]
** [[spoiler:A 24 year-old King]] has no problems throwing down with Toshiko, a teenaged girl, even before he knew she had powerful Quirks that allowed her to contend with his might.
** Aiya was just 16 years old when [[spoiler:Tamashiki Shigaraki]] sexually assaulted her.
** When [[BearsAreBadNews Hindter]] hears his opponent, Amity Blight, is a teenager, it doesn't make him pause or even consider going easy on the child.
--> '''Hindter''': I'm gonna rip out ya insides, little brat. Easiest 100 Snails I'll ever make.
** All For One's canon grooming of Tenko and turning him into Tomura qualifies as this, as any chance Tenko had at a normal life was taken from him the second the BigBad found him. [[spoiler:He also intends to use Luz as his own personal SoulJar, if he can't reach Tomura back in his world quick enough. Its also revealed that he did Quirk experiments on witch children when he invaded the Boiling Isles.]]
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** In chapter 12, Luz kills Daniel by ripping out his still beating heart after he his attempt to kill her for the prize money fails thanks to her SuperToughness and crushes it with her bare hands with her newly acquired SuperStrength, then [[PowerParasite stealing his Quirk]].
** In chapter 21, [[spoiler:she also kills [[SilentAntagonist Charlie]] by tearing out her heart from behind and crushes it with her bare hands as the Wittebane assassin is ForcedToWatch in horror, then stealing her Quirk not long after the assassin expires.]]
** During the climax of the Ten-Year War for the Boiling Isles, [[spoiler:Eda was on the receiving end of this, courtesy of All For One. Luckily, he didn't crush it, which allowed her her curse's HealingFactor to save her from certain death.]]
** In chapter 21, [[spoiler:she also kills [[SilentAntagonist Charlie]] by tearing out her heart from behind and crushes it with her bare hands as the Wittebane assassin is ForcedToWatch in horror, then stealing her Quirk not long after the assassin expires.]]
** During the climax of the Ten-Year War for the Boiling Isles, [[spoiler:Eda was on the receiving end of this, courtesy of All For One. Luckily, he didn't crush it, which allowed her her curse's HealingFactor to save her from certain death.]]
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-> "With Great Power, comes great responsibility" so goes the quote. And for what it's worth, that quote couldn't be more true. \\
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-> "With Great Power, comes great responsibility" so goes the quote. And for what it's worth, that quote couldn't be more true.
-> But, for Luz Noceda, after waking up one morning, i.e. the day before she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, with two holes in the palms of her hands, the quote "What's yours is mine, and what's mine is also mine" would fit her like a glove.
-> But, for Luz Noceda, after waking up one morning, i.e. the day before she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, with two holes in the palms of her hands, the quote "What's yours is mine, and what's mine is also mine" would fit her like a glove.
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-> "With Great Power, comes great responsibility" so goes the quote. And for what it's worth, that quote couldn't be more true. \n\n-> \\
But, for Luz Noceda, after waking up one morning, i.e. the day before she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, with two holes in the palms of her hands, the quote "What's yours is mine, and what's mine is also mine" would fit her like a glove.
-->-- '''Story's summary'''
But, for Luz Noceda, after waking up one morning, i.e. the day before she was supposed to go to Reality Check Summer Camp, with two holes in the palms of her hands, the quote "What's yours is mine, and what's mine is also mine" would fit her like a glove.
-->-- '''Story's summary'''
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** All For One remembered his brother's LastWords to him was that there was some good in him and that he only needed to act on it to change the world for the better. He disagreed with that.
--> '''Yoichi''': I've known, since the very beginning, [[HiddenHeartOfGold that deep down there is a spark of good in you]]. It's just buried deep within that hateful soul of yours. I know you're better than this, Brother. [[RightMakesMight We can both be better than this]]. So please, stop this! Stop doing what you're doing. [[YouCouldHaveUsedYourPowersForGood Stop hurting people, and help out]]! [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Don't be cruel to the world just because it was cruel to us]]!
** [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalNiceGirl Odalia]] gives this speech to [[IneptMage Amity]] who is nervous about going to school with her magical peers.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Odalia]]''': Amity. You need to have more faith in yourself. You might not be able to use Magic, but you have a Gift. A Gift that, while it was forced upon you by '''[[BigBad That Man]]''', at the very least you'll be stronger than all the rest. Magic can only take a Witch so far when they're restricted to only one thing. You're '''Unique'''. Don't forget about that.
** All For One remembered his brother's LastWords to him was that there was some good in him and that he only needed to act on it to change the world for the better. He disagreed with that.
--> '''Yoichi''': I've known, since the very beginning, [[HiddenHeartOfGold that deep down there is a spark of good in you]]. It's just buried deep within that hateful soul of yours. I know you're better than this, Brother. [[RightMakesMight We can both be better than this]]. So please, stop this! Stop doing what you're doing. [[YouCouldHaveUsedYourPowersForGood Stop hurting people, and help out]]! [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse Don't be cruel to the world just because it was cruel to us]]!
** [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalNiceGirl Odalia]] gives this speech to [[IneptMage Amity]] who is nervous about going to school with her magical peers.]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Odalia]]''': Amity. You need to have more faith in yourself. You might not be able to use Magic, but you have a Gift. A Gift that, while it was forced upon you by '''[[BigBad That Man]]''', at the very least you'll be stronger than all the rest. Magic can only take a Witch so far when they're restricted to only one thing. You're '''Unique'''. Don't forget about that.
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* AncestorVeneration: Tyler Wittebane holds his witch hunter ancestors in the highest regard and wants to try and bring back their lifestyle only substituting witches for Quirk users instead in their honor. [[spoiler:This makes it all the more ironic that he hates having to work with Emperor Belos due to believing him to be a witch and wants to kill him personally just for that, not knowing he’s not only their ancient ancestor that started, alongside his older brother, the Wittebanes' whole witch hunting profession but arguably hates witches and demons even more than his descendant.]]
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* AintTooProudToBeg: Emilia does this to Luz during her RoaringRampageOfRevenge claiming she didn't personally kill anyone and was never on board with the slaughter of Luz's team in the first place. Fortunately for the former leader, Luz believes her and lets her escape with her life.
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* AintTooProudToBeg: AintTooProudToBeg:
** Emilia does this to Luz during her RoaringRampageOfRevenge claiming she didn't personally kill anyone and was never on board with the slaughter of Luz's team in the first place. Fortunately for the former leader, Luz believes her and lets her escape with her life.
** Emilia does this to Luz during her RoaringRampageOfRevenge claiming she didn't personally kill anyone and was never on board with the slaughter of Luz's team in the first place. Fortunately for the former leader, Luz believes her and lets her escape with her life.
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** Upon discovering TheMultiverse is a thing, All For One has expanded his TakingOverTheWorld EvilPlan for his realm to becoming essentially a MultiversalConqueror, adding The Boiling Isles and Luz's home world to his conquest. [[spoiler:[[VillainOverride After taking over the girl's body]], first.]]
** [[spoiler:Just like in the show, Belos spent centuries engineering the full-blown genocide of witchkind and plans on using that feat to earn praise and approval from humanity and be rewarded by being labeled a famous hero in history. He's also working with his descendant Tyler to kill all Quirk users, too]]
** Upon discovering TheMultiverse is a thing, All For One has expanded his TakingOverTheWorld EvilPlan for his realm to becoming essentially a MultiversalConqueror, adding The Boiling Isles and Luz's home world to his conquest. [[spoiler:[[VillainOverride After taking over the girl's body]], first.]]
** [[spoiler:Just like in the show, Belos spent centuries engineering the full-blown genocide of witchkind and plans on using that feat to earn praise and approval from humanity and be rewarded by being labeled a famous hero in history. He's also working with his descendant Tyler to kill all Quirk users, too]]
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* AbsoluteXenophobe: The BigBad for the first season of All For Luz, Governor Rodger Maxwell, is this, seeing as he set up an entire death game one day after people started showing up with superpowers. [[spoiler: Not only that, but he did so with the expressed intention of wiping all of the super-powered kids off of the map, or at least, from his State of Connecticut.]]
** This also includes Emperor Belos and most of the Wittebane family, too.
** This also includes Emperor Belos and most of the Wittebane family, too.
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* AbsoluteXenophobe: AbsoluteXenophobe:
** The BigBad for the first season of All For Luz, Governor Rodger Maxwell, is this, seeing as he set up an entire death game one day after people started showing up with superpowers. [[spoiler: Not only that, but he did so with the expressed intention of wiping all of the super-powered kids off of the map, or at least, from his State of Connecticut.]]
**This The next BigBad, Tyler Wittebane, is even worst. Not only does he have FantasticRacism views towards superhumans, witches and demons, but also includes the lgbt community and non-whites. [[spoiler:Not even his own daughter is exempt. He gets this from Emperor Belos and most of the Wittebane family, too.Belos, his ancestor.]]
** The BigBad for the first season of All For Luz, Governor Rodger Maxwell, is this, seeing as he set up an entire death game one day after people started showing up with superpowers. [[spoiler: Not only that, but he did so with the expressed intention of wiping all of the super-powered kids off of the map, or at least, from his State of Connecticut.]]
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: All For One is not one to miss a chance to take advantage of the chaos he causes or caused by others to advance his goals. [[spoiler:Hell, he was the one who accidentally caused the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent and kicked off the plot in the first place!]]
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* LetNoCrisisGoToWaste: LetNoCrisisGoToWaste:
** When a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent hits Gravesfield, Tyler Wittebane decides to declare that he's on a MissionFromGod to eradicate all of the newly Quirked populace in order to seize even more power and prestige for himself.
** All For One isnot one to miss a chance more than happy to take advantage of the chaos he causes or caused by others ''any'' opportunity that arises to advance twist matters to his goals. own selfish ends. [[spoiler:Hell, he was the one who accidentally caused the MassSuperEmpoweringEvent and kicked off the plot in the first place!]]place!]] When something goes wrong, he's right there whispering poisonous thoughts to Luz. [[spoiler:Most notably when Luz discovers the mangled corpses of her camper friends, he encourages the distraught girl to brutally kill their murderers and steal their Quirks.]]
** When a MassSuperEmpoweringEvent hits Gravesfield, Tyler Wittebane decides to declare that he's on a MissionFromGod to eradicate all of the newly Quirked populace in order to seize even more power and prestige for himself.
** All For One is
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--> [[BlindedByRage Luz could barely see anything]]. [[ThisIsUnforgivable That was how furious she had been]]. [[ThisMeansWar That was how angry she had been]]. And thus… '''''She gave in to her hate.'''''
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--> [[BlindedByRage ''[[BlindedByRage Luz could barely see anything]]. [[ThisIsUnforgivable That was how furious she had been]]. [[ThisMeansWar That was how angry she had been]]. And thus… thus…'' '''''She gave in to her hate.'''''
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* PowerParasite: All For One allows the user, in this case, Luz, to give and take Quirks from others. The process is painful for the person getting the Quirk/energy drained from them. [[spoiler:It can also be used to steal magic.]]
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* PowerParasite: All For One allows the user, in this case, Luz, to give and take Quirks from others.others and give them away. The process is painful for the person getting the Quirk/energy drained from them. [[spoiler:It can also be used to steal magic.magic after she awakens her Quirk.]]
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** Shigaraki strongly recommends that it would be better for Luz if she didn’t kill anyone she took the Quirk of if it can be helped. Otherwise, they'll be bombarded by the voices of those who Luz has stolen the Quirks of.
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** Shigaraki strongly recommends that it would be better for Luz if she didn’t kill anyone she took the Quirk of if it can be helped. Otherwise, they'll be bombarded by the voices of those who Luz has stolen the Quirks of. [[spoiler:This cahnges its proven not to be the case.]]
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* IHaveNoSon: Julia notes she's not the only case of this. Hundreds of kids from around her town were being kicked out of their homes by their parents because of their “demonic powers” and “unholy appearances".
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* IHaveNoSon: Julia notes she's not the only case of this.this in Gravesfield. Hundreds of kids from around her town were being kicked out of their homes by their parents because of their “demonic powers” and “unholy appearances".
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* DisappointedByTheMotive. Though more angry than disappointed, Luz doesn't take it well when she hears Kennedy say [[spoiler:he and his team killed off her new friends for money.]]
--> ''Anger flashed on her face. Money…? This was all for money…? Her friend… allies… dead for extra cash…?''
--> ''Anger flashed on her face. Money…? This was all for money…? Her friend… allies… dead for extra cash…?''
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* DisappointedByTheMotive. Though more angry than disappointed, Luz doesn't take it well when she hears After everyone attending Reality Check Summer Camp is forced into a DeadlyGame, Kennedy say [[spoiler:he forms an alliance calling themselves "Heaven's Devils" and his team killed off her winds up slaughtering Luz's new friends friends. But this wasn't simply some scared teenagers trying to survive; the monster behind the DeadlyGame was offering a bounty on Luz's head, and Kennedy wanted all that money for money.]]
himself, much to Luz's disgust and outrage, [[spoiler:so she decides to kill them all in revenge]].
-->''Anger flashed on her face. Money…? ''Money…? This was all for money…? Her friend… allies… dead for extra cash…?''
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** The story gives All For One the full name of RikitasuShigaraki , meaning "A multitude of splendid powers of death", which is quite fitting for a man with PowerParasite abilities who is also a dangerous CardCarryingVillain.
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** The story gives All For One the full name of RikitasuShigaraki Rikitasu Shigaraki , meaning "A multitude of splendid powers of death", which is quite fitting for a man with PowerParasite abilities who is also a dangerous CardCarryingVillain.
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** The story gives All For One the full name of Shigaraki Rikitasu, meaning "A multitude of splendid powers of death", which is quite fitting for a man with PowerParasite abilities who is a dangerous CardCarryingVillain.
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** The story gives All For One the full name of Shigaraki Rikitasu, RikitasuShigaraki , meaning "A multitude of splendid powers of death", which is quite fitting for a man with PowerParasite abilities who is also a dangerous CardCarryingVillain.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Kennedy planned to keep the prize money to himself after he and his alliance wins the game.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Kennedy planned to keep the $100 billion prize money to himself after he and his alliance wins the game.game. [[spoiler:Even if they had survived the Death Camp, the Governor was never gonna pay up.]]
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** Pastor Domenico reveals to Luz that Julia's parents disowned her for being a lesbian, much to their disgust.
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** In the same chapter, Pastor Domenico reveals to Luz that Julia's parents disowned her for being a lesbian, lesbian and having superpowers, much to their disgust.
