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** The fight between Siren Glimmer and Angella is inspired by [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda the fight between Tai Lung and Master Shifu]], with some dialogue lifted from it wholesale.
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** The fight between Siren Glimmer and Angella is inspired by [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda1 the fight between Tai Lung and Master Shifu]], with some dialogue lifted from it wholesale.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22977853/chapters/54931186 ADORA: Vagabond of the Etherian Cosmos]] is an [[AlternateUniverseFic Alternate Universe]] {{Continuation}} fic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EtherianFrigatebird/pseuds/EtherianFrigatebird EtherianFrigatebird]] that diverges from canon after "[[Recap/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPowerS5E03Corridors Corridors]]". The main ship here is Adora/Glimmer, with a slight dash of Catra/Glimmer and various other background ships.
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This is the first entry in a planned trilogy with ''Fanfic/CatRaPhantomOfTheMysticMountains'' acting as the second entry. It can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28675776/chapters/70299462 here]]. It is recommended to read this fic before going onto that one, as it does contain several massive [[LateArrivalSpoiler Late Arrival Spoilers]] that need to be left unmarked for ease of reading.
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This is the first entry in a planned trilogy with ''Fanfic/CatRaPhantomOfTheMysticMountains'' acting as the second entry. It can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28675776/chapters/70299462 here]]. It is recommended to read this fic before going onto that one, as it does contain several massive [[LateArrivalSpoiler Late {{Late Arrival Spoilers]] Spoiler}}s that need to be left unmarked for ease of reading.
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* TheMultiverse: Where this story is set, and what Adora is flung into. The fic explores four universes Adora visited, as well as what her life is like after she arrives back in her home dimension.
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone for a decade.
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone for a decade.
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* TheMultiverse: Where AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Horde Prime tries to force this story is set, on Glimmer, both to [[GoldDigger solidify his rule of Etheria]] and what [[HeirInLaw ensure the continuation of his empire]] [[MaritalRapeLicense through natural-born heirs]]. Luckily, Adora shows up before Glimmer and Prime even get to the altar, and they manage to kill him in a two-on-one battle.
* ArcSymbol: Bright Moon Violets. They explicitly bloom whenever the Queen of Bright Moon isflung into. The fic explores four universes Adora visited, as well as what her life is like after she arrives back in her home dimension.
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone forlove with a decade.woman.
* ArcSymbol: Bright Moon Violets. They explicitly bloom whenever the Queen of Bright Moon is
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* ItsAllMyFault: Many, many characters experience this thought process.
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil!Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
* IAmAMonster: [[spoiler: It's stated Adora has [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killed a few people during her travels.]] She often has moments where she feels undeserving of love because of this.]]
* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Horde Prime tries to force this on Glimmer, both to [[GoldDigger solidify his rule of Etheria]] and [[HeirInLaw ensure the continuation of his empire]] [[MaritalRapeLicense through natural-born heirs]]. Luckily, Adora shows up before Glimmer and Prime even get to the altar, and they manage to kill him in a two-on-one battle.
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond!Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]
* ArcSymbol: Bright Moon Violets. They explicitly bloom whenever the Queen of Bright Moon is in love with a woman.
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil!Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
* IAmAMonster: [[spoiler: It's stated Adora has [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killed a few people during her travels.]] She often has moments where she feels undeserving of love because of this.]]
* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Horde Prime tries to force this on Glimmer, both to [[GoldDigger solidify his rule of Etheria]] and [[HeirInLaw ensure the continuation of his empire]] [[MaritalRapeLicense through natural-born heirs]]. Luckily, Adora shows up before Glimmer and Prime even get to the altar, and they manage to kill him in a two-on-one battle.
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond!Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]
* ArcSymbol: Bright Moon Violets. They explicitly bloom whenever the Queen of Bright Moon is in love with a woman.
* CampfireCharacterExploration: There are two instances of this in the story:
** First, with Glimmer and Adora in the main universe. [[spoiler: After Adora gets slapped by a salmon and dunked into the cold river, both her and Glimmer cuddle by a campfire. Glimmer laments, as she's experiencing a depressive episode of sorts for no particular reason.]]
** After Adora arrives in the Siren Universe, Catra opens up and tells her everything that happened.
* CockFight: During Adora's decade long absence, the main universe's Catra and Glimmer date for four years. Glimmer keeps putting off telling Adora about the relationship, and this ultimately backfires. [[spoiler: Upon reuniting, Catra uses the fact she dated Glimmer to rile Adora up. This leads to them “fighting like a bunch of men”, according to Glimmer.]]
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: After a decade and MANY other complications, Adora and Glimmer finally tie the knot at the end of the story.]]
** First, with Glimmer and Adora in the main universe. [[spoiler: After Adora gets slapped by a salmon and dunked into the cold river, both her and Glimmer cuddle by a campfire. Glimmer laments, as she's experiencing a depressive episode of sorts for no particular reason.]]
** After Adora arrives in the Siren Universe, Catra opens up and tells her everything that happened.
* CockFight: During Adora's decade long absence, the main universe's Catra and Glimmer date for four years. Glimmer keeps putting off telling Adora about the relationship, and this ultimately backfires. [[spoiler: Upon reuniting, Catra uses the fact she dated Glimmer to rile Adora up. This leads to them “fighting like a bunch of men”, according to Glimmer.]]
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: After a decade and MANY other complications, Adora and Glimmer finally tie the knot at the end of the story.]]
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--> ''Both [Adora and Catra] [[spoiler: desperately wanted their Glimmer back]]. However, how realistic was that for either of them?''
* IntimateHealing: Both Adora and Glimmer have the ability to heal, so there are a few examples of this.
* CampfireCharacterExploration: There are two instances of this in the story:
** First, with Glimmer and Adora in the main universe. [[spoiler: After Adora gets slapped by a salmon and dunked into the cold river, both her and Glimmer cuddle by a campfire. Glimmer laments, as she's experiencing a depressive episode of sorts for no particular reason.]]
** After Adora arrives in the Siren!Universe, Catra opens up and tells her everything that happened.
* IntimateHealing: Both Adora and Glimmer have the ability to heal, so there are a few examples of this.
* CampfireCharacterExploration: There are two instances of this in the story:
** First, with Glimmer and Adora in the main universe. [[spoiler: After Adora gets slapped by a salmon and dunked into the cold river, both her and Glimmer cuddle by a campfire. Glimmer laments, as she's experiencing a depressive episode of sorts for no particular reason.]]
** After Adora arrives in the Siren!Universe, Catra opens up and tells her everything that happened.
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** [[spoiler:However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: After a decade and MANY other complications, Adora and Glimmer finally tie the knot at the end of the story.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: IAmAMonster: [[spoiler: After a decade and MANY other complications, It's stated Adora and Glimmer finally tie the knot at the end has [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killed a few people during her travels.]] She often has moments where she feels undeserving of the story.love because of this.]]
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone for a decade.
* IntimateHealing: Both Adora and Glimmer have the ability to heal, so there are a few examples of this.
* ItsAllMyFault: Many, many characters experience this thought process.
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
* IntimateHealing: Both Adora and Glimmer have the ability to heal, so there are a few examples of this.
* ItsAllMyFault: Many, many characters experience this thought process.
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
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* CockFight: During Adora's decade long absence, the main universe's Catra and Glimmer date for four years. Glimmer keeps putting off telling Adora about the relationship, and this ultimately backfires. [[spoiler: Upon reuniting, Catra uses the fact she dated Glimmer to rile Adora up. This leads to them “fighting like a bunch of men”, according to Glimmer.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones committed mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler:However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's part in her disappearance don't really become evident until the last few chapters of the story.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones committed mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler:However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's part in her disappearance don't really become evident until the last few chapters of the story.]]
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* CockFight: During Adora's decade long absence, the main universe's Catra TheMultiverse: Where this story is set, and Glimmer date for four years. Glimmer keeps putting off telling what Adora about the relationship, and this ultimately backfires. [[spoiler: Upon reuniting, Catra uses the fact she dated Glimmer to rile is flung into. The fic explores four universes Adora up. This leads to them “fighting visited, as well as what her life is like a bunch of men”, according to Glimmer.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones committed mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler:However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's partafter she arrives back in her disappearance don't really become evident until the last few chapters of the story.]]home dimension.
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones committed mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler:However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's part
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* VirtualSoundtrack: In chapter 14, [[spoiler: at the end of Princess Prom, Adora and Glimmer slow dance by themselves to "Cellophane" by Music/FKATwigs. This song very directly inspired Glimmer's arc, and she even sings the last few verses.]]
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** The fight between Siren!Glimmer and Angella is inspired by [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda the fight between Tai Lung and Master Shifu]], with some dialogue lifted from it wholesale.
** Evil!Glimmer's line [[spoiler: "Where were you when I needed you?!"]] was taken verbatim from WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter, of all things.
** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while [[StalkerShot Catra watches from the skylights]]. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene from Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.]]
** Evil!Glimmer's line [[spoiler: "Where were you when I needed you?!"]] was taken verbatim from WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter, of all things.
** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while [[StalkerShot Catra watches from the skylights]]. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene from Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.]]
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** The fight between Siren!Glimmer Siren Glimmer and Angella is inspired by [[WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda the fight between Tai Lung and Master Shifu]], with some dialogue lifted from it wholesale.
**Evil!Glimmer's Evil Glimmer's line [[spoiler: "Where were you when I needed you?!"]] was taken verbatim from WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter, ''WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter'', of all things.
** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while [[StalkerShot Catra watches from the skylights]]. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene fromFilm/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.''Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004''.]]
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** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
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** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer Evil Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer Evil Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]] ]]
* VirtualSoundtrack: In chapter 14, [[spoiler: at the end of Princess Prom, Adora and Glimmer slow dance by themselves to "Cellophane" by Music/FKATwigs. This song very directly inspired Glimmer's arc, and she even sings the last few verses.]]
* VirtualSoundtrack: In chapter 14, [[spoiler: at the end of Princess Prom, Adora and Glimmer slow dance by themselves to "Cellophane" by Music/FKATwigs. This song very directly inspired Glimmer's arc, and she even sings the last few verses.]]
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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** Adora has PTSD from the sheer trauma that was inflicted on her in some dimensions, with [[spoiler: the trauma from being forced to kill Queen Glimmer]] sticking with her the most.
** Glimmer accuses Bow of moving on too quickly from Adora's loss, when in actuality, he's just managed to healthily move on. Glimmer's accusation ends up breaking Bow and Glimmer's friendship, and it takes a very long time to repair.
** Adora has PTSD from the sheer trauma that was inflicted on her in some dimensions, with [[spoiler: the trauma from being forced to kill Queen Glimmer]] sticking with her the most.
** Glimmer accuses Bow of moving on too quickly from Adora's loss, when in actuality, he's just managed to healthily move on. Glimmer's accusation ends up breaking Bow and Glimmer's friendship, and it takes a very long time to repair.
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* UnreliableNarrator: The story is scrambled up and told non-linearly, for the most part. Often, chapters of Adora's experiences appear before or after something relatable happens in the narrative of her time in the main universe.
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]]]
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
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* UnreliableNarrator: The story is scrambled up and told non-linearly, for the most part. Often, chapters of Adora's experiences appear before or after something relatable happens in the narrative of her time in the main universe.
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
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* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]]
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* UnreliableNarrator: The story is scrambled up and told non-linearly, for the most part. Often, chapters of Adora's experiences appear before or after something relatable happens in the narrative of her time in the main universe.
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]
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** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's part in her disappearance don't really become evident until the last few chapters of the story.]]
** [[spoiler: Before the Evil!Glimmer chapters, Adora has a PTSD attack upon seeing an injury on Glimmer. This attack seamlessly fades into her first few minutes in the Evil!Glimmer dimension, where she's being hunted down by Bright Moon's Guards.]]
* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. [[AcceptableBreaksFromCanon It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, [[SaveTheWorldClimax resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]] Amazingly, Adora and Glimmer both show compassion and understanding to the Heart for their choice.]]]]
** [[spoiler: The narrative throughout the fic often foreshadows some unknown force being responsible for what happened to Adora. However, the main evidence for the Heart's part in her disappearance don't really become evident until the last few chapters of the story.]]
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* [[HiddenVillain Hidden Antagonist]]: [[spoiler: During the finale of the fic, it's revealed the Heart of Etheria is sentient, and was the one to create a rift in space and time to eject Adora into the Multiverse. The Heart was upset Etheria chose Adora as She-Ra, because she's a First One. It's important to note the First Ones commited mass genocide of Etherians by forcing the Heart to use their powers against their own people.]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]]
** [[spoiler: However, their own plan backfires. Since some of Adora's magic lied dormant in Glimmer, there was still a part of her left in the dimension - meaning She-Ra wouldn't reincarnate. This really backfires, as the Heart doesn't have another being to share their powers with, resulting in an unstable surge that nearly makes the planet implode.]]
* VirtualSoundtrack: In chapter 14, [[spoiler: at the end of Princess Prom, Adora and Glimmer slow dance by themselves to "Cellophane" by Music/FKATwigs. This song very directly inspired Glimmer's arc, and she even sings the last few verses.]]
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** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while Catra watches from the skylights. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene from Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.]]
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** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while [[StalkerShot Catra watches from the skylights.skylights]]. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene from Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.]]
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* TheMultiverse: Where this story is set, and what Adora is flung into. The fic explores four universes Adora visited, as well as what her life is like after she arrives back in her home dimension.
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone for a decade.
* InternalReveal: Adora doesn't realize she was gone for a decade.
* ItsAllMyFault: Many, many characters experience this thought process.
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil!Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
* IAmAMonster: [[spoiler: It's stated Adora has [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killed a few people during her travels.]] She often has moments where she feels undeserving of love because of this.]]
** [[spoiler: Adora is quick to take the blame in many situations. After she kills Evil!Glimmer, she blames herself entirely — never seeming to acknowledge the fact she tried to kill Adora. Later in the story, this trope arises again, when Glimmer has to take the Failsafe.]]
** [[spoiler: For the main universe's Glimmer, she blames herself entirely for Adora's disappearance, as well as their fallout that occurs in Season 4. Her guilt gets to the point where she feels she's unworthy of Adora's love.]]
* IAmAMonster: [[spoiler: It's stated Adora has [[TheseHandsHaveKilled killed a few people during her travels.]] She often has moments where she feels undeserving of love because of this.]]
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* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond!Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]]]
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* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond!Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]]]]]
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* IntimateHealing: Both Adora and Glimmer have the ability to heal, so there are a few examples of this.
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* TheMultiverse: Where this story is set, and what Adora is flung into.
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: In the most literal sense, this happens in the first alternate universe. [[spoiler: The Glimmer of said universe grows frustrated with [[ObliviousToLove Vagabond!Adora's inability to read her flirtations.]] However, [[EvilDoppelganger Adora's Evil Doppelgänger]] will take any bone thrown at her.]]]]
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** In chapter 14, [[spoiler: Adora and Glimmer confess to one another, all while Catra watches from the skylights. She drops a bouquet of violets she gathered for Glimmer, and she becomes angry. This is a shout-out to the "All I Ask Of You (Reprise)" scene from Film/ThePhantomOfTheOpera2004.]]
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** Evil!Glimmer's line [[spoiler: "Where were you when I needed you?!"]] was taken verbatim from… WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter?
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** Evil!Glimmer's line [[spoiler: "Where were you when I needed you?!"]] was taken verbatim from… WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter?from WesternAnimation/ShrekForeverAfter, of all things.
