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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''Literature/TheSagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.

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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''Literature/TheSagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.

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* HypocriticalHumor: Tanya is completely indignant when she hears Jenny has involved herself with drug smuggling, gun running and various other shenanigans.

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Tanya is completely indignant when she hears Jenny has involved herself with drug smuggling, gun running and various other shenanigans.shenanigans.
** Tanya laments that Visha is someone who refuses to change her viewpoint when new information is presented, instead always finding ways to make the new information conform to her initial conclusion. Somehow it never occurs to her that this applies to her more than anyone.
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Tanya finds herself turned on (to her own surprise) at watching Visha slowly strangle a man to death.


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* TranquilFury: Visha shows nothing but complete serenity as she furiously strangles a slave overseer to death.
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As of March 2022, this fanfic is being updated again.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: During Tanya's time in Oliver's gang, the gang robbed a house secretly belonging to a nobleman, and Tanya believes the nobleman won't go after them since the man might not want the public to know the house he owns was involved in criminal activities. Unfortunately, the nobleman was angry that some street urchins robbed him and wanted his goons to "punish them".

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* WrongGenreSavvy: During Tanya's time in Oliver's gang, the gang robbed a house secretly belonging to a nobleman, and Tanya believes the nobleman won't go after them since the man might not want the public to know the house he owns was involved in criminal activities. Unfortunately, the nobleman was angry that some street urchins robbed him and wanted his goons to "punish them".them".
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* {{Expy}}: Monsieur Paquet, a colleague of Mary Sioux at Interpol, is one for Literature/HerculePoirot.

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* {{Expy}}: Monsieur Paquet, a colleague of Mary Sioux at Interpol, is one for Literature/HerculePoirot.Franchise/HerculePoirot.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''Literature/SagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.

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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''Literature/SagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' ''Literature/TheSagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''LightNovel/SagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.

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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-young-girls-delinquency-record-youjo-senki-saga-of-tanya-the-evil.788149/ A Young Girl's Delinquency Record]]'', also can be read on FFN [[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13407322/1/ here]] is a ''LightNovel/SagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' ''Literature/SagaOfTanyaTheEvil'' fanfic by Gremlin Jack.
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--> '''The Prosecutor:''' And does you oath include attacking and murdering citizens of neutral parties without warning or provocation?

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--> '''The Prosecutor:''' And does you your oath include attacking and murdering citizens of neutral parties without warning or provocation?
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Tanya didn't fight against the Allies, she's not a Nazi. She's from World War 1, not World War 2. She fought against the Francois Republic and the Legadonia Entente Alliance in this Fic.


* RefugeInAudacity: Tanya, thinking the project would be a flop, agrees to star as ''herself'' in a million-dollar epic movie about one of her worst actions against the Allies called ''Arenne'' for a nice salary. It proceeded to become the highest-grossing film of its time, in part because of her AlternateCharacterInterpretation of the world's first war criminal as a PunchClockVillain who joined the military to escape poverty.

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* RefugeInAudacity: Tanya, thinking the project would be a flop, agrees to star as ''herself'' in a million-dollar epic movie about one of her worst actions against the Allies Francois called ''Arenne'' for a nice salary. It proceeded to become the highest-grossing film of its time, in part because of her AlternateCharacterInterpretation of the world's first war criminal as a PunchClockVillain who joined the military to escape poverty.
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* TheMostWanted: UpToEleven in regards to our protagonist. After the destruction of Brest thanks to the Type-95 and managing to escape her trial, Tanya has become the world's ''first'' international criminal with the global Interpol formed ''specifically'' to catch and bring her back in chains.

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* TheMostWanted: UpToEleven {{Exaggerated|trope}} in regards to our protagonist. After the destruction of Brest thanks to the Type-95 and managing to escape her trial, Tanya has become the world's ''first'' international criminal with the global Interpol formed ''specifically'' to catch and bring her back in chains.
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* KnifeNut: Red Jenny was one, even ''before'' Tanya gave her some pointers.

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* EgocentricallyReligious: [[spoiler:''Schugel''. After the destruction of the Type-95, he's commissioned to create another quad-core orb. Following a series of disastrous experiments, he escapes, leaving behind a host of dead and traumatized test subjects. Recently, he's resurfaced in Ildoa, convincing the Duce to give him several young children of very religious families to keep on with his experiments. The officer in charge stares in disgust at Schugel's religious rantings and hopes the order to kill him will come before he has either driven the children to insanity or killed them.]]



* EgocentricallyReligious: [[spoiler:''Schugel''. After the destruction of the Type-95, he's commissioned to create another quad-core orb. Following a series of disastrous experiments, he escapes, leaving behind a host of dead and traumatized test subjects. Recently, he's resurfaced in Ildoa, convincing the Duce to give him several young children of very religious families to keep on with his experiments. The officer in charge stares in disgust at Schugel's religious rantings and hopes the order to kill him will come before he's either killed or driven the children mad.]]
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* UnknowinglyInLove: Tanya has to be shown ''forcefully'', via magic, that she has feelings for Visha. She's still oblivious to the utterly transparent crush Visha has on her.
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As of mid-May 2020, the author has delayed the release of followup chapters due to requiring time to plan out plot developments.

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* RealityEnsues: Many high-ranking officers and soldiers of the Imperial Army and citizens of Germania are ''absolutely furious'' at the Supreme High Command's handling of the Brest incident; in particular, allowing their enemies from the Great War to put Tanya – who is essentially TheFace of the Empire's war efforts and propaganda – on trial, something made even more egregious by the fact that the incident occurred in the first place due to Tanya actually discovering and putting a stop to the Francois pulling a fast one on the Empire. The Kaiser allowing Tanya to essentially be thrown to wolves has led to a lot of backlash and bad publicity against his reign, with his decision even causing a growing schism between the military and the civilian high command.


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* WhatTheHellHero: Many high-ranking officers and soldiers of the Imperial Army and citizens of Germania are ''absolutely furious'' at the Supreme High Command's handling of the Brest incident; in particular, allowing their enemies from the Great War to put Tanya – who is essentially TheFace of the Empire's war efforts and propaganda – on trial, something made even more egregious by the fact that the incident occurred in the first place due to Tanya actually discovering and putting a stop to the Francois pulling a fast one on the Empire. The Kaiser allowing Tanya to essentially be thrown to wolves has led to a lot of backlash and bad publicity against his reign, with his decision even causing a growing schism between the military and the civilian high command.
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* BodyDouble: [[spoiler:An undercover Mary Sioux]] unintentionally serves as this for Tanya, leading the girl into some uncomfortable introspection on how she's NotSoDifferent from Tanya.

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* BodyDouble: [[spoiler:An undercover Mary Sioux]] unintentionally serves as this for Tanya, leading the girl into some uncomfortable introspection on how she's NotSoDifferent not that different from Tanya.
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* FriendInTheBlackMarket: Tanya looks for these as she needs money and legal papers in order to secure her escape from Albion to the Allied States, first by joining a youth gang and later by associating with actual gangsters. She also [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] how unlike fictional elite operatives who usually have no problem looking for whatever criminal contacts they need, it's much more difficult to accomplish in reality.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Tanya's opinion regarding gold. While it's indeed very valuable, gold is also very impractical to use and takes a lot of effort to convert to usable currency.
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* HowardHughesHomage: John Felix Hughes, the majority shareholder of Hughes Tool company along with presumably several others. An eccentric business magnate with background in technology, but wide and often short-lived interests? Check and check.

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* HowardHughesHomage: John Felix Hughes, the majority shareholder of Hughes Tool company along with presumably several others.other companies. An eccentric business magnate with background in technology, but wide and often short-lived interests? Check and check.
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* HowardHughesHomage: John Felix Hughes, the majority shareholder of Hughes Tool company along with presumably several others. An eccentric business magnate with background in technology, but wide and often short-lived interests? Check and check.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: After the tragedy of Brest and her escape from Londinium Tanya becomes this among the public at large. Her later activities certainly doesn't help

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: After the tragedy of Brest and her escape from Londinium Londinium, Tanya becomes this among the public at large. Her later activities certainly doesn't help
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** The first one is towards the prosecutor, who has been slandering her name and character with half-truths and blatant hypocrisy over the course of five days in the trial. By the time he begins questioning her, Tanya has very much [[RageBreakingPoint reached the limits of her patience.]] Its '''very''' telling the only thing the former has to say is [[NotHelpingYourCase to strike the response from the record.]]

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** The first one is towards the prosecutor, who has been slandering her name and character with half-truths and blatant hypocrisy over the course of five days in the trial. By the time he begins questioning her, Tanya has very much [[RageBreakingPoint reached the limits of her patience.]] Its It's '''very''' telling the only thing the former has to say is [[NotHelpingYourCase to strike the response from the record.]]



** When accused of killing the Dacian army without taking any prisoners, Tanya demanded that the witness general be brought back to the stand and be asked [[ArmorPiercingQuestion during the entire 'battle', did any of his HQ guard actually call out to surrender?]] After the following two sentences, the witness had to be quickly removed because he looked like he was the verge of either [[TearsOfRemorse crying]] or [[WouldHurtAChild attacking Tanya]].

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** When accused of killing the Dacian army without taking any prisoners, Tanya demanded that the witness general be brought back to the stand and be asked [[ArmorPiercingQuestion during the entire 'battle', "battle", did any of his HQ guard actually call out to surrender?]] After the following two sentences, the witness had to be quickly removed because he looked like he was the verge of either [[TearsOfRemorse crying]] or [[WouldHurtAChild attacking Tanya]].



** While Tanya has no issues when it comes to working with criminals, she is disgusted that the mob boss Oliver's gang has been working with, [=McClane=], has been secretly ripping them off from all of the stolen goods they sold to his fixer by giving them less money than it's actually worth, ensuring the gang has little to no money to save for themselves. This, along with [=McClane=]'s dirty intentions to make both Tanya and Jenny join his brothel, Tanya and the gang decides to defect and work with his rival Murdoch, a much fairer mob boss.

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** While Tanya has no issues when it comes to working with criminals, she is disgusted that the mob boss Oliver's gang has been working with, [=McClane=], has been secretly ripping them off from all of the stolen goods they sold to his fixer by giving them less money than it's the goods are actually worth, ensuring the gang has little to no money to save for themselves. This, along with [=McClane=]'s dirty intentions to make both Tanya and Jenny join his brothel, Tanya and the gang decides to defect and work with his rival Murdoch, a much fairer mob boss.
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* KavorkaMan: "Boris", one of Tanya's fake identity is this. An unashamedly lecherous five foot tall overweight middle-aged man. Tanya is flabbergasted when she finds some women actually reciprocate Boris' incessant flirting.

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* KavorkaMan: "Boris", one of Tanya's fake identity identities is this. An this: an unashamedly lecherous five foot tall five-foot-tall overweight middle-aged man. Tanya is flabbergasted when she finds some women actually reciprocate ''reciprocate'' Boris' incessant flirting.



* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Germania only had one quad-core orb, which Tanya destroyed, and which was so unstable that the fact that it hadn't exploded sooner was literally a miracle. This has not prevented them from commissioning Shugel to reproduce his magnum opus.

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* NoPlansNoPrototypeNoBackup: Germania had only had one quad-core orb, which Tanya destroyed, and which was so unstable that the fact that it hadn't exploded sooner was literally a miracle. This has not prevented them from commissioning Shugel to reproduce his magnum opus.



* OneInAMillionChance: Elya managed to discover Tanya's whereabout independently of Mary and the Interpol...at the exact same time as them. When she said as much Tanya doesn't even humor the possibility and simply assumes Elya doesn't want to be seen as belligerent as Mary.

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* OneInAMillionChance: Elya managed to discover Tanya's whereabout whereabouts independently of Mary and the Interpol...at the exact same time as them. When she said says as much much, Tanya doesn't even humor the possibility and simply assumes Elya doesn't want to be seen as belligerent as Mary.



* PoorCommunicationKills: A staple of ''Saga of Tanya the Evil'' stories. The first (but not the last by a long shot) being that nobody thought to tell Tanya that the sentence the KangarooCourt was railroading her towards was a dishonorable discharge and exile, not execution or life in an insane asylum.
* ProtectionRacket: Tanya has set up more than one "Security Company" that very strictly does ''not'' act this way. Her operatives provide the best security that money can buy, and are (mostly) completely legitimate. This doesn't stop Tanya from accidentally giving a ShameIfSomethingHappened speech to [[spoiler:the Mayor of Jersey City]]. Later Murdoch also reorganizes his gang in the same vein.
* RealityEnsues: Many high-ranking officers and soldiers of the Imperial Army and citizens of Germania are ''absolutely furious'' at the Supreme High Command's handling of the Brest incident – in particular, allowing their enemies from the Great War to put Tanya – who is essentially TheFace of the Empire's war efforts and propaganda – on trial, something made even more egregious by the fact that the incident occurred in the first place due to Tanya actually discovering and putting a stop to the Francois pulling a fast one on the Empire. The Kaiser allowing Tanya to essentially be thrown to wolves has led to a lot of backlash and bad publicity against his reign, with his decision even causing a growing schism between the military and the civilian high command.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: A staple of ''Saga of Tanya the Evil'' stories. The first (but not the last by a long shot) being that nobody thought to tell Tanya that the sentence the KangarooCourt was railroading her towards was simply a dishonorable discharge and exile, not execution or life in an insane asylum.
* ProtectionRacket: Tanya has set up more than one "Security Company" that very strictly does ''not'' act this way. Her operatives provide the best security that money can buy, and are (mostly) completely legitimate. This doesn't stop Tanya from accidentally giving a ShameIfSomethingHappened speech to [[spoiler:the Mayor of Jersey City]]. Later Later, Murdoch also reorganizes his gang in the same vein.
* RealityEnsues: Many high-ranking officers and soldiers of the Imperial Army and citizens of Germania are ''absolutely furious'' at the Supreme High Command's handling of the Brest incident – incident; in particular, allowing their enemies from the Great War to put Tanya – who is essentially TheFace of the Empire's war efforts and propaganda – on trial, something made even more egregious by the fact that the incident occurred in the first place due to Tanya actually discovering and putting a stop to the Francois pulling a fast one on the Empire. The Kaiser allowing Tanya to essentially be thrown to wolves has led to a lot of backlash and bad publicity against his reign, with his decision even causing a growing schism between the military and the civilian high command.



** ''Saga of Tanya the Evil''-equivalent to the ''actual'' Red Baron (Manfred von Richthofen) makes a brief appearance as "General Richtoffer" in the post-war Germanian military.

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** The ''Saga of Tanya the Evil''-equivalent to the ''actual'' Red Baron (Manfred von Richthofen) makes a brief appearance as "General Richtoffer" in the post-war Germanian military.



* ReplacementMooks: The 207th is formed as Germania's new premier aerial mage group allowed to wield dual-core orbs after they sidelined the 203rd, feeling that they were more loyal to Tanya than to the Kaiser. Unfortunately, they have no idea how Tanya's training went (only the Veteran 203rd members knowing how to translate Tanya's notes into an actual training program), had to water it down after getting more than enough men killed and came out with inferior troops as a result. [[spoiler:It shows when during their secret snatch mission, where they outright lose to Stillwater Security (who, despite being armed with single-core orbs, were put through Tanya's training) and cause just two casualties on the Colombian mages.]]

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* ReplacementMooks: The 207th is formed as Germania's new premier aerial mage group allowed to wield dual-core orbs after they sidelined the 203rd, feeling that they were more loyal to Tanya than to the Kaiser. Unfortunately, they have no idea how Tanya's training went (only the Veteran 203rd members knowing how to translate Tanya's notes into an actual training program), had to water it down after getting more than enough men killed and came out with inferior troops as a result. [[spoiler:It shows when during their secret snatch snatch-and-grab mission, where they outright lose to Stillwater Security (who, despite being armed with only single-core orbs, were put through Tanya's training) and cause just two casualties on the Colombian mages.]]



** Alluded by Elya, who accuses a part of the American government is secretly collaborating with Tanya.
** Later it's revealed that Interpol and the Allied Kingdoms believe Tanya is working as agent provocateur for an anti-Kaiser faction within the Empire.

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** Alluded by Elya, who accuses that a part of the American government is secretly collaborating with Tanya.
** Later it's revealed that Interpol and the Allied Kingdoms believe Tanya is working as an agent provocateur for an anti-Kaiser faction within the Empire.



* WeaponOfMassDestruction: After what the Type-95 does to Brest, quad-core orbs are classified as the world's first WMD and research on them is banned by international treaty. Virtually every signatory nation then starts a top secret effort to build them anyway.

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* WeaponOfMassDestruction: After what the Type-95 does to Brest, quad-core orbs are classified as the world's first WMD and research on them is banned by international treaty. Virtually every signatory nation then immediately starts a top secret top-secret effort to build them anyway.
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* TheCaligula: Kaiser Wilhelm is presented as an incompetent, eccentric ruler whose ear is constantly being bent by his cousin with fearmongering. WordOfGod states he based his behavior off of the real life the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wilhelm_II,_German_Emperor#Personality Kaiser Wilhelm II]].
* CompanyTown: United Fruit wanted to set one up in Colombia, Kaiser Wilhelm has set one up in the Congo. Tanya has been disrupting those efforts whenever she crosses their path.

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* TheCaligula: Kaiser Wilhelm is presented as an incompetent, eccentric ruler whose ear is constantly being bent by his cousin with fearmongering. WordOfGod states he based his behavior off of the real life the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wilhelm_II,_German_Emperor#Personality Kaiser Wilhelm II]].
* CompanyTown: United Fruit wanted to set one up in Colombia, Colombia; Kaiser Wilhelm has set one up in the Congo. Tanya has been disrupting those efforts whenever she crosses their path.



** The 203rd may have done brutal things during the Great War, but at least it had a purpose, which was to win the war as quickly as possible for the Empire. However, they are disgusted with their fellow Germanians in the Congo who treat the local Africans like slaves, abused them and give them little to no pay for all their hard work. When a corrupt Mine Owner attempted to punish a young girl for daring to fight back against one of his goons when he tried to rape her, the 203rd are all too happy to kill him and his goons when Tanya orders them dead.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Emperor/Kaiser (Wilhelm) and The Crown Prince (Friedrich Wilhelm) were only ever referred to with their titles by other characters.
* EgocentricallyReligious: [[spoiler:''Schugel.'' After the destruction of the Type-95, he's commissioned to create another quad-core orb. Following a series of disastrous experiments, he escapes, leaving behind a host of dead and traumatized test subjects. Recently, he's resurfaced in Ildoa, convincing the Duce to give him several young children of very religious families to keep on with his experiments. The officer in charge stares in disgust at Schugel's religious rantings and hopes the order to kill him will come before he's either killed or driven the children mad.]]

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** The 203rd may have done brutal things during the Great War, but at least it had a purpose, which was to win the war as quickly as possible for the Empire. However, they are disgusted with their fellow Germanians in the Congo who treat the local Africans like slaves, abused them abuse them, and give them little to no pay for all their hard work. When a corrupt Mine Owner attempted to punish a young girl for daring to fight back against one of his goons when he tried to rape her, the 203rd are all too happy to kill him and his goons when Tanya orders them dead.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Emperor/Kaiser (Wilhelm) and The Crown Prince (Friedrich Wilhelm) were are only ever referred to with by their titles by other characters.
* EgocentricallyReligious: [[spoiler:''Schugel.'' [[spoiler:''Schugel''. After the destruction of the Type-95, he's commissioned to create another quad-core orb. Following a series of disastrous experiments, he escapes, leaving behind a host of dead and traumatized test subjects. Recently, he's resurfaced in Ildoa, convincing the Duce to give him several young children of very religious families to keep on with his experiments. The officer in charge stares in disgust at Schugel's religious rantings and hopes the order to kill him will come before he's either killed or driven the children mad.]]
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Emperor/Kaiser and Ths Crown Prince were only ever referred to with their titles.

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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Emperor/Kaiser (Wilhelm) and Ths The Crown Prince (Friedrich Wilhelm) were only ever referred to with their titles.titles by other characters.

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