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* TransgenderFetishization: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
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* TransgenderFetishization: TransChaser: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Morgana and Ryuji are nicer to each other in this fic as opposed to canon.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her rather quickly.
* AdaptationalSexuality: Morgana is aromantic in this fic.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her rather quickly.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Morgana and Ryuji are nicer to each other in this fic as opposed to canon.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her ratherquickly.
quickly. [[spoiler:Chapter 65 reveals this is because he empathizes with Ren due to Futaba also suffering under a transphobic household.]]
* AdaptationalSexuality: Aside from [[EveryoneIsBi almost everyone being bi or pan]], Morgana is aromantic in this fic.
** Morgana and Ryuji are nicer to each other in this fic as opposed to canon.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her rather
* AdaptationalSexuality: Aside from [[EveryoneIsBi almost everyone being bi or pan]], Morgana is aromantic in this fic.
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* HiddenBadass: In the real world Ren is rather meek, but Joker is confident, suave, and a natual leader.
* HiddenBadass: In the real world Ren is rather meek, but Joker is confident, suave, and a natual leader.
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* MistakenForProstitute: PlayedForDrama and heavily [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]]. Shortly after Kamoshida is dealt with, [[spoiler:a student assumed that Ren is an underaged prostitute and surmised that to being why Ren got a probation, and tried to get a "favor" out of her. Though she's thankfully saved by Haru, the student's pride couldn't take it and so he decided to come up with a scheme to slander Ren and get her out of the school with help of his brother and when ''that'' failed, he got the help of his brother and friend to [[ColdBloodedTorture gang up and mutilate her]] and [[FromBadToWorse then found out that Ren is transgender in the process]]. They decided to use this information to instead threaten to have her secret out unless she leaves Shujin and even then, the group of bullies ''still'' want to beat and kill her because she's the easier target in their eyes]].
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* MistakenForProstitute: PlayedForDrama and heavily [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]]. Shortly after Kamoshida is dealt with, [[spoiler:a student assumed that Ren is an underaged prostitute and surmised that to being why Ren got a probation, and tried to get a "favor" out of her. Though she's thankfully saved by Haru, the student's pride couldn't take it and so he decided to come up with a scheme to slander Ren and get her out of the school with help of his brother and when ''that'' failed, he got the help of his brother and friend to [[ColdBloodedTorture gang up and mutilate her]] and [[FromBadToWorse then found out that Ren is transgender in the process]]. They decided to use this information to instead threaten to have her secret out unless she leaves Shujin and even then, the group of bullies ''still'' want to beat and kill her because she's the easier target in their eyes]].eyes that a Change of Heart is the only way that Ren can feel safe to go to Shujin again]].
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* AwesomebutImpractical: The Phantom Thieves can increase their spell power by getting emotional, but it leads to them getting tired more quickly.
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* AwesomebutImpractical: AwesomeButImpractical: The Phantom Thieves can increase their spell power by getting emotional, but it leads to them getting tired more quickly.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Kobayakawa wants to hurt and expell Ren simply for being transgender.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: DisproportionateRetribution:
** Kobayakawa wants to hurt and expell Ren simply for beingtransgender.transgender.
** [[spoiler:A student who tried to go after Ren [[MistakenForProstitute due to rumors that Ren's an underaged prostitute]] failed to do so when Haru saved Ren in time. His response is to spread MaliciousSlander of Ren as payback for Ren and Haru breaking his pride and when the slander failed, he escalated to trying to ''maul and mutilate Ren in broad daylight''.]]
** Kobayakawa wants to hurt and expell Ren simply for being
** [[spoiler:A student who tried to go after Ren [[MistakenForProstitute due to rumors that Ren's an underaged prostitute]] failed to do so when Haru saved Ren in time. His response is to spread MaliciousSlander of Ren as payback for Ren and Haru breaking his pride and when the slander failed, he escalated to trying to ''maul and mutilate Ren in broad daylight''.]]
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* PetTheDog: [[spoiler:Futaba, during a time period where she still hasn't revealed herself as the true identity of Alibaba to the thieves, help deal with Ren's bullies by hacking and threatening them to spread their DarkSecret in retribution of their actions towards Ren.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Ren's parents aren't very supportive of her being a transgender teen and outright call her [[ItIsDehumanizing a monster]] and they'd rather have their "son" Akira back. They also threaten to ''kill'' Ren if she comes back still sticking to being transgender.
* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Kobayakawa's palace is a cathedral.]]
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* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Kobayakawa's palace is a cathedral.]]
* InsaneTrollLogic: Ren's AbusiveParents outright stated and hopes that her probation in Tokyo will convince her to come back to being their "son" Akira again.
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* MistakenForProstitute: PlayedForDrama and heavily [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]]. Shortly after Kamoshida is dealt with, [[spoiler:a student assumed that Ren is an underaged prostitute and surmised that to being why Ren got a probation, and tried to get a "favor" out of her. Though she's thankfully saved by Haru, the student's pride couldn't take it and so he decided to come up with a scheme to slander Ren and get her out of the school with help of his brother and when ''that'' failed, he got the help of his brother and friend to [[ColdBloodedTorture gang up and mutilate her]] and then found out that Ren is transgender in the process. They decided to use this information to instead threaten to have her secret out unless she leaves Shujin]].
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* MistakenForProstitute: PlayedForDrama and heavily [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]]. Shortly after Kamoshida is dealt with, [[spoiler:a student assumed that Ren is an underaged prostitute and surmised that to being why Ren got a probation, and tried to get a "favor" out of her. Though she's thankfully saved by Haru, the student's pride couldn't take it and so he decided to come up with a scheme to slander Ren and get her out of the school with help of his brother and when ''that'' failed, he got the help of his brother and friend to [[ColdBloodedTorture gang up and mutilate her]] and [[FromBadToWorse then found out that Ren is transgender in the process. process]]. They decided to use this information to instead threaten to have her secret out unless she leaves Shujin]].Shujin and even then, the group of bullies ''still'' want to beat and kill her because she's the easier target in their eyes]].
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* TransTribulations: A good portion of the story portrays this as part of Ren's conflict and how she moves forward from it.
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* MistakenForProstitute: PlayedForDrama and heavily [[DeconstructedTrope deconstructed]]. Shortly after Kamoshida is dealt with, [[spoiler:a student assumed that Ren is an underaged prostitute and surmised that to being why Ren got a probation, and tried to get a "favor" out of her. Though she's thankfully saved by Haru, the student's pride couldn't take it and so he decided to come up with a scheme to slander Ren and get her out of the school with help of his brother and when ''that'' failed, he got the help of his brother and friend to [[ColdBloodedTorture gang up and mutilate her]] and then found out that Ren is transgender in the process. They decided to use this information to instead threaten to have her secret out unless she leaves Shujin]].
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Ren being a trans woman is a big part of this fic and it's revealed her real name was Kurusu Akira.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Ren being a trans woman is a big part of this fic and it's revealed her real dead name was is Kurusu Akira.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Kobayakawa was always a horrible person, considering he knew what Kamoshida was doing and let it slide, however in this story [[spoiler: he actually requested for Kamoshida to target Ren.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: In the original game, Shiho and Mishima are both regular people. In this story, they both joined as Phantom thieves.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Kobayakawa was always a horrible person, considering he knew what Kamoshida was doing and let it slide, however in this story [[spoiler: he actually requested for Kamoshida to targetRen.Ren and had a Palace on top of that.]]
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* KidsAreCruel: The Shujin students are horrid to Ren over her criminal record and spread MaliciousSlander of her over it. Thankfully for Ren, she had the thieves on her side.
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* BlamingTheVictim: Ren at one point overhears that [[spoiler: she brought her sexual assault on her self, or is lying about it.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: Ren has it rough early on. In addition to canon events of being sent away to Tokyo on probation, [[spoiler: she had to deal with going to prison for a bit, being targeted by Kamoshida and Kobayakawa, and being disowned by her parents.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: Ren has it rough early on. In addition to canon events of being sent away to Tokyo on probation, [[spoiler: she had to deal with going to prison for a bit, being targeted by Kamoshida and Kobayakawa, and being disowned by her parents.]]]]
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* ShipperonDeck: The couples that get together first are Ren with Ryuji, and Ann with Shiho. All 4 of them thought it'd be cute if their partner kissed someone else, but everyone but Shiho suppressed this idea.
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* ShipperonDeck: ShipperOnDeck: The couples that get together first are Ren with Ryuji, and Ann with Shiho. All 4 of them thought it'd be cute if their partner kissed someone else, but everyone but Shiho suppressed this idea.
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* BadassAdorable: Ren, easily.
* CruelMercy: Ren considers killing Kamoshida, and everyone agrees that if she did she'd be justified, but she decides against it so his other victims can see him get what he deserves.
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* DarkerandEdgier: The story makes it clear how powerful palace rulers are, to the point where [[spoiler: Ren avoids death by the skin of her teeth against Kamoshida when he stabs her.]]
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* TransgenderFetishization: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
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* TransgenderFetishization: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
* TraumaCongaLine: Ren has it rough early on. In addition to canon events of being sent away to Tokyo on probation, [[spoiler: she had to deal with going to prison for a bit, being targeted by Kamoshida and Kobayakawa, and being disowned by her parents.]]
* TraumaCongaLine: Ren has it rough early on. In addition to canon events of being sent away to Tokyo on probation, [[spoiler: she had to deal with going to prison for a bit, being targeted by Kamoshida and Kobayakawa, and being disowned by her parents.]]
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Ren admits she has a hard time just sitting by and watching people suffer.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Kobayakawa wants to hurt and expell Ren simply for being transgender.
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* ShipperonDeck: The couples that get together first are Ren with Ryuji, and Ann with Shiho. All 4 of them thought it'd be cute if their partner kissed someone else, but everyone but Shiho suppressed this idea.
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* DarkerandEdgier: The story makes it clear how powerful palace rulers are, to the point where [[spoiler: Ren avoids death by the skin of her teeth against Kamoshida when he stabs her.]]
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* Early-BirdCameo: Haru, Makoto, and Futaba all appear earlier than in canon.
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* Early-BirdCameo: EarlyBirdCameo: Haru, Makoto, and Futaba all appear earlier than in canon.canon.
* GroundhogDayLoop : The velvet room attendants acknowledge that Ren has experienced Persona 5 Royal multiple times. Some other Rens even failed.
* GroundhogDayLoop : The velvet room attendants acknowledge that Ren has experienced Persona 5 Royal multiple times. Some other Rens even failed.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Kobayakawa was always a horrible person, considering he knew what Kamoshida was doing and let it slide, however in this story [[spoiler: he actually requested for Kamoshida to target Ren.]]
* AlloftheOtherReindeer: Ren feels this way due to her gender identity.
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* AwesomebutImpractical: The Phantom Thieves can increase their spell power by getting emotional, but it leads to them getting tired more quickly.
* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Kobayakawa's palace is a cathedral.]]
* HiddenBadass: In the real world Ren is rather meek, but Joker is confident, suave, and a natual leader.
* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Kobayakawa's palace is a cathedral.]]
* HiddenBadass: In the real world Ren is rather meek, but Joker is confident, suave, and a natual leader.
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* AscendedExtra: Shiho is a phantom thief in this story, as opposed to leaving after Ann's Rank 9.
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* AscendedExtra: Shiho is a phantom thief in this story, as opposed to leaving after Ann's Rank 9.9.
* AttemptedRape: Kamoshida nearly [[spoiler: rapes Ren, and is only stopped by the rest of team arriving just in time. Despite it being avoided, it still affects her greatly.]]
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Ren being a trans woman is a big part of this fic.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Morgana and Ryuji are nicer to each other in this fic as opposed to canon.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her rather quickly.
* AdaptationalSexuality: Morgana is aromantic in this fic.
* BlamingTheVictim: Ren at one point overhears that [[spoiler: she brought her sexual assault on her self, or is lying about it.]]
* Polyamory: The main ship is polythieves.
* TransgenderFetishization: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
* AttemptedRape: Kamoshida nearly [[spoiler: rapes Ren, and is only stopped by the rest of team arriving just in time. Despite it being avoided, it still affects her greatly.]]
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Ren being a trans woman is a big part of this fic.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Morgana and Ryuji are nicer to each other in this fic as opposed to canon.
** While Sojiro is a nice person in canon, it takes him a while to warm up to Ren. In this fic, he warms up to her rather quickly.
* AdaptationalSexuality: Morgana is aromantic in this fic.
* BlamingTheVictim: Ren at one point overhears that [[spoiler: she brought her sexual assault on her self, or is lying about it.]]
* Polyamory: The main ship is polythieves.
* TransgenderFetishization: Kamoshida [[spoiler: becomes rather attracted to Ren upon finding out she's trans.]]
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* AscendedExtra: Shiho is a phantom thief in this story, as opposed to leaving after Ann's Rank 9.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/46477522/chapters/117026065 A Picaresque Royale]]'' is a ''VideoGame/Persona5'' fanfiction by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Naomi_Saphorus/pseuds/Naomi_Saphorus Naomi_Saphorus]]''. This story follows a Trans Fem version of Joker, who goes by Ren Amamiya. This along with other changes are present in this fic, leading to various divergences.
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