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* AdaptationalKarma:
** [[spoiler:Because of Belos using the Calamity cannon to blow up the Knee, Odalia is caught in the blast and is completely eradicated.]]
** [[spoiler:Kikimora and most of the loyalist Coven Heads are slaughtered by King Andrias when he begins to invade the Boiling Isles.]]
** [[spoiler:Because of Belos using the Calamity cannon to blow up the Knee, Odalia is caught in the blast and is completely eradicated.]]
** [[spoiler:Kikimora and most of the loyalist Coven Heads are slaughtered by King Andrias when he begins to invade the Boiling Isles.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Marcy has been taking a lot of emotional turmoil: she confesses to Anne that she intentionally got them and Sasha stranded in Amphibia after hearing that [[spoiler:Anne nearly killed Sasha]], her meeting with Sasha ends with Sasha accusing her and Anne of trying to forget about her and she becomes distraught upon learning General Yunan found the Source and [[spoiler:tried to kill Luz on King Andrias' orders.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: BreakTheCutie:
** Marcy has been taking a lot of emotional turmoil: she confesses to Anne that she intentionally got them and Sasha stranded in Amphibia after hearing that [[spoiler:Anne nearly killed Sasha]], her meeting with Sasha ends with Sasha accusing her and Anne of trying to forget about her and she becomes distraught upon learning General Yunan found the Source and [[spoiler:tried to kill Luz on King Andrias' orders.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz, the Blight sisters and Alador are left in crippling sadness after Edric's death.]]
** Marcy has been taking a lot of emotional turmoil: she confesses to Anne that she intentionally got them and Sasha stranded in Amphibia after hearing that [[spoiler:Anne nearly killed Sasha]], her meeting with Sasha ends with Sasha accusing her and Anne of trying to forget about her and she becomes distraught upon learning General Yunan found the Source and [[spoiler:tried to kill Luz on King Andrias' orders.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz, the Blight sisters and Alador are left in crippling sadness after Edric's death.]]
* TheChessmaster: Belos proves to be this against Andrias and the Core [[spoiler:in the Act 2 finale; knowing of their arrival and invasion ahead of time, he allows them to take all the witches of the Boiling Isles for experimentation in exchange for one of the Calamity Gems. To show he's not to be underestimated or bluffing, he effortlessly takes control of the Calamity Cannon and uses it to obliterate the Knee, forcing them to relent.]]
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** [[spoiler:Edric dies when Andrias and Darcy destroy the Knee]].
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** [[spoiler:Edric dies and Odalia die when Andrias and Darcy Belos uses the Calamity cannon to destroy the Knee]].Knee.]]
** Several coven heads perish when [[spoiler:Andrias storms the Emperor's castle, with [[VillainsWantMercy Kikimora being crushed under his boot as she begs for mercy]].]]
* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Because of Vee impersonating Luz on Earth, Andrias is completely caught off guard when he sees Luz in the Demon Realm as he begins to invade the Isles.]]
** Several coven heads perish when [[spoiler:Andrias storms the Emperor's castle, with [[VillainsWantMercy Kikimora being crushed under his boot as she begs for mercy]].]]
* DidntSeeThatComing: [[spoiler:Because of Vee impersonating Luz on Earth, Andrias is completely caught off guard when he sees Luz in the Demon Realm as he begins to invade the Isles.]]
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** Luz takes part in "Labyrinth Runners".
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** Luz takes part in the events of "Labyrinth Runners".Runners", during which [[spoiler:Boscha becomes the only Hexside student to be branded by Adrian (and willingly) and her actions lead to Cat being severely injured.]]
** [[spoiler:Andrias and the Core invade the Boiling Isles before they invade Earth; as Belos knew of this beforehand, he abandons the Day of Unity and allows the warlords to capture the witches of the Isles to use as lab rats for learning how their magic works.]]
** [[spoiler:Andrias and the Core invade the Boiling Isles before they invade Earth; as Belos knew of this beforehand, he abandons the Day of Unity and allows the warlords to capture the witches of the Isles to use as lab rats for learning how their magic works.]]
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** [[spoiler:Edric dies when Andrias and Darcy destroy the Knee]].
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Like ''Amphibia'', the story is set in three acts. Act 1 contains the first 20 chapters. Act 2 (currently ongoing) began with Chapter 21 and will end with Chapter 42.
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Like ''Amphibia'', the story is set in three acts. Act 1 contains the first 20 chapters. Act 2 (currently ongoing) began contains 22 Chapters, beginning with Chapter 21 and will end ending with Chapter 42.
42. Act 3 begins with Chapter 43 and is currently ongoing.
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** Subverted in "Chapter 41: Revealing Secrets" when Luz learns that everyone at Hexside knew she was back, but played straighr for laughs when Cat says she didn't know.
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** Subverted in "Chapter 41: Revealing Secrets" when Luz learns that everyone at Hexside knew she was back, but played straighr straight for laughs when Cat says she didn't know.
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** Boscha is more hostile towards Luz and her friends because of Amity hanging out with Luz and Willow, Skara joining the flyer derby team, and Amelia cutting ties with her because she keeps picking on Willow.
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** In Chapter 28: Catching Up", Luz informs Morton that she's back on the Isles [[spoiler:and tells Gwendolyn everything about her being tasked and modified by the Titan to defeat Belos.]].
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** In Chapter "Chapter 28: Catching Up", Luz informs Morton that she's back on the Isles [[spoiler:and tells Gwendolyn everything about her being tasked and modified by the Titan to defeat Belos.]].]].
** Subverted in "Chapter 41: Revealing Secrets" when Luz learns that everyone at Hexside knew she was back, but played straighr for laughs when Cat says she didn't know.
** Subverted in "Chapter 41: Revealing Secrets" when Luz learns that everyone at Hexside knew she was back, but played straighr for laughs when Cat says she didn't know.
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** [[spoiler:For killing Hop Pop, Sasha is rendered blind in one eye by Anne.]]
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** [[spoiler:For killing For [[spoiler:killing Hop Pop, Pop]], Sasha is rendered blind in one eye by Anne.]][[spoiler:Anne]].
** [[spoiler:For selling out her classmates to the Emperor's Coven and getting Cat (who by that point was her OnlyFriend left) injured in the process, Boscha is expelled from Hexside.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Two occur in "Chapter 28: Catching Up". The first to occur is from [[spoiler:Gwendolyn, who accuses Luz of stealing Owlbert and squatting in the Owl House only to see how much Luz misses Eda and how close Owlbert is with her.]] At the same time, [[spoiler:[[WhatTheHellHero Emira lays into Amity for nearly getting herself killed at the Brawl]] and when she goes to see Luz, Amity realizes she's caused Luz to doubt her feelings by [[IgnoredExpert ignoring her warnings]] and apologizes for not backing out.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Two occur in "Chapter 28: Catching Up". The first to occur is from [[spoiler:Gwendolyn, who accuses Luz of stealing Owlbert and squatting in the Owl House only to see how much Luz misses Eda and how close Owlbert is with her.]] At the same time, [[spoiler:[[WhatTheHellHero Emira lays into Amity for nearly getting herself killed at the Brawl]] and when she goes to see Luz, Amity realizes she's caused Luz to doubt her feelings by [[IgnoredExpert ignoring her warnings]] and apologizes for not backing out.]]
** In Chapter 41, Boscha [[spoiler:put the remaining students in danger by helping Graye locate them. She initially doesn't care until Amity points out Cat got seriously hurt when they broke down the door to the Healing homeroom. The moment she sees Cat's unconscious form with a broken arm bending the wrong way, Boscha's overcome with guilt and collapses to her knees begging Cat to wake up.]]
** Two occur in "Chapter 28: Catching Up". The first to occur is from [[spoiler:Gwendolyn, who accuses Luz of stealing Owlbert and squatting in the Owl House only to see how much Luz misses Eda and how close Owlbert is with her.]] At the same time, [[spoiler:[[WhatTheHellHero Emira lays into Amity for nearly getting herself killed at the Brawl]] and when she goes to see Luz, Amity realizes she's caused Luz to doubt her feelings by [[IgnoredExpert ignoring her warnings]] and apologizes for not backing out.]]
** In Chapter 41, Boscha [[spoiler:put the remaining students in danger by helping Graye locate them. She initially doesn't care until Amity points out Cat got seriously hurt when they broke down the door to the Healing homeroom. The moment she sees Cat's unconscious form with a broken arm bending the wrong way, Boscha's overcome with guilt and collapses to her knees begging Cat to wake up.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: Luz's unexpected arrival completely derails Sasha and Grime's plot for Hop Pop, and even leads to [[spoiler:Anne unlocking her Calamity Powers a ''full season'' earlier than in canon due to Sasha's murder attempt at Hop Pop]].
** With Luz and Maddie's help, Marcy drives out the barbari-ants a day before Anne and the Plantars arrive in Newtopia.
** Once Anne ends up telling Marcy all about this when they reunite due to feeling more resentful to Sasha, Marcy ends up confessing to Anne earlier than in canon and on her own terms out of guilt her involvement in intentionally sending her and Sasha to Amphibia due to fearing separation when faced with moving. Her doing so leads to a much better reaction from Anne, with her saying that while it might take some time for her to forgive her, she could never hate Marcy and makes it clear to her how important she is to her.
** As Luz had vanished from the Boiling Isles without a trace, Eda, King and Lilith lost their lives to petrification, while Amity ends up becoming depressed, befriends Hooty and confesses her crush on Luz to Willow. When her parents try to get Willow and Gus expelled, Amity immediately gets Odalia to take it back by threatening to sic Hooty on every abomination she owns and proves it.
** [[spoiler:Luz has been made part-Titan much sooner than in canon]].
** [[spoiler:Hunter's attempt to forcibly recruit the Emerald Entrails into the Emperor's Coven is hindered by Luz's sudden reappearance. His bringing up her bounty is what causes him to confess who he is and when he confronts Darius to free everyone, Luz sends out a strong shockwave that knocks Hunter and Darius off the airship (which gets destroyed) and the kids land in the forest.]]
** Amity got grounded before "Clouds on the Horizon" for standing up to Odalia and by the time it ends, it's the day before the Bonesborough Brawl. After inviting Luz to the event, [[spoiler:Luz figures out Amity has a crush on her and asks her out.]]
*** The Emperor's Coven tryouts aren't mentioned so Alador doesn't assign an abomaton to watch Amity, allowing her to participate in the Brawl and face Warden Wrath in the final round. Luz doesn't compete [[spoiler:but when Wrath nearly kills Amity, she blasts him across town so the referee declares her the winner.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz's deceased father]] wasn't brought up during the Bonesborough Brawl. And since [[spoiler:Luz was unable to try and contact her mother, Vee has been able to continue living on Earth as Luz with Camila none the wiser about her daughter's true whereabouts.]]
** Because of Luz's disappearance, [[spoiler:Hunter was successful at delivering the palismen to Belos.]]
** Losing both of her daughters has led Gwendolyn to [[spoiler:join the rebellion against Belos.]]
** [[spoiler:Marcy is among those that learned that Hop Pop buried the Calamity Box and Anne comes back on her own accord, but doesn't let Hop Pop explain himself.]]
** As the author points out in the comments of chapter 33, Luz's sudden reappearance right after [[spoiler:Willow's flyer derby match leads to Hunter being willing to imprison her and turn her in]]. This in turn ends up [[spoiler:straining Willow's opinion of him and torpedoing any chance at Hunter/Willow being a canon ship in the fic, with Willow being romantically paired with Skara instead.]]
** Since Lilith was petrified and thus, [[spoiler:didn't travel back in time with Luz and break Philip's nose, Belos no longer has the rotting band of wood that makes up the scar on his face. Plus, he found the light glyph and the Collector's mirror on his own, so there's no StableTimeLoop and Luz is pretty much expendable now.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne's issues with Hop Pop are omitted from the trip to the first temple.]]
** During Anne's fight with Valeriana, the latter leaves out her day out with Polly and snoring in favor of bringing up [[spoiler:her nearly killing Sasha. Additionally, nothing keeps Anne from fully charging the second Calamity Gem, so she loses her powers completely.]]
** Due to Sasha and Grime being fugitives among Frog Valley, Sasha doesn't end up participating in the Battle of the Bands with Anne and Marcy with the two performing "No Big Deal" without her.
** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias betrays Marcy soon after letting the Core possess her.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
** With Luz and Maddie's help, Marcy drives out the barbari-ants a day before Anne and the Plantars arrive in Newtopia.
** Once Anne ends up telling Marcy all about this when they reunite due to feeling more resentful to Sasha, Marcy ends up confessing to Anne earlier than in canon and on her own terms out of guilt her involvement in intentionally sending her and Sasha to Amphibia due to fearing separation when faced with moving. Her doing so leads to a much better reaction from Anne, with her saying that while it might take some time for her to forgive her, she could never hate Marcy and makes it clear to her how important she is to her.
** As Luz had vanished from the Boiling Isles without a trace, Eda, King and Lilith lost their lives to petrification, while Amity ends up becoming depressed, befriends Hooty and confesses her crush on Luz to Willow. When her parents try to get Willow and Gus expelled, Amity immediately gets Odalia to take it back by threatening to sic Hooty on every abomination she owns and proves it.
** [[spoiler:Luz has been made part-Titan much sooner than in canon]].
** [[spoiler:Hunter's attempt to forcibly recruit the Emerald Entrails into the Emperor's Coven is hindered by Luz's sudden reappearance. His bringing up her bounty is what causes him to confess who he is and when he confronts Darius to free everyone, Luz sends out a strong shockwave that knocks Hunter and Darius off the airship (which gets destroyed) and the kids land in the forest.]]
** Amity got grounded before "Clouds on the Horizon" for standing up to Odalia and by the time it ends, it's the day before the Bonesborough Brawl. After inviting Luz to the event, [[spoiler:Luz figures out Amity has a crush on her and asks her out.]]
*** The Emperor's Coven tryouts aren't mentioned so Alador doesn't assign an abomaton to watch Amity, allowing her to participate in the Brawl and face Warden Wrath in the final round. Luz doesn't compete [[spoiler:but when Wrath nearly kills Amity, she blasts him across town so the referee declares her the winner.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz's deceased father]] wasn't brought up during the Bonesborough Brawl. And since [[spoiler:Luz was unable to try and contact her mother, Vee has been able to continue living on Earth as Luz with Camila none the wiser about her daughter's true whereabouts.]]
** Because of Luz's disappearance, [[spoiler:Hunter was successful at delivering the palismen to Belos.]]
** Losing both of her daughters has led Gwendolyn to [[spoiler:join the rebellion against Belos.]]
** [[spoiler:Marcy is among those that learned that Hop Pop buried the Calamity Box and Anne comes back on her own accord, but doesn't let Hop Pop explain himself.]]
** As the author points out in the comments of chapter 33, Luz's sudden reappearance right after [[spoiler:Willow's flyer derby match leads to Hunter being willing to imprison her and turn her in]]. This in turn ends up [[spoiler:straining Willow's opinion of him and torpedoing any chance at Hunter/Willow being a canon ship in the fic, with Willow being romantically paired with Skara instead.]]
** Since Lilith was petrified and thus, [[spoiler:didn't travel back in time with Luz and break Philip's nose, Belos no longer has the rotting band of wood that makes up the scar on his face. Plus, he found the light glyph and the Collector's mirror on his own, so there's no StableTimeLoop and Luz is pretty much expendable now.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne's issues with Hop Pop are omitted from the trip to the first temple.]]
** During Anne's fight with Valeriana, the latter leaves out her day out with Polly and snoring in favor of bringing up [[spoiler:her nearly killing Sasha. Additionally, nothing keeps Anne from fully charging the second Calamity Gem, so she loses her powers completely.]]
** Due to Sasha and Grime being fugitives among Frog Valley, Sasha doesn't end up participating in the Battle of the Bands with Anne and Marcy with the two performing "No Big Deal" without her.
** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias betrays Marcy soon after letting the Core possess her.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
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* PointOfDivergence: Luz's unexpected arrival completely derails Sasha and Grime's plot for Hop Pop, and even leads to [[spoiler:Anne unlocking her Calamity Powers a ''full season'' earlier than in canon due to Sasha's murder attempt at Hop Pop]].
** With Luz and Maddie's help, Marcy drives out the barbari-ants a day before Anne and the Plantars arrive in Newtopia.
** Once Anne ends up telling Marcy all about this when they reunite due to feeling more resentful to Sasha, Marcy ends up confessing to Anne earlier than in canon and on her own terms out of guilt her involvement in intentionally sending her and Sasha to Amphibia due to fearing separation when faced with moving. Her doing so leads to a much better reaction from Anne, with her saying that while it might take some time for her to forgive her, she could never hate Marcy and makes it clear to her how important she is to her.
** As Luz had vanished from the Boiling Isles without a trace, Eda, King and Lilith lost their lives to petrification, while Amity ends up becoming depressed, befriends Hooty and confesses her crush on Luz to Willow. When her parents try to get Willow and Gus expelled, Amity immediately gets Odalia to take it back by threatening to sic Hooty on every abomination she owns and proves it.
** [[spoiler:Luz has been made part-Titan much sooner than in canon]].
** [[spoiler:Hunter's attempt to forcibly recruit the Emerald Entrails into the Emperor's Coven is hindered by Luz's sudden reappearance. His bringing up her bounty is what causes him to confess who he is and when he confronts Darius to free everyone, Luz sends out a strong shockwave that knocks Hunter and Darius off the airship (which gets destroyed) and the kids land in the forest.]]
** Amity got grounded before "Clouds on the Horizon" for standing up to Odalia and by the time it ends, it's the day before the Bonesborough Brawl. After inviting Luz to the event, [[spoiler:Luz figures out Amity has a crush on her and asks her out.]]
*** The Emperor's Coven tryouts aren't mentioned so Alador doesn't assign an abomaton to watch Amity, allowing her to participate in the Brawl and face Warden Wrath in the final round. Luz doesn't compete [[spoiler:but when Wrath nearly kills Amity, she blasts him across town so the referee declares her the winner.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz's deceased father]] wasn't brought up during the Bonesborough Brawl. And since [[spoiler:Luz was unable to try and contact her mother, Vee has been able to continue living on Earth as Luz with Camila none the wiser about her daughter's true whereabouts.]]
** Because of Luz's disappearance, [[spoiler:Hunter was successful at delivering the palismen to Belos.]]
** Losing both of her daughters has led Gwendolyn to [[spoiler:join the rebellion against Belos.]]
** [[spoiler:Marcy is among those that learned that Hop Pop buried the Calamity Box and Anne comes back on her own accord, but doesn't let Hop Pop explain himself.]]
** As the author points out in the comments of chapter 33, Luz's sudden reappearance right after [[spoiler:Willow's flyer derby match leads to Hunter being willing to imprison her and turn her in]]. This in turn ends up [[spoiler:straining Willow's opinion of him and torpedoing any chance at Hunter/Willow being a canon ship in the fic, with Willow being romantically paired with Skara instead.]]
** Since Lilith was petrified and thus, [[spoiler:didn't travel back in time with Luz and break Philip's nose, Belos no longer has the rotting band of wood that makes up the scar on his face. Plus, he found the light glyph and the Collector's mirror on his own, so there's no StableTimeLoop and Luz is pretty much expendable now.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne's issues with Hop Pop are omitted from the trip to the first temple.]]
** During Anne's fight with Valeriana, the latter leaves out her day out with Polly and snoring in favor of bringing up [[spoiler:her nearly killing Sasha. Additionally, nothing keeps Anne from fully charging the second Calamity Gem, so she loses her powers completely.]]
** Due to Sasha and Grime being fugitives among Frog Valley, Sasha doesn't end up participating in the Battle of the Bands with Anne and Marcy with the two performing "No Big Deal" without her.
** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias betrays Marcy soon after letting the Core possess her.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
** Luz takes part in "Labyrinth Runners".
** With Luz and Maddie's help, Marcy drives out the barbari-ants a day before Anne and the Plantars arrive in Newtopia.
** Once Anne ends up telling Marcy all about this when they reunite due to feeling more resentful to Sasha, Marcy ends up confessing to Anne earlier than in canon and on her own terms out of guilt her involvement in intentionally sending her and Sasha to Amphibia due to fearing separation when faced with moving. Her doing so leads to a much better reaction from Anne, with her saying that while it might take some time for her to forgive her, she could never hate Marcy and makes it clear to her how important she is to her.
** As Luz had vanished from the Boiling Isles without a trace, Eda, King and Lilith lost their lives to petrification, while Amity ends up becoming depressed, befriends Hooty and confesses her crush on Luz to Willow. When her parents try to get Willow and Gus expelled, Amity immediately gets Odalia to take it back by threatening to sic Hooty on every abomination she owns and proves it.
** [[spoiler:Luz has been made part-Titan much sooner than in canon]].
** [[spoiler:Hunter's attempt to forcibly recruit the Emerald Entrails into the Emperor's Coven is hindered by Luz's sudden reappearance. His bringing up her bounty is what causes him to confess who he is and when he confronts Darius to free everyone, Luz sends out a strong shockwave that knocks Hunter and Darius off the airship (which gets destroyed) and the kids land in the forest.]]
** Amity got grounded before "Clouds on the Horizon" for standing up to Odalia and by the time it ends, it's the day before the Bonesborough Brawl. After inviting Luz to the event, [[spoiler:Luz figures out Amity has a crush on her and asks her out.]]
*** The Emperor's Coven tryouts aren't mentioned so Alador doesn't assign an abomaton to watch Amity, allowing her to participate in the Brawl and face Warden Wrath in the final round. Luz doesn't compete [[spoiler:but when Wrath nearly kills Amity, she blasts him across town so the referee declares her the winner.]]
** [[spoiler:Luz's deceased father]] wasn't brought up during the Bonesborough Brawl. And since [[spoiler:Luz was unable to try and contact her mother, Vee has been able to continue living on Earth as Luz with Camila none the wiser about her daughter's true whereabouts.]]
** Because of Luz's disappearance, [[spoiler:Hunter was successful at delivering the palismen to Belos.]]
** Losing both of her daughters has led Gwendolyn to [[spoiler:join the rebellion against Belos.]]
** [[spoiler:Marcy is among those that learned that Hop Pop buried the Calamity Box and Anne comes back on her own accord, but doesn't let Hop Pop explain himself.]]
** As the author points out in the comments of chapter 33, Luz's sudden reappearance right after [[spoiler:Willow's flyer derby match leads to Hunter being willing to imprison her and turn her in]]. This in turn ends up [[spoiler:straining Willow's opinion of him and torpedoing any chance at Hunter/Willow being a canon ship in the fic, with Willow being romantically paired with Skara instead.]]
** Since Lilith was petrified and thus, [[spoiler:didn't travel back in time with Luz and break Philip's nose, Belos no longer has the rotting band of wood that makes up the scar on his face. Plus, he found the light glyph and the Collector's mirror on his own, so there's no StableTimeLoop and Luz is pretty much expendable now.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne's issues with Hop Pop are omitted from the trip to the first temple.]]
** During Anne's fight with Valeriana, the latter leaves out her day out with Polly and snoring in favor of bringing up [[spoiler:her nearly killing Sasha. Additionally, nothing keeps Anne from fully charging the second Calamity Gem, so she loses her powers completely.]]
** Due to Sasha and Grime being fugitives among Frog Valley, Sasha doesn't end up participating in the Battle of the Bands with Anne and Marcy with the two performing "No Big Deal" without her.
** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias betrays Marcy soon after letting the Core possess her.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
** Luz takes part in "Labyrinth Runners".
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: While sulking after [[spoiler:her talk with Gwendolyn]], Luz accidentaly creates a glyph that absorbs light which leaves her room in total darkness.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: While sulking after [[spoiler:her talk with Gwendolyn]], Luz accidentaly accidentally creates a glyph that absorbs light which leaves her room in total darkness.
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* AdaptationalExplanation: Ad it turns out, [[spoiler:Masha was sent to Reality Check Camp because their parents didn't take their coming out well, wanting them to "learn traditional gender roles" there.]]
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* AdaptationalExplanation: Ad As it turns out, [[spoiler:Masha was sent to Reality Check Camp because their parents didn't take their coming out well, wanting them to "learn traditional gender roles" there.]]
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* AdaptationalExplanation: Ad it turns out, [[spoiler:Masha was sent to Reality Check Camp because their parents didn't take their coming out well, wanting them to "learn traditional gender roles" there.]]
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** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias seems to betray Marcy soon after.]]
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** [[spoiler:Unable to put together the Toad rebellion, Grime turns himself in to Newtopian authorities so Sasha won't be punished; the news causes her to re-declare her hatred for the Plantars and run through a portal to Earth Andrias opens, forcing Anne to follow her. The Plantars leave Newtopia Castle after saying goodbye to Anne, and Andrias seems to betray betrays Marcy soon after.after letting the Core possess her.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
** Marcy is unable to [[spoiler:give Anne her journal, so it ends up in Darcy's clutches and they learn about Luz coming from the Boiling Isles as a result.]]
** [[spoiler:Vee finds out that Masha knew the truth about her from their first day at reality check camp.]]
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** Chapter 40 has a bunch for a VignetteEpisode: [[spoiler:Sasha has returned to her father's estate, Marcy has been possessed by the Core, the Plantars return to Wartwood where Sprig figures out Andrias has malicious intentions while Hop Pop is left confused about what to do, Darcy plans on scoping out the Boiling Isles before invading Earth due to learning where Luz originated from before coming to Amphibia, and Vee discovers that Masha (who comes out to them), knows she's not Luz and agrees to keep her secret.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** Willow and Amity suspect something happened to Luz after the Clawthornes are petrified and she ''doesn't'' show up to save them.
** Luz and Amity ''[[ClusterFBomb swearing]]'' is enough to raise some concern.
** Willow and Amity suspect something happened to Luz after the Clawthornes are petrified and she ''doesn't'' show up to save them.
** Luz and Amity ''[[ClusterFBomb swearing]]'' is enough to raise some concern.
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* SeriousBusiness:
** Willow and Amity suspect something happened to Luz after the Clawthornes are petrified and she ''doesn't'' show up to save them.
** Luz and Amity ''[[ClusterFBomb swearing]]'' is enough to raise some concern.
** Willow and Amity suspect something happened to Luz after the Clawthornes are petrified and she ''doesn't'' show up to save them.
** Luz and Amity ''[[ClusterFBomb swearing]]'' is enough to raise some concern.
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Like ''Amphibia'', the story is set in three acts. Act 1 contains the first 20 chapter. Act 2 (currently ongoing) began with Chapter 21 and will end with Chapter 42.
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Like ''Amphibia'', the story is set in three acts. Act 1 contains the first 20 chapter.chapters. Act 2 (currently ongoing) began with Chapter 21 and will end with Chapter 42.
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* BirthdayEpisode: "Chapter 10: Gotcha" is set on King Andrias' birthday.
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* BirthdayEpisode: BirthdayEpisode:
** "Chapter 10: Gotcha" is set on King Andrias'birthday.birthday.
** PlayedWith in "Chapter 39: Gray", which is set on Luz's birthday. [[spoiler:However, Luz is unaware of this since she lost track of time for Earth since Anne has her phone, and Vee (who's on Earth impersonating her) celebrates it with her friends from Reality Check Camp.]]
** "Chapter 10: Gotcha" is set on King Andrias'
** PlayedWith in "Chapter 39: Gray", which is set on Luz's birthday. [[spoiler:However, Luz is unaware of this since she lost track of time for Earth since Anne has her phone, and Vee (who's on Earth impersonating her) celebrates it with her friends from Reality Check Camp.]]
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* CallBack: In Chapter 4, Luz calls for a high-five with Sprig, who uses his tounge which causes Luz to say "gross". This was Anne's reaction back in "[[Recap/AmphibiaS1E01AnneOrBeast Anne or Beast?]]".
** In "Ghosts (Part 1)" Luz gets sick from eating ice cream cake. She revealed she was lactose-intolerant in "[[Recap/TheOwlHouseS1E16EnchantingGromFright Enchanting Grom Fright]]". She later mentions facing Grometheus the Fear Bringer with Amity.
** In "Ghosts (Part 1)" Luz gets sick from eating ice cream cake. She revealed she was lactose-intolerant in "[[Recap/TheOwlHouseS1E16EnchantingGromFright Enchanting Grom Fright]]". She later mentions facing Grometheus the Fear Bringer with Amity.
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* CallBack: In Chapter 4, Luz calls for a high-five with Sprig, who uses his tounge which causes Luz to say "gross". This was Anne's reaction back in "[[Recap/AmphibiaS1E01AnneOrBeast Anne [[Recap/AmphibiaS1E01AnneOrBeast "Anne or Beast?]]".
Beast?"]].
** In "Ghosts (Part 1)" Luz gets sick from eating ice cream cake. She revealed she was lactose-intolerant in"[[Recap/TheOwlHouseS1E16EnchantingGromFright Enchanting [[Recap/TheOwlHouseS1E16EnchantingGromFright "Enchanting Grom Fright]]".Fright"]]. She later mentions facing Grometheus the Fear Bringer with Amity.
** In "Ghosts (Part 1)" Luz gets sick from eating ice cream cake. She revealed she was lactose-intolerant in
* PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure: Happens back-to-back in Chapters 38 and 39, as [[spoiler:Sasha stops speaking to Anne after getting back to Earth because she's angry that Grime turned himself in to protect her. At the same time, Anne believes she's had one with Luz who she thinks is pretending not to know her so she can forget about the Boiling Isles, when in reality it's someone else entirely.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:Since Anne is unaware Vee has replaced Luz on Earth, the basilisk is terrified when she calls and mentions Belos, warning her to never speak to her again. With all that Anne suffered through on her first day back, this convinces her that 'Luz' is trying to forget about her, robbing her of any hope that she could get back to Amphibia and still had friends who could help her, putting Anne at great risk of committing SelfHarm.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:Since Anne is unaware Vee has replaced Luz on Earth, the basilisk is terrified when she Anne calls and mentions Belos, warning her to never speak to her again. With all that Anne suffered through on her first day two days back, this convinces her that 'Luz' is trying to forget about her, robbing her of any hope that she could get back to Amphibia and still had friends who could help her, putting her. This also puts Anne at great risk of committing SelfHarm.]]
