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* Asspull: The original plan involved Luther and Ariel allying, Ariel killing Luka, Viss stuffing radioactive material down Ariel's throat, and Reyna, Kaya, Viss, and Des allying.
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** Amaris does not. She has family who has affection her profoundly, though [[spoiler: it isn't in a positive way]]. It also doesn't help that [[spoiler: she no longer has a mother and she has a sister who is terrified to death of her]].
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** Amaris does not. She has family who has affection affected her profoundly, though [[spoiler: it isn't in a positive way]]. It also doesn't help that [[spoiler: she no longer has a mother and she has a sister who is terrified to death of her]].
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** Also [[spoiler: Carmen's]] reaction when she realises [[spoiler: she's dying of radiation poisoning]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Ariel]].
* DrugsAreGood: Or Ariel seems to think so, anyway.
** Ariel's love for drugs means he was semi conscious when [[spoiler: Luther drugged him on the train]].
** His attempt to [[spoiler: overdose]] also fails because of this.
* DrugsAreGood: Or Ariel seems to think so, anyway.
** Ariel's love for drugs means he was semi conscious when [[spoiler: Luther drugged him on the train]].
** His attempt to [[spoiler: overdose]] also fails because of this.
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* DysfunctionJunction: Everyone.
** Special shout out goes to Ariel, Luther, Amaris, Fenris and Caddis.
** Special shout out goes to Ariel, Luther, Amaris, Fenris and Caddis.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes:
** Luther averts this comfortably.
** Amaris does not. She has family who has affection her profoundly, though [[spoiler: it isn't in a positive way]]. It also doesn't help that [[spoiler: she no longer has a mother and she has a sister who is terrified to death of her]].
** Luther averts this comfortably.
** Amaris does not. She has family who has affection her profoundly, though [[spoiler: it isn't in a positive way]]. It also doesn't help that [[spoiler: she no longer has a mother and she has a sister who is terrified to death of her]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Luka]] when he kills [[spoiler: Amaris and Caddis]].
[[spoiler: Ariel]] when he [[spoiler: destroys the Capitol with a nuclear bomb]].
[[spoiler: Ariel]] when he [[spoiler: destroys the Capitol with a nuclear bomb]].
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* OhCrap: A few moments.
** Whenever [[spoiler: Luther]] gets hold of Ariel this comes to mind.
** When [[spoiler: Ariel]] was [[spoiler: thrown into a vat of toxic waste]] we also think this.
** Lets not mention Viss' reaction when [[spoiler: Luka was attacked and almost killed by mutts not long before she woke up]].
** And the tense moments before [[spoiler: the Careers all turned on each other]].
** Whenever [[spoiler: Luther]] gets hold of Ariel this comes to mind.
** When [[spoiler: Ariel]] was [[spoiler: thrown into a vat of toxic waste]] we also think this.
** Lets not mention Viss' reaction when [[spoiler: Luka was attacked and almost killed by mutts not long before she woke up]].
** And the tense moments before [[spoiler: the Careers all turned on each other]].
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* ParentalNeglect: Ariel. We find out his parents don't love each other and had him for practical purposes. They don't show much affection to him. Throughout the story, we see they have a big effect on making him who he is today.
** They also [[spoiler: don't seem to care much about the immense pain and trauma their son goes through in the Games, and seem to hint that they think it would be better if he died.]]
** They also [[spoiler: don't seem to care much about the immense pain and trauma their son goes through in the Games, and seem to hint that they think it would be better if he died.]]
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* UnderestimatingBadassery:
** Luka is underestimated, and those who underestimate him [[spoiler: often end up dying]].
** Des is also underestimated, but she [[spoiler: leads the tots, takes charge of boys who are much older than her]] and [[spoiler: comes out of the arena alive]].
** Luka is underestimated, and those who underestimate him [[spoiler: often end up dying]].
** Des is also underestimated, but she [[spoiler: leads the tots, takes charge of boys who are much older than her]] and [[spoiler: comes out of the arena alive]].
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* Revenge: [[spoiler: Ariel]] gets a morsel of this by finally capturing [[spoiler: Luther]]. However, she [[spoiler: makes sure to get her own revenge, and it's ten times worse]].
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* Revenge: {{Revenge}}: [[spoiler: Ariel]] gets a morsel of this by finally capturing [[spoiler: Luther]]. However, she [[spoiler: makes sure to get her own revenge, and it's ten times worse]].
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** And lest we forget [[spoiler: Lillen]] who died in the name of [[spoiler: the rebellion]].
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* CompleteMonster: Luther.
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* DoesNotLikeMen: Arguably Luther, considering she [[spoiler: is more inclined to torture them than she is with women]].
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** [[spoiler: Felicity] also dies whilst trying to save [[spoiler: Des]].
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* CatScare: Of all people it is [[spoiler: Luther]] who gets the story's biggest cat scare. She jumps because of [[spoiler: a toaster. A freaking toaster.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Ariel]], though not really.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Ariel]], though not really.
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* InspirationalMartyr: [[spoiler: Lillen]] who dies [[spoiler: for the rebels]].
** Also, [[spoiler: Reyna]] is this for the Capitol. Kind of.
** Also, [[spoiler: Reyna]] is this for the Capitol. Kind of.
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* ArtisticLicenseNuclearPower: Foaly knows her nuclear, but there are examples of her purposely taking artistic liberties for varying reasons.
** Foaly avoids particular symptoms of radiation sickness in order to not nauseate her readers.
** [[spoiler: Foaly acknowledged that Luther escaping Amaris' wrath via nuclear reactor is highly unlikely to work]].
** Foaly avoids particular symptoms of radiation sickness in order to not nauseate her readers.
** [[spoiler: Foaly acknowledged that Luther escaping Amaris' wrath via nuclear reactor is highly unlikely to work]].
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler: Lillen]].
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* NiceGuy: Namely Ted, but there are a few others.
** Elfor.
** Jukai.
** Jaiven.
** Ravy.
** Elfor.
** Jukai.
** Jaiven.
** Ravy.
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* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler: Tibbi thinks she's the person who is going to save Panem from its brutal government, but she quickly becomes a brutal leader in and of herself]].
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** Debatably Deyna.
* ForTheLulz: Deyna does a lot of things just because it amuses him and he doesn't care much for the consequences.
* ForTheLulz: Deyna does a lot of things just because it amuses him and he doesn't care much for the consequences.
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* JerkassWoobie: Despite being a jerk, everybody tended to like Woohyun and felt bad for him when [[spoiler: inevitably bad things happened]].
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* AnAxeToGrind: Kaya's main weapon is an axe, which makes sense considering she's from District 7.
* AssholeVictim: Although he was well loved by readers, [[spoiler: Woohyun was an asshole and a victim. Minutes after he was mildly transphobic to Amelia he met a grisly end thanks to his District partner.]]
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* AnAxeToGrind: Kaya's main weapon is an axe, which makes sense considering she's from District 7.
* AssholeVictim: Although he was well loved by readers, [[spoiler: Woohyun was an asshole and a victim. Minutes after he was mildly transphobic to Amelia he met a grisly end thanks to his District partner.]]
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Ariel]], though not really.
* AnAxeToGrind: Kaya's main weapon is an axe, which makes sense considering she's from District 7.
* AssholeVictim: Although he was well loved by readers, [[spoiler: Woohyun was an asshole and a victim. Minutes after he was mildly transphobic to Amelia he met a grisly end thanks to his District partner.]]
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* NobleTopEnforcer: Despite being [[spoiler: Luther's henchman]] and spending a segment of the story as a [[spoiler: secondary antagonist]], Kaya is only behaving the way she does to survive. As soon as [[spoiler: Luther]] shows her true colors she [[spoiler: betrays her and runs away]].
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* BastardUnderstudy: [[spoiler: Kaya]] is this to [[spoiler: Luther]].
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* TheSnarkKnight: Of all the characters, Kaya wins this.
** Occasionally Amelia will gallantly ride in and claim this.
** Foaly being great with snarky dialogue and humor, expect most of the characters to have their moments.
** Occasionally Amelia will gallantly ride in and claim this.
** Foaly being great with snarky dialogue and humor, expect most of the characters to have their moments.
