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** [[spoiler: Felicity] also dies whilst trying to save [[spoiler: Des]].
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Despite [[spoiler: becoming one of the main protagonists and surviving the story]]. Ariel is a pretty awful person. He does all sorts of screwed up things such as [[spoiler: killing Carmen with little remorse, torturing Luther and purposely blowing up the Capitol and thus killing thousands of people.]] He's far from squeaky clean.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Despite [[spoiler: becoming one of the main protagonists and surviving the story]]. Ariel is a pretty awful person. He does all sorts of screwed up things such as [[spoiler: killing Carmen with little remorse, torturing Luther and purposely blowing up the Capitol and thus killing thousands of people.]] He's far from squeaky clean.
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* TooKinkyToTorture: [[WordOfGod Foaly]] stated this was purposely subverted; Ariel is a pretty kinky person who you think wouldn't be able to be tortured or broken. [[Spoiler: He is.]]
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* TooKinkyToTorture: [[WordOfGod Foaly]] stated this was purposely subverted; Ariel is a pretty kinky person who you think wouldn't be able to be tortured or broken. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: He is.]]
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* BeserkButton: For reasons related to his past, Ariel really doesn't like being called [[spoiler: a bitch]].
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* BreakTheHaughty: Ariel's a little bit too big for his boots. Naturally, [[spoiler: Luther]] kicks him down a notch.
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* CurbstompBattle: [[spoiler: Ariel and Luther's vendetta leads to both of them wanting to crush each other.]]
* DisproportionateRetribution: [[spoiler: Luther and Ariel]], when you think they can't be any worse to each other they always find a way to [[spoiler: do something awful to each other]]. However, [[spoiler: Luther]] definitely takes it one-million steps too far.
* ItsPersonal: [[spoiler: Ariel and Luther]] in a nutshell.
* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler: Ariel after he got pushed into a vat of toxic waste.]]
** [[spoiler: Because there was no body to find; he survived the ordeal.]]
** [[spoiler: Because there was no body to find; he survived the ordeal.]]
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* RaisedByWolves: Fenris was litterally raised by wolves, out in the forests of District 10. He was a feral child that was only recently brought into society, and he definitely acts like it.
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* Revenge: [[spoiler: Ariel]] gets a morsel of this by finally capturing [[spoiler: Luther]]. However, she [[spoiler: makes sure to get her own revenge, and it's ten times worse]].
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* ToThePain: Torturing is Luther's hobby, and her favourite subject is [[spoiler: Ariel]].
** Deyna is also reported to be quite good at "interrogation."
** Deyna is also reported to be quite good at "interrogation."
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Ariel, who tries to blow up the whole arena out of desperation]]. Oh, [[spoiler: and he also ends up destroying the whole Capitol]].
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*BlackHumor: A Foaly speciality, so expect to see a little in everyone.
** Luther is the character who radiates this most by far, though.
** Deyna is a very close second.
** Luther is the character who radiates this most by far, though.
** Deyna is a very close second.
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* TortureTechnician: As [[spoiler: Ariel]] finds out, torture is Luther's speciality.
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* GoodIsNotDumb: Luka is often underestimated because of his sweet nature. This doesn't end well for those who underestimate him, especially [[spoiler: Caddis and Amaris]].
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* HatesBeingAlone: Definitely Luka.
** Not so much Amelia, but when she's forcefully separated from [[spoiler: Ariel]] it's not good for her thoughts process, leading to her having an [[spoiler: existential and moral crisis and having a lot of self-doubt and worry]].
** Not so much Amelia, but when she's forcefully separated from [[spoiler: Ariel]] it's not good for her thoughts process, leading to her having an [[spoiler: existential and moral crisis and having a lot of self-doubt and worry]].
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* RedHeadedHero:
** Luka
** Kaya
** Luka
** Kaya
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* Daikaiju: [[spoiler: The Thing]], kind of.
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* Kaiju: [[spoiler: The Thing]], kind of.
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** Merona and Amaris, though [[spoiler: they turn on each other very easily.]]
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** Is there any point putting a spoiler? Ah, well... [[spoiler:Luther]].Luther]].
** Also, [[spoiler: the Capitol gets destroyed, and with it the President's grip on Panem.]]
** Is there any point putting a spoiler? Ah, well... [[spoiler:
** Also, [[spoiler: the Capitol gets destroyed, and with it the President's grip on Panem.]]
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* FirstLawOfResurrection: The fic both successfully subverts this fic while following it quite well. While Foaly does [[spoiler: Show that Ariel is not dead]], she also admitted that she [[spoiler: wanted to bring Luther back]], but didn't for the sake of plausibility.
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* FirstLawOfResurrection: The fic both successfully subverts this fic trope while following it quite well. While Foaly does [[spoiler: Show that Ariel is not dead]], she also admitted that she [[spoiler: wanted to bring Luther back]], but didn't for the sake of plausibility.
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* CoolStarship: [[spoiler: Lazarus]], kind of.
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* NeckSnap: How poor [[spoiler: Jaiven]] died.
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* MortalWoundReveal: When [[spoiler: Luther and Fenris]] attack the [[spoiler: Kaya, Ariel, Viss and Luka alliance]] you think it's bad enough when [[spoiler: Ariel is kidnapped and Fenris dies]] - but it's not. Cue the reveal that [[spoiler: Kaya] is [[spoiler: very, very injured]].
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* MortalWoundReveal: When [[spoiler: Luther and Fenris]] attack the [[spoiler: Kaya, Ariel, Viss and Luka alliance]] you think it's bad enough when [[spoiler: Ariel is kidnapped and Fenris dies]] - but it's not. Cue the reveal that [[spoiler: Kaya] Kaya]] is [[spoiler: very, very injured]].
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* Transsexual: Amelia is a trans woman.
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* Transsexual: Amelia is a trans woman.
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* BitchInSheep'sClothing: Luther is this to [[spoiler: Luka]]. Naturally, he falls for this, though [[spoiler: Viss]] does not.
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* BitchInSheep'sClothing: BitchInSheepsClothing: Luther is this to [[spoiler: Luka]]. Naturally, he falls for this, though [[spoiler: Viss]] does not.
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* BitchInSheep'sClothing: Luther is this to [[spoiler: Luka]]. Naturally, he falls for this, though [[spoiler: Viss]] does not.
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* MortalWoundReveal: When [[spoiler: Luther and Fenris]] attack the [[spoiler: Kaya, Ariel, Viss and Luka alliance]] you think it's bad enough when [[spoiler: Ariel is kidnapped and Fenris dies]] - but it's not. Cue the reveal that [[spoiler: Kaya] is [[spoiler: very, very injured]].
* MultipleGunShotDeath: It takes this to take down [[spoiler: Amaris and Fenris.]] They're that badass.
* MultipleGunShotDeath: It takes this to take down [[spoiler: Amaris and Fenris.]] They're that badass.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic:
** This sentiment is expressed by Fife in the story.
** Foaly subverts this, but kind of doesn't. When [[spoiler: the Capitol was nuked]] it was the most horrifying moment of the story and you feel the pain of so many characters, it's also a big plot shaker. Despite this, for many readers there are other moments which are more tear-worthy.
** This sentiment is expressed by Fife in the story.
** Foaly subverts this, but kind of doesn't. When [[spoiler: the Capitol was nuked]] it was the most horrifying moment of the story and you feel the pain of so many characters, it's also a big plot shaker. Despite this, for many readers there are other moments which are more tear-worthy.
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* IWillOnlySlowYouDown: [[spoiler: Ted has to tell Des and Atlas this.]]
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* ILetGwenStacyDie: This is [[spoiler: Amelia's]] reaction when she watches [[spoiler: Ariel]] get thrown into a vat of toxic waste. [[spoiler: Thankfully, he didn't actually die]].
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* Kaiju: [[spoiler: The Thing]], kind of.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Ted]] lets himself meet a nasty end to save [[spoiler: Atlas and Des from Amaris.]] Later, [[spoiler: Atlas]] also fights to his death for [[spoiler: Des]].
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**KillTheCutie: [[Spoiler: Elfor]].
** [[Spoiler: Felicity]].
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** [[Spoiler: Felicity]].
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Felicity]].
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* HaveANiceDeath: [[spoiler: Luther's]] attitude to [[spoiler: Felicity]] before she [[spoiler: kills her]].
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Pretty much [[spoiler: Luther's]] motivation for killing [[spoiler: Felicity]].
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** [[Spoiler: Elfor.]]
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** [[Spoiler: Castalia.]]
