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* Sadist: An ongoing debate in “The Adventures Of The Baroque Works Trio” is whether or not Petrea is a sadist despite turning over a new leaf. It is implied that yes, she is, although only when she is pushed to a certain point, like when General Maji destroyed her dress back during the adventures on Mecha Island. It doesn’t help that she has Amethyst to encourage her.

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* Sadist: {{Sadist}}: An ongoing debate in “The Adventures Of The Baroque Works Trio” is whether or not Petrea is a sadist despite turning over a new leaf. It is implied that yes, she is, although only when she is pushed to a certain point, like when General Maji destroyed her dress back during the adventures on Mecha Island. It doesn’t help that she has Amethyst to encourage her.

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** Genevieve's paintings and the pictures Connie gives her as reference are important to gain the crew's trust after they [[spoiler: lose their memories]]

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** Genevieve's paintings and the pictures Connie gives her as reference are important to gain the crew's trust after they [[spoiler: lose their memories]]memories.]]



** The Belly Bag Badge
** The Rifting Stone
** The Black Den-Den Mushi

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** The Belly Bag Badge
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** The Black Den-Den MushiMushi.
** Peridot’s scrap pile.


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** Pearl uses the Talisman of Cloth from “The Bubbles And The Dinner” multiple times in the Grand Line, most notably for Steven Tag and to replace Petrea’s dress.

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* LoanShark: Nami to anyone who asks for more money than they should be allotted (outside of Steven as a birthday present and for Garnet for a one time minor loan to buy a newspaper). This is seen when she discovers just how much money the Baroque Works Trio have sold the [[spoiler: Golden Crown]] for:
--> '''Nami''': “For your crimes against common sense and monetary value, you had better get a move on. I may get happy and joke with you as we continue on after we save Robin and Steven, but know this: I NEVER forget matters involving money. I don't care if you live in Beach City or Water Seven; I expect results...in berries, not whatever currency you get paid in back there!”



* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: Zoro is too pleased with his ability to cut steel to acknowledge the fact that he is probably more injured than Pearl has ever seen human before.
--> '''Nami''': “Zoro! What happened to you?!”
--> '''Pearl''': “He lost liters upon liters of blood! He suffered multiple stab wounds and refuses to lie down in peace!"
--> '''Roronoa Zoro''': "I cut steel!"
--> '''Pearl''': "That doesn't change the fact you need proper medical attention!”



* NoSenseOfDirection: Zoro’s famous lack of direction transcends dimensions in this story.
--> '''Priyanka Maheswaran''': “My husband found this one wandering the streets near our neighborhood around four in the morning as he was heading home from his shift. He figured that it was safer to bring him with us than let him wander around aimlessly. I was sure he was drunk...it turns out he was just lost."
--> '''Usopp''': "His lack of direction is legendary. It's kind of hilarious.”
*NotSoAboveItAll: Despite claiming multiple times that he would not sing or engage in music, Zoro is seen to be humming the tune of “If You Wish To Be Our Shipwright” to himself. He immediately stops when he realizes he is doing it for fear of Steven’s reaction.
--> '''Roronoa Zoro''': “…damn it. I have that stupid song stuck in my head. I can't let the kid know or I'll never hear the end of it.”



*Sadist: An ongoing debate in “The Adventures Of The Baroque Works Trio” is whether or not Petrea is a sadist despite turning over a new leaf. It is implied that yes, she is, although only when she is pushed to a certain point, like when General Maji destroyed her dress back during the adventures on Mecha Island. It doesn’t help that she has Amethyst to encourage her.
--> '''Petrea''': “Would you like to join me in beating him to the punch?”
--> '''Amethyst''': “Girl, I’d join you in any beating you want to give this creep! Let’s do this!”
--> '''Petrea''': “Oh, let’s do. Kyahahaha!”



* ThemeTuneCameo: "We Are The Crystal Gems" is performed numerous times in the story. Steven sings the pilot version to the "Mr. 5 Pair" when he first meets them in "The Surprise Guest Of The 'Mr. 5 Pair," Genevieve tries to remember the words of it after painting Steven's snowman in "The Would-Be King," the Straw Hats used it to tell Crocodile who they were in "The Gauntlets In The Sand," and (most faithfully to the original opening) the Gems sing it as their entrance song for the Davy Back Fight (with Peridot joining in) in "The Straw Hat Reserve Team." That's not the only theme song that is spotlighted...[[spoiler: the 4kids Rap is performed in its entirety with extra verses to include Robin, the Baroque Works trio, Smoker, and Tashigi.]]

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* ThemeTuneCameo: "We Are The Crystal Gems" is performed numerous times in the story. Steven sings the pilot version to the "Mr. 5 Pair" when he first meets them in "The Surprise Guest Of The 'Mr. 5 Pair," Genevieve tries to remember the words of it after painting Steven's snowman in "The Would-Be King," the Straw Hats used it to tell Crocodile who they were in "The Gauntlets In The Sand," Sand,” and (most faithfully to the original opening) the Gems sing it as their entrance song for the Davy Back Fight (with Peridot joining in) in "The Straw Hat Reserve Team." That's not the only theme song that is spotlighted...[[spoiler: the 4kids Rap is performed in its entirety with extra verses to include Robin, the Baroque Works trio, Smoker, and Tashigi.]]


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VitriolicBestBuds: Zoro/ Sanji and Pearl/Amethyst, of course.

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* BigBrotherMentor: Luffy to Steven, Zoro for both Connie and, to an extent, Pearl, and Nico Robin for [[spoiler: Peridot.]]



** Along those same lines, Robin holds onto the hope that she can convince Spandam to release Steven since he should technically be free as per the terms of their arrangement. Needless to say, Steven is still captured and brought to Eneis Lobby with her.

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** Along those same lines, Robin holds onto the hope that she can convince Spandam to release Steven since he should technically be free as per the terms of their arrangement. Needless to say, Steven is still captured and brought to Eneis Enies Lobby with her.her.
* HotWitch: What Eirney Hecca describes herself as instead of a “crone”...despite not looking remotely like a crone.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Peridot, of course. She manages to take scrap and discarded mechanical parts and turns them into [[spoiler: a giant piloted robot and a device that can amplify the range of a Den Den Mushi.]]

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* CallBack: Peridot finally answers the question Garnet posed to her in “The Dream Island” during her verbal threatening of [[spoiler: Spandam]] in “The Call On The Private Line.” The consequences of this action have yet to fully be revealed.



** Peridot finally answers the question Garnet posed to her in “The Dream Island” during her verbal threatening of [[spoiler: Spandam]] in “The Call On The Private Line.”
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* SuperCellReception: Peridot created a device using scrap salvaged during the Aqua Laguna to amplify a Den Den Mushi’s reception to reach Spandam’s private line. Thanks to a boosted charge from Nami’s “Thunder Tempo,” she claims that she was able to broadcast their conversation to every Den Den Mushi in the world (or at least the Grand Line) since she was not sure which one was his. Spandam, although amazed that she was able to call him, believes the Gem is bluffing. [[spoiler: She isn’t. In fact, their conversation is listened to by at least Commodore Smoker and the Gorosei.]]
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* CommutingOnABus: [[spoiler: Smoker and Tashigi show up for the first time after “The Return To The Status-Quo” in “The Call On The Private Line” to set up their eventual return to the story in a quest to arrest Luffy for child endangerment.]]
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** Peridot finally answers the question Garnet posed to her in “The Dream Island” during her verbal threatening of [[spoiler: Spandam]] in “The Call On The Private Line.”

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** "The Long-Dead Apprentice: [=CP9=] has acquired Robin, Franky, and Usopp as in canon, but also have captured [[spoiler: Steven, who is wanted for his involvement in Alabasta and for his half-Gem status. Oh, and somehow the Baroque Works Trio managed to get aboard the Puffing Tom in disguise.]]

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** "The Long-Dead Apprentice: Apprentice”: [=CP9=] has acquired Robin, Franky, and Usopp as in canon, but also have captured [[spoiler: Steven, who is wanted for his involvement in Alabasta and for his half-Gem status. Oh, and somehow the Baroque Works Trio managed to get aboard the Puffing Tom in disguise.]]
** “The Call On The Private Line”: [[spoiler: Peridot calls and threatens Spandam to release Steven, Robin, and Franky or else face the wrath of the Straw Hats in a conversation that is heard around the world, including by Smoker and the Gorosei.
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* CanonForeigner: There are not many in this story, but the few that stick out are Apollo (a gorilla Mink that hangs around with [[spoiler: Nero]] in Water Seven), Eirney Heca (who is claiming to be [[spoiler: Kalifa's "half-sister"]]), [[spoiler: Phil (a character created for the long-running ''Manga/OnePiece'' fan fiction ''Fanfic/LuffysRenewedAdventure'' with joint coordination from the author),]] Florido Zuke (a young woman who looks like a thirteen year old girl and dresses like a 50's housewife), and Lamar (an arms dealer Petrea and Damian are on friendly terms with). The later two are [[spoiler: new recruits of [=CP9=]]] while [[spoiler: Phil was a member of the Foxy Pirates and the former Mr. 6 of Baroque Works, with Zuke being his partner: Miss Mother's Day.]]

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* CanonForeigner: There are not many in this story, but the few that stick out are Apollo (a gorilla Mink that hangs around with [[spoiler: Nero]] in Water Seven), Eirney Heca (who is claiming to be [[spoiler: Kalifa's "half-sister"]]), [[spoiler: Phil (a character created for the long-running ''Manga/OnePiece'' fan fiction ''Fanfic/LuffysRenewedAdventure'' with joint coordination from the author),]] Florido Zuke (a young woman who looks like a thirteen year old girl and dresses like a 50's housewife), and Lamar (an arms dealer Petrea and Damian are on friendly terms with). The later first two are [[spoiler: new recruits of [=CP9=]]] while [[spoiler: Phil was a member of the Foxy Pirates and the former Mr. 6 of Baroque Works, with Zuke being his partner: Miss Mother's Day.]]
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* HopeSpot: While on the Puffing Tom, the heroes are clearly in a much better place than they were in canon. The Baroque Works Trio was present, Genevieve [[spoiler: ate a Devil Fruit and was currently controlling Captain T-Bone and his men]], and their enemies were clearly outnumbered by a large margin. Unfortunately, their combined efforts could not have predicted Robin’s persistence of remaining captured and her subsequent attack on Genevieve and Sogeking.
** Along those same lines, Robin holds onto the hope that she can convince Spandam to release Steven since he should technically be free as per the terms of their arrangement. Needless to say, Steven is still captured and brought to Eneis Lobby with her.
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** Nami tells Usopp to do his “marksman thing” and open up the treasure chest the crew finds. Usopp openly questions just how doing so constitutes as anything related to marksmanship, but he is promptly shut down and ignored.
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** Zoro misremembers Bellamy's name as Bullwinkle. Sanji calls him out on it immediately.

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** Zoro misremembers Bellamy's name as Bullwinkle. “Bullwinkle.” Sanji calls him out on it immediately.
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''A Gem In The Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least three more planned.

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''A Gem In The Rough'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Manga/OnePiece'' and ''WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse'' by [=Drillmaster=] with additional story ideas by jmr46718 and CyanideOreo. It can be found on both [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6050257/chapters/13871293 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11631833/1/A-Gem-in-the-Rough Fanfiction.net]]. It currently has one sequel, ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' (which is also found at [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6535861/chapters/14952688 AO3]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11893050/1/Gems-Without-Measure-A-Pirate-s-Treasure Fanfiction.net]]), with at least three four more planned.
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* TheLoad: Being this is Greg's biggest concern towards his place in the story, especially during the fight with Miss Doublefinger. [[spoiler: This feeling continues even after he eats his Devil Fruit, but he is doing everything he can not to be a complete liability despite his preference to maintain a non-violent approach to his confrontations.]]
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** During Luffy's nightmare, the [[spoiler: petals of the Lilly Carnation]] turn into white butterflies, evoking imagery from [[Recap/StevenUniverseS4E4MindfulEducation "Mindful Education."]]

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The story has its own Tumblr devoted to it, which can be found [[http://agemintherough.tumblr.com here]], and CyanideOreo's official art can be found at [[http://cyanideoreo.tumblr.com/tagged/steven-universe here]].

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The story has its own Tumblr devoted to it, which can be found [[http://agemintherough.tumblr.com here]], and CyanideOreo's official art can be found at [[http://cyanideoreo.tumblr.com/tagged/steven-universe com/tagged/steven%20universe here]].



--> '''Crocodile''':“I've been thinking about what you said, Tiger Millionaire; specifically about how I am a 'bad guy.' It occurred to me that keeping you alive is exactly what a 'bad guy' would do and would lead to their downfall. As such, I plan on killing you right here”

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--> '''Crocodile''':“I've '''Crocodile''': "I've been thinking about what you said, Tiger Millionaire; specifically about how I am a 'bad guy.' It occurred to me that keeping you alive is exactly what a 'bad guy' would do and would lead to their downfall. As such, I plan on killing you right here”


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** Spoken verbatim by Petrea after her long train ride on the Puffing Tom almost immediately after she arrives on Backslide Island.
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* AllLovingHero: Steven, of course. He believes anyone can be redeemed and tries to appeal to the betterment of everyone he meets. This extends even to Crocodile, whom he believes can be rehabilitated for his crimes. That being said, he is not the biggest fan of the man or of Mr. 3 due to their actions, but he sees their potential for good with time.


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* BathsAreFun: Steven is very impressed with the royal bathhouse in Alabasta, although he is confused when he discovers that both the men and women share a bathhouse.


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* BondVillainStupidity: Both averted and played straight with Crocodile. Crocodile does initially spare Steven and the Baroque Works trio after they nearly drown in Rain Dinners so he could interrogate them, which Steven calls him out on. Later on in the desert, Crocodile has captured Steven and has a change of heart on his original plan, which was to allow Nico Robin to hold on to him while he took care of the Straw Hats. His new plan? Just kill the half-Gem.
--> '''Crocodile''':“I've been thinking about what you said, Tiger Millionaire; specifically about how I am a 'bad guy.' It occurred to me that keeping you alive is exactly what a 'bad guy' would do and would lead to their downfall. As such, I plan on killing you right here”


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* LiteraryAllusionTitle: ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' is derived from the poem "The Dragon is Withered" found in Literature/TheHobbit. This is further alluded to when Connie asks Luffy in the first chapter if he is there to share in a great adventure with her and calls him "Luffy the Grey."


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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: Steven covers his ears in the story after Sanji discovers just who ate the ship's food supply before reaching Alabasta. As such, the readers do not get to know just WHAT Sanji calls Usopp and Carue, but we know it has to be quite colorful.


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* PervertDad: Averted by Greg, who points out just why the famous "Happiness Punch" scene would just not work in a story like this.
--> '''Greg Universe''': “Need I remind you blockheads that the painter-girl and Connie are over there?! There is no way I'm going to let that happen! Besides, this is not acceptable behavior for Steven to pick up!”

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** Steven is convinced Robin is a good person because she was nice enough to give him a towel while imprisoned in the Seastone cage.

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** Steven is convinced that Robin is a good person because she was nice enough to give him a towel while imprisoned in the Seastone cage.



* TheBusCameBack: After leaving to go on their own adventure in Chapter Twenty-One of GWM;APT, [[spoiler: the Baroque Works trio make a surprise reappearance in Chapter Twenty-Eight on the Puffing Tom disguised as Marines under Captain T-Bone's command, who has been secretly been affected by Genevieve's Color Traps.]]

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* TheBusCameBack: After leaving to go on their own adventure in Chapter Twenty-One of GWM;APT, ''GWM;APT,'' [[spoiler: the Baroque Works trio make a surprise reappearance in Chapter Twenty-Eight on the Puffing Tom disguised as Marines under Captain T-Bone's command, who has been secretly been affected by Genevieve's Color Traps.]]



* ChekhovsGag: When on the Den-Den Mushi with Crocodile in Mr. 3's house, he gives Sanji the name "Obi-Wan Kenobi." Later on, Steven and the others are trapped in Rain Dinners. Sanji manages to call Crocodile (just like in canon under the famous "Mr. Prince" guise) and retained Steven's given name. As such, Steven then calls out for help in a very familiar way:

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* ChekhovsGag: When on the Den-Den Mushi with Crocodile in Mr. 3's house, he Steven gives Sanji the name "Obi-Wan Kenobi." Later on, Steven and the others are trapped in Rain Dinners. Sanji manages to call Crocodile (just like in canon under the famous "Mr. Prince" guise) and retained Steven's given name. As such, Steven then calls out for help in a very familiar way:



** Later on, Connie has one during the movie night when she keeps thinking about [[spoiler: General Grevious slaughtering Jedi.]] This time it is Steven who shakes her out of it.

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** Later on, Connie has one during the movie night when she keeps thinking about [[spoiler: General Grevious slaughtering Jedi.]] This time time, it is Steven who shakes her out of it.



* TheInternetIsForPorn: The first thing that Sanji does when he gets his hands on Steven's computer is to look up...well, the story does not say but it left Steven's computer with several viruses.



** Ronaldo owning the ''Beautiful Girlfriend Satan'' and his thoughts about ''Virtua Teens of Rage'' are taken from Blog/KeepBeachCityWeird.

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** Ronaldo owning the ''Beautiful Girlfriend Satan'' blade and his thoughts about ''Virtua Teens of Rage'' are taken from Blog/KeepBeachCityWeird.


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** Luffy continued to call Ruby "Rudy" despite being corrected by both Sapphire and Nami.

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* SecondPersonNarration: Employed in "The Internalization Of Amethyst" to see her point of view during the events of the previous chapter where it is revealed that [[spoiler: she lost her memory and does not know that Rose Quartz is dead.]]
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** Ronaldo owning the ''Beautiful Girlfriend Satan'' and his thoughts about ''Virtua Teens of Rage'' are taken from Blog/KeepBeachCityWeird.
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** In "The Day After The Rave," we get Steven attempting to take the crew out into Funland, Smoker and Luffy joining Garnet in the Kindergarten, Connie taking Nami and Robin to a bookstore, and Pearl training Zoro and Tashigi.

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** In "The Day After The Rave," we get Steven attempting to take the crew out into Funland, Smoker and Luffy and [[spoiler: Smoker]] joining Garnet in the Kindergarten, Connie taking Nami and Robin to a bookstore, and Pearl training Zoro and [[spoiler: Tashigi.]]
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* TrueCompanions: This story, like several other 'One Piece' stories, uses the terminology "nakama" to refer to how the other members of the Straw Hats view each other. The author has admitted that this choice was done so as a nod to the old fansubs of the early 2000's, which popularized the term and has been a constant source of discussion in the fandom for years. What this story does that others do not is actually ACKNOWLEDGE that the term is antiquated within the story itself in a logical way: older pirates from the times of Gold Roger were known to use the term "nakama" for the members of their crew. This practice seemingly stopped once the Great Pirate Era began after Roger's execution. Shanks, being a member of Roger's crew, picked up the phrase and it is from him that Luffy heard it used.

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* TrueCompanions: This story, like several other 'One Piece' ''Manga/OnePiece'' stories, uses the terminology "nakama" to refer to how the other members of the Straw Hats view each other. The author has admitted that this choice was done so as a nod to the old fansubs of the early 2000's, which popularized the term and has been a constant source of discussion in the fandom for years. What this story does that others do not is actually ACKNOWLEDGE that the term is antiquated within the story itself in a logical way: older pirates from the times of Gold Roger were known to use the term "nakama" for the members of their crew. This practice seemingly stopped once the Great Pirate Era began after Roger's execution. Shanks, being a member of Roger's crew, picked up the phrase and it is from him that Luffy heard it used.
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* TrueCompanions: This story, like several other 'One Piece' stories, uses the terminology "nakama" to refer to how the other members of the Straw Hats view each other. The author has admitted that this choice was done so as a nod to the old fansubs of the early 2000's, which popularized the term and has been a constant source of discussion in the fandom for years. What this story does that others do not is actually ACKNOWLEDGE that the term is antiquated within the story itself in a logical way: older pirates from the times of Gold Roger were known to use the term "nakama" for the members of their crew. This practice seemingly stopped once the Great Pirate Era began after Roger's execution. Shanks, being a member of Roger's crew, picked up the phrase and it is from him that Luffy heard it used.
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** Zoro is called "Zolo" twice. He does not approve.

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** Sadie is urged to participate in Beach-A-Palooza like she did in canon.



** Sadie is urged to participate in Beach-A-Palooza like she did in canon.


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** Greg composes the actual music in-story for the Gems to fuse to (as in, the Aivi and Surasshu tracks themselves with their appropriate names) and performs them [[spoiler: using his Devil Fruit powers.]]

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!''A Gem In The Rough'' and ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure'' contains the following tropes:


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* CameFromTheSky: How Steven begins his journey on the Grand Line, landing near the boat of the "Mr. 5 Pair." Of course, since it is at sea, there is no crater to be found...but bonus points for Steven being half-alien!
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!!A !''A Gem In The Rough Rough'' and Gems ''Gems Without Measure; A Pirate's Treasure Treasure'' contains the following tropes:

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