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** Thanks to different circumstances surrounding Riddle's diary, there are fewer Petrification incidents, and the victims are different. The only one who gets Petrified in this story who was also Petrified in canon is [[spoiler:Nearly Headless Nick, who is Petrified along with all the other ghosts except for Moaning Myrtle. The other two victims are Lavender Brown and Gilderoy Lockhart.]]



* YankTheDogsChain: Thanks to differing clues, an unfortunately-timed joke from George, and a misunderstanding, Harry spends a couple of chapters thinking that Fluffy is in fact guarding the Resurrection Stone, and that he might use that to call his parents back to life.

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* YankTheDogsChain: Thanks to differing clues, an unfortunately-timed joke from George, and a misunderstanding, Harry spends a couple of chapters thinking that Fluffy is in fact guarding the Resurrection Stone, and that he might use that to call his parents back to life.life.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Hermione gives one of these to Neville, combined with DontSaySuchStupidThings, when he laments his bad memory. She insists that Neville has a ''good'' memory, and to demonstrate she has him give examples of his encyclopedic knowledge of plants.
-->'''Neville:'''But that's just ''plants,'' that's ''easy''. It's not like it's anything import--\\
'''Hermione:''' Don't you ''dare'' say it's not important! When [[spoiler:Lavender]] is revived from her Petrification thanks to Mandrakes, you can ask her how ''important'' she thinks plants are!
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* NotHisSled: Following [[spoiler:Snape's resignation]] at the end of the first story, it's pretty damn obvious to the readers that [[spoiler:Horace Slughorn]] will be his replacement. [[spoiler:Nope! The new Potions Master turns out to be ''Nicholas Flamel'' who, thanks to changed events, has elected to not die yet and continue assisting Dumbledore for a while longer.]]
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** Snape's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Harry is cut short by Hagrid, who calls Snape out for bringing up his [[FreudianExcuse childhood]] and tells him to grow up. Horrible upbringings shouldn't be a reason for bullying others, and considering the audience at the time ([[AbusiveParents Harry]] and [[ICouldaBeenAContender Hagrid]]), Snape wasn't just being immature with his rant, but also self-centered.

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** Snape's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Harry is cut short by Hagrid, who [[FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse calls Snape out for bringing up his [[FreudianExcuse childhood]] and tells him to grow up. Horrible upbringings shouldn't be a reason for bullying others, and considering the audience at the time ([[AbusiveParents Harry]] and [[ICouldaBeenAContender Hagrid]]), Snape wasn't just being immature with his rant, but also self-centered.
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** In ''Secrets of he Past,'' the Gang grows a little with the addition of Ginny and Colin, meaning that now it consists of three boys and three girls.

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** In ''Secrets of he the Past,'' the Gang grows a little with the addition of Ginny and Colin, meaning that now it consists of three boys and three girls.girls. Though towards the end of it, Luna seems to take on a sort of SixthRanger role, meaning that the girls outnumber the boys.

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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Potter's Gang:

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* FiveManBand: Potter's Gang, once it's expanded from it's original four-member roster in ''Secrets of the Past'', takes on this dynamic:
** TheLeader: Harry.
** TheLancer: Ronnie.
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione.
** TheBigGuy: Ginny.
** TheChick: Neville.
** TagalongKid: Colin.
** SixthRanger: Luna.
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: The original Potter's Gang:
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* DemotedToExtra: Having been PutOnABus at the end of the first story, Snape almost entirely absent from ''Secrets of the Past.'' He only shows up for a brief cameo towards the end.

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* DemotedToExtra: Having been PutOnABus at the end of the first story, Snape is almost entirely absent from ''Secrets of the Past.'' He only shows up for a brief cameo towards the end.
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* DemotedToExtra: Having been PutOnABus at the end of the first story, Snape almost entirely absent from ''Secrets of the Past.'' He only shows up for a brief cameo towards the end.
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* CombatPragmatist: Mad-Eye Moody encourages students to be this, to use what skills or items they have at hands, and not be afraid of FightingDirty, especially if their lives depend on it. [[spoiler: Harry and Hermione use this approach when Quirrell/Voldemort attacks during Christmas dinner and they, lacking any actual combat spells, employ ''Wingardium Leviosa'' in order to hurl the turkeys, potatoes and drinking goblets at their adversary. Voldemort calls it a "glorified food fight," but it ''does'' slow him down enough for Dumbledore to come to the rescue.]]

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* CombatPragmatist: Mad-Eye Moody encourages students to be this, to use what skills or items they have at hands, and not be afraid of FightingDirty, fighting dirty, especially if their lives depend on it. [[spoiler: Harry and Hermione use this approach when Quirrell/Voldemort attacks during Christmas dinner and they, lacking any actual combat spells, employ ''Wingardium Leviosa'' in order to hurl the turkeys, potatoes and drinking goblets at their adversary. Voldemort calls it a "glorified food fight," but it ''does'' slow him down enough for Dumbledore to come to the rescue.]]
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* AscendedFanboy: Colin, again. He starts as a huge fan of Harry and of "the famous Potter's Gang" in general. By the end of ''Secrets of the Past'' he's a part of the Gang himself.
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* BrickJoke: In chapter nine of ''Secrets of the Past'', Lockhart jokes that his most closely guarded secret is whether or not he's a natural blond. In chapter thirteen, when asked if she thinks there's anything strange about Lockhart, Luna's first response is "I don't think that's his natural hair colour."
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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].''

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being ihas just been finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].''


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** And Peter Pettigrew seems rather fond of telling people that "this is all just a terrible misunderstanding."

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** [[spoiler: Of course, the same fic does heavily hint (and WordOfGod confirms) that Ronnie is in fact gay herself, and just hasn't realized this yet... so this might have something to do with it.]]



* StraightGay: [[spoiler: Ronnie. For all her tomboyish qualitites, nobody (including Ronnie herself) initially suspected that she was gay. Then she noticed just how pretty Luna looked when she smiled...]]



* TongueTied: Ginny, when Harry gives her any amount of attention, is unable to say anything but ''"Squeak!"'' As of ''Secrets of the Past,'' she seems to be slowly getting over it.

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* TongueTied: Ginny, when Harry gives her any amount of attention, is unable to say anything but ''"Squeak!"'' As She's got over it by the end of ''Secrets of the Past,'' she seems and is even able to be slowly getting over it.give Harry a hug without squeaking.

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].'' The third story is being planned and will be titled ''Weasley Girl: War of the Prophecy.''

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].'' ''

The third story story, which is being planned and planned, will be titled called ''Weasley Girl: War of the Prophecy.''

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].''

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].'' The third story is being planned and will be titled ''Weasley Girl: War of the Prophecy.''


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* TheBusCameBack: After leaving Hogwarts at the end of ''Weasley Girl'', [[spoiler: Snape]] makes a surprise return in the first epilogue of ''Secrets Of The Past,'' hinting that he'll come back in a larger role again in ''War of the Prophecy.''


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** Colin's brother Dennis is only in one scene so far, but he manages to say "I'm Dennis!" five times during that scene.
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* GetOut: Percy does a polite version when Petunia is doing a rant at the Burrow after Harry is rescued by Ronnie and Ginny.


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* IrrationalHatred: Petunia's attitude towards Harry and magic in general which borders on InsaneTrollLogic.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Snape is a terrible teacher who plays favourite and bullies students he doesn't like, but he did risk his life to resist Voldemort and almost dies for his efforts. However, when Harry tried to thank him for this, and even apologise for his (justified) dislike against the Potions professor, Snape accused him for lying and continues to be a surly grump who refuses to let go of his bitterness.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Snape is a terrible teacher who plays favourite and bullies students he doesn't like, but he did risk [[spoiler:risk his life to resist Voldemort Voldemort, is forced to reveal himself as Dumbledore's spy in the process, and almost dies for his efforts. efforts.]] However, when Harry tried to thank him for this, and even apologise for his (justified) dislike against the Potions professor, Snape accused him for lying and continues to be a surly grump who refuses to let go of his bitterness.
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*** [[spoiler: Turns out that Snape DID get in trouble and was lectured by Dumbledore about his behavior. When Harry expressed surprised at this, Snape sarcastically responded that that kind of information isn't for students, even Harry to know.]]

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*** [[spoiler: Turns out that Snape DID get in trouble and was lectured by Dumbledore about his behavior. When Harry expressed surprised surprise at this, Snape sarcastically responded that that kind of information isn't for students, even Harry to know.]]
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* AscendedExtra: Colin Creevey in ''Secrets of the Past'' gets a larger role than he had in canon. The same fic also features Crookshanks as a semi-major character.

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* AscendedExtra: Colin Creevey in ''Secrets of the Past'' gets a larger role than he had in canon. The same fic also features Crookshanks as a semi-major character. Fawkes too is notably more involved in the story than he was in canon, partly because he like most animals takes a particular liking to Ronnie.



* ThePowerOfFriendship: In full force. [[spoiler: After leaving Quirrell's body, the ghostly Voldemort tries a last, desperate attack on Harry, but fails because Ronnie, Hermione and Neville shield their friend.]]

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* ThePowerOfFriendship: In full force. [[spoiler: After leaving Quirrell's body, the ghostly Voldemort tries a last, desperate attack on Harry, but fails because Ronnie, Hermione and Neville shield their friend. In ''Secrets of the Past'' Harry specifically mentions ThePowerOfFriendship to the resurrected Tom Ridle, who not surprisingly completely rejects the idea.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: After Quirrell' first somewhat ham-fisted attempt at killing Harry, trying to arrange an "accident" with potentially lethal potions, both Harry, Ronnie, Hermione and Neville end up [[spoiler:completely immune to all potions and elixirs -- both harmful ones and beneficial ones. The same thing happens to Quirrell/Voldemort, when it's revealed Snape has managed to recreate the mixture of potions that caused the immunity and managed to give it to Quirrell/Voldemort -- meaning that neither unicorn blood nor the Elixir of Life will work on them.]]

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* BlessedWithSuck: After Quirrell' Quirrell's first somewhat ham-fisted attempt at killing Harry, trying to arrange an "accident" with potentially lethal potions, both Harry, Ronnie, Hermione and Neville end up [[spoiler:completely immune to all potions and elixirs -- both harmful ones and beneficial ones. The same thing happens to Quirrell/Voldemort, when it's revealed Snape has managed to recreate the mixture of potions that caused the immunity and managed to give it to Quirrell/Voldemort -- meaning that neither unicorn blood nor the Elixir of Life will work on them.]]

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* AscendedExtra: Colin Creevey in ''Secrets of the Past'' gets a larger role than he had in canon.

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* AscendedExtra: Colin Creevey in ''Secrets of the Past'' gets a larger role than he had in canon. The same fic also features Crookshanks as a semi-major character.
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* MythologyGag: While the fic is very plainly based on the books, a few sly references to the [[Film/HarryPotter movies]] do make it in:
** At one point, Ronnie misremembers Ravenclaw's house mascot as a raven, whereupon Hermione points out that it's an eagle. In the movies, Ravenclaw's house animal is indeed a raven.
** When Potter's Gang learn about Animagi, they spend a few moments speculating what animals they might turn into. Ginny insists that she'd be a horse, but doesn't give any reasons why she thinks so. This is in fact a reference to the movies where her Patronus takes the form of a horse.
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* RealityEnsues
** Hermione is appalled by [[SadistTeacher Snape's nasty behavior towards the Gryffindors]] in the first Potions lesson and writes a letter of complaint, reasoning that his behavior would get in the way of learning. It seems like it doesn't help and actually makes Snape more hostile towards Harry, Ronnie, Neville, and Hermione.
*** [[spoiler: Turns out that Snape DID get in trouble and was lectured by Dumbledore about his behavior. When Harry expressed surprised at this, Snape sarcastically responded that that kind of information isn't for students, even Harry to know.]]
** While Harry, Ronnie, Hermione, and Neville had some potions tested on them to see if they would have any effect, Madam Pomfrey refused to continue as certain potions had horrible reactions if mixed with others.
** Snape's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Harry is cut short by Hagrid, who calls Snape out for bringing up his [[FreudianExcuse childhood]] and tells him to grow up. Horrible upbringings shouldn't be a reason for bullying others, and considering the audience at the time ([[AbusiveParents Harry]] and [[ICouldaBeenAContender Hagrid]]), Snape wasn't just being immature with his rant, but also self-centered.
** Rita Skeeter's xenophobic article brings up negative opinions of Muggles UpToEleven, especially since it detailed Harry, a known celebrity. Even Muggleborns unconnected to the Dursleys suffer from FantasticRacism.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Happens three times so far:

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* BigDamnHeroes: Happens three four times so far:
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** [[spoiler:Potter's Gang, together with Fred, George and Percy (and Crookshanks), show up in the nick of time, with fireworks and fake rooster crows, just in time to save Harry and Ronnie from being eaten by the basilisk in the Chamber of Secrets.]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname:
** Nobody except [[CloudCuckooLander Luna]] calls Ronnie "Veronica."
** As it turns out, [[spoiler: Crookshanks tells Ronnie that "Crookshanks" is just a nickname, and his real name is actually "Meow." Because that was what his mother called him.]]


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** In ''Secrets of the Past,'' Ronnie at one point comes over a book entitled ''[[Discworld/SoulMusic SILENT SPELLS — Learn Non-Verbal Magic in Three Easy Lessons and Eighteen Hard Lessons.'']]
** Crookshanks, when Ronnie uses the Animal Talk charm to understand what he says, turns out to have a pronounced London accent closely modeled on that of [[Literature/OliverTwist the Artful Dodger]]. More precisely, WordOfGod claims that his dialogue is heavily inspired by Luke O'Loughlin's portrayal of the character, from the TV series ''Series/EscapeOfTheArtfulDodger''. Crookshanks even calls Ronnie "Princess" the way the Dodger does with Hannah in that series.

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy has started, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].''

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At the time of writing, the second story in the trilogy has started, is close to being finished, and is titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9932798/1/Weasley-Girl-Secrets-of-the-Past Weasley Girl: Secrets of the Past]].''



* AwesomeButImpractical: The Warning Fangs given to Potter's Gang by Mad-Eye Moody are magically-enhanced fangs to be worn around the neck, and which grow hot whenever danger or potential danger gets too close. Problem is, sometimes the warning comes just a little too late -- and even when they ''do'' give ample warning they don't give the wearer any clue as to what the danger is, or how serious it is; they'll grow just as hot for annoying pranksters as they will for murderous monsters.

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The Warning Fangs given to Potter's Gang by Mad-Eye Moody are magically-enhanced fangs to be worn around the neck, and which grow hot whenever danger or potential danger gets too close. Problem is, sometimes the warning comes just a little too late -- and even when they ''do'' give ample warning they don't give the wearer any clue as to what the danger is, or how serious it is; they'll grow just as hot for annoying pranksters as they will for murderous monsters.monsters.
** Being under the Animal Talk Charm allows you to communicate effortlessly with any animal of your choice. But while you're under the charm, you can ''only'' speak the language of that animal, even losing the ability to talk in any human languages.



* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: The Lovegoods, of course. Xenophilius and Luna make their first appearance in ''Secrets of the Past'' at King's Cross, [[EstablishingCharacterMoment Xenophilius pulling the trolley instead of pushing it because it's "terrible bad luck to push things around on a Wednesday," Luna riding the trolley and singing the Hogwarts school song instead of saying hello, and both of them wearing incredibly loud purple clothes.]] Eleven-year-old Luna may, if that's even possible, be slightly weirder than the fourteen-year-old version we're first introduced to in canon.

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The Lovegoods, of course. Xenophilius and Luna make their first appearance in ''Secrets of the Past'' at King's Cross, [[EstablishingCharacterMoment Xenophilius pulling the trolley instead of pushing it because it's "terrible bad luck to push things around on a Wednesday," Luna riding the trolley and singing the Hogwarts school song instead of saying hello, and both of them wearing incredibly loud purple clothes.]] Eleven-year-old Luna may, if that's even possible, be slightly weirder than the fourteen-year-old version we're first introduced to in canon.canon.
** Colin has traces of this, mixed with ConstantlyCurious. Meaning that he asks some of the weirder questions and comes up with some of the more outrageous theories.
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* CatsAreSnarkers: Like owner, like pet; Crookshanks is almost as snarky as Ronnie. Usually, since he can't talk, he just plays SilentSnarker -- but when Ronnie uses the Animal Talk charm to communicate with him, he's far more verbal with his sarcasms.

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