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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Twilight smashing Diamond Tiara (turned into a porcelain doll).]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Twilight smashing Diamond Tiara (turned into a porcelain doll).]]]]
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Silver Spoon and Applejack have never been on any team together.
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* TeamKiller: Particularly when [[spoiler:Silver Spoon kills Applejack to protect Twilight]].
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* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain doll... [[spoiler:Placed on a hot plate... porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain doll... [[spoiler:Placed [[spoiler:gets placed on a hot plate... porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* AdultFear: What's worse? [[spoiler:Being melted to death on a hot plate]] or that ''plus'' [[spoiler:seeing your daughter '''killed in front of you''']]?
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* AdultFear: What's worse? [[spoiler:Being melted to death on a hot plate]] or that ''plus'' [[spoiler:seeing your daughter get '''killed in front of you''']]?
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* AdultFear: What's worse? [[spoiler:Being melted to death on a hot plate]] or that ''plus'' [[spoiler:seeing your daughter '''killed in front of you''']]?
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* [[spoiler:LiterallyShatteredLives]]: [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara]].
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* [[spoiler:LiterallyShatteredLives]]: [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara]].Diamond Tiara.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Twilight.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Twilight.Twilight.
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Twilight smashing Diamond Tiara (turned into a porcelain doll).]]
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Twilight smashing Diamond Tiara (turned into a porcelain doll).]]
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* [[spoiler:LiterallyShatteredLives]]: [[spoiler:Diamond Tiara]].
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* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a plastic doll... [[spoiler:Placed on a hot plate... plastic melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a plastic porcelain doll... [[spoiler:Placed on a hot plate... plastic porcelain melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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A sequel is currently in the works.
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Filthy was plastic, not porcelain.
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* [[spoiler:ImMelting]]: Let's see... Filthy Rich turned into a porcelain plastic doll... [[spoiler:Placed on a hot plate... Porcelain plastic melts...]] ...yeah, this trope is in effect.
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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler: 1000 years later, Twilight is ShroudedInMyth, many of her captives were never recovered, and only Celestia remembers her name.]]
* EtTuBrute: When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
* FallenHero: Twilight was one of Equestria's heroes.
* EtTuBrute: When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler: 1000 [[spoiler:1000 years later, Twilight is ShroudedInMyth, many of her captives were never recovered, and only Celestia remembers her name.]]
* EtTuBrute: When[[spoiler: Princess [[spoiler:Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
* FallenHero:Twilight was one of Equestria's heroes.Twilight. '''Big time'''.
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* WhamLine: A minor example in Chapter 4. [[spoiler:All the narrative stated before this was that Twilight grabbed ''an'' appliance, not ''what'' appliance.]]
-->After plugging in the appliance, she set down Lyra, Filthy, and Diamond. She then collected the scattered ponies. Twilight levitated the dolls, and set them in a circle around [[spoiler:[[OhCrap the hot plate]]]].
-->After plugging in the appliance, she set down Lyra, Filthy, and Diamond. She then collected the scattered ponies. Twilight levitated the dolls, and set them in a circle around [[spoiler:[[OhCrap the hot plate]]]].
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* TeamKiller: Particularly when [[spoiler: Twilight kills Applejack]]
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* TeamKiller: Particularly when [[spoiler: Twilight [[spoiler:Silver Spoon kills Applejack]]Applejack to protect Twilight]].
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* SanitySlippage: Twilight, after Princess Cadence dies.
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* SanitySlippage: Twilight, after Princess Cadence dies.and Shining Armor die.
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The newly coronated Princess Twilight suffers an abrupt tragedy. Having lost two loved ones, she begins to question her own mortality, and that of her friends. AJ, Dash, Rarity, Pinkie, Fluttershy. . . they are just the beginning. Twilight will live for thousands of years, so every pony she cares about—every pony she will ever care about, will die. She can barely handle the pain of one funeral, let alone the thought of hundreds of them. Twilight finds a clever way to ensure all of her friends never die. They can’t all be ageless alicorns, but they can all move into Twilight’s Dollhouse. Then they can be best friends forever.
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The newly coronated Princess Twilight suffers an abrupt tragedy. Having lost two loved ones, she begins to question her own mortality, and that of her friends. friends: AJ, Dash, Rarity, Pinkie, Fluttershy. . . Fluttershy. And they are just the beginning. Twilight will live for thousands of years, so every pony she cares about—every about, every pony she will ever ''will ever'' care about, will die. She can barely handle the pain of one funeral, let alone the thought of hundreds of them. Twilight finds a clever way to ensure all of her friends never die. They can’t all be ageless alicorns, but they can all move into [[TitleDrop Twilight’s Dollhouse. Dollhouse]]. [[OhCrap Then they can be best friends forever.
forever.]]
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* DarkFic: Considerably so for a fanfic of a little girl's show. Seriously, this could be the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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* DarkFic: Considerably so for a fanfic of a little girl's show. Seriously, this could be is essentially the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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* DarkFic: Considerably so for a fanfic of a little girl's show. Seriously, this could be the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' equivalent of "[[Series/TalesFromTheDarkside The Geezenstacks]]".
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* Nightmare Fuel: The sensations the ponies go through when being transformed are described in great detail. Big Mac being turned into a stuffed toy is particularly disturbing.
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* GildedCage: Twilight painstakingly recreates the entire town, and traps the dolls in it.
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* {{Jerkass}}: A lot of Twilight's captives, Bon Bon especially - victims though they may be, their efforts to resist her only thwart Lyra's efforts to help Twilight work through her depression and result in Twilight crossing the Moral Event Horizon in retaliation.
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* {{Jerkass}}: A lot of Twilight's captives, the dolls, Bon Bon especially - victims of kidnapping though they may be, their efforts to resist her only thwart Lyra's efforts to help Twilight work through her depression and result in Twilight crossing the Moral Event Horizon in retaliation.
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A sequel is currently in the works.
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''Twilight's Dollhouse is a DarkFic based on WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Kaidan Kaidan]] and available [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/91302/twilights-dollhouse here]].
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''Twilight's Dollhouse Dollhouse'' is a DarkFic based on WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Kaidan Kaidan]] and available [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/91302/twilights-dollhouse here]].
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** AndIMustScream: Anytime Twilight leaves the dolls inanimate for long periods of time. [[spoiler: When Also, when Silver Spoon freezes Lyra in a glass of water.]]]]
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Twilight becomes an alicorn and has to face her immortality and its many downsides.
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever:
The newly coronated Princess Twilight
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* EtTuBrute: When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has
** AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: When Silver Spoon freezes Lyra in a glass of water.]]
* PerfectPoison: Twilight's poisons only get more effective over the course of the story.
* SanitySlippage: Twilight, after Princess Cadence dies.
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* SanitySlippage: Twilight, after Princess Cadence dies.
* PerfectPoison: Twilight's poisons only get more effective over the course of the story.
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* EtTuBrute: When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what WhoWantsToLiveForever: Twilight becomes an alicorn and has been up to.
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* StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
* EtTuBrute - When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
* FateWorseThanDeath - The dolls are trapped in the dollhouse against their will and forced to live forever to keep Twilight company.
* StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
* EtTuBrute - When [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
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::StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
::EtTuBrute - When [[spoiler:Princess Celestia]] discovers what Twilight has been up to.
::FateWorseThanDeath - The dolls are trapped in the dollhouse against their will and forced to live forever to keep Twilight company.
::StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
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::WhoWantsToLiveForever - Twilight becomes an alicorn and has to face her immortality and its many downsides.
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::StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
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::WhoWantsToLiveForever - Twilight becomes an alicorn and has to face her immortality and its many downsides.
::FateWorseThanDeath - The dolls are trapped in the dollhouse against their will and forced to live forever to keep Twilight company.
::StockholmSyndrome - Some of the dolls come to sympathize with their captor.
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