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* OrwellianRetcon: As of this writing, some chapters have encountered some edits in order to [[ShowDontTell show instead of tell]] and to tone down the use of slurs, even though one of the aesops of the story is that using ableist slurs is wrong.
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* SpoiledSweet: Lovebeam may whine a lot, but she does care for her sisters and friends.

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* SpoiledSweet: Lovebeam may whine a lot, but she does care for her sisters and friends. Anzu comes from a wealthy family (from her mother's side), but she's extremely kind, insightful, and understanding, always trying to be the mediator when there's conflict between her friends.



* VocalDissonance: Zenjin is described as having an unusually high pitched voice, unfitting of his age and character. The authoress admits she imagines him sounding like [[AndrewFrancis Dilandau]] [[VisionOfEscaflowne Albatou]] from the English dub.

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* VocalDissonance: Zenjin is described as having an unusually high pitched voice, unfitting of his age and character. The authoress admits she imagines him sounding like having [[AndrewFrancis Dilandau]] [[VisionOfEscaflowne Albatou]] from the Albatou]]'s English dub.dub voice.
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** Fukiko is a big fan of the singer [[FanFic/PrettyCureBukatsudoEnergetic Uta Suzuki, and one of her songs is named Jubilation.]]
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Riko (phlegmatic), Hotaru (melancholic), Anzu (sanguine), and Marina (choleric).

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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Riko (phlegmatic), Hotaru (melancholic), Anzu (sanguine), (leukine), and Marina (choleric).
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** Also the mascot sisters: Moonbeam (phlegmatic), Sunbeam (sanguine), Starbeam (melancholic), and Lovebeam (choleric).
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* Marina Asagi ('''Cure Dusk'''): TheLancer. 12 years old. Brash, short tempered, reckless, and loud, she used to be a bully but soon dropped the act.

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* Marina Asagi ('''Cure Dusk'''): TheLancer. 12 years old. Brash, short tempered, reckless, and loud, she used to be a bully but soon dropped the act. Wants to be a rock star when she grows up and loves [[TrademarkFavoriteFood shrimp.]]
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Riko (phlegmatic), Hotaru (melancholic), Anzu (sanguine), and Marina (choleric).

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* SpoiledSweet: Lovebeam may whine a lot, but she does care for her sisters and friends.



* VocalDissonance: Zenjin is described as having an usually high pitched voice, unfitting of his age and character. The authoress admits she imagines him sounding like [[AndrewFrancis Dilandau]] [[VisionOfEscaflowne Albatou]] from the English dub.

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* VocalDissonance: Zenjin is described as having an usually unusually high pitched voice, unfitting of his age and character. The authoress admits she imagines him sounding like [[AndrewFrancis Dilandau]] [[VisionOfEscaflowne Albatou]] from the English dub.
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* ShoutOut: [[Manga/SailorMoon If]] [[Anime/MapleTown the]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic authoress]] [[PokemonSpecial has]] [[Anime/VisionOfEscaflowne seen]], [[Literature/TheMoomins read]], [[CriminalMinds or]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} played it]], [[Manga/OuranHighSchoolHostClub you]] [[Manga/CardCaptorSakura know]] [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure it'll be]] [[Film/{{Eraserhead}} referenced]] [[Film/BlueVelvet in]] [[Film/InlandEmpire some]] [[Literature/AnneOfGreenGables way]] [[Literaure/ALittlePrincess or]] [[Series/{{Flashpoint}} another]].

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* ShoutOut: [[Manga/SailorMoon [[Franchise/SailorMoon If]] [[Anime/MapleTown the]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic authoress]] [[PokemonSpecial has]] [[Anime/VisionOfEscaflowne seen]], [[Literature/TheMoomins read]], [[CriminalMinds or]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} played it]], [[Manga/OuranHighSchoolHostClub you]] [[Manga/CardCaptorSakura know]] [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure it'll be]] [[Film/{{Eraserhead}} referenced]] [[Film/BlueVelvet in]] [[Film/InlandEmpire some]] [[Literature/AnneOfGreenGables way]] [[Literaure/ALittlePrincess or]] [[Series/{{Flashpoint}} another]].
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* PerkyFemaleMinion: Beileag, definitely. She's cheerful, perky, and overly emotional, compared to Decebal and Zenjin.
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** Sae's pet pitbull is named [[Franchise/{{Miffy}} Miffy]].
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** Riko's kindness toward Marina convinces the latter to drop her bullying ways and be their friend, seeing that she doesn't think she'll become like her dad.


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* IllGirl: Anzu, but not in the typical sense. She does vomit a lot due to being extremely stressed out by her parents' NASTY divorce.


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* StepfordSnarker: Anzu. She's pretty snarky, but this is one of the ways she tries to cope with her parents' divorce.
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* ChildByRape: Marina's mother was raped by a notorious criminal, and she was born from it. Unlike most mothers, Hatoko genuinely loves and cares for Marina very much, and tries her best to raise her despite the circumstances they're in.

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* ChildByRape: Marina's mother was raped by a notorious criminal, and she was born from it. Unlike most mothers, Hatoko genuinely loves and cares for Marina very much, and tries her best to raise her despite the circumstances they're in. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Thankfully, Riko and her friends don't discriminate against her for this, which convinces her to drop the bullying act and be their friend.]]
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Marina and Riko, even though Riko absolutely hates doing typical girly things, like wearing make up, dresses and skirts, and gossiping. Marina is loud, active, loves rock music, and has a nitro-glycerine temper while Riko is shy, soft spoken, gentle, and loves stuffed animals and books.
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Fukiko finds out about the Pretty Cure in chapter 14.]]
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* MissingMom: Hotaru. [[spoiler: An unpublished chapter reveals that her mother was forced to marry one of her dads, Sojiro, in an attempt by his parents to [[CureYourGays make him straight]] because they didn't take his coming out well. After a while, said wife, Mayuko, found out he was gay. She left him and infant Hotaru without a second thought, disgusted by the fact that she made love with a homosexual man and was convinced that Hotaru would grow up to be homosexual herself.]]

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* MissingMom: Hotaru. [[spoiler: An unpublished chapter Chapter 13 reveals that her mother was forced to marry one of her dads, Sojiro, in an attempt by his parents to [[CureYourGays make him straight]] because they didn't take his coming out well. After a while, said wife, Mayuko, found out he was gay. She left him and infant Hotaru without a second thought, disgusted by the fact that she made love with a homosexual man and was convinced that Hotaru would grow up to be homosexual herself.]]
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** When Rina finally vents her frustrations at Riko and is particularly mean and nasty to her, [[spoiler: Kyoya]] VICIOUSLY calls her out on her warped worldview...and she's '''seven years old!''' [[spoiler: In chapter 15, Fukiko does the same with Daizo all throughout, ESPECIALLY when she catches Daizo trying to kill his baby sister because she has brain damage.]]
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* AssholeVictim: One of Yoshie's GirlPosse becomes one. Marina hates her so much she [[spoiler: wants to leave her as a MonsterOfTheWeek]]. Riko gives her a WhatTheHellHero and changes her back.

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* AssholeVictim: One of Yoshie's GirlPosse becomes one. Marina hates her so much she [[spoiler: wants to leave her as a MonsterOfTheWeek]].MonsterOfTheWeek. Riko gives her a WhatTheHellHero and changes her back.



* ItsPersonal: This is Marina's reason for [[spoiler: attempting to leave Toshiko to die as a MonsterOfTheWeek.]]

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* ItsPersonal: This is Marina's reason for [[spoiler: attempting to leave Toshiko to die as a MonsterOfTheWeek.]]



* WhatTheHellHero: Marina is always yelling at Riko for whatever reason, namely accidental collateral damage or her eccentric behavior. Soon, Riko pulls one on Marina for [[spoiler:attempting to leave one of Yoshie's GirlPosse to die as a MonsterOfTheWeek out of hatred due to a past betrayal.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Marina is always yelling at Riko for whatever reason, namely accidental collateral damage or her eccentric behavior. Soon, Riko pulls one on Marina for [[spoiler:attempting attempting to leave one of Yoshie's GirlPosse to die as a MonsterOfTheWeek out of hatred due to a past betrayal.]]



** [[spoiler: An unpublished chapter confirms that Shouji got arrested when he was caught raping a 5-year-old girl, killing her, and stuffing her body in a drainage ditch because she threatened to tell on him.]]

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** [[spoiler: An unpublished chapter Chapter 13 confirms that Shouji Shouji, Marina's dad, got arrested when he was caught raping a 5-year-old girl, killing her, and stuffing her body in a drainage ditch because she threatened to tell on him.]]
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* PinkMeansFeminine: Riko's bubbly and social classmate [[GenkiGirl Chinami Takayama]] often wears a lot of pink.

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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Zenjin, when he gets the Energia. He decimates a planet, kills people, and blows things up because he can, and he seems to enjoy it even more for it.



* PersonOfMassDestruction: Zenjin, when he gets the Energia. He decimates a planet, kills people, and blows things up because he can, and he seems to enjoy it even more for it.

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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Zenjin, PluckyGirl: Even though she's weak, sensitive to loud noise, and does occasionally cross the DespairEventHorizon, Riko isn't one to let anyone hurt her loved ones or let evil doers go scott free, even when he gets the Energia. He decimates a planet, kills people, and blows things up because he can, and he seems to enjoy it even more for it.odds are cruelly against her.

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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named [[TheSociopath Zenjin]] got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, [[BigGood Malgorzata]], asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.

The Pretty Cure turn out to be four young girls: Riko, a shy but gentle autistic girl who just wants to put her traumatic past behind her, be herself without restraint, and have friends, Marina, a brash and impulsive tomboy who's sick of being defined by her father's actions, Anzu, a not!goth girl who wants to watch the world go by without a care in the world and do whatever she wants, and Hotaru, a level headed and serene high schooler who has dreams that go far beyond the stars. They form an odd but fun friendship and become the [=LuminousQ=] Pretty Cure (Q as in Quartet). They have to stop Zenjin, get the Energia back, and make sure he doesn't do any damage to their world. But they also have their own problems to work out in their own lives, like divorce, bullying, societal pressures, and their own imperfections and inner demons.

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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named [[TheSociopath [[AxCrazy Zenjin]] got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, [[BigGood Malgorzata]], asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.

The Pretty Cure turn out to be four young girls: Riko, [[ShrinkingViolet Riko]], a shy but gentle autistic girl who just wants to put her traumatic past behind her, be herself without restraint, and have friends, Marina, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Marina]], a brash and impulsive tomboy who's sick of being defined by her father's actions, Anzu, [[PerkyGoth Anzu]], a not!goth girl who wants to watch the world go by without a care in the world and do whatever she wants, and Hotaru, [[TeamMom Hotaru]], a level headed and serene high schooler who has dreams that go far beyond the stars. They form an odd but fun friendship and become the [=LuminousQ=] Pretty Cure (Q as in Quartet). They have to stop Zenjin, get the Energia back, and make sure he doesn't do any damage to their world. But they also have their own problems to work out in their own lives, like divorce, bullying, societal pressures, and their own imperfections and inner demons.



* WhiteHairBlackHeart: Zenjin. He dyed his hair white with the Energia.

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* WhiteHairBlackHeart: Zenjin. He dyed his hair white with the Energia.Energia, and he's very pretty, very vain, and VERY psycho and homicidal.



* WouldHurtAChild: Zenjin really doesn't care who he hurts. Even ''babies'' aren't safe around him! [[spoiler: An unpublished chapter confirms that Shouji got arrested when he was caught raping a 5-year-old girl, killing her, and stuffing her body in a drainage ditch because she threatened to tell on him.]]

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* WouldHurtAChild: Zenjin really doesn't care who he hurts. Even ''babies'' aren't safe around him! [[spoiler: him!
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Zenjin decimating Rozaniela, Riko daydreaming about being a pretend superhero, Rina antagonizing her, Marina calling Riko mean names, Kyoya standing up to her, Hatoko scolding Marina for bullying Riko and trying to teach her right in a calm, understanding way, etc.

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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Zenjin decimating Rozaniela, Riko daydreaming about being a pretend superhero, Rina antagonizing her, Marina calling Riko mean names, Kyoya standing up to her, Hatoko scolding Marina for bullying Riko and trying to teach her right in a calm, understanding way, Malgorzata helping out the survivors of Zenjin's rampage by giving away clothes and food, etc.
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* LonelyRichKid: Anzu. She's actually quite wealthy, but her parents are so caught up in fighting over custody of her that they tend to forget about her. Thankfully, her father actually knows about Anzu's issues and wants to help her out, and genuinely wishes he could fix everything so they can be happy.


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* TrueBlueFemininity: Hotaru's theme color is blue, and she is usually the most serene, mature, and down-to-earth of the girls. But she can be quite vicious with her powers and naginata.
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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named [[TheSociopath Zenjin]] got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, Malgorzata, asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.

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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named [[TheSociopath Zenjin]] got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, Malgorzata, [[BigGood Malgorzata]], asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.
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* [[spoiler: FallenPrincess: Fukiko was once one of the popular girls, but after realizing the error of her ways in regards to her treatment of Kyoya thanks to Riko's influence, she joins their RagtagBunchOfMisfits. Kyoya started off as a popular guy until everyone turned their back on him after the accident, and he befriended Riko, Anzu, and even Marina, who used to pick on him.]]

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* ShowWithinAShow: ''Hinata Sun Child''. Both Riko and Kyoya are huge fans of the manga.

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** In chapter 18, Lovebeam says ''[[FanFic/PrettyCurePerfumePreppy "Catch you on the rebound!"]]''
* ShowWithinAShow: [[ShowWithinAShow Show Within A Fanfic]]: ''Hinata Sun Child''. Both Riko and Kyoya are huge fans of the manga.

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* TheAtoner: Chapter 11 reveals that Fukiko really wants to patch things up with Kyoya after leaving him behind after the accident.



** Shy, easily scared Riko who's painfully aware of her own problems and the repercussions they cause to both herself and others, and mellow, ambivalent, DeadpanSnarker Anzu who tends to ignore her own problems.

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** Shy, easily scared Riko who's painfully aware of her own problems and the repercussions they cause to both herself and others, and mellow, ambivalent, NightmareFetishist DeadpanSnarker Anzu who tends to ignore her own problems.



* SickEpisode: Chapter 11. Sunbeam falls ill from stress accumulation and culture shock, exacerbated by Zenjin betraying her.

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* SickEpisode: Chapter 11. Sunbeam falls ill from stress accumulation and culture shock, exacerbated by Zenjin betraying her.[[BreakTheCutie breaking her really hard]].



* ShrinkingViolet: Riko. She's shy and has trouble socializing with others. Marina's mother, Hatoko, also counts, but she's more cripplingly scared of the world than anything due to being raped long ago.

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* ShrinkingViolet: Riko. She's shy and has trouble socializing with others. Marina's mother, Hatoko, also counts, but she's more cripplingly scared of the world than anything due to being raped long ago. Fukiko has some shades of this also, but this is because she doesn't have the courage to talk to Kyoya and patch things up with him.
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* TheDitz: Beileag, Zenjin's lackey and adoptive mother. Riko has some shades of this, but it's nowhere near the extent of [[Anime/YesPrettyCure5 Nozomi]] or [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure Miyuki.]] When she does act a bit ditzy (which is justified because she's autistic), it's NOT PlayedForLaughs.

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* TheDitz: Beileag, Zenjin's lackey and adoptive mother. Riko has some shades of this, this (like missing the obvious when it's right in front of her nose, much to Rina and Marina's annoyance), but it's nowhere near the extent of [[Anime/YesPrettyCure5 Nozomi]] or [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure Miyuki.]] When she does act a bit ditzy (which is justified because she's autistic), it's NOT PlayedForLaughs.
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* HeyItsThatVoice: HypotheticalCasting ahoy!
** For the Japanese version, Riko is [[WelcomeToTheSpaceShow Natsuki Koyama]], Marina is [[Manga/ShugoChara Amu Hinamori]], Anzu is [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Serena]], Hotaru is [[HaibaneRenmei Kana]], Kyoya and Zenjin are [[VisionOfEscaflowne Dilandau Albatou]], Sunbeam is [[Manga/KOn Azusa Nakano]], Moonbeam is [[SmilePrettyCure Cure Beauty]], Starbeam is [[Manga/SailorMoon Chibiusa]], Lovebeam is [[Anime/TanteiOperaMilkyHolmes Sherlock Shellington]], Decebal is [[Manga/RurouniKenshin Makoto Shishio]], Beileag is [[Manga/Naruto Sakura Haruno]], Fukiko is [[TsubasaChronicle Sakura]], Chinami is [[VisualNovel/{{Kanon}} Ayu Tsukimiya]].
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* HeyItsThatVoice: HypotheticalCasting ahoy!
** For the Japanese version, Riko is [[WelcomeToTheSpaceShow Natsuki Koyama]], Marina is [[Manga/ShugoChara Amu Hinamori]], Anzu is [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Serena]], Hotaru is [[HaibaneRenmei Kana]], Kyoya and Zenjin are [[VisionOfEscaflowne Dilandau Albatou]], Sunbeam is [[Manga/KOn Azusa Nakano]], Moonbeam is [[SmilePrettyCure Cure Beauty]], Starbeam is [[Manga/SailorMoon Chibiusa]], Lovebeam is [[Anime/TanteiOperaMilkyHolmes Sherlock Shellington]], Decebal is [[Manga/RurouniKenshin Makoto Shishio]], Beileag is [[Manga/Naruto Sakura Haruno]], Fukiko is [[TsubasaChronicle Sakura]], Chinami is [[VisualNovel/{{Kanon}} Ayu Tsukimiya]].

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