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* NotSafeForWork: A few scenes of explicit sex.
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* DisappearedDad: Shepard's biological father is never identified; Hannah raises her as a single mom. [[spoiler:In the epilogue, Hannah marries Sparatus, who hands off the bride at Shepard's wedding to Garrus Vakarian.]]
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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background and ''never'' seen, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take. Nevertheless, it works.

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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and trilogy, ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background background, and is ''never'' seen, while Sparatus is one of the Council members and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take. Nevertheless, it works.
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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600087625 The Translation in Blood]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.

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''[[http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600087625 The Translation in Blood]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic {{lemon}} by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.
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* AirQuotes: A couple chapters consist of letters back and forth between Hannah Shepard, Councilor Sparatus, and eventually [[PlayerCharacter Commander Shepard]]. In one message to her mother, Commander Shepard complains indignantly about Sparatus using air-quotes on her in the canon incident that went {{memetic|Mutation}}, a gesture that Sparatus apparently picked up from Hannah (and it drove Shepard ''nuts'' when Hannah did it to her).
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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take. Nevertheless, it works.

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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, background and ''never'' seen, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take. Nevertheless, it works.

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* AscendedMeme: Shepard's reaction in an e-mail to Hannah to Sparatus' air-quoting is absolutely hilarious.


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* MythologyGag: Sparatus' turian air-quotes from ''VideoGame/MassEffect2'' are described to Hannah after the fact by Shepard. Turns out Sparatus picked up the gesture from Hannah, who used to do that to Shepard and it drove her ''nuts''.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Two of them, between Hannah and Sparatus and [[spoiler:Shepard and Garrus]].

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* InterspeciesRomance: Two of them, between Hannah and Sparatus and [[spoiler:Shepard and Garrus]]. [[spoiler:The fic ends with Sparatus, now Shepard's stepfather, about to hand off the bride at Shepard's wedding to Garrus.]]

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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Nevertheless, it works.
** Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take.
* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, saved the ''Destiny Ascension'' at ''VideoGame/MassEffect1's'' climax, [[spoiler:romanced Garrus, and chose the Destroy ending]].
** Although given that her ''not'' saving the ''Destiny Ascension'' would mean that the story would come to a swift end, that's sort of obvious.

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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take. Nevertheless, it works.
** Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take.
* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, saved the ''Destiny Ascension'' at ''VideoGame/MassEffect1's'' climax, [[spoiler:romanced Garrus, and chose the Destroy ending]].
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ending]]. Although given that her ''not'' saving the ''Destiny Ascension'' would mean that the story would come to a swift end, that's that one's sort of obvious.
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** Not to mention that Hannah is a character who has maybe twenty or so lines of dialogue in the entire trilogy and ''only'' shows up if you have one particular background, while Sparatus is one of the Council and thus ''extremely'' plot important no matter which background you take.


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** Although given that her ''not'' saving the ''Destiny Ascension'' would mean that the story would come to a swift end, that's sort of obvious.
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''[[http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600087625 The Translation in Blood]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.

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''[[http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600087625 The Translation in Blood]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.
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* FramingDevice: Hannah and Sparatus' backstory is told as Hannah, now a rear admiral in the Systems Alliance Navy during the Reaper War, recalling her service during the First Contact War. The story switches back to the present day around 2/3 of the way through.
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* ReliablyUnreliableGuns: Sparatus was only able to capture Hannah because her rifle got caught on something when she was fleeing and went off.

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* ReliablyUnreliableGuns: Sparatus was only able to capture Hannah because her rifle got caught on something when she was fleeing and went off.off, wounding her in the arm.

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* [[IJustShotMarvinInTheFace I Just Shot Marvin in the Arm]]: Sparatus was only able to capture Hannah because her rifle got caught on something when she was fleeing and went off.


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* ReliablyUnreliableGuns: Sparatus was only able to capture Hannah because her rifle got caught on something when she was fleeing and went off.
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* NoNameGiven: Shepard's first name is never stated.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Variation played for laughs. Hannah at one point settles a minor argument with Shepard by using her officer-to-underlings voice and calling her "soldier". Shepard automatically snaps to attention and responds as she would to Hackett or Anderson, then goes,
--> "Hey wait, that's cheating!"

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* ThatsAnOrder: Variation played for laughs. In chapter one Hannah at one point settles a minor argument with Shepard by using her officer-to-underlings voice and calling her "soldier". Shepard automatically snaps to attention and responds as she would to Hackett or Anderson, then goes,
--> "Hey wait,
remembers she's talking to her mother and goes, "Hey, that's cheating!"cheating!"
* ThisIsThePartWhere: Right after the ThatsAnOrder thing.
--> '''Shepard:''' Is this where I make a joke about you being a "rear" admiral?
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''The Translation in Blood'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.

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''The ''[[http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600087625 The Translation in Blood'' Blood]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.



As the fic is hosted on Adultfanfiction.net TVTropes' {{content policy}} forbids us from linking to it. However the content policy discussion thread agreed that, as sex is only a small part of the story, the fic can still be discussed here.

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As the fic is hosted on Adultfanfiction.net TVTropes' {{content policy}} forbids us from linking Warning: NotSafeForWork due to it. However the content policy discussion thread agreed that, as some scenes of explicit sex is only a small part of the story, the fic can still be discussed here.(tame, though).
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In the ruins of occupied Shanxi, an Alliance soldier and a turian scout discover that they have more in common than is readily apparent. This leads to a story of a SecretRelationship across species (and government) boundaries and all that entails, stretching from the First Contact War to a little after the Destroy ending of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' and resulting in Commander Shepard having a mentor and protector she never knew about.

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In the ruins of occupied Shanxi, an Alliance soldier and a turian scout discover that they have more in common than is readily apparent. This leads to a story of a SecretRelationship across species (and government) boundaries and all that entails, stretching from the First Contact War to a little after the Destroy [[spoiler:Destroy]] ending of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' and resulting in Commander Shepard having a mentor and protector she never knew about.



* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, saved the ''Destiny Ascension'' at ''VideoGame/MassEffect1's'' climax, and [[spoiler:romanced Garrus]].

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* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, saved the ''Destiny Ascension'' at ''VideoGame/MassEffect1's'' climax, and [[spoiler:romanced Garrus]].Garrus, and chose the Destroy ending]].



* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Sparatus and Hannah start out on opposite sides of the First Contact War, get separated from their units, and end up with him taking her prisoner. They gradually grow friendlier and eventually sleep together.

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* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Sparatus and Hannah start out on opposite sides of the First Contact War, get separated from their units, and end up with him taking her prisoner. They gradually grow friendlier and eventually sleep together. [[spoiler:He lets her go and tells her how the resistance can make life difficult for the turians in hopes of ending the war with less loss of life, and the two exchange love letters for many years afterwards.]]
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Shepard was bringing a captured turian translator back to the Alliance resistance when her vehicle was hit. Sparatus can understand her from the start because of his translator, but only gradually learns English.

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* TranslatorMicrobes: Shepard Hannah was bringing a captured turian translator back to the Alliance resistance when her vehicle was hit. Sparatus can understand her from the start because of his translator, but only gradually learns English.
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* ThatsAnOrder: Variation played for laughs. Hannah at one point settles a minor argument with Shepard by using her officer-to-underlings voice and calling her "soldier". Shepard automatically snaps to attention and responds as she would to Hackett or Anderson, then goes,
--> "Hey wait, that's cheating!"
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* TheMatchmaker: [[spoiler:Sometime around ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' Shepard figures out Hannah and Sparatus' secret, and sets them up to get back together before the assault on Earth.]]
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* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, and [[spoiler:romanced Garrus]].

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* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, saved the ''Destiny Ascension'' at ''VideoGame/MassEffect1's'' climax, and [[spoiler:romanced Garrus]].
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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain, later Rear Admiral, Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Nevertheless, it works.

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* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain, later Rear Admiral, Captain/Rear Admiral Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Nevertheless, it works.
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* MysteriousBacker: Sparatus is recast as one for Commander Shepard due to loving her mother

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* MysteriousBacker: Sparatus is recast as one for Commander Shepard due to loving her mothermother. This ranges from surreptitiously diverting supplies to the ''Normandy'' SR-2 during the Reaper War to having Shepard and her dates watched by C-Sec.
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''The Translation in Blood'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.

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''The Translation in Blood'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic by [=NothingTame=] that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.
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''The Translation in Blood'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic that tells the story of a SecretRelationship between [[http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Hannah_Shepard Commander Shepard's mother]] and Councilor Sparatus, and yes, you read that right.

In the ruins of occupied Shanxi, an Alliance soldier and a turian scout discover that they have more in common than is readily apparent. This leads to a story of a SecretRelationship across species (and government) boundaries and all that entails, stretching from the First Contact War to a little after the Destroy ending of ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' and resulting in Commander Shepard having a mentor and protector she never knew about.

As the fic is hosted on Adultfanfiction.net TVTropes' {{content policy}} forbids us from linking to it. However the content policy discussion thread agreed that, as sex is only a small part of the story, the fic can still be discussed here.
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!!''The Translation in Blood'' provides examples of the following tropes:
* AffectionateNickname: Hannah calls Sparatus "Bird"; he calls her "Pyjak".
* AscendedMeme: Shepard's reaction in an e-mail to Hannah to Sparatus' air-quoting is absolutely hilarious.
* ColonyDrop: As in canon, the turians try to suppress the Alliance resistance on Shanxi by deorbiting satellites and other space junk.
* CrackPairing: [[invoked]] An extremely odd choice for the main pairing considering that in the games Captain, later Rear Admiral, Shepard and Councilor Sparatus were never even on the same planet at the same time. Nevertheless, it works.
* CuttingOffTheBranches: Commander Shepard is female, has the Spacer background, and [[spoiler:romanced Garrus]].
* [[IJustShotMarvinInTheFace I Just Shot Marvin in the Arm]]: Sparatus was only able to capture Hannah because her rifle got caught on something when she was fleeing and went off.
* InterspeciesRomance: Two of them, between Hannah and Sparatus and [[spoiler:Shepard and Garrus]].
* AMatchMadeInStockholm: Sparatus and Hannah start out on opposite sides of the First Contact War, get separated from their units, and end up with him taking her prisoner. They gradually grow friendlier and eventually sleep together.
* MysteriousBacker: Sparatus is recast as one for Commander Shepard due to loving her mother
* NotSafeForWork: A few scenes of explicit sex.
* TranslatorMicrobes: Shepard was bringing a captured turian translator back to the Alliance resistance when her vehicle was hit. Sparatus can understand her from the start because of his translator, but only gradually learns English.
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