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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Land and the Islands of Ormal are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties. There ''is'' a reasonable amount of adult Darklanders within Mórenorë, but they are mostly confined to the major settlements of Arvalin and Delduthland.

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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Land and the Islands of Ormal are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties. There ''is'' a reasonable amount of adult Darklanders within Mórenorë, but they are mostly confined to the major settlements of Arvalin Arvalin, Salvidor, and Delduthland.


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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: When Jykale converses with Naikamil in a hot spring near the Black Mountains. In other words, a 19-year-old young man spends a HotSpringsEpisode with a fully-grown female dragon.
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Also, the author of this series has plans for another story set in the central regions of Mórenorë, which may be set in the early Second Age. The WorkingTitle is "''The March for the Banded Fire''". The events of this story will tie in even more with the events in Middle-earth, and even show a bit of the history of events that happen in later Ages.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]

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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]

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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]



* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.
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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Land abd Islands of Ormal are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties. There ''is'' a reasonable amount of adult Darklanders within Mórenorë, but they are mostly confined to the major settlements of Arvalin and Delduthland.

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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Land abd and the Islands of Ormal are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties. There ''is'' a reasonable amount of adult Darklanders within Mórenorë, but they are mostly confined to the major settlements of Arvalin and Delduthland.

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''Servants'' also is also set in the more obscure regions of Middle-earth, such as Harad, the Sunlands, and the Seven Lands of the South. It is also set in lands near both Middle-earth and Mórenorë, such as the Islands of Ormal.



* GhibliHills: The Green Mountains.

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* GhibliHills: The Green Mountains.Mountains in Delduthland, which is essentially {{Arcadia}} to Arvalin.

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''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a minor villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda.

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''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a minor villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda.
Arda. It also focuses on the people and other creatures that serve, worship, or live under her dominion in this obscure, previously under-written region of Tolkien's world.


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* WorldBuilding: The story is essentially set in a ConstructedWorld [[UpToEleven within a]] ConstructedWorld.

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The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].

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The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be found read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].

The third part, ''Mother of Pain'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7821111/1/TSOU-Part-III-Mother-of-Pain
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The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].
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* FiveManBand: The five main Darklanders introduced so far in the story:
** TheHero: Jykale
** TheLancer: Grodyn
** TheSmartGuy: Galkyn
** TheBigGuy: Jhebdryk
** TheChick: Rhejya
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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Lands are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties.

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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Lands Land abd Islands of Ormal are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties.twenties. There ''is'' a reasonable amount of adult Darklanders within Mórenorë, but they are mostly confined to the major settlements of Arvalin and Delduthland.



* TheSavageSouth: Mórenorë to Middle-earth, The Islands of Ormal to the Sunlands.
* TranslationConvention: Ungoliant's minions speak three languages: Renorin (the CommonSpeech of the inhabitants of Mórenorë), Gongon (the language of the Gongs), and a third (currently unidentified) language when communicating with each other. The latter is the one that is translated to English for the audience's sake, since it is the language that is the most univerally used.

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* TheSavageSouth: Mórenorë to Middle-earth, Middle-earth; The Islands of Ormal to the Sunlands.
* TranslationConvention: Ungoliant's minions speak three languages: Renorin (the CommonSpeech CommonTongue of the inhabitants of Mórenorë), Gongon (the language of the Gongs), and a third (currently unidentified) language when communicating with each other. The latter is the one that is translated to English for the audience's sake, since it is the language that is the most univerally used.
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* TranslationConvention: Ungoliant's minions speak three languages: Renorin (the CommonSpeech of the inhabitants of Mórenorë), Gongon (the language of the Gongs), and a third (currently unidentified) language when communicating with each other. The latter is the one that is translated to English for the audience's sake, since it is the language that is the most univerally used.
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* EldritchLocation: Mórenorë is simply packed with these. The south-western region alone contains a black wasteland with an [[RedSkyTakeWarning ominous red sky]], a gigantic monster-infested network of ravines and canyons running across it, a metropolis of massive, decaying towers, a mountain range of dormant volcanoes, another mountain range covered in vegetation, and a forest of trees with strange, even dangerous shapes.

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* EldritchLocation: Mórenorë is simply packed with these. The south-western region region, Arvalin, alone contains a black wasteland with an [[RedSkyTakeWarning ominous red sky]], a gigantic monster-infested network of ravines and canyons running across it, a metropolis of massive, decaying towers, a mountain range of dormant volcanoes, another mountain range covered in vegetation, and a forest of trees with strange, even dangerous shapes.
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* LostWorld: Mórenorë is mostly covered in jungles, and is inhabited by many strange and unknown creatures.

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* LostWorld: Mórenorë is mostly covered in jungles, and is inhabited by many strange and unknown creatures. Gologoth, in particular, falls much closer to this definition.

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* GroinAttack: Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment.

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* GroinAttack: Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment. moment.
** Also played straight in an earlier chapter, when a Gong finds himself on the receiving end of a rather painful collision with an Elf's staff.
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Namespacing, took out redundant bluelinks.


'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', by [[Creator/JRRTolkien J.R.R. Tolkien]].


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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'' by [[Creator/JRRTolkien J.R.R. Tolkien]].

Creator/JRRTolkien.



This story is essentially an ElsewhereFic, and features very few canon characters from the Tolkien legendarium, though it is still set in the same universe and time period as ''TheSilmarillion'' (to be specific, the late First Age). Only a handful of canon characters appear or are even referenced in the story, while the rest of the characters are either [[CanonForeigner derived from licensed Tolkien-related works]], or [[OriginalCharacter created exclusively for the story]]. ''Servants'' also utilizes various unused/obscure elements from ''TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth'', TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying, and other non-canonical material.

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This story is essentially an ElsewhereFic, and features very few canon characters from the Tolkien legendarium, though it is still set in the same universe and time period as ''TheSilmarillion'' ''The Silmarillion'' (to be specific, the late First Age). Only a handful of canon characters appear or are even referenced in the story, while the rest of the characters are either [[CanonForeigner derived from licensed Tolkien-related works]], or [[OriginalCharacter created exclusively for the story]]. ''Servants'' also utilizes various unused/obscure elements from ''TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth'', ''Literature/TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth'', TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying, and other non-canonical material.



* PatchworkFic: Features characters, locations, and other elements from ''[[TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth The History of Middle-earth]]'', ''Tabletopgame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', and various Fanon based on ''TheSilmarillion''.

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* PatchworkFic: Features characters, locations, and other elements from ''[[TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth The ''The History of Middle-earth]]'', ''Tabletopgame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', Middle-earth'', ''Middle-earth Role Playing'', and various Fanon based on ''TheSilmarillion''.''The Silmarillion''.



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* GroinAttack: Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment.
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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', by [[JRRTolkien J.R.R. Tolkien]].


''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a minor villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda.

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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', by [[JRRTolkien [[Creator/JRRTolkien J.R.R. Tolkien]].


Tolkien]].


''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a minor villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda.
Arda.



* [[{{Mook}} Mooks]]: Ungoliant's minions, thralls, and other subjects include [[OurOrcsAreDifferent Gongs]], [[OurOgresAreHungrier Sarqindi]], [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]], Darklanders, [[WackyWaysideTribe Greblings]], [[EldritchAbomination Delvers of the Deep]], and ''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Pygmies]]''.

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* [[{{Mook}} Mooks]]: Ungoliant's minions, thralls, and other subjects include [[OurOrcsAreDifferent Gongs]], [[OurOgresAreHungrier Sarqindi]], [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]], Darklanders, [[WackyWaysideTribe Greblings]], [[EldritchAbomination Delvers of the Deep]], and ''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Pygmies]]''.



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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', by J.R.R. Tolkien.


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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''TheSilmarillion'', by [[JRRTolkien J.R.R. Tolkien.Tolkien]].

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* ElsewhereFic: With shades of OriginalFlavour.

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* ElsewhereFic: With shades of OriginalFlavour. ''Servants'' is mostly set in Mórenorë, a continent located to the South of Middle-earth. The only regions of Middle-earth that are visited are Harad, the Seven Lands, and the Sunlands.
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** MookCarryover/RoguesGalleryTransplant: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].

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** MookCarryover/RoguesGalleryTransplant: MookCarryover/ RoguesGalleryTransplant: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].
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** MookCarryover: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].

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** MookCarryover: MookCarryover/RoguesGalleryTransplant: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].




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* VillainProtagonist: The majority of the story is focused on Ungoliant and her minions.
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* ChildSoldiers: Most of the Darklanders that serve as soldiers in the Dark Lands are teenagers and young adults in their early to mid twenties.

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