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* TheMultiverse: Universes are sorted according to an "energy gradient", which roughly serves as a SortingAlgorithmOfEvil by paralleling each universe's capacity for technology, magic and psychic power. Parts of it have been sealed off and can only be accessed from other parts of the multiverse through "hub universes", with that of ''SuzumiyaHaruhi'' serving as one of these. Interestingly, it also has {{Alternate Universe}}s; the second chapter shows that at least one version of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' different from the native ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'' one exists, while later chapters also show that [[spoiler: [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} canon!40k]] ]] also exists.

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* TheMultiverse: Universes are sorted according to an "energy gradient", which roughly serves as a SortingAlgorithmOfEvil by paralleling each universe's capacity for technology, magic and psychic power. Parts of it have been sealed off and can only be accessed from other parts of the multiverse through "hub universes", with that of ''SuzumiyaHaruhi'' ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' serving as one of these. Interestingly, it also has {{Alternate Universe}}s; the second chapter shows that at least one version of ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' different from the native ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'' one exists, while later chapters also show that [[spoiler: [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} canon!40k]] ]] also exists.

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** In [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=TG%20Quest some kind of online role-playing game]] where the characters fought the New Chaos Gods ([[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/21940202/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22289139/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22343819/ link]],
[[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22402083/ link]],
and [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22442104/ link]]) the protagonists [[ShutUpHannibal called the four gods out]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on their actions]] (although to be fair, the gods also got their side on, so it was not entirely one-sided).

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** In [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=TG%20Quest some kind of online role-playing game]] where the characters fought the New Chaos Gods ([[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/21940202/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22289139/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22343819/ link]],
link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22402083/ link]],
link]], and [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22442104/ link]]) the protagonists [[ShutUpHannibal called the four gods out]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on their actions]] (although to be fair, the gods also got their side on, so it was not entirely one-sided).

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** In some online role-playing game where the characters fought the New Chaos Gods ([[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/21940202/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22289139/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22343819/ link]]) the protagonists [[ShutUpHannibal called the four gods out]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on their actions]] (although to be fair, the gods also got their side on, so it was not entirely one-sided).

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** In [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=TG%20Quest some kind of online role-playing game game]] where the characters fought the New Chaos Gods ([[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/21940202/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22289139/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22343819/ link]],
[[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22402083/ link]],
and [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22442104/
link]]) the protagonists [[ShutUpHannibal called the four gods out]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on their actions]] (although to be fair, the gods also got their side on, so it was not entirely one-sided).

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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=132941 alternate]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door links]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more crazy as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.

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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=132941 alternate]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door links]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more crazy crazier as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.


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** In some online role-playing game where the characters fought the New Chaos Gods ([[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/21940202/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22289139/ link]], [[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/22343819/ link]]) the protagonists [[ShutUpHannibal called the four gods out]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech on their actions]] (although to be fair, the gods also got their side on, so it was not entirely one-sided).
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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door alternate FanFiction.Net link]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more crazy as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.

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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://www.([[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=132941 alternate]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door alternate FanFiction.Net link]]) links]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more crazy as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.
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*** Shinji crying out "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 68 (it was never explained what she did or why he got upset. In fact that was the last appearance of the main characters);

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*** Shinji crying out "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 68 (it was never explained what she did or exactly why he got upset. In fact that was the last appearance of the main characters);



** Some fans especulated that it would be like if Shinji God emperor from ''[[FanFic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Eva/40K]]'' met New Chaos. Charles Bhepin said that he would NOT be amused. Two words: "I JUDGE".

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** Some fans especulated that it would be like if Shinji God emperor from ''[[FanFic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Eva/40K]]'' met New Chaos. Charles Bhepin said that [[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083&start=1425#p3034304 he would NOT be amused.amused]]. Two words: "I JUDGE".
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*** Asuka's scheme to "inevitably" turn Starbuck into one of her followers was foreshadowed in the very beginning of chapter 69 and never touched upon again. In fact Starbuck did not even show up in the next chapters, and it was never revealed what Asuka's plan was;

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*** Asuka's scheme to "inevitably" turn Starbuck into one of her followers was foreshadowed stated in the very beginning of chapter 69 68 and never touched upon again. In fact Starbuck did not even show up in the next chapters, and it was never revealed what Asuka's plan was;

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*** Asuka's scheme to "inevitably" turn Starbuck into one of her followers (stated in chapter 69. The fic died in chapter 73 without giving it a resolution. We never ever knew what she was planning);
*** Shinji crying out "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 69 (it was never explained what she did. In fact that was the main characters' last appearance in this story);

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*** Asuka's scheme to "inevitably" turn Starbuck into one of her followers (stated was foreshadowed in the very beginning of chapter 69. The fic died in chapter 73 without giving it a resolution. We 69 and never ever knew touched upon again. In fact Starbuck did not even show up in the next chapters, and it was never revealed what she was planning);
Asuka's plan was;
*** Shinji crying out "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 69 68 (it was never explained what she did. did or why he got upset. In fact that was the main characters' last appearance of the main characters);
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in this story);chapter 68 New Chaos steals a spaceship of the canon 40,000 universe, and an Inquisitor notes that the Chaos Marines were behaving in a way strange way (trying to not hurt Eldar, not abandoning their wounded comrades...) and swears finding out what was happening;

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*** Shinji screaming "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 69 (we never knew why he got angry, only that it was related to her Starbuck-conscripting scheme);

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*** Shinji screaming crying out "What did you do?" to Asuka in chapter 69 (we (it was never knew why he got angry, only explained what she did. In fact that it was related to her Starbuck-conscripting scheme);the main characters' last appearance in this story);


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*** The board game that the Chaos Gods were friendly playing against each other as a way to build up their army got completely forgotten after the first few chapters (the last time that it got mentioned, Asukhon was on the lead with a Daemonworld);

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* HateFic: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The-Doorstop The Doorstop]] deconstructs The Open Door, although it is a bit more even-handed than other examples. Iolaus, the author, read it, and decided he could tell the story better - so he did so, flipping the perspective away from New Chaos and to the more heroic factions, as well as numerous other changes. For one, New Chaos actually dare to fight people that is not way weaker than them and get their butts kicked constantly. The story also provided an explanation for the New Chaos Gods stopping being JerkWithAHeartOfGold {{AntiHero}}es and devolving into {{Villain Protagonist}}s that constantly cross the MoralEventHorizon, forgetting the lessons of the Emperor about not being assholes to mortales and becoming better Chaos Gods: the evil natures of the Old Gods are corrupting them steadily, and they are aware of it, but they do not know how stopping it.

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* HateFic: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The-Doorstop The Doorstop]] deconstructs The Open Door, although it is a bit more even-handed than other examples. Iolaus, the author, read it, and decided he could tell the story better - so he did so, flipping the perspective away from New Chaos and to the more heroic factions, as well as numerous other changes. For one, The result is more even-handed than other examples, although some reviews would claim otherwise (ironically, the arguments that fans of ''The Open Door'' use against ''The Doorstop'' are also applicable to ''The Open door'' itself: "This story is nothing but an army of God-Mode Mary-Sues bashing and stomping likeable characters" has been said about ''The Doorstop'' but it describes ''The Open Door'' neatly).
** One of the changes is
New Chaos actually dare to fight people that is not way weaker than them and get their butts kicked constantly. The story also provided an explanation for the New Chaos Gods stopping being JerkWithAHeartOfGold {{AntiHero}}es and devolving into {{Villain Protagonist}}s that constantly cross the MoralEventHorizon, forgetting the lessons of the Emperor about not being assholes to mortales and becoming better Chaos Gods: the evil natures of the Old Gods are corrupting them steadily, and they are aware of it, but they do not know how stopping it.



* MisterSeahorse: Happens to [[spoiler:Lars, but he would tell you that even so, ''Skuld'' is still the father]].
** [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]: [[spoiler: Lars was already carrying the concentrated core of emotions that could potentially become a daemon with just a bit more emotion. Skuld just happened to accidentally fertilize it, adding something different to the daemon while doing so. So biologically Lars is the mother and Skuld is the father, insofar as biology can be applied to goddesses and daemons. (Technically, Lars doesn't have a gender. He tends to think of himself as male, but his sex is fully optional rather fun for all concerned.]])

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* MisterSeahorse: Happens to [[spoiler:Lars, but he would tell you that even so, ''Skuld'' is still the father]].
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[[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]: [[spoiler: Lars was already carrying the concentrated core of emotions that could potentially become a daemon with just a bit more emotion. Skuld just happened to accidentally fertilize it, adding something different to the daemon while doing so. So biologically Lars is the mother and Skuld is the father, insofar as biology can be applied to goddesses and daemons. (Technically, Lars doesn't have a gender. He tends to think of himself as male, but his sex is fully optional rather fun for all concerned.]])



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.

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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5433094/1/The_Doorstop The Doorstop]]'', a HateFic[=/=]{{Deconstruction}} {{Deconstruction}} of ''FanFic/TheOpenDoor'' has an especially notable one shortly after a major WhamEpisode when New!Chaos launches simultaneous commando raids against [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB]], [[StarWars the New Republic]], and [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann the Spiral Nation]] that nearly beheads all three nations in one fell swoop. Five chapters of brutal fighting, multiple [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]], and several character deaths later, Nanoha learns that an attack force similar in size to the one that ''her entire team'' barely managed to fight off [[ItMakesSenseInContext accidentally]] attacked St. Hilda Elementary School... and was single-handedly curbstomped by ''[[BadassAdorable Vivio]]'' in full Saint King mode. Naturally, this all happens completely off-screen.
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** The four main characters barely show up in the latter chapters. In the last fifteen or so chapters Misato and Rei are completely missing, and Shinji and Asuka only appear in a single, very brief scene in the beginning of the chapter 69. They not even are mentioned in most of chapters, even though this story is supposed to be about them.

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** The four main characters barely show up in the latter chapters. after a while. In the last fifteen or so twenty-four chapters Misato and Rei are completely missing, and Shinji only shows up in two very short scenes and Asuka only appear in makes a single, very brief scene in the beginning of the chapter 69.appearance. They not even are mentioned in most of chapters, even though this story is supposed to be about them.
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** Academia Nut said that it was the same situation than in the original Warhammer 40,000 universe, where the Imperium are the "good guys" compared with everyone else. This reasoning doesn't work for many reasons: In the original 40K universe there is NO good faction, everyone is aware of it, and we constantly see the worst factions. In ''The Open Door'' we have the Nanoha or Enterprise factions, that are ''definitely'' good, and we never see the worst faction of all (other than a Necrontyr simulation... in chapter 63. So it's too little and too late in that regard). We only are told that there are worst things out there that the main characters are fighting... but we never see them fighting them at all. So that New Chaos is not the "good" side by default, and they not even come across like a tolerable lesser evil.
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* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Many Lines No Waiting]]: The main plot used to focus on the New Chaos gods (before the author dropped them by the wayside), with another subplot focusing on [[OriginalCharacter Lars]] and Skuld. Then the Lars subplot became THE main plot for a time as a subplot focused on the ''Stiletto'' crew, plus any number of other ones. In the last chapters the main plot was focusing back on Lars.
* TheUnfettered: Neo Chaos approaches but does not fully achieve it, and is the worse in the eyes of some readers for it.

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* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Many Lines No Waiting]]: The At the beginning the main plot used to focus on the New Chaos gods (before the author dropped them by the wayside), with another subplot focusing on [[OriginalCharacter Lars]] and Skuld. Then the Lars subplot became THE main plot for a long time as a with another subplot focused on the ''Stiletto'' crew, plus any number of other ones. In the last published chapters the main plot was focusing back on Lars.
* TheUnfettered: Neo New Chaos approaches but does gods may be a good example of why, when trying to be The Unfettered, you either go all the way or do not fully bother at all. Their laws are anarchic and their combat philosophy is decidedly no-holds barred, with them using their BiggerStick to unreservedly [[CurbStompBattle Curb Stomp]] "weaker" universes' militaries, making DemonicPossession part of officer training, training their followers to see driving others to the DespairEventHorizon as a valid way to victory, and using brainwashing on their [=PoWs=] and telling said [=PoWs=] about it. However, because [[EvenEvilHasStandards they have standards and lines they will not cross]], their considerable strategic and tactical considerations and the relatively non-hardcore standards of their training (compared to many outstanding examples of TheSpartanWay at any rate), they fail to achieve it, the total lack of inhibitions of the truly Unfettered and is the worse moral fluidity that ensues. This results in the eyes of some readers for it.them appearing quite blackly villainous to many readers.
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* TheFettered: [=newChaos=] is utterly devoted to the protection of children, and caught child abusers often find that the question isn't whether they're fucked, but how bad.

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* TheFettered: [=newChaos=] New Chaos very nearly approach TheUnfettered, but one of the things holding them back from total freedom from limits is utterly devoted their utter devotion to the protection of children, and justified as three of their godly pantheon were formerly adolescents at the DysfunctionJunction. Those who get caught child abusers often abusing children find that the question isn't whether they're fucked, gonna get fucked up... but how bad.
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* TheGoodTheBadAndTheEvil: The setting has developed into a situation like this with dozens of sides in all three corners. Most notably, the main characters are the Bad ''or'' the Evil depending on your opinion of them (They ''definitely'' aren't the Good, not with ''[[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha and the crew]]'' around to be compared against them).
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* SuperPrototype: The ''Stiletto'', several times described as being too heavily armed for its frigate designation, and eventually slated for toning down.

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* SuperPrototype: The ''Stiletto'', several times described ''Stiletto'' is the first craft built by New Chaos as being too heavily armed a test bed for the combination of the technologies available to them. Although officially rated as a frigate, it can punch far, far above its frigate designation, and eventually slated for toning down.supposed weight. Eventually, with its long shakedown cruise over, its equipment receives rather drastic tonedown.
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* SuddenlySignificantCity: NesmeThe town of Nesme in ''[[ForgottenRealms Northern Faerun]]'' gets conquered by an interloper deity during the Times of Troubles and turned into the industrialized capital of a new country, the Republic of Noctis. Unfortunately, the concept of [[FantasticRacism equal rights for all sentient beings]] doesn't mesh well in a Medieval fantasy setting, causing most people to view Noctis as a LawfulEvil country for giving citizenship to [[AlwaysChaoticEvil drow, goblins, and orcs]] so long as said creatures follow the rules.
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->Twisting layers of unreality, fractal patterns of possible creations unfolded and bloomed before spiralling back into tiny vibrating loops the size of atoms. Entire cosmoses stacked like translucent vellum sheets, infinitely large and yet no thicker than a shadow, separated by impossibly vast gulfs transmittable with but a single thought. Impossible things of flavoured sound cavorted with crystalline tiers of niobium light while things not wholly described by any seven senses a person could name played flutes of ultraviolet fire. Creatures with only the vaguest impression of what codified physical laws were and the life that resulted from such conformity of physics pranced about in vile dances, psychic susurrations filling the void with their gibbering, bouncing unnoticed off of the things with stars for hearts and all of the intelligence of amoebas as they plied across eternity.

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->Twisting -->Twisting layers of unreality, fractal patterns of possible creations unfolded and bloomed before spiralling back into tiny vibrating loops the size of atoms. Entire cosmoses stacked like translucent vellum sheets, infinitely large and yet no thicker than a shadow, separated by impossibly vast gulfs transmittable with but a single thought. Impossible things of flavoured sound cavorted with crystalline tiers of niobium light while things not wholly described by any seven senses a person could name played flutes of ultraviolet fire. Creatures with only the vaguest impression of what codified physical laws were and the life that resulted from such conformity of physics pranced about in vile dances, psychic susurrations filling the void with their gibbering, bouncing unnoticed off of the things with stars for hearts and all of the intelligence of amoebas as they plied across eternity.

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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: '"What. Do. You. Want?" [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Adama]] hissed.'

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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: '"What. Do. You. Want?" [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Adama]] ''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Adama]]'' hissed.''
* PurpleProse: Academia Nut's writing style often gets ''real'' bad with this. [[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083&start=1525 In chapter 73]]:
->Twisting layers of unreality, fractal patterns of possible creations unfolded and bloomed before spiralling back into tiny vibrating loops the size of atoms. Entire cosmoses stacked like translucent vellum sheets, infinitely large and yet no thicker than a shadow, separated by impossibly vast gulfs transmittable with but a single thought. Impossible things of flavoured sound cavorted with crystalline tiers of niobium light while things not wholly described by any seven senses a person could name played flutes of ultraviolet fire. Creatures with only the vaguest impression of what codified physical laws were and the life that resulted from such conformity of physics pranced about in vile dances, psychic susurrations filling the void with their gibbering, bouncing unnoticed off of the things with stars for hearts and all of the intelligence of amoebas as they plied across eternity.



** Some fans especulated that it would be like if Shinji God emperor from ''[[FanFic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Eva/40K]]'' met New Chaos. WordOfGod stated that he would NOT be amused. Two words: "I JUDGE".

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** Some fans especulated that it would be like if Shinji God emperor from ''[[FanFic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Eva/40K]]'' met New Chaos. WordOfGod stated Charles Bhepin said that he would NOT be amused. Two words: "I JUDGE".
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* ShinyNewAustralia: For [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined the Colonials.]]]]

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* ShinyNewAustralia: For [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Australia is given to [[spoiler:''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined the Colonials.]]]]Colonials]]'' after they get to New Chaos's Earth.]]
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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door alternate FanFiction.Net link]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more CrazyAwesome as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.

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The MegaCrossover non-canonical side-story to ''FanFic/ThousandShinji'', ''[[http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=123083 The Open Door]]'' ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4320933/1/The_Open_Door alternate FanFiction.Net link]]) takes place twenty five years after Thousand Shinji, after Earth has been unified and Canon 40K technology introduced. At the beginning, a "representative" of Tzintchi is sent to negotiate with Kyon in ''[[Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya Haruhi's universe]]'', the eponymous 'open door'. It goes on from there and gets progressively more CrazyAwesome crazy as more and more universes are drawn into it via the new Chaos Gods' quest to defeat the Necrontyr and the C'tan.

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* RockBeatsLaser: The nBSG crew outfighting the Praxis. Yeah, they had fire support from the Stiletto, and the Colonials were in some ways more advanced than the Praxis, but still.

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* RockBeatsLaser: The ''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Bill Adama and the nBSG crew outfighting crew]]'' dance around the Praxis. Yeah, antimatter-equipped Praxis despite only having chemically-propelled kinetic energy weapons. Admittedly, they had fire support from the far superior Stiletto, and the Colonials were in some ways more advanced than the Praxis, but still.still...
** Also averted in that the odd ideology the Praxis had towards technology means that the Colonials are more advanced in some ways. "Apparently these nutcases used antimatter weapons, a technology the Colonials didn't possess because they had cheaper, more stable fuels that wouldn't destroy the ship on a lucky hit. Who strapped a bomb to their frakking asses like that?"
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* NukeEm: Attempted by [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined nBSG]] Cylons]] with city-killer nukes against the ''Stiletto''.

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* NukeEm: Attempted by [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined nBSG]] [[spoiler:''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined nBSG]]'' Cylons]] with city-killer nukes against the ''Stiletto''.''Stiletto'', but the ship tanks all of them without needing its shields.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: [=NeoChaos=] is a near perfect example of this, and openly states that they largely choose to visit universes where their abilities are to their advantage. In a less deliberate example, Lars is sent to the Manga/AhMyGoddess universe, where his origins give the local deities fits.

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* NormalFishInATinyPond: [=NeoChaos=] Constantly invoked. Neo Chaos is a near perfect example of this, and openly states that they largely choose to visit universes where their abilities are to their advantage. In a less deliberate example, Lars is sent to the Manga/AhMyGoddess ''Manga/AhMyGoddess'' universe, where his origins give the local deities fits.

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* DepletedPhlebotinumShells: Hi, pit fiend. Meet Chaos-runed, Skuld-enchanted god-killer shotgun shell fired from Skuld's mentally shadow magic-crafted eight-gauge. Bye, pit fiend.

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Hi, pit fiend. Meet Chaos-runed, Skuld-enchanted god-killer shotgun shell fired from Skuld's mentally shadow magic-crafted eight-gauge. Bye, pit fiend.



* NighInvulnerable: The ''Stiletto'', at least with regards to [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined nBSG]] Cylon city-killer nukes]], which it tanks even without its shields. Justified due to the severe technological superiority.

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-->"You mean where he put a round between the eyes of that one guy with poor trigger safety and someone managed to have the bullet spray from the death spasms break the locking mechanism on a crane, thus dropping a cargo container full of volatile drugs on the advancing forces right before we were about to be overrun? Yeah, I'll admit that was art,"[[spoiler: ''[[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Vita]]'']] conceded.
* NighInvulnerable: The ''Stiletto'', at least with regards to [[spoiler:[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined nBSG]] Cylon city-killer nukes]], which it tanks even without its shields. Justified due to the severe technological superiority.
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* BackupBluff: Lars, a demon of Chaos, is accidentally transported to a plane full of devils. However, the devils are ''terrified'' of Chaos Demons, and Lars uses this trope as well as the fear they have to keep them from killing him, and signing a binding contract with them, saying that Chaos will not invade their home. Once he's not in danger of getting attacked, he reveals that, despite what he insinuated, he's lost, cut off from his people, and has ''no'' idea how he got to this plane to begin with. But because the devils are LawfulEvil, and they signed a contract with him preventing them from attacking him, it leads to epic-level facepalms and groaning from the devils at how easily they were tricked.

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* BrokenAesop: Academia Nut stated that the Chaos Gods can not move their followers to another universe because don't want that they go down the same road that Old Chaos did and make their same mistakes, hence they want to be around to watch their progress... Still they ARE going down the same road and making the same mistakes!

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* BrokenAesop: Academia Nut stated BrokenAesop:
** In ''Thousand Shinji'' Shinji suffered a lot because the Emperor wanted him developing empathy and learning
that mortals suffer when gods are assholes. In this story Shinji and the other gods has forgotten about it completely.
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Chaos Gods can not don't move their followers to another other universe because they don't want that they their people go down the same road that Old Chaos did and make their same mistakes, hence and they want to be around to watch their progress... Still they ARE followers' evolution... still New Chaos makes the same mistakes and is going down the that same road and making the same mistakes!road!
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* TheSpartanWay: Divine Assassin training. It starts with a five-kilometre run on hot asphalt immediately followed by a two-kilometre swim across the Aegean sea, with burnt feet still smarting, and the 4-year training includes torture and a week-long MindRape session at the hands of an EldritchAbomination. The end result kills 37 excessively gung-ho trainees out of the 120 volunteers, with the rest washed out to less intense courses, which admittedly does not look very severe compared to some of the other examples here. Space Marine trained inherited from canon!40k most likely follows the old vein too.

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* TheSpartanWay: Divine Assassin training. It starts with a five-kilometre run on hot asphalt immediately followed by a two-kilometre swim across the Aegean sea, with burnt feet still smarting, and the 4-year training includes torture and a week-long MindRape session at the hands of an EldritchAbomination. The end result kills 37 excessively gung-ho trainees out of the 120 volunteers, with the rest washed out to less intense courses, which admittedly does not look very severe compared to some of the other examples here.courses. Space Marine trained inherited from canon!40k most likely follows the old vein too.



** The Lars/[=Skuld/=]ForgottenRealms subplot. Some readers might be left wondering what happened to the spaceships and BeamSpam and conniving-yet-benevolent {{Eldritch Abomination}}s that are supposed to be the MAIN characters but are often absent.

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** The Lars/[=Skuld/=]ForgottenRealms subplot. Some Many readers might be were left wondering what happened to the spaceships and BeamSpam and conniving-yet-benevolent {{Eldritch Abomination}}s that are supposed to be the MAIN characters but are often nearly always absent.



* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Many Lines No Waiting]]: The main plot used to focus on the New Chaos gods (before the author dropped them by the wayside), with a main subplot focusing on Lars and Skuld, another focusing on the ''Stiletto'' crew, plus any number of other ones. A ''StarWars'' one was beginning in the last chapters.

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* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Many Lines No Waiting]]: The main plot used to focus on the New Chaos gods (before the author dropped them by the wayside), with a main another subplot focusing on [[OriginalCharacter Lars]] and Skuld. Then the Lars and Skuld, another focusing subplot became THE main plot for a time as a subplot focused on the ''Stiletto'' crew, plus any number of other ones. A ''StarWars'' one was beginning in In the last chapters.chapters the main plot was focusing back on Lars.



** Quite a number of subplots, such as the ''Series/StargateSG1'' or ''LyricalNanoha'' ones, were left untouched in a while when the hiatus dropped by.
** The four main characters barely show up in the latter chapters. In the last eleven or so chapters Misato and Rei are completely missing, and Shinji and Asuka only appear in a single, very brief scene in the beginning of the chapter 69. They not even are mentioned in most of chapters, even though this story is supposed to be about them.

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** Quite a number of subplots, such as the ''Series/StargateSG1'' or ''LyricalNanoha'' ones, were had been left untouched in a while when the hiatus dropped by.
fic stopped to update.
** The four main characters barely show up in the latter chapters. In the last eleven fifteen or so chapters Misato and Rei are completely missing, and Shinji and Asuka only appear in a single, very brief scene in the beginning of the chapter 69. They not even are mentioned in most of chapters, even though this story is supposed to be about them.
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* TheSpartanWay: Divine Assassin training, presumably Space Marine training too.

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* TheSpartanWay: Divine Assassin training, presumably training. It starts with a five-kilometre run on hot asphalt immediately followed by a two-kilometre swim across the Aegean sea, with burnt feet still smarting, and the 4-year training includes torture and a week-long MindRape session at the hands of an EldritchAbomination. The end result kills 37 excessively gung-ho trainees out of the 120 volunteers, with the rest washed out to less intense courses, which admittedly does not look very severe compared to some of the other examples here. Space Marine training trained inherited from canon!40k most likely follows the old vein too.

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* BoringInvincibleHero: Accusations have popped up, especially in earnest after [[spoiler: an Eva defeated a Bolo in chapter 64.]] Then again, given the strategic considerations, a case can be made for...
** ShowyInvincibleHero

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* BoringInvincibleHero: Accusations have popped up, especially in earnest after [[spoiler: an Eva defeated a Bolo in chapter 64.]] Then again, given the strategic considerations, a case can be made for...
** ShowyInvincibleHero
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* CardCarryingVillain: The main characters and their troops identify themselves like "evil". Intriguingly they still ''complain'' when someone else labels them like "evil"... which makes no sense because if they don't consider they are the "good guys" then why does it bother them being regarded like the "bad guys"?

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