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* CompleteMonster: Old age has made Azula [[BeyondTheImpossible even worse than her father]], with her fear of death making her more unstable and desperate than ever. It's pretty unnerving coming from the same author who was able to give her a believable {{Heel Face Turn}} in the Azula Trilogy. It's also very much in-character and believable, too - she wasn't ''born'' a monster here ''or'' in canon, but by the end she was so far gone that only death could destroy the evil she has become.
** Gian also counts. Late into the first story arc, he kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use for her]]. He's also revealed to be [[spoiler:an Earth Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
** Gian also counts. Late into the first story arc, he kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use for her]]. He's also revealed to be [[spoiler:an Earth Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
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** Gian also counts. Late into the first story arc, he kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use for her]]. He's also revealed to be [[spoiler:an Earth Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
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(N.B. Be WARNED that there will most likely come to be [[LateArrivalSpoiler Late Arrival]] '''[[SPOILERS]]''' in the Sequel's trope section, particularly as time goes on and it becomes harder to hide aspects of the first story's plot.)
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* DemotedToExtra: Jiazin, TheHero in the first story, will be reduced to supporting character according to WordOfGod. Given that he wants the other major characters to shine this time,the decision is not necessarily a bad one.
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* ShipperOnDeck: [[spoiler: Aang]] seems to ship Jiazin/Kanoda.
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]].
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]]. Fong]]
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* {{Late Arrival Spoiler}}/{{Trailers Always Spoil}}: Unsurprisingly, the sequel's summary spoils that [[spoiler: Aang is alive, WalkingTheEarth and the (apparent) central character; not to mention the cults.]] Right now, avoiding the author's profile is the best way to avoid spoiling oneself about this, but avoiding the summary whilst browsing helps as well.
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* BigBadDuumvirate: [[EvilOverlord Li Shang]] and [[HighPriest Aitan]]
* {{Late Arrival Spoiler}}/{{Trailers Always Spoil}}: Unsurprisingly, the sequel's summary spoils that[[spoiler: Aang [[spoiler:Aang is alive, WalkingTheEarth and the (apparent) central character; not to mention the cults.]] Right now, avoiding the author's profile is the best way to avoid spoiling oneself about this, but avoiding the summary whilst browsing helps as well.well.
* [[TheParalyzer Paralyzer, The]]: Aitan
* {{Late Arrival Spoiler}}/{{Trailers Always Spoil}}: Unsurprisingly, the sequel's summary spoils that
* [[TheParalyzer Paralyzer, The]]: Aitan
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* ActionGirl: Jiazin and Chaiy are the two most notable. Even [[spoiler: Yue is capable of handling herself in a fight, though she doesn't like it]].
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* ActionGirl: Jiazin and Chaiy are the two most notable. Even [[spoiler: Yue [[spoiler:Yue is capable of handling herself in a fight, though she doesn't like it]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler: Shiyan, who sinks into catatonia after accidentally killing the person she was raised to see as an absolute god.]]
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** Cheng, thanks to being less cruel than the other Chosen (and her frequent ButtMonkey tendencies), comes off as somewhat endearing rather than scary in her desire to follow the Chosen's purpose, and [[spoiler: yet she actually pulls off the "villain" part when she kills Shu Bei Fong as a result of said loyalty]]. It's really not hard to feel for her even from the start.
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** Cheng, thanks to being less cruel than the other Chosen (and her frequent ButtMonkey tendencies), comes off as somewhat endearing rather than scary in her desire to follow the Chosen's purpose, and [[spoiler: yet [[spoiler:yet she actually pulls off the "villain" part when she kills Shu Bei Fong as a result of said loyalty]]. It's really not hard to feel for her even from the start.
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* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: High General Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Avatar Aang]] go after Azula herself.
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* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: High [[spoiler:High General Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Avatar [[spoiler:Avatar Aang]] go after Azula herself.
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: [[spoiler: Jiazin.]]
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: [[spoiler: Jiazin.]][[spoiler:Jiazin]]
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** And [[spoiler: Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
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** And [[spoiler: Yue]] [[spoiler:Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
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* BigBad: Azula.
* BigBadWannabe: Yuan.
* BookEnds: [[spoiler:The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue is Scribed by Fire Lord Jiazin 5 years after her coronation, reaffirming that hope has indeed returned to the world]].
* BigBadWannabe: Yuan.
* BookEnds: [[spoiler:The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue is Scribed by Fire Lord Jiazin 5 years after her coronation, reaffirming that hope has indeed returned to the world]].
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* BigBad: Azula.
Azula
* BigBadWannabe:Yuan.
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler:The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue isScribed scribed by Fire Lord Jiazin 5 years after her coronation, reaffirming that hope has indeed returned to the world]].
* BigBadWannabe:
* BookEnds: [[spoiler:The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue is
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** Book 1: [[spoiler: Gian]], fought at [[spoiler: the Rebel Base at Lake Laogai]].
** Book 2: [[spoiler: Admiral Yuan]], fought at [[spoiler: the N.W.T. City Ruins]].
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on [[spoiler: her warship, not far from Long Du Shi]].
* CoDragons: Directly beneath Azula is her inner circle, who are all roughly equal- [[TheChessmaster High Minister Qing Xi]], [[SmugSnake High Admiral Yuan]], [[NobleDemon High General Xia]] and [[DarkActionGirl the Mistress of the Chosen]]. There is also Zhi, the Chosen who acts as Azula's personal bodyguard and attendant.
** Book 2: [[spoiler: Admiral Yuan]], fought at [[spoiler: the N.W.T. City Ruins]].
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on [[spoiler: her warship, not far from Long Du Shi]].
* CoDragons: Directly beneath Azula is her inner circle, who are all roughly equal- [[TheChessmaster High Minister Qing Xi]], [[SmugSnake High Admiral Yuan]], [[NobleDemon High General Xia]] and [[DarkActionGirl the Mistress of the Chosen]]. There is also Zhi, the Chosen who acts as Azula's personal bodyguard and attendant.
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** Book 1: [[spoiler: Gian]], [[spoiler:Gian]], fought at [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Rebel Base at Lake Laogai]].
** Book 2:[[spoiler: Admiral [[spoiler:Admiral Yuan]], fought at [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the N.W.T. City Ruins]].
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on[[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her warship, not far from Long Du Shi]].
* CoDragons: Directly beneath Azula is her inner circle, who are all roughlyequal- equal; [[TheChessmaster High Minister Qing Xi]], [[SmugSnake High Admiral Yuan]], [[NobleDemon High General Xia]] and [[DarkActionGirl the Mistress of the Chosen]]. There is also Zhi, the Chosen who acts as Azula's personal bodyguard and attendant.
** Book 2:
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on
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** Gian also counts. Late into the first story arc, he kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use for her]]. He's also revealed to be [[spoiler: an Earth Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Gian's - which involves being stabbed through the chest by a sword ''wreathed in blue fire'', and being burned alive from within]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler: Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account [[spoiler: being offed by one of her own [[UndyingLoyalty Undyingly Loyal]] Chosen]].
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Gian's - which involves being stabbed through the chest by a sword ''wreathed in blue fire'', and being burned alive from within]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler: Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account [[spoiler: being offed by one of her own [[UndyingLoyalty Undyingly Loyal]] Chosen]].
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** Gian also counts. Late into the first story arc, he kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use for her]]. He's also revealed to be [[spoiler: an [[spoiler:an Earth Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
* CruelAndUnusualDeath:[[spoiler: Gian's [[spoiler:Gian's - which involves being stabbed through the chest by a sword ''wreathed in blue fire'', and being burned alive from within]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:[[spoiler: Yue [[spoiler:Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until[[spoiler: Jiazin [[spoiler:Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account[[spoiler: being [[spoiler:being offed by one of her own [[UndyingLoyalty Undyingly Loyal]] Chosen]].
* CruelAndUnusualDeath:
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father), and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor [[spoiler:Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father), and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* FetishFuel: Some people consider the Chosen to be this, apparently, judging by some of the reviews.
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** TheSixthColumn - Gian, [[spoiler: Xia, Qing Xi]]
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** TheSixthColumn [[LesCollaborateurs The Sixth Column]] - Gian, [[spoiler: Xia, [[spoiler:Xia, Qing Xi]]
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** TheChick - [[spoiler: Yue]]
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler: Aang]]
* FlamingSword: Jiazin can wreath her sword in fire [[spoiler: as Gian found out to his misfortune]].
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler: Aang]]
* FlamingSword: Jiazin can wreath her sword in fire [[spoiler: as Gian found out to his misfortune]].
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** TheChick - [[spoiler: Yue]]
[[spoiler:Yue]]
** TheSixthRanger -[[spoiler: Aang]]
[[spoiler:Aang]]
* FlamingSword: Jiazin can wreath her sword in fire[[spoiler: as [[spoiler:as Gian found out to his misfortune]].
** TheSixthRanger -
* FlamingSword: Jiazin can wreath her sword in fire
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler: High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler: High [[spoiler:High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice:[[spoiler: Yue, [[spoiler:Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard:[[spoiler: Azula [[spoiler:Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice:
* HoistByHisOwnPetard:
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Cheng, in contrast to the more experienced and ruthless Shiyan. [[spoiler: Then [[SubvertedTrope she kills Shu Bei Fong ...]]]]
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Cheng, in contrast to the more experienced and ruthless Shiyan. [[spoiler: Then [[spoiler:Then [[SubvertedTrope she kills Shu Bei Fong ...]]]]
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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: How Jiazin kills Gian - the description of his death is [[NightmareFuel quite scary]], too]].
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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How Jiazin kills Gian - the description of his death is [[NightmareFuel quite scary]], too]].
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her close connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler: is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* MagnificentBastard: Azula of course, and also Qing Xi. Both of them openly admit that they have no real trust in each other, and just trust the idea that there would be no advantage to either betraying the other.
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler: is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* MagnificentBastard: Azula of course, and also Qing Xi. Both of them openly admit that they have no real trust in each other, and just trust the idea that there would be no advantage to either betraying the other.
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: Well, [[spoiler:Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her close connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan[[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]]. \n* MagnificentBastard: Azula of course, and also Qing Xi. Both of them openly admit that they have no real trust in each other, and just trust the idea that there would be no advantage to either betraying the other.
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan
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* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears [[spoiler: particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Aang.]]
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Aang.]]
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
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* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears [[spoiler: particularly [[spoiler:particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
* NotQuiteDead:[[spoiler: Aang.[[spoiler:Aang.]]
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impendingdeath- death - but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and[[spoiler: spirits]] [[spoiler:spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When[[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* NotQuiteDead:
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler:Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and
* PillarOfLight: When
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* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]].
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* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]].[[spoiler:ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]]
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: Shu [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan:[[spoiler: Tui [[spoiler:Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know[[spoiler: what [[spoiler:what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that [[spoiler:that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
* SealedGoodInACan:
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know
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* [[spoiler: ThanatosGambit: After Azula accepts that she's going to die, she figures she'll take as many people as possible with her, but in a way that will result in her being remembered as a martyr who tried to stop those deaths while the real heroes will be seen as the ones responsible.]]
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* [[spoiler: ThanatosGambit: [[spoiler:ThanatosGambit: After Azula accepts that she's going to die, she figures she'll take as many people as possible with her, but in a way that will result in her being remembered as a martyr who tried to stop those deaths while the real heroes will be seen as the ones responsible.]]responsible]].
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Shiyan and Cheng.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler: After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler: After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Shiyan and Cheng.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl:[[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl:
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* [[spoiler: TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
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* [[spoiler: TragicMonster: [[spoiler:TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
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* {{Unperson}}: [[spoiler: Zuko - after his death, his very existence was struck from the official records and history, with him only appearing in some private documentations. Upon reading them, Jiazin is horrified]].
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* {{Unperson}}: [[spoiler: Zuko [[spoiler:Zuko - after his death, his very existence was struck from the official records and history, with him only appearing in some private documentations. Upon reading them, Jiazin is horrified]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler: Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
* [[spoiler: WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Narrated by Jiazin in the historical records.]]
* [[spoiler: WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Narrated by Jiazin in the historical records.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler: Cheng, [[spoiler:Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng [[spoiler:Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]
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* TimeSkip: [[spoiler: Five years, pretty much picking up where the story left off in the epilogue.]]
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* TimeSkip: [[spoiler: Five [[spoiler:Five years, pretty much picking up where the story left off in the epilogue.]]
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* StandardEvilEmpireHierarchy:
** TheEmperor: Azula
** The Right Hand: The Mistress
** The General: High General Xia
** The Guard: High Admiral Yuan
** The Oddball: High Minister Qing Xi
** TheEmperor: Azula
** The Right Hand: The Mistress
** The General: High General Xia
** The Guard: High Admiral Yuan
** The Oddball: High Minister Qing Xi
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An ''{{Avatar The Last Airbender}}'' [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5071591/1/Avatar_The_Fall_of_the_Fire_Empire fanfic]] by contributor Tropers/MasterGhandalf who surprisingly also wrote the [[Fanfic/AzulaTrilogy Azula Trilogy]]. It's an AU story in which [[TheBadGuyWins Aang was quickly defeated at some point in season one]], and the Fire Nation took over the world and became the Fire Empire. Several decades later, an elderly Azula still rules the Empire with an iron fist as the Dragon Empress, with the Earth Kingdom completely enslaved and the Water Tribes reduced to a few scattered villages. In this dark future, we follow three main viewpoint characters, one from each of the remaining nations:
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* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]]. Kanoda]].
** It seems these ''will'' be picked up in the sequel; see below.
** It seems these ''will'' be picked up in the sequel; see below.
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* BlurbsAlwaysSpoil: The fanfic's {{Late Arrival Spoiler}}/{{Trailers Always Spoil}}: Unsurprisingly, the sequel's summary spoils that [[spoiler: Aang is alive, because he's now WalkingTheEarth and the (apparent) central character; and also that not to mention the story is set five years later.cults.]] Right now, avoiding the author's profile is the best way to avoid spoiling oneself about this, but avoiding the summary whilst browsing helps as well.
*TimeSkipTimeSkip: [[spoiler: Five years, pretty much picking up where the story left off in the epilogue.]]
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* TimeSkip
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* [[spoiler:RetGone: A version of this happened to Zuko - his very existence has been struck from the official records and history, and very few people alive even know he ever was. Jiazin is understandably horrified]].
* {{Unperson}}: [[spoiler: Zuko - after his death, his very existence was struck from the official records and history, with him only appearing in some private documentations. Upon reading them, Jiazin is horrified]].
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]]]
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!! ''Legacy of the Fire Empire'' contains examples of
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Now has a sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7121603/1/Legacy_of_the_Fire_Empire Legacy of the Fire Empire]]''. Five years after the fall, Kanoda and [[spoiler: Avatar Aang]] must deal with the aftermath and a new threat.
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An ''{{Avatar The Last Airbender}}'' [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5071591/1/Avatar_The_Fall_of_the_Fire_Empire fanfic]] by contributor Tropers/MasterGhandalf who also wrote the [[Fanfic/AzulaTrilogy Azula Trilogy]]. It's an AU story in which Aang was quickly defeated at some point in season one, and the Fire Nation took over the world and became the Fire Empire. Several decades later, an elderly Azula still rules the Empire with an iron fist as the Dragon Empress, with the Earth Kingdom completely enslaved and the Water Tribes reduced to a few scattered villages. In this dark future, we follow three main viewpoint characters, one from each of the remaining nations:
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An ''{{Avatar The Last Airbender}}'' [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5071591/1/Avatar_The_Fall_of_the_Fire_Empire fanfic]] by contributor Tropers/MasterGhandalf who surprisingly also wrote the [[Fanfic/AzulaTrilogy Azula Trilogy]]. It's an AU story in which [[TheBadGuyWins Aang was quickly defeated at some point in season one, one]], and the Fire Nation took over the world and became the Fire Empire. Several decades later, an elderly Azula still rules the Empire with an iron fist as the Dragon Empress, with the Earth Kingdom completely enslaved and the Water Tribes reduced to a few scattered villages. In this dark future, we follow three main viewpoint characters, one from each of the remaining nations:
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Not true- while predominantly called by his title only, Yan Li is named during Jiazin\'s audience with Azula, midway through the first arc.
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* NoNameGiven: For a while - despite playing a prominent role in the story, it's not until the climax of the second arc that Jiazin's father, the Governor, is finally named - Yan Li.
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* TheCaligula: Azula
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* TheCaligula: Azula Azula
* ClimaxBoss: There's one at the end of each major arc (or 'Book'). Noteworrthy locations, too:
** Book 1: [[spoiler: Gian]], fought at [[spoiler: the Rebel Base at Lake Laogai]].
** Book 2: [[spoiler: Admiral Yuan]], fought at [[spoiler: the N.W.T. City Ruins]].
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on [[spoiler: her warship, not far from Long Du Shi]].
* ClimaxBoss: There's one at the end of each major arc (or 'Book'). Noteworrthy locations, too:
** Book 1: [[spoiler: Gian]], fought at [[spoiler: the Rebel Base at Lake Laogai]].
** Book 2: [[spoiler: Admiral Yuan]], fought at [[spoiler: the N.W.T. City Ruins]].
** Book 3: Fire Empress Azula, fought on [[spoiler: her warship, not far from Long Du Shi]].
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Gian's - which involves being stabbed through the chest by a sword ''wreathed in blue fire'', and being burned alive from within]].
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: The Chosen, like the Kyoshi Warriors, use katanas (though unlike the KWs, they don't bother with fans). Subverted in that Jiazin, despite being a wealthy and high-ranking noble, uses a straight-edged sword instead.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: The Chosen, like the Kyoshi Warriors, use katanas (though unlike the KWs, they don't bother with fans). Subverted in that Jiazin, despite being a wealthy and high-ranking noble, uses a straight-edged sword instead. instead.
* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: How Jiazin kills Gian - the description of his death is [[NightmareFuel quite scary]], too]].
* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: How Jiazin kills Gian - the description of his death is [[NightmareFuel quite scary]], too]].
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An ''{{Avatar The Last Airbender}}'' [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5071591/1/Avatar_The_Fall_of_the_Fire_Empire fanfic]] by contributor {{Master Ghandalf}}, Tropers/MasterGhandalf who also wrote the [[Fanfic/AzulaTrilogy Azula Trilogy]]. It's an AU story in which Aang was quickly defeated at some point in season one, and the Fire Nation took over the world and became the Fire Empire. Several decades later, an elderly Azula still rules the Empire with an iron fist as the Dragon Empress, with the Earth Kingdom completely enslaved and the Water Tribes reduced to a few scattered villages. In this dark future, we follow three main viewpoint characters, one from each of the remaining nations:
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Word Of God : Jiazin isn\'t quite as strong a talent as Azula, though she\'s pretty close. Also, fixing typo that\'s been bugging me.
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Jiazin is the daughter of the governor of Long Du Shi (formerly Ba Sing Se), and just as much of a teenage firebending prodigy of Azula. She is summoned to the Empress' palace for a mysterious mission, but soon finds herself a pawn for both Azula and her spymaster Qing Xi.
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Jiazin is the daughter of the governor of Long Du Shi (formerly Ba Sing Se), and just almost as much of a teenage firebending prodigy of as Azula. She is summoned to the Empress' palace for a mysterious mission, but soon finds herself a pawn for both Azula and her spymaster Qing Xi.
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* NietzscheWannabe: Azula is a borderline example.
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* NietzscheWannabe: Azula is a borderline example.
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Aang]].
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* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler:what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler:that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler:what [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler:that [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler:After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler:After [[spoiler: After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
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* AntiVillain: Though he isn't prominent until the later stages of the story, High General Xia is quickly established as being a [[NobleDemon Noble]] PunchClockVillain who is both loyal to the Fire Empire and highly honourable - a sharp contrast to [[EvilChancellor Qing Xi]] and [[SmugSnake Yuan]]. [[spoiler: He pulls a HeelFaceTurn at the end to prevent Azula from destroying the world]].
** Cheng, [[YMMV arguably]] - she's portrayed a good deal more sympathetically than the other Chosen, and between her and Shiyan she comes off being much less cruel. Though this is largely since she's younger and thus still has some measure of humanity - unlike, for instance, the Mistress
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles, [[spoiler: the second arc ends with the deaths of both Shu Bei Fong and Yue - only ''two'' chapters apart.]]
** Cheng, [[YMMV arguably]] - she's portrayed a good deal more sympathetically than the other Chosen, and between her and Shiyan she comes off being much less cruel. Though this is largely since she's younger and thus still has some measure of humanity - unlike, for instance, the Mistress
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles, [[spoiler: the second arc ends with the deaths of both Shu Bei Fong and Yue - only ''two'' chapters apart.]]
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* AntiVillain: Though he isn't prominent until the later stages of the story, High General Xia is quickly established as being a [[NobleDemon Noble]] PunchClockVillain who is both loyal to the Fire Empire and highly honourable - a sharp contrast to [[EvilChancellor Qing Xi]] and [[SmugSnake Yuan]]. [[spoiler: He pulls a HeelFaceTurn at the end to prevent Azula from destroying the world]].
Yuan]].
** Cheng,[[YMMV arguably]] - she's portrayed a good deal more sympathetically thanks to being less cruel than the other Chosen, and between Chosen (and her and Shiyan she frequent ButtMonkey tendencies), comes off being much less cruel. Though this is largely since she's younger as somewhat endearing rather than scary in her desire to follow the Chosen's purpose, and thus still has some measure of humanity - unlike, for instance, the Mistress
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles,[[spoiler: yet she actually pulls off the second arc ends with the deaths of both "villain" part when she kills Shu Bei Fong and Yue - only ''two'' chapters apart.]]as a result of said loyalty]]. It's really not hard to feel for her even from the start.
* AnyoneCanDie
** Cheng,
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles,
* AnyoneCanDie
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* ActionGirl: Jiazin and Chaiy are the two most notable. Even [[spoiler:Yue is capable of handling herself in a fight, though she doesn't like it]].
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* ActionGirl: Jiazin and Chaiy are the two most notable. Even [[spoiler:Yue [[spoiler: Yue is capable of handling herself in a fight, though she doesn't like it]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Shiyan, who sinks into catatonia after accidentally killing the person she was raised to see as an absolute god.]]
* AmazonBrigade: The Chosen; they even have their base on the former Kyoshi Island. In fact, Azula was inspired to create them after her first encounter with the Kyoshi Warriors in this timeline.
* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Aang]] go after Azula herself.
* AmazonBrigade: The Chosen; they even have their base on the former Kyoshi Island. In fact, Azula was inspired to create them after her first encounter with the Kyoshi Warriors in this timeline.
* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Aang]] go after Azula herself.
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Shiyan, [[spoiler: Shiyan, who sinks into catatonia after accidentally killing the person she was raised to see as an absolute god.]]
* AmazonBrigade: The Chosen; they even have their base on the former Kyoshi Island. In fact, Azula was inspired to create them after her first encounter with the Kyoshi Warriors in thistimeline.
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* AntiVillain: Though he isn't prominent until the later stages of the story, High General Xia is quickly established as being a [[NobleDemon Noble]] PunchClockVillain who is both loyal to the Fire Empire and highly honourable - a sharp contrast to [[EvilChancellor Qing Xi]] and [[SmugSnake Yuan]]. [[spoiler: He pulls a HeelFaceTurn at the end to prevent Azula from destroying the world]].
** Cheng, [[YMMV arguably]] - she's portrayed a good deal more sympathetically than the other Chosen, and between her and Shiyan she comes off being much less cruel. Though this is largely since she's younger and thus still has some measure of humanity - unlike, for instance, the Mistress
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles, [[spoiler: the second arc ends with the deaths of both Shu Bei Fong and Yue - only ''two'' chapters apart.]]
* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: High General Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Avatar Aang]] go after Azula herself.
* AmazonBrigade: The Chosen; they even have their base on the former Kyoshi Island. In fact, Azula was inspired to create them after her first encounter with the Kyoshi Warriors in this
* AntiVillain: Though he isn't prominent until the later stages of the story, High General Xia is quickly established as being a [[NobleDemon Noble]] PunchClockVillain who is both loyal to the Fire Empire and highly honourable - a sharp contrast to [[EvilChancellor Qing Xi]] and [[SmugSnake Yuan]]. [[spoiler: He pulls a HeelFaceTurn at the end to prevent Azula from destroying the world]].
** Cheng, [[YMMV arguably]] - she's portrayed a good deal more sympathetically than the other Chosen, and between her and Shiyan she comes off being much less cruel. Though this is largely since she's younger and thus still has some measure of humanity - unlike, for instance, the Mistress
* AnyoneCanDie: Besides there being a number of ''named'' characters who prove to be false leads for recurring or major roles, [[spoiler: the second arc ends with the deaths of both Shu Bei Fong and Yue - only ''two'' chapters apart.]]
* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: High General Xia]] during the FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Avatar Aang]] go after Azula herself.
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: [[spoiler:Jiazin.]]
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** And [[spoiler:Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
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** And [[spoiler:Yue]] [[spoiler: Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
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* CompleteMonster: Old age has made Azula [[BeyondTheImpossible even worse than her father]], with her fear of death making her more unstable and desperate than ever. It's pretty unnerving coming from the same author who was able to give her a believable {{Heel Face Turn}} in the Azula Trilogy.
** It's also written in very believable manner, in that Azula here wasn't ''born'' a monster, but is so far gone by the end that only death can destroy the evil she has become.
** The mercenary Gian is also quite the monster himself, as demonstrated when he killed a young slave girl in cold blood simply because she was of no use to him, and especially when he revealed that [[spoiler:he's an Earth Kindgom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler:Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler:Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
** It's also written in very believable manner, in that Azula here wasn't ''born'' a monster, but is so far gone by the end that only death can destroy the evil she has become.
** The mercenary Gian is also quite the monster himself, as demonstrated when he killed a young slave girl in cold blood simply because she was of no use to him, and especially when he revealed that [[spoiler:he's an Earth Kindgom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler:Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler:Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
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* CompleteMonster: Old age has made Azula [[BeyondTheImpossible even worse than her father]], with her fear of death making her more unstable and desperate than ever. It's pretty unnerving coming from the same author who was able to give her a believable {{Heel Face Turn}} in the Azula Trilogy.
**Trilogy. It's also written in very believable manner, in that Azula here much in-character and believable, too - she wasn't ''born'' a monster, monster here ''or'' in canon, but is by the end she was so far gone by the end that only death can could destroy the evil she has become.
**The mercenary Gian is also quite counts. Late into the monster himself, as demonstrated when first story arc, he killed kills a young Earthbending slave girl in cold blood after she helps him (forcefully), simply because she was of [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness he has no further use to him, and especially when he for her]]. He's also revealed that [[spoiler:he's to be [[spoiler: an Earth Kindgom Kingdom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit]].
profit, and admits as much to Jiazin without an ounce of guilt about it.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:[[spoiler:Yue [[spoiler: Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until[[spoiler:Jiazin [[spoiler: Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]]. him]].
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account [[spoiler: being offed by one of her own [[UndyingLoyalty Undyingly Loyal]] Chosen]].
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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until
** And Azula, [[TheChessmaster of course]]. Of course, as in canon, she may also have traces of WrongGenreSavvy - whatever variables she'd considered, she certainly didn't take into account [[spoiler: being offed by one of her own [[UndyingLoyalty Undyingly Loyal]] Chosen]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father) and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Governor [[spoiler: Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father) father), and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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** TheSixthColumn - Gian, [[spoiler:Xia, Qing Xi]].
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** TheSixthColumn - Gian, [[spoiler:Xia, [[spoiler: Xia, Qing Xi]].Xi]]
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** TheChick - [[spoiler:Yue]].
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler:Aang]].
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler:Aang]].
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** TheChick - [[spoiler:Yue]].
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** TheSixthRanger -[[spoiler:Aang]].[[spoiler: Aang]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler:High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler:High [[spoiler: High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice:[[spoiler:Yue, [[spoiler: Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard:[[spoiler:Azula [[spoiler: Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice:
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Cheng, in contrast to the more experienced and ruthless Shiyan. [[spoiler: Then [[SubvertedTrope she kills Shu Bei Fong ...]]]]
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler:Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her close connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler:is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler:is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler:Well, [[spoiler: Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her close connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan[[spoiler:is [[spoiler: is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan
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* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears [[spoiler:particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
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* NobleDemon: High General Xia.
* NonActionGuy: Shu Bei Fong, as stated above, is more of a planner, negotiator and leader than a warrior.
* NoNameGiven: For a while - despite playing a prominent role in the story, it's not until the climax of the second arc that Jiazin's father, the Governor, is finally named - Yan Li.
* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears[[spoiler:particularly [[spoiler: particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
* NonActionGuy: Shu Bei Fong, as stated above, is more of a planner, negotiator and leader than a warrior.
* NoNameGiven: For a while - despite playing a prominent role in the story, it's not until the climax of the second arc that Jiazin's father, the Governor, is finally named - Yan Li.
* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Aang]].[[spoiler: Aang]].
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler:spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler:the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler:the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler:spirits]] [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When[[spoiler:the [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* PillarOfLight: When
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* [[spoiler:ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]].
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* [[spoiler:RetGone: This is essentially what happened to poor Zuko, whose very existence has been struck from the official records]].
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler:Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler:Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
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* [[spoiler:RetGone: This is essentially what A version of this happened to poor Zuko, whose Zuko - his very existence has been struck from the official records]].
records and history, and very few people alive even know he ever was. Jiazin is understandably horrified]].
* SacrificialLion:[[spoiler:Shu [[spoiler: Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan:[[spoiler:Tui [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SacrificialLion:
* SealedGoodInACan:
* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: Close to the middle, but tilted more in idealism's favour despite the darkness - while the fic was a Work-in-Progress, [[WordOfGod the author even admitted in his fanfiction.net profile to being "an optimist at heart"]] and that he expected a hopeful ending.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: In general, the fic was written as a thematic counterpoint to the main series, using the same setting in a different time period, and similar character archetypes with different twists. In particular, several characters paralell canon characters' arcs, personalitiles, or abilities:
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* SpiritualSuccessor: In general, the fic was written as a thematic counterpoint to the main series, using the same setting in a different time period, and similar character archetypes with different twists. In particular, several characters paralell parallel canon characters' arcs, personalitiles, or abilities:
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* [[spoiler:ThanatosGambit: After Azula accepts that she's going to die, she figures she'll take as many people as possible with her, but in a way that will result in her being remembered as a martyr who tried to stop those deaths while the real heroes will be seen as the ones responsible.]]
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* [[spoiler:ThanatosGambit: [[spoiler: ThanatosGambit: After Azula accepts that she's going to die, she figures she'll take as many people as possible with her, but in a way that will result in her being remembered as a martyr who tried to stop those deaths while the real heroes will be seen as the ones responsible.]]
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* [[spoiler:TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
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* [[spoiler:TragicMonster: [[spoiler: TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
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* {{Tykebomb}}: The Chosen, as noted above - they're raised from infancy to be Azula's ultimate warrior-servants.
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* {{Tykebomb}}: The Chosen, as noted above - they're raised from infancy to be Azula's ultimate warrior-servants. warrior-servants.
* UndyingLoyalty: The Chosen, towards Azula.
* UndyingLoyalty: The Chosen, towards Azula.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler:Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler:Cheng, [[spoiler: Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Kanoda at first. He becomes more straightforwardly GenreSavvy with CharacterDevelopment.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Kanoda at first. He becomes more straightforwardly GenreSavvy with CharacterDevelopment.CharacterDevelopment.
* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]
* YouKilledMyFather: [[spoiler: Cheng assasinates Shu Bei Fong, much to Chaiy's grief and rage, and Tong has to reason with her to prevent an execution. She is able to prioritise her duties, thankfully.]]
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* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: Xia]] during the FinalBattle.
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* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: Xia]] during the FinalBattle.FinalBattle, as they take on the Imperial army and Chosen while Jiazin, Kanoda, and [[spoiler: Aang]] go after Azula herself.
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* FlamingSword: Jiazin can wreath her sword in fire [[spoiler: as Gian found out to his misfortune]].
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* TheAragorn: Chaiy, Tong, and [[spoiler: Xia]] during the FinalBattle.
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Shiyan, who sinks into catatonia after accidentally killing the person she was raised to see as an absolute good.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Shiyan, who sinks into catatonia after accidentally killing the person she was raised to see as an absolute good.god.]]
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** Toph was revealed to have been one as well, being Shu and Chaiy's ancestor, and [[spoiler: almost succeeding in killing the Dragon Empress herself]].
** And [[spoiler: Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
* BadassNormal: Gian, all the Chosen (who are forbidden from firebending even if they have the ability- Azula's smart enough that she doesn't run the risk of creating another her) and Kanoda, although he's usually OvershadowedByAwesome.
** And [[spoiler: Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
* BadassNormal: Gian, all the Chosen (who are forbidden from firebending even if they have the ability- Azula's smart enough that she doesn't run the risk of creating another her) and Kanoda, although he's usually OvershadowedByAwesome.
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** Toph was revealed to have been one as well, being Shu and Chaiy's ancestor, and [[spoiler: almost [[spoiler:almost succeeding in killing the Dragon Empress herself]].
** And[[spoiler: Yue]] [[spoiler:Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
* BadassNormal: Gian, all the Chosen (who are forbidden from firebending even if they have theability- ability - Azula's smart enough that she doesn't run the risk of creating another her) and Kanoda, although he's usually OvershadowedByAwesome.
** And
* BadassNormal: Gian, all the Chosen (who are forbidden from firebending even if they have the
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue is Scribed by Fire Lord Jiazin 5 years after her coronation, reaffirming that hope has indeed returned to the world]].
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Prologue of this story is a Scribed message written by former Earth King Kuei during his final days, offering his encouragement to those who believe in hope and peace. The Epilogue is Scribed by Fire Lord Jiazin 5 years after her coronation, reaffirming that hope has indeed returned to the world]].
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** The mercenary Gian is also quite the monster himself, as demonstrated when he killed a young slave girl in cold blood simply because she was of no use to him, and especially when he revealed that [[spoiler: he's an Earth Kindgom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler: Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: [[spoiler: Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until [[spoiler: Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
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** The mercenary Gian is also quite the monster himself, as demonstrated when he killed a young slave girl in cold blood simply because she was of no use to him, and especially when he revealed that [[spoiler: he's [[spoiler:he's an Earth Kindgom man who essentially exploits his own people for profit]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:[[spoiler: Yue [[spoiler:Yue can temporarily call on a larger amount of the Moon Spirit's power, effectively creating a mini-Avatar State- but it's horribly hard on her body, and ultimately kills her]].
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until[[spoiler: Jiazin [[spoiler:Jiazin unexpectedly pulls out the blue fire and incinerates him]].
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique:
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Gian, at least until
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father) and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor [[spoiler:Governor Yan Li (Jiazin's father) and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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** TheSixthColumn - Gian, [[spoiler: Xia, Qing Xi]].
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** TheSixthColumn - Gian, [[spoiler: Xia, [[spoiler:Xia, Qing Xi]].
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** TheChick - [[spoiler: Yue]].
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler: Aang]].
* GenerationXerox: Yuan is very much like his grandfather Zhao, if a bit more unstable. Justified, since Zhao is a legendary "hero" of the Empire is this AU, and all his family have lived in his shadow- Yuan is trying to almost literally out-Zhao Zhao!
** TheSixthRanger - [[spoiler: Aang]].
* GenerationXerox: Yuan is very much like his grandfather Zhao, if a bit more unstable. Justified, since Zhao is a legendary "hero" of the Empire is this AU, and all his family have lived in his shadow- Yuan is trying to almost literally out-Zhao Zhao!
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** TheChick - [[spoiler: Yue]].
[[spoiler:Yue]].
** TheSixthRanger -[[spoiler: Aang]].
[[spoiler:Aang]].
* GenerationXerox: Yuan is very much like his grandfather Zhao, if a bit more unstable. Justified, since Zhao is a legendary "hero" of the Empire is this AU, and all his family have lived in hisshadow- shadow - Yuan is trying to almost literally out-Zhao Zhao!
** TheSixthRanger -
* GenerationXerox: Yuan is very much like his grandfather Zhao, if a bit more unstable. Justified, since Zhao is a legendary "hero" of the Empire is this AU, and all his family have lived in his
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler: High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her own Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her own Chosen, Shiyan]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Jiazin, [[spoiler: High [[spoiler:High General Xia, Governor Yan Li]].
* HeroicSacrifice:[[spoiler: Yue, [[spoiler:Yue, to ultimately liberate the Moon and Ocean Spirits]].
* HoistByHisOwnPetard:[[spoiler: Azula [[spoiler:Azula is finally killed not by one of her actual enemies, but by one of her own most loyal Chosen, Shiyan]].
* HeroicSacrifice:
* HoistByHisOwnPetard:
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler: is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan [[spoiler: is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
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* LastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: Well, [[spoiler:Well, Last of ''Her'' Kind, rather - Yue is both the only known survivor of the Northern Water Tribe, and the only Waterbender in the world because of her close connection to the Moon Spirit]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan[[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is to create the fiction that Azula is immortal by having Jiazin "become" her by hiding behind her robes and mask. Turns out Azula has other plans, and the whole LegacyCharacter scheme was just a distraction for QX]].
* LegacyCharacter: Apparently Qing Xi and Azula's plan
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* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears [[spoiler: particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
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* NotSoDifferent: Jiazin and Azula, or at least Jiazin fears [[spoiler: particularly [[spoiler:particularly after developing the ability to create blue fire]].
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Aang]].
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler: Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler: Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Aang]].
[[spoiler:Aang]].
* OmnicidalManiac:[[spoiler: Azula [[spoiler:Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and[[spoiler: spirits]] [[spoiler:spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
* PillarOfLight: When[[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* OmnicidalManiac:
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and
* PillarOfLight: When
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* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]].
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* [[spoiler: ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: [[spoiler:ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Yue]].
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* [[spoiler: RetGone: This is essentially what happened to poor Zuko, whose very existence has been struck from the official records]].
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* [[spoiler: RetGone: [[spoiler:RetGone: This is essentially what happened to poor Zuko, whose very existence has been struck from the official records]].
* SacrificialLion:[[spoiler: Shu [[spoiler:Shu Bei Fong]].
* SealedGoodInACan:[[spoiler: Tui [[spoiler:Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know[[spoiler: what [[spoiler:what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that [[spoiler:that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
* SacrificialLion:
* SealedGoodInACan:
* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know
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** Jiazin= Zuko+ some Mai
** Kanoda= Sokka and Katara
** Tong= Toph
** [[spoiler: Aang]]= Aang
** [[spoiler: Yue]]= elements of [[spoiler: herself and]] Aang
** Qing Xi= Long Feng made successful
** Yuan= Zhao
** Shiyan= Azula+ Evil!Suki
** Cheng= Ty Lee+ Evil!Suki
** Azula= Herself+ Ozai
** Chaiy= Jet+ Toph
** Gian= Combustion Man+ Jun
** Kanoda= Sokka and Katara
** Tong= Toph
** [[spoiler: Aang]]= Aang
** [[spoiler: Yue]]= elements of [[spoiler: herself and]] Aang
** Qing Xi= Long Feng made successful
** Yuan= Zhao
** Shiyan= Azula+ Evil!Suki
** Cheng= Ty Lee+ Evil!Suki
** Azula= Herself+ Ozai
** Chaiy= Jet+ Toph
** Gian= Combustion Man+ Jun
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** Jiazin= Zuko+ Jiazin = Zuko + some Mai
**Kanoda= Kanoda = Sokka and + Katara
**Tong= Tong = Toph
**[[spoiler: Aang]]= [[spoiler:Aang]] = Aang
**[[spoiler: Yue]]= [[spoiler:Yue]] = elements of [[spoiler: herself [[spoiler:herself and]] Aang
** Qing Xi= Long Fengmade successful
[[spoiler:made successful]]
**Yuan= Yuan = Zhao
**Shiyan= Azula+ Shiyan = Azula + Evil!Suki
**Cheng= Cheng = Ty Lee+ Lee + Evil!Suki
**Azula= Herself+ Azula = Herself + Ozai
**Chaiy= Jet+ Chaiy = Jet + Toph
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler: AFter Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
* TouchedByVorlons: [[spoiler: Yue, made an immortal and extremly skilled waterbender by the Moon Spirit]].
* [[spoiler: TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
* TouchedByVorlons: [[spoiler: Yue, made an immortal and extremly skilled waterbender by the Moon Spirit]].
* [[spoiler: TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: [[spoiler: AFter [[spoiler:After Jiazin allies with the rebels, she and Chaiy are often contrasted, though it's more like LadyOfWar and CuteBruiser]].
* TouchedByVorlons:[[spoiler: Yue, [[spoiler:Yue, made an immortal and extremly skilled waterbender by the Moon Spirit]].
*[[spoiler: TragicMonster: [[spoiler:TragicMonster: Though YMMV, Azula at least has ''vibes'' of this]].
* TouchedByVorlons:
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* {{Tykebomb}}: The Chosen, as noted above- they're raised from infancy to be Azula's ultimate warrior-servants.
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* {{Tykebomb}}: The Chosen, as noted above- above - they're raised from infancy to be Azula's ultimate warrior-servants.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler: Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: [[spoiler: Yue, as per canon]]
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: [[spoiler: Yue, as per canon]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We never found out what happened to [[spoiler: Cheng, [[spoiler:Cheng, after Shiyan released her]].
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl:[[spoiler: Yue, [[spoiler:Yue, as per canon]]
* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl:
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* SpiritualSuccessor: In general, the fic was written as a thematic counterpoint to the main series, using the same setting in a different time period, and similar character archetypes with different twists. In particular, several characters paralell canon characters' arcs, personalitiles, or abilities:
** Jiazin= Zuko+ some Mai
** Kanoda= Sokka and Katara
** Tong= Toph
** [[spoiler: Aang]]= Aang
** [[spoiler: Yue]]= elements of [[spoiler: herself and]] Aang
** Qing Xi= Long Feng made successful
** Yuan= Zhao
** Shiyan= Azula+ Evil!Suki
** Cheng= Ty Lee+ Evil!Suki
** Azula= Herself+ Ozai
** Chaiy= Jet+ Toph
** Gian= Combustion Man+ Jun
** Jiazin= Zuko+ some Mai
** Kanoda= Sokka and Katara
** Tong= Toph
** [[spoiler: Aang]]= Aang
** [[spoiler: Yue]]= elements of [[spoiler: herself and]] Aang
** Qing Xi= Long Feng made successful
** Yuan= Zhao
** Shiyan= Azula+ Evil!Suki
** Cheng= Ty Lee+ Evil!Suki
** Azula= Herself+ Ozai
** Chaiy= Jet+ Toph
** Gian= Combustion Man+ Jun
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** And [[spoiler: Yue]] though she [[OlderThanTheyLook doesn't look it]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor Yan Li, Jiazin's father, and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Governor Yan Li, Jiazin's father, Li (Jiazin's father) and High Minister Qing Xi]].
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with.
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* OvershadowedByAwesome: Like Sokka before him, Kanoda is a skilled fighter, but he has a hard time measuring up against the benders, trained-from-birth fanatics, and [[spoiler: spirits]] he finds himself mixed up with. with.
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
* PillarOfLight: When [[spoiler: the Moon and Ocean Spirits are freed]].
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* SealedGoodInACan: [[spoiler: Tui and La, held captive by the Fire Empire since the destruction of the Northern Water Tribe]].
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* SequelHook: Most of the main plot is wrapped up, but we still don't know [[spoiler: what happened to Cheng]], and the epilogue mentions [[spoiler: that strange cults have started to spring up in parts of the former Empire, worshipping a deified Azula, while Aang is WalkingTheEarth to help restore peace and balance, aided by Kanoda]].
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* AscendedExtra: Some characters, notably Jiazin's father and Cheng, were originally conceived as bit parts who grew into larger roles as the story progressed.
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* RebelLeader: Shu Bei Fong is the ultimate head of the rebellion; since he's not much of a fighter, his ActionGirl daughter Chaiy actually leads the rebels in the field.
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* FetishFuel: Some people consider the Chosen to be this, apparently, judging by some of the reviews.
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* TheGovernorsDaughter: Jiazin is literally the daughter of the Governor of Long Du Shi (aka Ba Sing Se). Subverted in that she is a major (arguably the main) character in her own right, rather than just because of her social status.
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* EvilCounterpart: Meta-example. Shiyan was designed to be, essentially, an evil Suki with elements of Azula mixed in. Doesn't come up in-story, though, since Suki is dead, and likely has been for a while.
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* TheGovernorsDaughter: Jiazin is the daughter of the Governor of Long Du Shi (aka Ba Sing Se).
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: The Chosen, like the Kyoshi Warriors, use katanas (though unlike the KWs, they don't bother with fans). Subverted in that Jiazin, despite being a wealthy and high-ranking noble, uses a straight-edged sword instead.
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* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler: Azula may have accepted the reality of her own impending death- but that doesn't mean she's not planning to drag as much of civilization as she can down with her]].
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* TheSociopath: Gian, and possibly Yuan. Azula has some sociopathic traits, as per canon, but here that doesn't really even ''begin'' to cover how disturbed she is.