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** FauxAffablyEvil: When met by heroic characters, it'll show off its own ingenuine side of its AffablyEvil personality.
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* BadassAdorable: [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Every. Single. Freaking. Character.]] Including ''Chuchu'', who's been turned from a [[TheChick Chick]] into a full-blown ActionGirl.
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* CanonImmigrant: [[spoiler: R.O.B]], who becomes Tac's ally.
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* ClusterFBomb / PrecisionFStrike: Captain Birdbrain ''really'' likes this. Thankfully, [[NarrativeProfanityFilter it's all censored.]]
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* DismantledMacGuffin: The Star Rod.
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Meta Knight]].
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Meta Knight]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Dark Matter and Nightmare.
* FiveManBand: Not necessarily ''five'' man, but the main characters have the right characteristics:
** TheHero: Kirby
** TheSmartGuy: Gooey
** TheChick: Chuchu (though she ''is'' more of an ActionGirl)
* FiveManBand: Not necessarily ''five'' man, but the main characters have the right characteristics:
** TheHero: Kirby
** TheSmartGuy: Gooey
** TheChick: Chuchu (though she ''is'' more of an ActionGirl)
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** TheHero: Kirby
** TheSmartGuy: Gooey
** TheChick: Chuchu (though she ''is'' more
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The ultimate fate of [[spoiler:Meta Knight.]] To make matters worse, [[spoiler:being a mutant, he has blood, unlike most Dream Landers.]]
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Marx, [[LudicrousGibs quite messily.]]]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: And how!
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Marx, [[LudicrousGibs quite messily.]]]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: And how!
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* [[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide]]: Meta Knight.
* DoorStopper: 87 chapters long. 87 EPIC chapters long.
* DoorStopper: 87 chapters long. 87 EPIC chapters long.
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* [[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide]]: Meta Knight.
DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Meta Knight]].
*DoorStopper: {{Doorstopper}}: 87 chapters long. 87 EPIC chapters long.
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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler: Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye, taking the Meta Base with it. The explosion results in him getting his entire jaw blown off.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The ultimate fate of [[spoiler: Meta Knight.]] To make matters worse, [[spoiler: being a mutant, he has blood, unlike most Dream Landers.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Marx, [[LudicrousGibs quite messily.]]]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The ultimate fate of [[spoiler: Meta Knight.]] To make matters worse, [[spoiler: being a mutant, he has blood, unlike most Dream Landers.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Marx, [[LudicrousGibs quite messily.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler: Marx HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye, taking the Meta Base with it. The explosion results in him getting his entire jaw blown off.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The ultimate fate of[[spoiler: Meta [[spoiler:Meta Knight.]] To make matters worse, [[spoiler: being [[spoiler:being a mutant, he has blood, unlike most Dream Landers.]]
*[[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Marx, KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Marx, [[LudicrousGibs quite messily.]]]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: The ultimate fate of
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Averted. Although Nightmare originated from Dark Matter, [[spoiler: nothing happens to him after Kirby kills the latter.]]
* NothingIsScarier: [[spoiler: Kirby's nightmares after Dark Matter possesses him and puts him into a [[LotusEaterMachine hellish dreamlike state]] are said to be so horrible that they could have permanently scarred him. [[DefangedHorrors Said dreams are never described,]] leaving the rest to the reader's imagination.]]
* NothingIsScarier: [[spoiler: Kirby's nightmares after Dark Matter possesses him and puts him into a [[LotusEaterMachine hellish dreamlike state]] are said to be so horrible that they could have permanently scarred him. [[DefangedHorrors Said dreams are never described,]] leaving the rest to the reader's imagination.]]
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Averted. Although Nightmare originated from Dark Matter, [[spoiler: nothing [[spoiler:nothing happens to him after Kirby kills the latter.]]
* NothingIsScarier:[[spoiler: Kirby's [[spoiler:Kirby's nightmares after Dark Matter possesses him and puts him into a [[LotusEaterMachine hellish dreamlike state]] are said to be so horrible that they could have permanently scarred him. [[DefangedHorrors Said dreams are never described,]] leaving the rest to the reader's imagination.]]
* NothingIsScarier:
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-->[[spoiler:'''Nightmare''': No! It is impossible! No weapon can harm me!]]\\
[[spoiler:'''Meta Knight''': I beg to differ.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Kirby was already badass in the games, but by the story's end, he has [[spoiler: taken down several nearly unstoppable monsters, not to mention he has the power to summon ''and'' combine abilities at will, as well as being able to summon the Star Rod. Not to mention ending it by executing an ''epic'' final assault against Dark Matter.]] Most of the characters, including [[TheChick Chuchu]], and even [[spoiler: Gooey]], went through this treatment as well.
* TotallyRadical: [[spoiler: [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Meta Drone's new voice, dude!]]]]
[[spoiler:'''Meta Knight''': I beg to differ.]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Kirby was already badass in the games, but by the story's end, he has [[spoiler: taken down several nearly unstoppable monsters, not to mention he has the power to summon ''and'' combine abilities at will, as well as being able to summon the Star Rod. Not to mention ending it by executing an ''epic'' final assault against Dark Matter.]] Most of the characters, including [[TheChick Chuchu]], and even [[spoiler: Gooey]], went through this treatment as well.
* TotallyRadical: [[spoiler: [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Meta Drone's new voice, dude!]]]]
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'''Meta Knight''': I beg to
* TookALevelInBadass: Kirby was already badass in the games, but by the story's end, he has
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Big Wheelie tells Meta Knight this when he starts to destroy his own crew's ship at the start of his final VillainousBreakdown]].
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Big Wheelie tells Meta Knight Knight]] this when he starts to destroy his own crew's ship at the start of his final VillainousBreakdown]].VillainousBreakdown.
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* TotallyRadical: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Meta Drone's new voice, dude!]]]]
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* TotallyRadical: [[spoiler: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Meta Drone's new voice, dude!]]]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1440002/1/The_Dreamland_Story_firstdraft The Dream Land Story]]'' is an 87-chapter long ''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'' fan fiction. Yes, you heard me right.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1440002/1/The_Dreamland_Story_firstdraft The Dream Land Story]]'' is an 87-chapter long ''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'' fan fiction. Yes, you heard me us right.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1440002/1/The_Dreamland_Story_firstdraft The Dream Land Story]]'' is an 87-chapter long ''{{Kirby}}'' ''Franchise/{{Kirby}}'' fan fiction. Yes, you heard me right.
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* BiologicalMashUp: [[spoiler: Meta Knight.]]
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry and downright crazy that he not only brutally attacks his own crew, to the point of chasing Escargoon off his ship into the clouds below and even slashing Meta Drone to bits and pieces, but actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion, deciding that he is no longer interested in conquering Dream Land and would rather go after destroying Dark Matter on his own instead. Eventually, the breakdown ends with him being DrivenToSuicide]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially his final breakdown when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry and downright crazy that he not only brutally attacks his own crew, to the point of chasing Escargoon off his ship into the clouds below and even slashing Meta Drone to bits and pieces, but actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion, deciding that he is no longer interested in conquering Dream Land and would rather go after destroying Dark Matter on his own instead. Eventually, the breakdown ends with him being DrivenToSuicide]].
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Big Wheelie tells Meta Knight this when he starts to destroy his own crew's ship at the start of his VillainousBreakdown]].
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Big Wheelie tells Meta Knight this when he starts to destroy his own crew's ship at the start of his final VillainousBreakdown]].
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* AffablyEvil: Dark Matter seems to be very sophisticated towards those working for it.
** FauxAffablyEvil: When met by heroic characters, it'll show off its own ingenuine side of its AffablyEvil personality.
** FauxAffablyEvil: When met by heroic characters, it'll show off its own ingenuine side of its AffablyEvil personality.
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry that he actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion. Eventually, the breakdown ends with him being DrivenToSuicide]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry and downright crazy that he not only brutally attacks his own crew, to the point of chasing Escargoon off his ship into the clouds below and even slashing Meta Drone to bits and pieces, but actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion.fashion, deciding that he is no longer interested in conquering Dream Land and would rather go after destroying Dark Matter on his own instead. Eventually, the breakdown ends with him being DrivenToSuicide]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry that he actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry that he actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion]].fashion. Eventually, the breakdown ends with him being DrivenToSuicide]].
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Big Wheelie tells Meta Knight this when he starts to destroy his own crew's ship at the start of his VillainousBreakdown]].
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-->"No!" he yelled. "It is impossible! No weapon can harm me!"\\
"I beg to differ," replied Meta Knight.
"I beg to differ," replied Meta Knight.
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* ThisCannotBe: [[spoiler:Nightmare's reaction to Meta Knight and his goons having actually been able to hurt him.]]
-->"No!" he yelled. "It is impossible! No weapon can harm me!"\\
"I beg to differ," replied Meta Knight.
-->"No!" he yelled. "It is impossible! No weapon can harm me!"\\
"I beg to differ," replied Meta Knight.
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* EldritchAbomination: Dark Matter, Nightmare, [[spoiler: Possessed Marx]], and [[spoiler: Meta Knight.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: Dark Matter, Nightmare, [[spoiler: Possessed Marx]], Matter and [[spoiler: Meta Knight.]]Nightmare.
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Averted. Although Nightmare originated from Dark Matter, [[spoiler: nothing happens to him after Kirby kills the latter.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Very much so; For starters, this story takes plot elements from almost all the games and mixes them together. The result is ''a lot'' BetterThanItSounds.
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* AlternateUniverse: Very much so; For starters, this story takes plot elements from almost all the games and mixes them together. The result is ''a lot'' BetterThanItSounds.
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* BadassAdorable: [[ThisIsSparta Every. Single. Freaking. Character.]] Including ''Chuchu'', who's been turned from a [[TheChick Chick]] into a full-blown ActionGirl.
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* BadassAdorable: [[ThisIsSparta [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Every. Single. Freaking. Character.]] Including ''Chuchu'', who's been turned from a [[TheChick Chick]] into a full-blown ActionGirl.
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* VillainousBreakdown: Meta Knight gradually suffers this further and further as the story progresses, especially when [[spoiler:Marx sacrifices himself to destroy Mecheye and take the entire Meta Base with it, resulting in Meta Knight getting so angry that he actually clenches his teeth in an angrily toothy fashion]].
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* MythologyGag: Kirby's original name was Popopo, like it was in real life during the development of ''Kirby's Dreamland''.
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* MythologyGag: In the story, Kirby's original name was Popopo, like it was in real life during the development of ''Kirby's Dreamland''.
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* MythologyGag: Kirby's original name was Popopo, like it was in real life during the development of ''Kirby's Dreamland''.