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** Dash and Caramel [[spoiler:on the anniversary of Pinkie's death]].
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** Cheerilee and Crescendo after the former [[spoiler:is chewed out by Big Mac for suggesting that they and Fluttershy [[{{Polyamory}} form a herd]] since Fluttershy cannot have any more foals (which Mac had not even known)]] and the latter [[spoiler:learns Spike is planning to propose to Rarity, whom Crescendo has realized he is still in love with]].
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** In ''The Changelings Have a King'', Dash and Caramel [[spoiler:on the anniversary of Pinkie's death]].
** Also in ''Changelings'', Cheerilee and Crescendo after the former [[spoiler:is chewed out by Big Mac for suggesting that they and Fluttershy [[{{Polyamory}} form a herd]] since Fluttershy cannot have any more foals (which Mac had not even known)]] and the latter [[spoiler:learns Spike is planning to propose to Rarity, whom Crescendo has realized he is still in love with]].
** Also in ''Changelings'', Cheerilee and Crescendo after the former [[spoiler:is chewed out by Big Mac for suggesting that they and Fluttershy [[{{Polyamory}} form a herd]] since Fluttershy cannot have any more foals (which Mac had not even known)]] and the latter [[spoiler:learns Spike is planning to propose to Rarity, whom Crescendo has realized he is still in love with]].
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** Cheerilee and Crescendo after the former [[spoiler:is chewed out by Big Mac for suggesting that they and Fluttershy [[{{Polyamory}} form a herd]] since Fluttershy cannot have any more foals (which Mac had not even known)]] and the latter [[spoiler:learns Spike is planning to propose to Rarity, whom Crescendo has realized he is still in love with]].
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* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Clover the Clever's dying prophecy specifically mentions "the Twilight of the Gods" [[spoiler:as the end of Celestia and Luna's reign]]. Needless to say, [[MeaningfulName Twilight Sparkle]] is implied to have something to do with it.
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* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Clover the Clever's dying prophecy specifically mentions "the Twilight of the Gods" [[spoiler:as the end of Celestia and Luna's reign]]. Needless to say, [[MeaningfulName Twilight Sparkle]] is implied to have something to do with it. [[spoiler:WordOfGod is that it's the name of Twilight's own SuperpoweredEvilSide.]]
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* "The Greatest Gift""Today, I Marry My Best Friend"
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* {{Polyamory}}: Referred to as a common past practice. "Herding" was particularly common among earth ponies, though according to Celestia they also led the way in shunning the practice in more recent times. [[spoiler:It's still legal, though, and Luna decides to resolve her LoveTriangle with Shining Armor and Cadance this way. Cheerilee also suggests it to Big Macintosh, who is far less keen on the idea.]]
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** BigBadDuumvirate: In ''The Changelings Have a King'', Chrysalis and Carapace [[spoiler:(a.k.a. the transformed Blueblood)]], the eponymous king, are nominally this, overseeing the management of the hive and the planned invasion of Equestria. That said, Carapace is much more TheHeavy, taking the lead in both forming and carrying out the plan, while Chrysalis seems more concerned with [[spoiler:her new brood (and it's hinted that Carapace is isolating and manipulating her)]].
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** BigBadDuumvirate: In ''The Changelings Have a King'', Chrysalis and Carapace [[spoiler:(a.k.a. the transformed Prince Blueblood)]], the eponymous king, are nominally this, overseeing the management of the hive and the planned invasion of Equestria. That said, Carapace is much more TheHeavy, taking the lead in both forming and carrying out the plan, while Chrysalis seems more concerned with [[spoiler:her new brood (and it's hinted that Carapace is isolating and manipulating her)]].
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* {{Polyamory}}: Referred to as a common past practice. "Herding" was particularly common earth ponies, though according to Celestia they also led the way in shunning the practice in more recent times. [[spoiler:It's still legal, though, and Luna decides to resolve her LoveTriangle with Shining Armor and Cadance this way. Cheerilee also suggests it to Big Macintosh, who is [[TranquilFury far less keen on the idea]].idea.]]
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* BigBad: Despite only appearing in the letter flashbacks, Feather Duster is basically this for the "Dear Cutie Mark Crusaders" trilogy, owing to the trauma his vindictive actions caused to the CMC's families and the subsequent effect on their lives. [[spoiler:He cements this position in the "epilogue" "Cutie Mark Crusaders Dream Warriors", finally appearing in the present before finally being KilledOffForReal.]]
** BigBadDuumvirate: In ''The Changelings Have a King'', Chrysalis and Carapace [[spoiler:(a.k.a. the transformed Blueblood)]], the eponymous king, are nominally this, overseeing the management of the hive and the planned invasion of Equestria. That said, Carapace is much more TheHeavy, taking the lead in both forming and carrying out the plan, while Chrysalis seems more concerned with [[spoiler:her new brood (and it's hinted that Carapace is isolating and manipulating her)]].
** BigBadDuumvirate: In ''The Changelings Have a King'', Chrysalis and Carapace [[spoiler:(a.k.a. the transformed Blueblood)]], the eponymous king, are nominally this, overseeing the management of the hive and the planned invasion of Equestria. That said, Carapace is much more TheHeavy, taking the lead in both forming and carrying out the plan, while Chrysalis seems more concerned with [[spoiler:her new brood (and it's hinted that Carapace is isolating and manipulating her)]].
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* FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Crescendo]] dismissively refers to Spike as a "lizard"; even when accounting for [[spoiler:his jealousy over Spike's intended proposal to Rarity due to his own recurring feelings for the latter]], his contempt is palpable.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/236705/branches-of-the-hearths-warming-tree "Branches of the Hearth's Warming Tree"]]: Hearth's Warming is a time to gather the ones you love, congregate around a decorated tree, and share in the magic that is a family's love. Join some of your favorite ponies as they learn exactly what familial love means. Sequel to ''Let It Snow''.
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* ''Branches of the Hearth's Warming Tree''
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* CerebusSyndrome: The early entries aren't exactly fluff, delving into familial and romantic drama, but the overarching story gets a lot more foreboding starting with the introduction of Clover's prophecy.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The early entries aren't exactly fluff, delving into familial and romantic drama, but the overarching story gets a lot more foreboding starting with the introduction of Clover's prophecy.prophecy at the end of ''Phases of the Moon''.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/209182/the-changelings-have-a-king The Changelings Have a King]]'': Since her defeat on the day of the Royal Wedding, Queen Chrysalis has plotted and planned her revenge. Using ancient Changeling magic and a very valuable captive, she creates the ultimate weapon; a life-form capable of granting her unbelievable power and allowing her species to continue. The first in a trilogy that will conclude the continuity of stories that began with "Dear Sweetie Belle".
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/209182/the-changelings-have-a-king The Changelings Have a King]]'': Since her defeat on the day of the Royal Wedding, Queen Chrysalis has plotted and planned her revenge. Using ancient Changeling magic and a very valuable captive, she creates the ultimate weapon; a life-form capable of granting her unbelievable power and allowing her species to continue. The first in a trilogy that will conclude the continuity of stories that began with "Dear Sweetie Belle".
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* ''The Changelings Have a King''
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** Dash and Caramel after [[spoiler:Pinkie's death]].
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** Dash and Caramel after [[spoiler:Pinkie's [[spoiler:on the anniversary of Pinkie's death]].
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* DrowningMySorrows: Trixie and Cheerilee reference word for word having done this in ''Morning Glory'', Trixie apparently simply due to feeling uncomfortable being with the other ponies at Fluttershy and Big Macintosh's wedding reception (despite having been hired to entertain the foals), and Cheerilee due to [[spoiler:losing Big Mac to Fluttershy]].
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* DrowningMySorrows: DrowningMySorrows:
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** Dash and Caramel after [[spoiler:Pinkie's death]].
** Trixie and Cheerilee reference word for word having done this in ''Morning Glory'', Trixie apparently simply due to feeling uncomfortable being with the other ponies at Fluttershy and Big Macintosh's wedding reception (despite having been hired to entertain the foals), and Cheerilee due to [[spoiler:losing Big Mac to
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* KilledOffScreen: While it has not yet been acknowledged in-story outside of a brief vision, WordOfGod is that [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie]] has died by the end of "Paternally Yours", from unspecified natural causes.
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* KilledOffScreen: While it has not yet been acknowledged in-story outside By the start of ''The Changelings Have a brief vision, WordOfGod is that King'', [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie]] has died by the end of "Paternally Yours", from unspecified natural causes.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear Sweetie Belle', Rarity convinces herself that her not-so-little-anymore Belle is stealing her beauty. What lengths will Rarity go to in order to take back what is rightfully hers?
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear "Dear Sweetie Belle', Belle", Rarity convinces herself that her not-so-little-anymore Belle is stealing her beauty. What lengths will Rarity go to in order to take back what is rightfully hers?
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* WouldHurtAChild: Feather Duster had no qualms about firebombing an orphanage and tossing Scootaloo off a cloud.
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In another possible [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]], two things happened to set certain ponies on collision courses with destiny.
The first was the young unicorn Sweetie Belle coming to stay with her sister Rarity, not because [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial their parents took a sudden vacation]], but because a sudden accident left her orphaned. Soon, Rarity would give her a letter to read -- one that would give her, and ultimately the other Cutie Mark Crusaders, a stark look into their own origins and the nature of family.
The second was, some time prior to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 the royal wedding]], a spark appearing between the groom-to-be and the Princess of the Night -- a spark that would eventually flame into an affair, driving Shining Armor not only into a spiral of sin but to seek out greater knowledge of the Princesses, and ultimately of Equestria itself.
Too bad that, for everypony, knowing is only half the battle...
Thus started [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jade+Ring Jade Ring]]'s "Dear Sweetie Belle" continuity, an interlocking set of fanfics showcasing looks into Equestria's past, self-discovery and romantic drama ([[{{WAFF}} or sometimes not]]) to keep ponies occupied in the present...and as for the future? Let's just say...
The first was the young unicorn Sweetie Belle coming to stay with her sister Rarity, not because [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial their parents took a sudden vacation]], but because a sudden accident left her orphaned. Soon, Rarity would give her a letter to read -- one that would give her, and ultimately the other Cutie Mark Crusaders, a stark look into their own origins and the nature of family.
The second was, some time prior to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 the royal wedding]], a spark appearing between the groom-to-be and the Princess of the Night -- a spark that would eventually flame into an affair, driving Shining Armor not only into a spiral of sin but to seek out greater knowledge of the Princesses, and ultimately of Equestria itself.
Too bad that, for everypony, knowing is only half the battle...
Thus started [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jade+Ring Jade Ring]]'s "Dear Sweetie Belle" continuity, an interlocking set of fanfics showcasing looks into Equestria's past, self-discovery and romantic drama ([[{{WAFF}} or sometimes not]]) to keep ponies occupied in the present...and as for the future? Let's just say...
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The first was the young unicorn Sweetie Belle coming to stay with her sister Rarity, not because [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E5SisterhoovesSocial their parents took a sudden vacation]], but because a sudden accident left her orphaned. Soon, Rarity would give her a letter to read -- one that would give her, and ultimately the other Cutie Mark Crusaders, a stark look into their own origins and the nature of family.
The second was, some time prior to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 the royal wedding]], a spark appearing between the groom-to-be and the Princess of the Night -- a spark that would eventually flame into an affair, driving Shining Armor not only into a spiral of sin but to seek out greater knowledge of the Princesses, and ultimately of Equestria itself.
Too bad that, for everypony, knowing is only half the battle...
Thus started
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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight chews out Shining Armor a good bit after [[spoiler:his affair with Luna is revealed]], though most of it is unfortunately defused when Shining mentions that [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome their mother already did that]].
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57788/dear-applebloom "Dear Applebloom"]]: Following Rarity's example, Applejack writes her little sister a letter. While Rarity's letter revealed the truth of Sweetie Belle's origins, Applejack's letter will shed light on the greatest unanswered mystery of the Apple family; what happened to Applebloom's parents?
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear Sweetie Belle,' Rarity convinces herself that her not-so-little-anymore Belle is stealing her beauty. What lengths will Rarity go to in order to take back what is rightfully hers?
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear Sweetie Belle,' Rarity convinces herself that her not-so-little-anymore Belle is stealing her beauty. What lengths will Rarity go to in order to take back what is rightfully hers?
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57788/dear-applebloom "Dear Applebloom"]]: Following Rarity's example, Applejack writes her little sister a letter. While Rarity's letter revealed the truth of Sweetie Belle's origins, Applejack's letter will shed light on the greatest unanswered mystery of the Apple family; family: what happened to Applebloom's parents?
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear SweetieBelle,' Belle', Rarity convinces herself that her not-so-little-anymore Belle is stealing her beauty. What lengths will Rarity go to in order to take back what is rightfully hers?
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59383/the-sin-of-envy-or-a-mothers-love "The Sin of Envy, or a Mother's Love"]]: Years after the events of 'Dear Sweetie
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/90031/dear-scootaloo "Dear Scootaloo"]]: Inspired by Rarity and Applejack's letters, Rainbow Dash writes her biggest fan a letter of her own that will shed light not only on Scootaloo's origins, but Rainbow Dash's as well.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/93113/sweet-dreams "Sweet Dreams"]]: While many miles from his home in Ponyville, the only respite Caramel has are his memories and fantasies of a certain pink earth pony. Will a certain princess of the night be able to lend a helping hoof in reuniting the long-distance lovers? Sequel to ''Morning Glory''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104545/phases-of-the-moon Phases of the Moon]]'': Princess Luna's words regarding her past lovers have driven Shining Armor mad ever since she first uttered them when their affair began. Who were they, and how did they come to be consorts to the Princess of the Night? Shining Armor's quest for the answers leads him to uncover much more than he was ever expecting; hidden histories and origins, ancient conspiracies, and secrets that could very well change Equestria forever. Sequel to "Lost in the Night".
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/93113/sweet-dreams "Sweet Dreams"]]: While many miles from his home in Ponyville, the only respite Caramel has are his memories and fantasies of a certain pink earth pony. Will a certain princess of the night be able to lend a helping hoof in reuniting the long-distance lovers? Sequel to ''Morning Glory''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104545/phases-of-the-moon Phases of the Moon]]'': Princess Luna's words regarding her past lovers have driven Shining Armor mad ever since she first uttered them when their affair began. Who were they, and how did they come to be consorts to the Princess of the Night? Shining Armor's quest for the answers leads him to uncover much more than he was ever expecting; hidden histories and origins, ancient conspiracies, and secrets that could very well change Equestria forever. Sequel to "Lost in the Night".
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/90031/dear-scootaloo "Dear Scootaloo"]]: Inspired by Rarity and Applejack's letters, Rainbow Dash writes her biggest fan a letter of her own that will shed light not only on Scootaloo's origins, but on Rainbow Dash's as well.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/93113/sweet-dreams "Sweet Dreams"]]: While many miles from his home in Ponyville, the only respite Caramel hasare is his memories and fantasies of a certain pink earth pony. Will a certain princess of the night be able to lend a helping hoof in reuniting the long-distance lovers? Sequel to ''Morning Glory''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104545/phases-of-the-moon Phases of the Moon]]'': Princess Luna's words regarding her past lovers have driven Shining Armor mad ever since she first uttered them when their affair began. Who were they, and how did they come to be consorts to the Princess of the Night? Shining Armor's quest for the answers leads him to uncover much more than he was everexpecting; expecting: hidden histories and origins, ancient conspiracies, and secrets that could very well change Equestria forever. Sequel to "Lost in the Night".
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/93113/sweet-dreams "Sweet Dreams"]]: While many miles from his home in Ponyville, the only respite Caramel has
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104545/phases-of-the-moon Phases of the Moon]]'': Princess Luna's words regarding her past lovers have driven Shining Armor mad ever since she first uttered them when their affair began. Who were they, and how did they come to be consorts to the Princess of the Night? Shining Armor's quest for the answers leads him to uncover much more than he was ever
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/127418/whats-done-in-the-dark What's Done in the Dark...]]'': Shining Armor believes that his troubles are over; his beloved Cadance is soon to give birth to their first foal and his affair with Princess Luna has cooled off considerably as her own pregnancy enters it's last stages. Princess Luna is at the end of her rope; Shining Armor still has no idea that he is the father of the foal growing inside her and his clumsy gallantry is making her genuinely fall in love with him. Both will soon be faced with one of the unquestioned absolutes of the universe...what's done in the dark will be brought to the light. Sequel to ''Phases of the Moon''.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/140608/cutie-mark-crusaders-dream-warriors "Cutie Mark Crusaders Dream Warriors"]]: The Cutie Mark Crusaders are growing up, their days spent dealing with the problems facing fillies on the cusp of marehood; school, boys, and nightmares about a ghost from their collective past. Only with the help of a certain Princess of the Night can the three friends become what they need to be to destroy the evil that's haunted them once and for all; CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS DREAM WARRIORS! Sequel to the "Dear CMC" trilogy.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/140608/cutie-mark-crusaders-dream-warriors "Cutie Mark Crusaders Dream Warriors"]]: The Cutie Mark Crusaders are growing up, their days spent dealing with the problems facing fillies on the cusp of marehood; school, boys, and nightmares about a ghost from their collective past. Only with the help of a certain Princess of the Night can the three friends become what they need to be to destroy the evil that's haunted them once and for all; CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS DREAM WARRIORS! Sequel to the "Dear CMC" trilogy.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/127418/whats-done-in-the-dark What's Done in the Dark...]]'': Shining Armor believes that his troubles are over; his beloved Cadance is soon to give birth to their first foal and his affair with Princess Luna has cooled off considerably as her own pregnancy enters it's its last stages. Princess Luna is at the end of her rope; Shining Armor still has no idea that he is the father of the foal growing inside her and his clumsy gallantry is making her genuinely fall in love with him. Both will soon be faced with one of the unquestioned absolutes of the universe...what's done in the dark will be brought to the light. Sequel to ''Phases of the Moon''.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/140608/cutie-mark-crusaders-dream-warriors "Cutie Mark Crusaders Dream Warriors"]]: The Cutie Mark Crusaders are growing up, their days spent dealing with the problems facing fillies on the cusp of marehood; school, boys, and nightmares about a ghost from their collective past. Only with the help of a certain Princess of the Night can the three friends become what they need to be to destroy the evil that's haunted them once and forall; all... CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS DREAM WARRIORS! Sequel to the "Dear CMC" trilogy.
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/140608/cutie-mark-crusaders-dream-warriors "Cutie Mark Crusaders Dream Warriors"]]: The Cutie Mark Crusaders are growing up, their days spent dealing with the problems facing fillies on the cusp of marehood; school, boys, and nightmares about a ghost from their collective past. Only with the help of a certain Princess of the Night can the three friends become what they need to be to destroy the evil that's haunted them once and for
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81369/paternally-yours "Paternally Yours"]]: Everypony has to grow up sometime. Now a teenager, Sweetie Belle ventures to the Fillydelphia Academy of Music in order to start a search of self-discovery. Will she find the stallion she's searching for, or is she doomed to disappointment? Sequel to "Dear Sweetie Belle".
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/81369/paternally-yours "Paternally Yours"]]: Everypony has to grow up sometime. Now a teenager, Sweetie Belle ventures to the Fillydelphia Academy of Music in order to start a search of self-discovery. Will she find the stallion she's searching for, or is she doomed to disappointment? Sequel to "Dear Sweetie Belle".
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* RevisedEnding: "The Sin of Envy" originally led into another chapter focusing on Twilight, but that story idea (Twilight having a nightmare about becoming an alicorn and destroying everything around her) was rendered [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure redundant]], so the cliffhanger was reworked to lead directly into "The King of Lies".
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* RevisedEnding: "The Sin of Envy" originally led into another chapter focusing on Twilight, but that story idea (Twilight having a nightmare about becoming an alicorn and destroying everything around her) was rendered [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure redundant]], so the cliffhanger was reworked to lead directly into "The ''The King of Lies".Lies''.
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* WeWillMeetAgain: Feather Duster vows revenge after the events described in "Dear Applebloom" and "Dear Scootaloo", [[spoiler:and not even being vaporized by a Sonic Rainboom keeps him from following through]].
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* WeWillMeetAgain: Feather Duster vows revenge after the events described in "Dear Applebloom" and "Dear Scootaloo", [[spoiler:and not even being vaporized by a Sonic Rainboom sonic rainboom keeps him from following through]].
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* VillainsWantMercy: Feather Duster is consistently quick to switch from gloating over the pain he has caused to begging his victims to spare his sorry hide.
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* VillainsWantMercy: Feather Duster is consistently quick to switch from gloating over the pain he has caused to begging his would-be victims to spare his sorry hide.
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On second thought, not sure that can even be used as a fanfic trope
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* OfficialCouple: A lot, mostly set up in ''Morning Glory'': Spike/Rarity (the former having aged up some), Applejack/Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy/Big Macintosh, Pinkie Pie/Caramel, and [[spoiler:Flash Sentry/Trixie and Applebloom/Rumble]]. Later there are also [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle/Button Mash and Scootaloo/Pisqueak]].
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* InterspeciesRomance: Spike and Rarity, as far as they know the first in Equestria.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Spike and Rarity, as far as they know the first in Equestria.Equestria's history.
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She was a teenager after all, but that seems to be a pretty big turning point for them
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* TeenPregnancy: Borderline example with Rarity, as, while she was technically of age, she had just recently started fashion school and was in no way prepared to deal with a foal on her own.
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* TeenPregnancy: Borderline example with Rarity, as, while she was technically of age, old enough to attend school in another city, she had just recently started fashion school and was in no way prepared to deal with a foal on her own.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Rarity's old roommate Shining Star seemed to think suggesting going to a party was enough to cheer her up- not knowing that the reason for her being upset was having gotten pregnant at the ''last'' one they went to. ''[[BerserkButton Really]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bad timing.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Rarity's old roommate Shining Star seemed to think suggesting going to a party was enough to cheer her up- not knowing that the reason for her being upset was having gotten pregnant at the ''last'' one they went to. ''[[BerserkButton Really]] Really]]'' [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bad timing.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Rarity's old roommate seemed to think suggesting going to a party was enough to cheer her up- not knowing that the reason for her being upset was having gotten pregnant at the ''last'' one they went to. ''[[BerserkButton Really]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bad timing.]]
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Rarity's old roommate Shining Star seemed to think suggesting going to a party was enough to cheer her up- not knowing that the reason for her being upset was having gotten pregnant at the ''last'' one they went to. ''[[BerserkButton Really]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bad timing.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: Dash apparently thinks of [[spoiling:not breaking up the Great Storm in time to save Applejack's parents]] as this.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Dash apparently thinks of [[spoiling:not [[spoiler:not breaking up the Great Storm in time to save Applejack's parents]] as this.
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* AsYouKnow: Briefly used when Feather Duster points out the Cloudsdale stormcloud generators [[spoiler:that he plans to overload]].
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* AsYouKnow: Briefly used when Feather Duster points out out, to his former weather team coworker Rainbow Dash, the Cloudsdale stormcloud storm cloud generators [[spoiler:that he plans to overload]].
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* [[SmartPeopleKnowLatin Smart Ponies Know Ancient Unicorn]]: Professor Crescendo. (The story literally uses Latin as the ancient unicorn.)
** YouAreTheTranslatedWord: Crescendo does this with some frequency, albeit mostly with ponies such as Sweetie who wouldn't initially know the translation.
** YouAreTheTranslatedWord: Crescendo does this with some frequency, albeit mostly with ponies such as Sweetie who wouldn't initially know the translation.
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* [[SmartPeopleKnowLatin Smart Ponies Know Ancient Unicorn]]: Professor Crescendo. (The story literally uses Latin as the ancient unicorn.unicorn language.)
**YouAreTheTranslatedWord: YouAreTheTranslatedForeignWord: Crescendo does this with some frequency, albeit mostly with ponies such as Sweetie who wouldn't initially know the translation.
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