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* RealityEnsues: When Gerald's familiar grab's Saito's pistol by the barrel and bounds off, the shaking causes the gun to go off, shooting said familiar in the head.
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* StrayShotsStrikeNothing: Inverted. Andre's and Gerald's spells that miss Saito during their fight hit several homes and kill at least a few people.
* TechnicalPacifist: Saito. He does walk around carrying a lot of guns (even a missile launcher!), but tries to avoid killing people.
* TechnicalPacifist: Saito. He does walk around carrying a lot of guns (even a missile launcher!), but tries to avoid killing people.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: For stealing a student's wand, the students family orders Saito's death.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Saito again. Many times he looks like the OnlySaneMan
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Saito again. Many times he looks like the OnlySaneMan
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Saito flees from Andre rather than fight since (as Saito put it), the man uses fire magic and they were in a large flammable building.
* MilitaryBrat: Saito, along with his brother and sister, Ben andMegumiMegumi.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Saito flees from Andre rather than fight since (as Saito put it), the man uses fire magic and they were in a large flammable building.
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* NothingPersonal: Gerald attempts to kill Saito because he was ordered too. Personally he thought whipping him would be sufficient.
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--->"I, Roger Armagnac de Fézensaguet challenge you to a duel!"
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* TheUglyGuysHotDaughter: People are very surprised that Jessica's father is Scarron.
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* NotSoDifferent: Saito and Louise have a number of things in common that define their characters: both are the youngest of three children, though Saito gets along with his siblings while Louise's eldest sister is a [[BigBrotherBully heartless bully]] and the middle sister is kindly, but also sickly; they both have strict, domineering mothers whom they both fear and admire; both have a somewhat bratty demeanor--Saito being a MilitaryBrat and Louise behaving like a SpoiledBrat; and they both have quite nasty tempers.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6536396/1/Stupid_Devil_Dog Stupid Devil Dog]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230588/The-Real-Lee-is-here The Real Lee is here]] is a ZeroNoTsukaima fic with a very different Saito. [[MilitaryBrat Saito]] [[BadassBookworm Hiraga]] is the third son of a Japanese-American military family, who raised in a very regimented lifestyle, always pushing him to do his best. Saito has been training to join the military for years, when one day he goes to bed and wakes up in front of a pink-haired girl.
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* WeirdnessMagnet: Saito for LetsYouAndHimFight situations.
--> '''Saito:''' "[[LampshadeHanging Jesus Christ, everywhere I go I get into a fight. This isn't normal.]] Starting to piss me off."
--> '''Saito:''' "[[LampshadeHanging Jesus Christ, everywhere I go I get into a fight. This isn't normal.]] Starting to piss me off."
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** Gerald, after outright saying he's there to assassinate him, asks Saito why he isn't attacking. Saito notes the inn behind him (Gerald) saying he doesn't want the fight to go in there. Gerald promptly moves away from it.
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* CombatPragmatist: Saito, constantly using superior firepower and tricks to win his fights
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* CombatPragmatist: Saito, constantly using superior firepower and tricks to win his fightsfights.
--> "Dishonorable means using a human shield, it would be me using these people as a wall between you and me. Throwing paprika (into your eyes), that was just being pragmatic."
--> "Dishonorable means using a human shield, it would be me using these people as a wall between you and me. Throwing paprika (into your eyes), that was just being pragmatic."
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** Saito notes [[spoiler: his runes might hasten the effect.]]
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* GenreSavvy: Saito.
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** Subverted when Louise actually takes Saito's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to heart and thinks of the implications of dragging him into her world.
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* CoolPlane: The "Dragon's Raiment", which in this fic is a Vietnam-era [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/McDonnell_Douglas_F-4_Phantom_II F-4E Phantom II]] fighter jet.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Subverted, Saito does ''not'' put up with Louise's antics and calls her out on it.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Subverted, Averted. Saito does ''not'' not put up with Louise's antics antics, and even calls her out on it.
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* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
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* TomatoInTheMirror: Some time after Saito returns to Tristain Academy, Louise, Guiche and Kirche discuss on how his behavior is questionable, something that, given the arguments on the table, even the reader might agree on. He starts wondering to himself how he became that much of an asshole.
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a lovepotion.]]Subverted, potion]], but subverted since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel uses Dispel, he fell falls in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, Guiche, in that order)]]order)]].
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love
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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Jerkass Jerkass]]: Saito. It's still unclear (specially considering the disonance between his actions during flashbacks and the present) if he is a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Jerkass Jerkass]]: {{Jerkass}}: Saito. It's still unclear (specially considering the disonance between his actions during flashbacks and the present) if he is a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* CultureClash
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* TechnicalPacifist: Saito. He does walk around carrying a lot of guns (even a missile launcher!), but tries to avoid killing people
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* TemptingFate: Saito after his duel with Guiche
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--->Saito: "Relax, I seriously doubt that I can piss someone off enough to start another fight."
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* TemptingFate: Saito after his duel with Guiche
--->Saito: "Relax,Guiche:
--->'''Saito''': Relax, I seriously doubt that I can piss someone off enough to start anotherfight."
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Averted, Saito never needs the translation spell as he already speaks French.
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Averted, Averted. Saito never needs the translation spell as spell, since he already speaks French.
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in thatorder)]]
* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.order)]]
* {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that
* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.
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* Jerkass: Saito. It's still unclear (specially considering the disonance between his actions during flashbacks and the present) if he is a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* Jerkass: [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Jerkass Jerkass]]: Saito. It's still unclear (specially considering the disonance between his actions during flashbacks and the present) if he is a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* Jerkass: Saito. It's still unclear (specially considering the disonance between his actions during flashbacks and the present) if he is a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Saito again. Many times he looks like the OnlySaneMan
* JerkassHasAPoint: Saito again. Many times he looks like the OnlySaneMan
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Subverted, Saito never needs the translation spell as he already speaks French.
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Comes recommended on the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/ZeroNoTsukaima Zero No Tsukaima fanfic rec page]]
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Comes recommended on the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/ZeroNoTsukaima php/FanficRecs/TheFamiliarOfZero Zero No Tsukaima fanfic rec page]]
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* [[GiveMeBackMyWallet Give Me Back My Knife]]: Conrad tried pickpocketing Saito. Not a smart idea
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* Yandere: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
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* Yandere: {{Yandere}}: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Saito, constantly using superior firepower and tricks to win his fights
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* TechnicalPacifist: Saito. He does walk around carrying a lot of guns (even a missile launcher!), but tries to avoid killing people
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Subverted, Saito never needs the translation spell as he already speaks French. French.
* Yandere: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
* Yandere: Saito turns into one when he [[spoiler:drinks a love potion.]]Subverted, since [[spoiler:every time Louise used Dispel he fell in love with someone different (Louise, Tabitha and Giche, in that order)]]
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** In canon, Kirche used her familiar to drag Saito to her bedroom, where she was awaiting to try and ravish him. When she does this in this timeline, Saito dodges and throws Flame out a several-story window. He then drags it back up to her room, kicks down the door, and tells her that if she tries that again, he will kill her and the familiar, not even noticing her charms. Granted, it's because he thinks she was trying to assassinate him after having ''already'' survived several attempts... but still!
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* CulturalPosturing: Saito brags in to nobles that in his world [[MundaneLuxury they bath once a day]]
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Saito is appalled by how noble treat anyone that works under then.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Saito is appalled by how noble treat anyone that works under then.
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* CulturalPosturing: Saito brags in to nobles that in his world [[MundaneLuxury theybath bathe once a day]]
* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Saito is appalled by hownoble nobles treat anyone that works under then.them.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Subverted, Saito does ''not''put with Louise's antics and calls her out on it.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Days in after being summoned, Saito decides to leave leave, rather than deal with Louise's treatment.
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** Louise's bathing once a week is seen as fussy.
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AristocratsAreEvil: Saito, Sietsa and Foquet all have this view, justified as most nobles they met are privileged jerks.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Saito ''tears'' Louise a new one, when she tries to stop him from leaving Tristain Academy. She's only stopping him because her reputation would go in the tubes if he leaves'
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* Omniglot: {{Omniglot}}: Saito can speak English, Japanese and French.
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* AristocratsAreEvil:
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* HappinessInSlavery: Subverted, Saito does ''not''put with Louise's antics and calls her out on it.
* ItIsDehumanizing: In Louise's narration, she consistently calls Saito "the familiar" or "it." Which Saito calls her out on, since she doesn't even see him as human.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Subverted, Saito does ''not''put with Louise's antics and calls her out on it.
* ItIsDehumanizing: In Louise's narration, she consistently calls Saito "the familiar" or "it." Which Saito calls her out on, since she doesn't even see him as human.
* NoSympathy: Louise has none for Saito, especially since she ripped him from his home.
* Omniglot: Saito can speak English, Japanese and French.
* OrderedApology: Louise ineffectively orders Saito to apologize to Guiche in the middle of their deal. He refuses.
* Omniglot: Saito can speak English, Japanese and French.
* OrderedApology: Louise ineffectively orders Saito to apologize to Guiche in the middle of their deal. He refuses.
* PetTheDog: Louise takes Saito to the infirmary and pays for a healer.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere:ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Days in being summoned, Saito besides to leave than deal with Louise's treatment.
* TemptingFate: Saito after his duel with Guiche
--->Saito: "Relax, I seriously doubt that I can piss someone off enough to start another fight."
--->6 hours later
--->"I, Roger Armagnac de Fézensaguet challenge you to a duel!"
* TranslatorMicrobes: Subverted, Saito never needs the translation spell as he already speaks French.
* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.
* TemptingFate: Saito after his duel with Guiche
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--->6 hours later
--->"I, Roger Armagnac de Fézensaguet challenge you to a duel!"
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* WhatTheHellHero: For lack of definition of hero, Saito to Louise.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6536396/1/Stupid_Devil_Dog Stupid Devil Dog]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230588/The-Real-Lee-is-here The Real Lee is here]] is a ZeroNoTsukaima fic with a very different Saito. [[MilitaryBrat Saito]] [[BadassBookworm Hiraga]] is the third son of a Japanese-American military family, who raised in a very regimented lifestyle, always pushing him to do his best. Saito has been training to join the military for years, when one day he goes to bed and wakes up in front of a pink-haired girl.
Saito is not pleased as he tries dealing being [[TrappedInAnotherWorld trapped in another world]] with a spoiled noble and trying to maintain his identity.
Comes recommended on the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/ZeroNoTsukaima Zero No Tsukaima fanfic rec page]]
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* MilitaryBrat: Saito, along with his brother and sister, Ben and Megumi
* OCStandIn: TropesAreNotBad, as Saito is much more sympathetic and developed than canon Saito as he realizes something is seriously wrong with the situation and tries to rectify it.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Saito ''tears'' Louise a new one, when she tries to stop him from leaving Tristain Academy. She's only stopping him because her reputation would go in the tubes if he leaves'
--->Saito: "I'm leaving because you ripped me out of my home, my family, my friends, my future, my life. I'm leaving because your terrible magic is twisting my mind, and wiping memories out of my head. Hell, you probably didn't even consider that I had a life before I got here. You are insensitive and self-centered. I'm leaving and nothing you do can stop me."
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere:
Saito is not pleased as he tries dealing being [[TrappedInAnotherWorld trapped in another world]] with a spoiled noble and trying to maintain his identity.
Comes recommended on the [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/ZeroNoTsukaima Zero No Tsukaima fanfic rec page]]
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!!Tropes contained in Stupid Devil Dog:
* MilitaryBrat: Saito, along with his brother and sister, Ben and Megumi
* OCStandIn: TropesAreNotBad, as Saito is much more sympathetic and developed than canon Saito as he realizes something is seriously wrong with the situation and tries to rectify it.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Saito ''tears'' Louise a new one, when she tries to stop him from leaving Tristain Academy. She's only stopping him because her reputation would go in the tubes if he leaves'
--->Saito: "I'm leaving because you ripped me out of my home, my family, my friends, my future, my life. I'm leaving because your terrible magic is twisting my mind, and wiping memories out of my head. Hell, you probably didn't even consider that I had a life before I got here. You are insensitive and self-centered. I'm leaving and nothing you do can stop me."
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere:
