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* {{Adult child}}: Barty, due to [[spoiler: permanent, irreversible brain damage from having mentally broke in Azkaban, and then living under Imperius for ten years]]
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* {{Adult child}}: Barty, due to [[spoiler: permanent, irreversible brain damage from having broken mentally broke in Azkaban, and then living under Imperius for ten years]]
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* {{Embarassing Childhood Nickname}}: Viktor is an international Quidditch star, [[spoiler: liege lord of Castle Krum]] and[[spoiler:Lord Protector of Bulgaria]]. He's also Uncle Rumen's 'little bear'. Invoked, as Penko uses this to 'encourage' Viktor to nap whilst [[spoiler: Zhivka is dying]] by threatening to tell Viktor's fiancee why he's got that nickname.
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*{{Adult child}}: Barty, due to [[spoiler: permanent, irreversible brain damage from having mentally broke in Azkaban, and then living under Imperius for ten years]]
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** Bellatrix is made of this. She explictedly gets a sexual thrill from combat, and freely admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
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** Bellatrix is made of this. Bellatrix, in a serious way. She explictedly explictly gets a sexual thrill from combat, and freely admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
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** Rodolphus is revealed to be this. When he fights, everything goes(literally)'cold', and he feels like he's watching from a long way away.
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** Rodolphus is revealed to be this. When he fights, everything goes(literally)'cold', goes(literally) 'cold', and he feels like he's watching from a long way away.
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** Hermione comes off as this sometimes, due to her unshakable cheerfulness and calm. Madam Maxime is especially disturbed by her aura of adult self-possession.
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** Hermione comes off as this sometimes, due has elements of this. Adults tend to find it sort of eerie that she's always cheerful and polite, no matter what. Deconstructed, in that it's symtomatic of her unshakable cheerfulness emotional issues, and calm. Madam Maxime is especially disturbed by her aura of adult self-possession.characters know it. They're still disturbed.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Barty Crouch Jr.
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*CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Barty Crouch Jr.
*{{Embarassing Childhood Nickname}}: Viktor is an international Quidditch star, [[spoiler: liege lord of Castle Krum]] and[[spoiler:Lord Protector of Bulgaria]]. He's also Uncle Rumen's 'little bear'. Invoked, as Penko uses this to 'encourage' Viktor to nap whilst [[spoiler: Zhivka is dying]] by threatening to tell Viktor's fiancee why he's got that nickname.
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* {{Gentle Giant/Genius Giant}}/{{Genius Bruiser}}:
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** Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He was afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might be right about that last one...]]
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* Heroic BSOD:
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** Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He was afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might could well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might may be right about that last one...]]
* Heroic BSOD:*Grevious Bottley Harm:
**Viktor, when he gets into a fistfight at camp with Blagun Hristov. Averted, in that the bottle doesn't break, which doesn't prevent Viktor from knocking out a number of teeth with it.
*{{Heroic BSOD}}:
**Viktor, when he gets into a fistfight at camp with Blagun Hristov. Averted, in that the bottle doesn't break, which doesn't prevent Viktor from knocking out a number of teeth with it.
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**Draco has one when he breaks down crying in Skopje, telling Snape he knows he's leading [[spoiler: his friends from Durmstrang and the other schools]] to a terrible death.
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*Dumb Muscle:
**Averted by Viktor. Everyone expects him to be this, and he's smart enough to use it fully to advantage. He also comments ironically on it when he tells Snape he's not as smart as Karkaroff was at his age [[spoiler: meaning he has no intention of taking the Mark, as he knows Karkaroff's days are numbered because he didn't come back to the Dark Lord]].
**Averted by Viktor. Everyone expects him to be this, and he's smart enough to use it fully to advantage. He also comments ironically on it when he tells Snape he's not as smart as Karkaroff was at his age [[spoiler: meaning he has no intention of taking the Mark, as he knows Karkaroff's days are numbered because he didn't come back to the Dark Lord]].
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**Viktor. He's built like a linebacker and has rough, thuggish features, but he's gentle, sensitive and extremely intelligent. Amongst other things, he teaches himself to read and speak fluent, if heavily accented, English with virtually no formal help aside from Draco. He can also memorise long passages of works and recite them from memory.
**Viktor. He's built like a linebacker and has rough, thuggish features, but he's gentle, sensitive and extremely intelligent. Amongst other things, he teaches himself to read and speak fluent, if heavily accented, English with virtually no formal help aside from Draco. He can also memorise long passages of works and recite them from memory.
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** Desmond Feather/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
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** Desmond Feather/[[spoiler:Alastor Feathering/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
*Cry into chest:
**After Barty tells her[[spoiler: what happened to the Longbottoms]]Hermione does this with [[spoiler: Snape]], even sitting in his lap and hugging his neck. He is appalled and horrified, but permits it, and gradually comes to tacitly offer comfort without being asked.
**After Barty tells her[[spoiler: what happened to the Longbottoms]]Hermione does this with [[spoiler: Snape]], even sitting in his lap and hugging his neck. He is appalled and horrified, but permits it, and gradually comes to tacitly offer comfort without being asked.
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** When people don't find Hermione creepy, they find her this. She's quite sunny and bubbly, and loves asking questions of any and everybody.
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** When people don't find Hermione creepy, they find her this. She's quite sunny and bubbly, and loves asking questions of any and everybody.everybody.
**Viktor's cousins, Ivan and Yana, and Anu also qualify, thought Anu outgrows it quickly.
**Viktor's cousins, Ivan and Yana, and Anu also qualify, thought Anu outgrows it quickly.
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** Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He's afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might be right about that last one...]]
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** Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He's He was afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might be right about that last one...]]]]
*Heroic BSOD:
**Hermione has a major one when [[spoiler: Rinky dies]]. It shows how far she's come that she feels all right letting [[spoiler: her parents]] see her curled up in a ball, sobbing hysterically, and refuses to let go of [[spoiler: her mother]].
*Heroic BSOD:
**Hermione has a major one when [[spoiler: Rinky dies]]. It shows how far she's come that she feels all right letting [[spoiler: her parents]] see her curled up in a ball, sobbing hysterically, and refuses to let go of [[spoiler: her mother]].
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* Ill girl:
** Deconstructed with Sose Tamm. She is constantly sick, but it's from a lifetime of malnutrition and hard work. At twenty-eight, she looks forty, is riddled with arthritis, coughs constantly from breathing so much soot and has spine issues that cause her to hunch. She also [[spoiler: isn't dying--she's just chronically ill].
** Deconstructed with Sose Tamm. She is constantly sick, but it's from a lifetime of malnutrition and hard work. At twenty-eight, she looks forty, is riddled with arthritis, coughs constantly from breathing so much soot and has spine issues that cause her to hunch. She also [[spoiler: isn't dying--she's just chronically ill].
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* Ill girl:
{{Ill girl}}:
**Deconstructed Averted with Sose Tamm. She is constantly sick, but it's from a lifetime of malnutrition and hard work. At twenty-eight, she looks forty, is riddled with arthritis, coughs constantly from breathing so much soot and has spine issues that cause her to hunch. She also [[spoiler: isn't dying--she's just chronically ill].ill]].
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**Hermione is a deconstruction. She represses negative emotion in order to be sure [[spoiler: that her family won't have any reason to leave her, like her muggle parents did]]. Her slowly growing willingness to permit her Wizarding family to see her less than totally cheerful and smiling is a major point of character development, as she comes to believe that they love her and won't abandon her.
**Hermione is a deconstruction. She represses negative emotion in order to be sure [[spoiler: that her family won't have any reason to leave her, like her muggle parents did]]. Her slowly growing willingness to permit her Wizarding family to see her less than totally cheerful and smiling is a major point of character development, as she comes to believe that they love her and won't abandon her.
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* The Butcher*:
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* The Butcher*:Butcher:
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* CrapsackWorld: Voldemort takes over. Racism, classism and sexism ensue.
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* CrapsackWorld: Voldemort takes over. Racism, classism and sexism ensue. ensue.
*Creepy child:
**Hermione comes off as this sometimes, due to her unshakable cheerfulness and calm. Madam Maxime is especially disturbed by her aura of adult self-possession.
*Cute child:
**When people don't find Hermione creepy, they find her this. She's quite sunny and bubbly, and loves asking questions of any and everybody.
*Creepy child:
**Hermione comes off as this sometimes, due to her unshakable cheerfulness and calm. Madam Maxime is especially disturbed by her aura of adult self-possession.
*Cute child:
**When people don't find Hermione creepy, they find her this. She's quite sunny and bubbly, and loves asking questions of any and everybody.
*{{Give Her a Normal Life}}:
**Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He's afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might be right about that last one...]]
**Dumbledore's whole motive in taking the Lestranges' baby. He's afraid that the Malfoys would turn her into a symbol for other Death Eaters to rally round, and that other magical families might not want to deal with a child who might well be an incipient Dark witch. [[spoiler: He might be right about that last one...]]
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** Rinky the house elf, to the extent that he [[spoiler: sacrifices himself to save Hermione and Barty from Dementors, and uses his dying breath to demand Snape promise to guard his beloved Miss. Snape does it, to salute his courage and loyalty.]]
* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: [[spoiler: Hermione and Krum.]]
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* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: [[spoiler: Hermione and Krum.]]
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** Rinky the house elf, to the extent that he [[spoiler: sacrifices himself to save Hermione and Barty from Dementors, and uses his dying breath to demand Snape promise to guard his beloved Miss. Snape does it, to salute honour his courage and loyalty.]]
* PerfectlyArrangedMarriage: *Parental Abandoment:
**Hermione is intially led to believe her muggle parents either left or were [[spoiler:Hermione kidnapped and Krum.]]
* Promotedkilled by the Order]]. In actuality, the audience knows that[[spoiler: Bellatrix and Rodolphus led a raid to Parent:torture and kill them]]. Hermione's abandoment issues are a serious plotpoint for a long time because of this.
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**Hermione is intially led to believe her muggle parents either left or were [[spoiler:
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*Tell me About my Father:
**Well, more like 'Tell me about [[spoiler: my father figure's mother]]. Since Hermione has [[spoiler: promoted Snape to Dad]] she wants to hear about his mother. He obliges her, showing that he [[spoiler: returns her affection and has come to see her as a surrogate child]].
**Well, more like 'Tell me about [[spoiler: my father figure's mother]]. Since Hermione has [[spoiler: promoted Snape to Dad]] she wants to hear about his mother. He obliges her, showing that he [[spoiler: returns her affection and has come to see her as a surrogate child]].
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*Ill girl:
**Deconstructed with Sose Tamm. She is constantly sick, but it's from a lifetime of malnutrition and hard work. At twenty-eight, she looks forty, is riddled with arthritis, coughs constantly from breathing so much soot and has spine issues that cause her to hunch. She also [[spoiler: isn't dying--she's just chronically ill].
**Deconstructed with Sose Tamm. She is constantly sick, but it's from a lifetime of malnutrition and hard work. At twenty-eight, she looks forty, is riddled with arthritis, coughs constantly from breathing so much soot and has spine issues that cause her to hunch. She also [[spoiler: isn't dying--she's just chronically ill].
*Promoted to Parent:
** [[spoiler: Snape]] is an odd case, in that [[spoiler: Hermione]] has two living parents, but sees him as a father-figure all the same. It's almost a tri-parenting situation, in that whilst [[spoiler: Rodolphus]] is Father, [[spoiler: Snape]] is Dad. He was the first 'safe' person[[spoiler: Hermione meets, after Narcissa]] and she treats him like she did [[spoiler: Cyril Granger, the muggle man who raised her with his wife]].
**[[spoiler: Anu]] promotes [[spoiler: Snape]] to being his father-figure after the events of December of 1995. Partly because he [[spoiler: desperately wants a father of his own]] and partly so [[spoiler: Snape will marry his Nene, his mother,to make sure she won't be alone if Anu dies helping fight the war]].
**Barty sees himself as this to [[spoiler: Edric]]. It becomes offical when [[spoiler: Rabastan and Eugenia ask him to go into exile with their son and help raise him in their stead]]. There are also shades of this in his relationship with [[spoiler: Draco]].
**Penko is this to [[spoiler: Edric, as he is his formal guardian after the baby is sent as a hostage to Bulgaria]]. He and[[spoiler: Rumen are also this to Viktor after Martin disengages mentally]].
** [[spoiler: Snape]] is an odd case, in that [[spoiler: Hermione]] has two living parents, but sees him as a father-figure all the same. It's almost a tri-parenting situation, in that whilst [[spoiler: Rodolphus]] is Father, [[spoiler: Snape]] is Dad. He was the first 'safe' person[[spoiler: Hermione meets, after Narcissa]] and she treats him like she did [[spoiler: Cyril Granger, the muggle man who raised her with his wife]].
**[[spoiler: Anu]] promotes [[spoiler: Snape]] to being his father-figure after the events of December of 1995. Partly because he [[spoiler: desperately wants a father of his own]] and partly so [[spoiler: Snape will marry his Nene, his mother,to make sure she won't be alone if Anu dies helping fight the war]].
**Barty sees himself as this to [[spoiler: Edric]]. It becomes offical when [[spoiler: Rabastan and Eugenia ask him to go into exile with their son and help raise him in their stead]]. There are also shades of this in his relationship with [[spoiler: Draco]].
**Penko is this to [[spoiler: Edric, as he is his formal guardian after the baby is sent as a hostage to Bulgaria]]. He and[[spoiler: Rumen are also this to Viktor after Martin disengages mentally]].
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** Hermione Lestrange[[spoiler later lady Krum]], the [[spoiler:Unburnt]],and the [[spoiler: Lady of the Breech]].
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** Hermione Lestrange[[spoiler Lestrange[[spoiler: later lady Krum]], the [[spoiler:Unburnt]],and the [[spoiler: Lady of the Breech]].
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*The Butcher*:
**Lucius Malfoy is ironically nicknamed 'The Butcher of Britain' due to his [[spoiler: organising two massacres in a single day and never getting his hands dirty]].
**Lucius Malfoy is ironically nicknamed 'The Butcher of Britain' due to his [[spoiler: organising two massacres in a single day and never getting his hands dirty]].
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*Red Baron:
**Hermione Lestrange[[spoiler later lady Krum]], the [[spoiler:Unburnt]],and the [[spoiler: Lady of the Breech]].
**Viktor,[[spoiler:lord Krum, Lord Protector of Bulgaria]], the [[spoiler: Young Alexander]].
**Draco Malfoy,called [[spoiler: Drago Traitorsbane]] because he [[spoiler: slew Stefan Borev, the traitor lord Borev]]
**Anu Tamm, the [[spoiler: One-Eye]], or Anu [[spoiler: Wolfhunter]]
**Hermione Lestrange[[spoiler later lady Krum]], the [[spoiler:Unburnt]],and the [[spoiler: Lady of the Breech]].
**Viktor,[[spoiler:lord Krum, Lord Protector of Bulgaria]], the [[spoiler: Young Alexander]].
**Draco Malfoy,called [[spoiler: Drago Traitorsbane]] because he [[spoiler: slew Stefan Borev, the traitor lord Borev]]
**Anu Tamm, the [[spoiler: One-Eye]], or Anu [[spoiler: Wolfhunter]]
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* {{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}:
** Most of the younger characters to one degree or another, but [[spoiler:Draco]] is the most obvious example. He has random crying jags, suffers terrible nightmares,is hyper-vigilant and can't sleep by himself anymore. He also has vivid flashbacks, and refuses to go anywhere unarmed.
** Most of the younger characters to one degree or another, but [[spoiler:Draco]] is the most obvious example. He has random crying jags, suffers terrible nightmares,is hyper-vigilant and can't sleep by himself anymore. He also has vivid flashbacks, and refuses to go anywhere unarmed.
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** Most of the younger characters to one degree or another, but
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** Desmond Moody/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
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** Desmond Moody/[[spoiler:Alastor Feather/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
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** Early in the story, Hermione tries to escape[[spoiler: Hogwarts, which is being held by the Death Eaters]] by running out the door. She gets caught and Rodolphus [[spoiler:spanks her]]. In Pureblood culture, that's a very normal way to discipline a child, and he's hurt and surprised when she doesn't want to cuddle after so he can help her feel better. Hermione perceives the incident as an adult first hurting her and then wanting to act like it was all right.
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** Early in the story, Hermione tries to escape[[spoiler: Hogwarts, which is being held by the Death Eaters]] by running out the door. She gets caught and Rodolphus [[spoiler:spanks her]]. In Pureblood culture, For Purebloods, that's a very normal way to discipline a child, and he's hurt and surprised when she doesn't want to cuddle after so he can help her feel better. Hermione perceives the incident as an adult first hurting her and then wanting to act like it was all right.
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** Bellatrix is made of this. She explictedly gets a sexual thrill from combat,and free admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
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** Bellatrix is made of this. She explictedly gets a sexual thrill from combat,and free combat, and freely admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
*{{Cold Sniper}}:
**Rodolphus is revealed to be this. When he fights, everything goes(literally)'cold', and he feels like he's watching from a long way away.
**[[spoiler:Hermione]] is potentially becoming this. At one point, she calmly kills [[spoiler: an auror sent to kill them]] and her mien never changes.
*{{Child Soldiers}}:
**Nearly all the characters under eighteen. Draco [[spoiler: raises an army of schoolchildren to break the siege at Castle Krum and then help unite Bulgaria]]. Most of them end up maimed, emotionally scarred or seriously traumatised by their experiences.
**Rodolphus is revealed to be this. When he fights, everything goes(literally)'cold', and he feels like he's watching from a long way away.
**[[spoiler:Hermione]] is potentially becoming this. At one point, she calmly kills [[spoiler: an auror sent to kill them]] and her mien never changes.
*{{Child Soldiers}}:
**Nearly all the characters under eighteen. Draco [[spoiler: raises an army of schoolchildren to break the siege at Castle Krum and then help unite Bulgaria]]. Most of them end up maimed, emotionally scarred or seriously traumatised by their experiences.
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Invoked in universe. The Snatchers wear clashing, mismatched clothing because it intimidates people. One guy dressed like a drunk rodeo clown is funny; five of them, showing up on your doorstep to invite you to have a 'chat' with Rodolphus Lestrange? Not funny at all.
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* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Subverted by Nagini. She scares the hell out of everyone at first. [[AdultFear Voldemort gives her a baby]] and she has a disquieting habit of slithering into people’s beds while they’re sleeping. But [[spoiler: Hetty turns out to be a parselmouth and we find out that Nagini is actually rather fond of them all.]]
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* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Subverted by Nagini. She scares the hell out of everyone at first. [[AdultFear Voldemort gives her a baby]] and she has a disquieting habit of slithering into people’s beds while they’re sleeping. But [[spoiler: Hetty turns out to be a parselmouth and we find out that Nagini is actually rather fond of them all.]] ]]
*{{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}:
**Most of the younger characters to one degree or another, but [[spoiler:Draco]] is the most obvious example. He has random crying jags, suffers terrible nightmares,is hyper-vigilant and can't sleep by himself anymore. He also has vivid flashbacks, and refuses to go anywhere unarmed.
*{{Shell-Shocked Veteran}}:
**Most of the younger characters to one degree or another, but [[spoiler:Draco]] is the most obvious example. He has random crying jags, suffers terrible nightmares,is hyper-vigilant and can't sleep by himself anymore. He also has vivid flashbacks, and refuses to go anywhere unarmed.
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** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}]], but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
* {{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
** "'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.
* {{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
** "'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.
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** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}]], [[spoiler:incest between him and his sister Nora]], but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
* {{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
** "'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.disturbing.
* {{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
** "'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.
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** Played with by Druella, Bellatrix and Narcissa's mother. She was a manipulative emotional abuser who continues to try to terrorise her daughters despite being [[spoiler: a portrait]]. {{Word of God}} says she's a Borderline Personality.
** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}, but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}, but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
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** Played Invoked with by Druella, Bellatrix and Narcissa's mother. She was a manipulative emotional abuser who continues to try to terrorise her daughters despite being [[spoiler: a portrait]]. {{Word of God}} says she's a Borderline Personality.
** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sisterincest}}, incest}}]], but that doesn't make it less disturbing.disturbing.
*{{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
**"'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.
** Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister
*{{All gay men are paedophiles}}:
**"'Strongly"' averted by [[spoiler: Rabastan and Penko]] who are disgusted by the plan to use [[spoiler: Anu]] as bait to entice [[spoiler: Slughorn]] to spill his secrets. [[spoiler: Rabastan]] makes it his business to explain the situation to [[spoiler: Anu]] and makes sure he knows that he can tell [[spoiler: Rabastan]] if something that makes him feel uncomfortable happens.
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** [[spoiler: Penko]] is apparently this, as he mentions sometimes sleeping with women, when the urge takes him. [[spoiler: Rabastan]], on the other hand, isn't at all interested in women, despite the fact he's [[spoiler: married to Emmeline/Eugenia at the Dark Lord's command]].
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** [[spoiler: Penko]] is apparently this, as he mentions sometimes sleeping having slept with women, when women in the urge takes him.past. [[spoiler: Rabastan]], on the other hand, isn't at all interested in women, despite the fact he's [[spoiler: married to Emmeline/Eugenia at the Dark Lord's command]].
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** Lucius Malfoy, who scares the Swedes into giving them a fleet to [[spoiler: break the siege of Castle Krum]]simply through force of reputation.
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** Lucius Malfoy, who scares the Swedes into giving them a fleet to [[spoiler: break the siege of Castle Krum]]simply Krum and save the kids]]simply through force of reputation.
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*Abusive Parents:
**Completely averted by the main characters. Cultural differences aside, part of what bonds the family so tightly is the shared commitment by the adults to the welfare of the children, including emotionally.
**Played with by Druella, Bellatrix and Narcissa's mother. She was a manipulative emotional abuser who continues to try to terrorise her daughters despite being [[spoiler: a portrait]]. {{Word of God}} says she's a Borderline Personality.
**Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}, but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
**Completely averted by the main characters. Cultural differences aside, part of what bonds the family so tightly is the shared commitment by the adults to the welfare of the children, including emotionally.
**Played with by Druella, Bellatrix and Narcissa's mother. She was a manipulative emotional abuser who continues to try to terrorise her daughters despite being [[spoiler: a portrait]]. {{Word of God}} says she's a Borderline Personality.
**Scabior's family was extremely dysfunctional, and his father Obed was a violent drunk. Which explains why [[spoiler: Scabior kills him]]. It also gives some context to the [[spoiler:{{brother-sister incest}}, but that doesn't make it less disturbing.
*{{Asexuality}}:
**Desmond Moody/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
**Desmond Moody/[[spoiler:Alastor Moody]]is this. Played with, in that he is aromantic,but sometimes has sex with his wife [[spoiler:Hetty]] to give her the child she wants so desperately. He finds it neither pleasant or unpleasant, but simply something he does to please someone he cares about.
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** The Lestranges are genuinely unsure of how to react to Hermione's kindness toward the 'lower orders', but praise her for being cunning and her familiarity with the Dark Lord's writings.
** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die, because the strong should survive by preying on the weak.
** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die, because the strong should survive by preying on the weak.
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** The Lestranges are genuinely unsure of how aren't especially pleased when Hermione is too nice to react to Hermione's kindness toward the 'lower orders', lower orders, but praise her for being cunning and her familiarity with the Dark Lord's writings.
** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve todie, because the strong should survive by preying on the weak.die.
*{{Blood Knight}}:
**Bellatrix is made of this. She explictedly gets a sexual thrill from combat,and free admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
**[[spoiler:Draco]] is beginning to show signs of this.
** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to
*{{Blood Knight}}:
**Bellatrix is made of this. She explictedly gets a sexual thrill from combat,and free admits she'd rather fight than do almost anything else.
**[[spoiler:Draco]] is beginning to show signs of this.
*Monster Clown:
Invoked in universe. The Snatchers wear clashing, mismatched clothing because it intimidates people. One guy dressed like a drunk rodeo clown is funny; five of them, showing up on your doorstep to invite you to have a 'chat' with Rodolphus Lestrange? Not funny at all.
Invoked in universe. The Snatchers wear clashing, mismatched clothing because it intimidates people. One guy dressed like a drunk rodeo clown is funny; five of them, showing up on your doorstep to invite you to have a 'chat' with Rodolphus Lestrange? Not funny at all.
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** [[spoiler: Stefan]] crosses it when he murders his uncle [[spoiler:Grigor Borev]] to claim his title and then uses it to conscript thousands of peasants, burning their homes and driving their women and children into the forest (in Eastern Europe,in December) to die. The fact he talks casually about his men raping the women is icing on the cake.
** [[spoiler: Travers]] goes over when he admits cheerfully to his mistress [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter]] that he was the one who loosed the [[spoiler:Dementors]] on the muggle village to test their capabilities, and justifies by pointing out they're only muggles.
** The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out}}during his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.ASongOfIceAndFire}}' This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
** [[spoiler: Stefan]] crosses it when he murders his uncle [[spoiler:Grigor Borev]] to claim his title and then uses it to conscript thousands of peasants, burning their homes and driving their women and children into the forest (in Eastern Europe,in December) to die. The fact he talks casually about his men raping the women is icing on the cake.
** [[spoiler: Travers]] goes over when he admits cheerfully to his mistress [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter]] that he was the one who loosed the [[spoiler:Dementors]] on the muggle village to test their capabilities, and justifies by pointing out they're only muggles.
** The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out}}during his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.ASongOfIceAndFire}}' This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
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*[[spoiler: Penko]] is apparently this, as he mentions sometimes sleeping with women, when the urge takes him. [[spoiler: Rabastan]], on the other hand, isn't at all interested in women, despite the fact he's [[spoiler: married to Emmeline/Eugenia at the Dark Lord's command]].
*[[spoiler: Penko]] is apparently this, as he mentions sometimes sleeping with women, when the urge takes him. [[spoiler: Rabastan]], on the other hand, isn't at all interested in women, despite the fact he's [[spoiler: married to Emmeline/Eugenia at the Dark Lord's command]].
*{{Establishing Character Moment}}:
**The first time we see Hermione, she stands up to [[spoiler: the Dark Lord]], refusing to follow his orders.
**Bellatrix's first action out of Azkaban is to kneel and kiss the Dark Lord's hem. This is darkly referenced later when she [[spoiler: begs on her knees for him to help Hermione, and he refuses]].
**Scabior stabbing[[spoiler: John Dawlish, Emmeline Vance's fiance]] to death in front of Hermione. Despite the fact he's got a wand. And laughing about it, but then just as quickly scolding her not to touch [[spoiler: Dawlish's]] wand, lest she hurt herself. He even tells her to be a good girl before leaving her with the body.
**The first time we see Hermione, she stands up to [[spoiler: the Dark Lord]], refusing to follow his orders.
**Bellatrix's first action out of Azkaban is to kneel and kiss the Dark Lord's hem. This is darkly referenced later when she [[spoiler: begs on her knees for him to help Hermione, and he refuses]].
**Scabior stabbing[[spoiler: John Dawlish, Emmeline Vance's fiance]] to death in front of Hermione. Despite the fact he's got a wand. And laughing about it, but then just as quickly scolding her not to touch [[spoiler: Dawlish's]] wand, lest she hurt herself. He even tells her to be a good girl before leaving her with the body.
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** The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out}}during his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{A song of Ice and Fire}}We {{We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.'}} ASongOfIceAndFire}}' This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
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** The Butcher of Britain, Lucius Malfoy. Malfoy.
** His son, the Butcher's Boy
**Bellatrix Lestrange, the Angel of Death
**Rabastan Lestrange, the Monster of Ministry Square
** His son, the Butcher's Boy
**Bellatrix Lestrange, the Angel of Death
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** [[spoiler: Snape]] becomes this to Hermione(and the others, to a lesser extent), despite his best efforts. He manages to get the Dark Lord to [[spoiler: send troops, if only a few thousand, to Bulgaria to fight the wolves]] and teaches her how to defend herself in her new role.
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** [[spoiler: Snape]] becomes this to Hermione(and the others, to a lesser extent), despite his best efforts. He manages to get the Dark Lord to [[spoiler: send troops, if only a few thousand, thousand foreign volunteers, to Bulgaria to fight the wolves]] and teaches her how to defend herself in her new role.
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**Rodolphus is this trope incarnate. He's affectionate, loves to tease and joke, and is the best torturer in Europe. He's like Ward Clever if Ward Clever had a side-line involving red hot pinchers.
*{{Straight gay}}:
**[[spoiler: Rabastan Lestrange]] is this. He's a feared warrior with zero interest in anything even slightly sterotypical, dresses terribly and happens to like men. {{Justified}}, in that the sexual politics of the Wizarding world are very different.
**Rodolphus is this trope incarnate. He's affectionate, loves to tease and joke, and is the best torturer in Europe. He's like Ward Clever if Ward Clever had a side-line involving red hot pinchers.
*{{Straight gay}}:
**[[spoiler: Rabastan Lestrange]] is this. He's a feared warrior with zero interest in anything even slightly sterotypical, dresses terribly and happens to like men. {{Justified}}, in that the sexual politics of the Wizarding world are very different.
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** The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out during}} his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{A song of ice and fire We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.'}} This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
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** The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out during}} {{shout-out}}during his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{A song of ice Ice and fire We Fire}}We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.'}} This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
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** [[spoiler: Snape]] becomes this to Hermione(and the others, to a lesser extent), despite his best efforts. He manages to get the Dark Lord to [[spoiler: send troops, if only a few thousand, to Bulgaria to fight the wolves]] and teaches her how to defend herself in her new role.
**Barty perceives himself as this, especially to [[spoiler: Edric]], and will attack anyone who tries to harm the others with incredible violence.
**Lucius Malfoy, who scares the Swedes into giving them a fleet to [[spoiler: break the siege of Castle Krum]]simply through force of reputation.
**Rinky the house elf, to the extent that he [[spoiler: sacrifices himself to save Hermione and Barty from Dementors, and uses his dying breath to demand Snape promise to guard his beloved Miss. Snape does it, to salute his courage and loyalty.]]
** [[spoiler: Snape]] becomes this to Hermione(and the others, to a lesser extent), despite his best efforts. He manages to get the Dark Lord to [[spoiler: send troops, if only a few thousand, to Bulgaria to fight the wolves]] and teaches her how to defend herself in her new role.
**Barty perceives himself as this, especially to [[spoiler: Edric]], and will attack anyone who tries to harm the others with incredible violence.
**Lucius Malfoy, who scares the Swedes into giving them a fleet to [[spoiler: break the siege of Castle Krum]]simply through force of reputation.
**Rinky the house elf, to the extent that he [[spoiler: sacrifices himself to save Hermione and Barty from Dementors, and uses his dying breath to demand Snape promise to guard his beloved Miss. Snape does it, to salute his courage and loyalty.]]
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* Blue and Orange Morality
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* Blue {{Blue and Orange MoralityMorality}}
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** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die.
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** The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die.die, because the strong should survive by preying on the weak.
*Moral Event Horizen:
**[[spoiler: Stefan]] crosses it when he murders his uncle [[spoiler:Grigor Borev]] to claim his title and then uses it to conscript thousands of peasants, burning their homes and driving their women and children into the forest (in Eastern Europe,in December) to die. The fact he talks casually about his men raping the women is icing on the cake.
**[[spoiler: Travers]] goes over when he admits cheerfully to his mistress [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter]] that he was the one who loosed the [[spoiler:Dementors]] on the muggle village to test their capabilities, and justifies by pointing out they're only muggles.
**The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out during}} his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{A song of ice and fire We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.'}} This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
**[[spoiler: Stefan]] crosses it when he murders his uncle [[spoiler:Grigor Borev]] to claim his title and then uses it to conscript thousands of peasants, burning their homes and driving their women and children into the forest (in Eastern Europe,in December) to die. The fact he talks casually about his men raping the women is icing on the cake.
**[[spoiler: Travers]] goes over when he admits cheerfully to his mistress [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter]] that he was the one who loosed the [[spoiler:Dementors]] on the muggle village to test their capabilities, and justifies by pointing out they're only muggles.
**The Dark Lord wins extra points for managing a {{shout-out during}} his MEH. 'Take her away, [[spoiler: Lucius]]. {{A song of ice and fire We have never been able to abide the snivelling of women.'}} This is after he announces [[spoiler: he has no intention of honouring his treaty and saving Bulgaria, including Hermione, Viktor and Draco, and fully means to leave them to die.]]
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**Pureblood culture runs on this:
**Early in the story, Hermione tries to escape[[spoiler: Hogwarts, which is being held by the Death Eaters]] by running out the door. She gets caught and Rodolphus [[spoiler:spanks her]]. In Pureblood culture, that's a very normal way to discipline a child, and he's hurt and surprised when she doesn't want to cuddle after so he can help her feel better. Hermione perceives the incident as an adult first hurting her and then wanting to act like it was all right.
** The Lestranges are genuinely unsure of how to react to Hermione's kindness toward the 'lower orders', but praise her for being cunning and her familiarity with the Dark Lord's writings.
**The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die.
**Pureblood culture runs on this:
**Early in the story, Hermione tries to escape[[spoiler: Hogwarts, which is being held by the Death Eaters]] by running out the door. She gets caught and Rodolphus [[spoiler:spanks her]]. In Pureblood culture, that's a very normal way to discipline a child, and he's hurt and surprised when she doesn't want to cuddle after so he can help her feel better. Hermione perceives the incident as an adult first hurting her and then wanting to act like it was all right.
** The Lestranges are genuinely unsure of how to react to Hermione's kindness toward the 'lower orders', but praise her for being cunning and her familiarity with the Dark Lord's writings.
**The Dark Lord's philosophy is made of this. He [[spoiler: leaves the children to die in Bulgaria]] because he asserts that if they aren't strong enough to save themselves, they deserve to die.
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** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
** Never insult a lady's honour in front of Draco.
** Threaten Hermione's [[spoiler: fiance, later husband, Viktor]] in her presence and watch the fireworks commence.
** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
** Never insult a lady's honour in front of Draco.
** Threaten Hermione's [[spoiler: fiance, later husband, Viktor]] in her presence and watch the fireworks commence.
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** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[spoiler: who diesearly on]] mid-story]] or his [[spoiler: fiancee [[spoiler:later wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
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** Never insult a lady's honour in front ofDraco.
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** Threaten Hermione's [[spoiler: fiance, later husband, Viktor]] in her presence and watch the fireworkscommence.
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** Mention that [[spoiler: Barty]] isn't 'really' family to the Lestranges and you'll regret it immediately.
**Try to force Barty to leave [[spoiler: the Lestranges]], especially his [[spoiler: surrogate child, Edric]] and he will come at you with everything he has. Threatening them is an even worse idea.
**Suggest Anu Tamm's Nene is a bad woman and suffer for it.
** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[spoiler: who dies
** Never insult a lady's honour in front of
** Threaten Hermione's [[spoiler: fiance, later husband, Viktor]] in her presence and watch the fireworks
** Mention that [[spoiler: Barty]] isn't 'really' family to the Lestranges and you'll regret it immediately.
**Try to force Barty to leave [[spoiler: the Lestranges]], especially his [[spoiler: surrogate child, Edric]] and he will come at you with everything he has. Threatening them is an even worse idea.
**Suggest Anu Tamm's Nene is a bad woman and suffer for it.
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** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[Spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
** Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[Spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
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** Bellatrix isn’t exactly maternal... [[spoiler: but she ends up plotting to betray Voldemort for her.]]
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**Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[Spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
**Never insult a lady's honour in front of Draco.
**Threaten Hermione's [[ spoiler: fiance, later husband, Viktor]] in her presence and watch the fireworks commence.
**Viktor is kind, well-mannered and gentle. Until you dare imply that his mother, Zhivka[[Spoiler: who dies early on]] or his [[spoiler: wife, Hermione]] are anything less than virutous, beautiful and kind.
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** Snape, [[spoiler: as in {{Canon}}.]]
** [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter.]]
** PlayedWith by [[spoiler: the Death Eaters. They regret serving Voldemort, not their treatment of muggleborns.]]
** Snape, [[spoiler: as in {{Canon}}.]]
** [[spoiler: Rita Skeeter.]]
** PlayedWith by [[spoiler: the Death Eaters. They regret serving Voldemort, not their treatment of muggleborns.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Draco gets lessons from [[spoiler: Mad Eye Moody]]. Hermione gets duelling lessons from Bellatrix Lestrange and MagnificentBitch lessons from Snape. Draco goes from the moany little whinge bag of {{Canon}} to undisputed Badass and Hermione goes from frightened eleven year old to cunning LadyOfWar.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Draco gets lessons from [[spoiler: Mad Eye Moody]]. Hermione gets duelling lessons from Bellatrix Lestrange and MagnificentBitch lessons from Snape. Draco goes from the moany little whinge bag of {{Canon}} to undisputed Badass and Hermione goes from frightened eleven year old to cunning LadyOfWar. Both of them are somewhat miserable though.
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Has a sequel in progress, ''Influence of Souls''.
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Has a sequel in progress, ''Influence ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7620845/1/Influence_of_Souls Influence of Souls''.
Souls]]''.
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** [[AntiHero Snape]] does some serious messed up things in the name of bringing Voldemort down. Like selling Hermione for a thousand Aurors, marrying Emmeline Vance to Rabastan Lestrange and letting a paedophile teach children.
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** [[AntiHero Snape]] does some serious messed up things in the name of bringing Voldemort down. Like selling Hermione for a thousand Aurors, marrying [[spoiler: Emmeline Vance to Rabastan Lestrange Lestrange]] and letting a paedophile teach children.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6723584/1/Strange_and_Invisible_History Strange and Invisble History]]'' by Madea's Rage is a [[DeconstructionFic deconstruction]] of the [[FandomSpecificPlot “Hermione is really a pureblood”]] fics. At the end of ''HarryPotter and the Philosopher’s Stone,'' Voldemort possesses Harry, the Death Eaters take over and Hermione turns out to be the long lost daughter of Bellatrix and Rodolphus Lestrange. War, politics and [[ArrangedMarriage arranged marriages]] ensue.
Basically it’s HarryPotter [[XMeetsY]] meets ASongOfIceAndFire.
Has a sequel in progress, ''Influence of Souls''.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* AndIMustScream: Harry is possessed by Voldemort. It is exactly as disturbing as it sounds.
* ArrangedMarriage: It’s pureblood, patriarchal society so it’s happening left, right and centre. [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage They seem to end up okay for the most part.]]
**[[spoiler: Hermione and Krum]]
** [[spoiler: Emmeline Vance and Rabastan Lestrange.]] She’s a member of the Order in disguise and he’s a gay Death Eater. Somehow the marriage functions.
** [[spoiler: Anu Tamm and Yana Krum.]]
** [[spoiler: Alise and Scabior.]]
** [[spoiler: Moody and Hetty.]]
*AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther
** Snape and Sirius in between insults.
** Cunegarde may be a grumpy old bitch but she adores Hermione.
** Bellatrix isn’t exactly maternal... [[spoiler: but she ends up plotting to betray Voldemort for her.]]
* BadBoss: Voldemort, as in {{Canon}}. [[spoiler: Unlike Canon, his inner circle become fed up.]]
* BlackAndBlackMorality/BlackAndGreyMorality:
** The protagonists are Death Eaters. This is going to happen.
** [[AntiHero Snape]] does some serious messed up things in the name of bringing Voldemort down. Like selling Hermione for a thousand Aurors, marrying Emmeline Vance to Rabastan Lestrange and letting a paedophile teach children.
* TheChessmaster: ‘‘Severus Snape.’’
* CrapsackWorld: Voldemort takes over. Racism, classism and sexism ensue.
* DeconstructionFic: Complete with frequent LampshadeHangings
*EvilVsEvil
** Part One gives us the Death Eaters VS the Werewolves
**Part Two gives us the Death Eaters VS [[spoiler: Voldemort.]]
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Hetty.
* {{Jerkass}}/JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Snape and Cunegarde.
* KnifeNut: Scabior.
* LadyOfWar: Hermione and to a lesser extent, Narcissa.
* MamaBear: Bellatrix Lestrange and Narcissa Malfoy.
* MuggleFosterParents: Hermione. Bellatrix disapproves. Violently.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
** The Butcher of Britain, Lucius Malfoy.
* OffScreenVillainy: Used for perfectly legitimate reasons.
* OneOfUs: Madea’s Rage is a troper and frequently mentions tropes and this website in her author’s notes.
* PerfectlyArrangeMarriage: [[spoiler: Hermione and Krum.]]
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Subverted by Nagini. She scares the hell out of everyone at first. [[AdultFear Voldemort gives her a baby]] and she has a disquieting habit of slithering into people’s beds while they’re sleeping. But [[spoiler: Hetty turns out to be a parselmouth and we find out that Nagini is actually rather fond of them all.]]
* ShoutOut: There are a lot of [[ShoutOut Shout Outs]] to ASongOfIceAndFire but other works are mentioned.
* TookALevelInBadass: Draco gets lessons from [[spoiler: Mad Eye Moody]]. Hermione gets duelling lessons from Bellatrix Lestrange and MagnificentBitch lessons from Snape. Draco goes from the moany little whinge bag of {{Canon}} to undisputed Badass and Hermione goes from frightened eleven year old to cunning LadyOfWar.
* VillainProtagonist: The Lestranges and the Malfoys are the main characters. Go figure.
* {{Yandere}}: Bellatrix for Voldemort. [[spoiler: At least until the end of Part One.]]
Basically it’s HarryPotter [[XMeetsY]] meets ASongOfIceAndFire.
Has a sequel in progress, ''Influence of Souls''.
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!!This story provides examples of:
* AndIMustScream: Harry is possessed by Voldemort. It is exactly as disturbing as it sounds.
* ArrangedMarriage: It’s pureblood, patriarchal society so it’s happening left, right and centre. [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage They seem to end up okay for the most part.]]
**[[spoiler: Hermione and Krum]]
** [[spoiler: Emmeline Vance and Rabastan Lestrange.]] She’s a member of the Order in disguise and he’s a gay Death Eater. Somehow the marriage functions.
** [[spoiler: Anu Tamm and Yana Krum.]]
** [[spoiler: Alise and Scabior.]]
** [[spoiler: Moody and Hetty.]]
*AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther
** Snape and Sirius in between insults.
** Cunegarde may be a grumpy old bitch but she adores Hermione.
** Bellatrix isn’t exactly maternal... [[spoiler: but she ends up plotting to betray Voldemort for her.]]
* BadBoss: Voldemort, as in {{Canon}}. [[spoiler: Unlike Canon, his inner circle become fed up.]]
* BlackAndBlackMorality/BlackAndGreyMorality:
** The protagonists are Death Eaters. This is going to happen.
** [[AntiHero Snape]] does some serious messed up things in the name of bringing Voldemort down. Like selling Hermione for a thousand Aurors, marrying Emmeline Vance to Rabastan Lestrange and letting a paedophile teach children.
* TheChessmaster: ‘‘Severus Snape.’’
* CrapsackWorld: Voldemort takes over. Racism, classism and sexism ensue.
* DeconstructionFic: Complete with frequent LampshadeHangings
*EvilVsEvil
** Part One gives us the Death Eaters VS the Werewolves
**Part Two gives us the Death Eaters VS [[spoiler: Voldemort.]]
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Hetty.
* {{Jerkass}}/JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Snape and Cunegarde.
* KnifeNut: Scabior.
* LadyOfWar: Hermione and to a lesser extent, Narcissa.
* MamaBear: Bellatrix Lestrange and Narcissa Malfoy.
* MuggleFosterParents: Hermione. Bellatrix disapproves. Violently.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
** The Butcher of Britain, Lucius Malfoy.
* OffScreenVillainy: Used for perfectly legitimate reasons.
* OneOfUs: Madea’s Rage is a troper and frequently mentions tropes and this website in her author’s notes.
* PerfectlyArrangeMarriage: [[spoiler: Hermione and Krum.]]
* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Subverted by Nagini. She scares the hell out of everyone at first. [[AdultFear Voldemort gives her a baby]] and she has a disquieting habit of slithering into people’s beds while they’re sleeping. But [[spoiler: Hetty turns out to be a parselmouth and we find out that Nagini is actually rather fond of them all.]]
* ShoutOut: There are a lot of [[ShoutOut Shout Outs]] to ASongOfIceAndFire but other works are mentioned.
* TookALevelInBadass: Draco gets lessons from [[spoiler: Mad Eye Moody]]. Hermione gets duelling lessons from Bellatrix Lestrange and MagnificentBitch lessons from Snape. Draco goes from the moany little whinge bag of {{Canon}} to undisputed Badass and Hermione goes from frightened eleven year old to cunning LadyOfWar.
* VillainProtagonist: The Lestranges and the Malfoys are the main characters. Go figure.
* {{Yandere}}: Bellatrix for Voldemort. [[spoiler: At least until the end of Part One.]]
