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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Beelzebub. In episode 67, he kidnaps Cosmo specifically because he knew Tails would go after her. And then he deliberately makes Tails angry so he can study the resulting effects of Tails' Shroud infection. He also [[spoiler: reactivates the Galaxy Crusher to destroy the entire galaxy from a safe distance and KillEmAll]] in order to end the war. Maledict is [[EvenEvilHasStandards not amused]] when he finds out.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Beelzebub. In episode 67, he kidnaps Cosmo specifically because he knew Tails would go after her. And then he deliberately makes Tails angry so he can study the resulting effects of Tails' Shroud infection. He also [[spoiler: reactivates the Galaxy Crusher to destroy the entire galaxy from a safe distance and KillEmAll]] in order to [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim cleanly]] end the war. Maledict is [[EvenEvilHasStandards not amused]] when he finds out.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Beelzebub. In episode 67, he kidnaps Cosmo specifically because he knew Tails would go after her. And then he deliberately makes Tails angry so he can study the resulting effects of Tails' Shroud infection.
** And then as Dark Tails begins spreading Dark Chaos Energy across the galaxy, Beelzebub realizes that trying to defeat Sonic and the Metarex directly is becoming more trouble than it's worth. What does he intend to do about it? [[spoiler: Destroy the entire galaxy from a safe distance and KillEmAll]]. Maledict is [[EvenEvilHasStandards not amused]] when he finds out.
* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Numerous characters die and there is loads of graphic violence.
** And then as Dark Tails begins spreading Dark Chaos Energy across the galaxy, Beelzebub realizes that trying to defeat Sonic and the Metarex directly is becoming more trouble than it's worth. What does he intend to do about it? [[spoiler: Destroy the entire galaxy from a safe distance and KillEmAll]]. Maledict is [[EvenEvilHasStandards not amused]] when he finds out.
* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Numerous characters die and there is loads of graphic violence.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Beelzebub. In episode 67, he kidnaps Cosmo specifically because he knew Tails would go after her. And then he deliberately makes Tails angry so he can study the resulting effects of Tails' Shroud infection.
** And then as Dark Tails begins spreading Dark Chaos Energy across the galaxy, Beelzebub realizes that trying to defeat Sonic and the Metarex directly is becoming more trouble than it's worth. What does he intend to do about it?infection. He also [[spoiler: Destroy reactivates the Galaxy Crusher to destroy the entire galaxy from a safe distance and KillEmAll]].KillEmAll]] in order to end the war. Maledict is [[EvenEvilHasStandards not amused]] when he finds out.
** Maledict himself is also very GenreSavvy. Part of the reason he didn't want Sonic entering the war [[spoiler: along with the fact that he wanted to keep his son safe]] is because he knew Sonic would most likely ruin his meticulous master plan. And [[GoneHorriblyRight he was right]].
* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season ofSonic X ''Sonic X'' was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]].to the extreme]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Numerous characters die and there is loads of graphic violence.
** And then as Dark Tails begins spreading Dark Chaos Energy across the galaxy, Beelzebub realizes that trying to defeat Sonic and the Metarex directly is becoming more trouble than it's worth. What does he intend to do about it?
** Maledict himself is also very GenreSavvy. Part of the reason he didn't want Sonic entering the war [[spoiler: along with the fact that he wanted to keep his son safe]] is because he knew Sonic would most likely ruin his meticulous master plan. And [[GoneHorriblyRight he was right]].
* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of
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* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Eggman saves Sonic's life, then he betrays Sonic, then he teams up with and betrays Sonic ''again'', then he saves several of Sonic's friends from Beelzebub, he briefly joins with Maledict, and then he attempts to betray Maledict and gets himself captured in the process before once more teaming up with Sonic.
** Rouge pretty much doesn't care what side she's on. She originally help Eggman, then she betrays him to serve Maledict for [[OnlyInItForTheMoney jewel payments]], then she helps Sonic and friends [[spoiler: before betraying them to Maledict]], then she betrays Maledict and joins with Eggman again.
** Rouge pretty much doesn't care what side she's on. She originally help Eggman, then she betrays him to serve Maledict for [[OnlyInItForTheMoney jewel payments]], then she helps Sonic and friends [[spoiler: before betraying them to Maledict]], then she betrays Maledict and joins with Eggman again.
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* [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy Jesus Was An Alien Spy]]: A core trope of the story. Not only Jesus, but Satan, Muhammed, all the angels, and a large majority of the Jewish prophets from the Old Testament were as well.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: [[NayTheist Deliberate]], according to the author. The Muslims of the Angel Federation are essentially every single Islamophobic stereotype turned UpToEleven, and the Angels themselves - including Jesus - are willing to commit wholesale genocide on Demon subjects out of simple hatred and self-righteousness.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: [[NayTheist Deliberate]], according to the author. The Muslims of the Angel Federation are essentially every single Islamophobic stereotype turned UpToEleven, and the Angels themselves - including Jesus - are willing to commit wholesale genocide on Demon subjects out of simple hatred and self-righteousness.
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And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], ''[[CrapsackWorld much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
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And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], ''[[CrapsackWorld much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
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* MoodWhiplash: All over the place, but most notable in Episode 65. The chapter ends with a romantic scene between Cosmo and Tails - and then it cuts to [[spoiler: Jesus launching the Angel invasion of the galaxy]].
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* MoodWhiplash: All over the place, but most notable in Episode 65. The chapter ends with a romantic romantic, [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming heartwarming]] scene between Cosmo and Tails - and then it cuts to [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Jesus launching the Angel invasion of the galaxy]].galaxy]]]].
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* Live on a planet controlled by the Demon Empire? If the Angels attack your world, they exterminate you and the entire population outright simply because you're "living in sin" according to them.
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlantAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the [[TheFederation Angel Federation]].
But as Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
But as Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlantAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the [[TheFederation Angel Federation]].
Federation]]. But as Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlantAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the [[TheFederation Angel Federation]].
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlantAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the [[TheFederation Angel Federation]].
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The third season of ''SonicX'', but entirely rewritten and remade. When a young alien girl crashes on their world, Sonic and his friends discover that she is being hunted by a powerful new foe; an [[AIisaCrapshoot android]] fox known as Tsali the Ultimate Weapon, who has declared genocide on her people and hunted them down to extinction for reasons unknown. Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy.
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The third season of ''SonicX'', but entirely rewritten and remade. When a young alien girl crashes on their world, Sonic and his friends discover that she is being hunted by a powerful new foe; an [[AIisaCrapshoot android]] fox known as Tsali the Ultimate Weapon, who has declared genocide on her people and hunted them down to extinction for reasons unknown. Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy.
enemy and find the Chaos Emeralds.
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the Angel Federation.
But Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
But Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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Sonic and his friends find themselves in a galaxy engulfed in tyranny and civil war between [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens [[PlantAliens Metarex]], and threatened by invasion from the ancient enemies of the Demons, the [[TheFederation Angel Federation.
Federation]].
But as Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
But as Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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and rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens Metarex]]. As Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], '''[[WarIsHell much]]''' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
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And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], '''[[WarIsHell much]]''' ''[[CrapsackWorld much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
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The third season of ''SonicX'', but entirely rewritten and remade. When a young alien girl crashes on their world, Sonic and his friends discover that she is being hunted by a powerful new foe; an [[AIisaCrapshoot android]] fox known as Tsali the Ultimate Weapon, who has declared genocide on her people and hunted them down to extinction for reasons unknown.
Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy and rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens Metarex]].
And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]]. As Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy and rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens Metarex]].
And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]]. As Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
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The third season of ''SonicX'', but entirely rewritten and remade. When a young alien girl crashes on their world, Sonic and his friends discover that she is being hunted by a powerful new foe; an [[AIisaCrapshoot android]] fox known as Tsali the Ultimate Weapon, who has declared genocide on her people and hunted them down to extinction for reasons unknown. Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy.
And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], '''[[WarIsHell much]]''' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
Our heroes go into space to stop this new enemy and rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the [[PlanetAliens Metarex]].
And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].Metarex]]. As Sonic and friends soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
void.
And from there, then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], '''[[WarIsHell much]]''' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]].
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They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void.
They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void.
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The third season of ''SonicX'', but entirely rewritten and remade. When a young alien girl crashes on their world, Sonic and his friends discover that she is being hunted by a powerful new foe; an [[AIisaCrapshoot android]] fox known as Tsali the Ultimate Weapon, who has declared genocide on her people and hunted them down to extinction for reasons unknown.
Our heroes go into space to stop this newenemy.
Theyenemy and rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for [[PlanetAliens Metarex]].
And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]]. As Sonic and friendsas secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And soon discover, there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons and angels beyond the void.
Our heroes go into space to stop this new
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And then things get [[FromBadToWorse worse]]. [[DarkerAndEdgier Much]], [[CrapsackWorld much]], ''[[WarIsHell much]]'' [[CosmicHorrorStory worse]]. As Sonic and friends
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Sonic and his friends go off into space expecting to find their Planet Egg, beat up Tsali and the bad guys, and return home as heroes. They don't realize [[CosmicHorrorStory the kind of tale]] they're ''really'' in until much later.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Sonic and his friends go off into space expecting to find their Planet Egg, beat up Tsali and the bad guys, and return home as heroes. They don't realize [[CosmicHorrorStory the kind of tale]] they're ''really'' in until much later.later.
* XMeetsY: [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] [[ShinMegamiTensei Tensei]] [[{{Warhammer 40000}} 40000]].
* XMeetsY: [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] [[ShinMegamiTensei Tensei]] [[{{Warhammer 40000}} 40000]].
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* TragicKeepsake: Sonic finds a shred of [[spoiler: Tails's]] glove after the final battle.
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* CurbstompBattle: The battle between Maledict and Hyper Sonic/Hyper Shadow/Ultra Tails in Episode 64 ends up being one of these. Even in their most powerful forms, the heroes are unable to harm the Devil at all.
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* CurbstompBattle: The battle between Maledict and Hyper Sonic/Hyper Shadow/Ultra Tails Super Sonic/Super Shadow/Super Eric in Episode 64 ends up being one of these. Even in their most powerful forms, the heroes are unable to harm the Devil at all.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Shadow's reaction to [[spoiler: Tsali murdering Molly after promising he would release her in exchange for the Chaos Emerald]] and then calling in an entire Demon fleet to destroy the planet they're on.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. [[TheStinger And then]] [[spoiler: [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the Forerunners return]]]]...
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. [[TheStinger And then]] [[spoiler: [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the Forerunners return]]]]... return]]]].
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* DoorStopper: A minor one.
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* [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous "Ultimate" creatures to find a way to defeat the Angels. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt true plan]] he attempted to sabotage the project. After the ARK incident, Maledict abandoned Project Shadow completely and began Project Sonic, resulting in the birth of Sonic the Hedgehog. However, after discovering that the hedgehog only inherited the Devil's super speed, Maledict - fond of his failed creation - shot the infant Sonic in a capsule to Mobius, deciding to [[PetTheDog spare Sonic's life and allow him to make his own future]]. He decided to use Tsali as his next subject instead of a hedgehog, kicking off the events of the story.]]
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* LoveRedeems: [[spoiler: Cosmo convinces Tsali and the Metarex to end their conflict]] in the last episode, helping them both realize that their lust for revenge destroyed themselves and brought nothing but pain and suffering to the galaxy.
* [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous "Ultimate" creatures to find a way to defeat the Angels. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt true plan]] he attempted to sabotage the project. After the ARK incident, Maledict abandoned Project Shadow completely and began Project Sonic, resulting in the birth of Sonic the Hedgehog. However, after discovering that the hedgehog only inherited the Devil's super speed, Maledict - fond of his failed creation - shot the infant Sonic in a capsule to Mobius, deciding to [[PetTheDog spare Sonic's life and allow him to make his own future]]. He decided to use Tsali as his next subject instead of a hedgehog, kicking off the events of thestory.]]story]].
* MoodWhiplash: All over the place, but most notable in Episode 65. The chapter ends with a romantic scene between Cosmo and Tails - and then it cuts to [[spoiler: Jesus launching the Angel invasion of the galaxy]].
* [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous "Ultimate" creatures to find a way to defeat the Angels. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt true plan]] he attempted to sabotage the project. After the ARK incident, Maledict abandoned Project Shadow completely and began Project Sonic, resulting in the birth of Sonic the Hedgehog. However, after discovering that the hedgehog only inherited the Devil's super speed, Maledict - fond of his failed creation - shot the infant Sonic in a capsule to Mobius, deciding to [[PetTheDog spare Sonic's life and allow him to make his own future]]. He decided to use Tsali as his next subject instead of a hedgehog, kicking off the events of the
* MoodWhiplash: All over the place, but most notable in Episode 65. The chapter ends with a romantic scene between Cosmo and Tails - and then it cuts to [[spoiler: Jesus launching the Angel invasion of the galaxy]].
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version Numerous characters die and there is loads of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.graphic violence.
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They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous oppressive empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void. Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]]
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They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous oppressive empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void. Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]]
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix, Dr. Eggman, and even Sonic himself are hit badly with this, although the rewrite is adding many more scenes with them.
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* ForeverWar: Exaggerated with the conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe. It has lasted for [[TimeAbyss five hundred trillion years]]. It has explicitly gone on for so long that even the gods have become weary of the fighting.
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* ForeverWar: Exaggerated with the conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe. It has lasted for [[TimeAbyss five hundred trillion years]]. It has explicitly gone on for so long that even the gods have become weary of the fighting.
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* RuleOfCool: Epic ship duels, space demons, zombies, guitars that can destroy spaceships...
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** Tails is the biggest recipient of badass levels, to the point where he quickly enters [[MarySue Mary Sue]] territory with all the transformations and powers he gains over the course of the series. Not only does he command the Blue Typhoon, he gains control over Chaos powers as well.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: Deliberate, according to the author. The Muslims of the Angel Federation are essentially every single Islamophobic stereotype turned UpToEleven, and the Angels themselves - including Jesus - are willing to commit wholesale genocide on Demon subjects out of simple hatred and self-righteousness.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: Deliberate, [[NayTheist Deliberate]], according to the author. The Muslims of the Angel Federation are essentially every single Islamophobic stereotype turned UpToEleven, and the Angels themselves - including Jesus - are willing to commit wholesale genocide on Demon subjects out of simple hatred and self-righteousness.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix and Dr. Eggman are hit badly with this, although the rewrite is adding many more scenes with them.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix Chaotix, Dr. Eggman, and Dr. Eggman even Sonic himself are hit badly with this, although the rewrite is adding many more scenes with them.
* Live on a planet controlled by the Demon Empire? If the Angels attack your world, they exterminate you and the entire population outright simply because you're "living in sin" according to them.
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* TheEmpire: The Demon Empire rules half of the entire universe; in the distant past, it ruled ''all'' of it. Bloated and autocratic, it is nonetheless the main governing body of the setting. The Milky Way lays on its frontier. It's not [[HegemonicEmpire entirely evil either]].
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* TheEmpire: The Demon Empire rules half of the entire universe; in the distant past, it ruled ''all'' of it. Bloated and autocratic, it is nonetheless the main governing body of the setting. The Milky Way lays on its frontier. It's not [[HegemonicEmpire entirely evil either]].
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: Deliberate, according to the author. The Muslims of the Angel Federation are essentially every single Islamophobic stereotype turned UpToEleven, and the Angels themselves - including Jesus - are willing to commit wholesale genocide on Demon subjects out of simple hatred and self-righteousness.
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They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous oppressive empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void...
Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily rewritten to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily rewritten to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
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They rapidly find themselves caught in an intergalactic war between an [[TheEmpire enormous oppressive empire]] of [[TheLegionsofHell demons]] led by [[{{Satan}} Lord Maledict]] and the Metarex. [[FromBadtoWorse Things rapidly spiral out of control]] for Sonic and friends as secrets are revealed and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters even more friends and foes]] enter the fray. And there are [[EldritchAbomination far greater horrors]] than mere demons beyond the void...
void. Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] ]]
The story is currently being heavily rewritten to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
The story is currently being heavily rewritten to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily revised to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily revised rewritten to increase its quality and readability, and [[WordOfGod the author has recommended not reading it]] until it is fully revised.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily revised, and a sequel continuing the saga is in the works.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily revised, revised to increase its quality and a sequel continuing readability, and [[WordOfGod the saga author has recommended not reading it]] until it is in the works.
fully revised.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being revised, and a sequel continuing the saga is in the works.
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Let's just say it's called Dark Chaos [[DarkerAndEdgier for a reason.]] The story is currently being heavily revised, and a sequel continuing the saga is in the works.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix and Dr. Eggman are hit with this, although the rewrite is adding more scenes with them.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix and Dr. Eggman are hit badly with this, although the rewrite is adding many more scenes with them.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Maledict, in many more ways than one. He's willing to unleash horrific atrocities upon millions to keep peace in the Demon Empire and stop the Metarex uprising. Many of the Angels [[GrayAndGrayMorality are not much better]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Maledict, in many more ways than one. He's willing to unleash horrific atrocities upon millions to keep peace in the Demon Empire and stop the Metarex uprising. Many of the Angels [[GrayAndGrayMorality The Angels are not much better]].
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy. The Chaotix and Dr. Eggman are hit with this, although the rewrite is adding more scenes with them.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Metarex are just one of the many different factions fighting over the galaxy.
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* ShooOutTheClowns: The Chaotix get ''much'' less screen time than they did in the original. Eggman too, to a lesser extent.
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* ShooOutTheClowns: The Chaotix get ''much'' less screen time than essentially disappear after Episode 65, until they did in show up for the original. Eggman too, to a lesser extent.final battle.