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* [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous Ultimate Weapons, using his own divine genetics to mold them. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, [[''VideoGame/SonicAdventure2'' but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's true plan he attempted to sabotage the project.]]]]
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* [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous Ultimate Weapons, Weapons in the fifty years before Sonic X, using his own divine genetics to mold them. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, [[''VideoGame/SonicAdventure2'' but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt true plan plan]] he attempted to sabotage the project.]]]]project. Maledict then abandoned Project Shadow and began Project Sonic, resulting in the birth of Sonic the Hedgehog. Deeming it a success, Maledict shot the infant Sonic in a capsule to Mobius until the hedgehog grew up and formed his powers.]]
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* [[spoiler: LukeIAmYourFather]]:[[LukeIAmYourFather Sonic I Am Your Father]]]]: [[spoiler: Maledict created numerous Ultimate Weapons, using his own divine genetics to mold them. His first attempt resulted in Shadow, [[''VideoGame/SonicAdventure2'' but when Gerald Robotnik discovered Maledict's true plan he attempted to sabotage the project.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Under Maledict's orders]].
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** [[spoiler: Under Maledict's orders]].[[ManipulativeBastard Maledict's]] programming]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: Both played straight ''and'' inverted in Episode 78. [[spoiler:''Tails'' is forced to sacrifice himself to defeat Dark Tails and save the universe]] and [[spoiler:''Cosmo'' is the one who fires the Sonic Driver at him]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: Both played straight ''and'' inverted in Episode 78.77. [[spoiler:''Tails'' is forced to sacrifice himself to defeat Dark Tails and save the universe]] and [[spoiler:''Cosmo'' is the one who fires the Sonic Driver at him]].
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**[[spoiler: Under Maledict's orders]].
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** Then he brainwashes [[spoiler: Venus]], forcing Tsali and Trinity to eliminate her.
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** Then he brainwashes [[spoiler: Venus]], Venus the Seedrian]], forcing Tsali and Trinity to eliminate her.
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* MindScrew: Several bits and pieces of the overall back story and the behavior of the antagonists make little sense at first glance. How did [[spoiler: Elise]] know Sonic? What is the true relationship between Tails and Tephiroth? What was Maledict's true plan?
** [[WordOfGod The author has stated]] most of the more confusing bits will be explained in the sequel.
** [[WordOfGod The author has stated]] most of the more confusing bits will be explained in the sequel.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] is quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of the galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] is quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods.[[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] is quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] is quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] can turn sentient beings mad by speaking to them. He brainwashes numerous Demon fleets to serve him. This is also a side effect of exposure to [[TheCorruption Dark Chaos Energy]].
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] can turn sentient beings mad by speaking to them. He brainwashes numerous Demon fleets to serve him. This is also a side effect of exposure to [[TheCorruption Dark Chaos Energy]].
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* ForeverWar: Exaggerated with the conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe. It has lasted for five hundred ''trillion'' years.
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* ForeverWar: Exaggerated with the conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe. It has lasted for [[TimeAbyss five hundred ''trillion'' years.trillion years]].
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* BoisterousBruiser: Astorath is one of these full stop.
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* BoisterousBruiser: Astorath [[TheBrute Astorath]] is one of these full stop.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] can turn sentient beings mad by speaking to them. He brainwashes numerous Demon fleets to serve him. This is a side of effect of exposure to [[TheCorruption Dark Chaos Energy]].
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] can turn sentient beings mad by speaking to them. He brainwashes numerous Demon fleets to serve him. This is also a side of effect of exposure to [[TheCorruption Dark Chaos Energy]].
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] can turn sentient beings mad by speaking to them. He brainwashes numerous Demon fleets to serve him. This is a side of effect of exposure to [[TheCorruption Dark Chaos Energy]].
** Then he brainwashes [[spoiler: Venus]], forcing Tsali and Trinity to eliminate her.
** Then he brainwashes [[spoiler: Venus]], forcing Tsali and Trinity to eliminate her.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are is quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* ForeverWar: The conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe.
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* ForeverWar: The Exaggerated with the conflict between the Demon Empire and Angel Federation. It's actually called the Eternal War in-universe. It has lasted for five hundred ''trillion'' years.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: '''DarkerAndEdgier''': The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be considered a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. Much of galaxy is in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be considered described as a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* RuleOfCool: From epic ship duels to space demons to zombies, Dark Chaos embraces this trope.
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* BadBoss: Surprisingly, Maledict mostly subverts this. He genuinely cares about he people he rules over and has great fondness for his servants. Just don't attempt to betray his trust.
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* BadBoss: Surprisingly, Maledict mostly subverts this. He genuinely cares about he people he rules over and has great fondness for his servants. [[BerserkButton Just don't attempt attempt]] [[FateWorseThanDeath to betray his trust.trust]].
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* BoisterousBruiser: Astorath is one of these full stop.
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* AbusivePrecursors: The Forerunners were an alien collective charged by Maledict and Allysion to populate the universe, but they rebelled and were sealed beyond the realms of time and space. Ancient prophecy says that they will return and [[ApocalypseHow bring about the end times]].
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* AbusivePrecursors: The Forerunners were an alien collective charged by Maledict and Allysion to populate the universe, new universe 500 trillion years in the past, but they rebelled and were sealed beyond the realms of time and space. Ancient prophecy says that they will return and [[ApocalypseHow bring about the end times]].
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* AbusivePrecursors: The Forerunners were an alien collective charged by Maledict and Allysion to populate the universe, but they rebelled and were sealed beyond the realms of time and space. Ancient prophecy says that they will return and take revenge upon their creators.
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* AbusivePrecursors: The Forerunners were an alien collective charged by Maledict and Allysion to populate the universe, but they rebelled and were sealed beyond the realms of time and space. Ancient prophecy says that they will return and take revenge upon their creators.[[ApocalypseHow bring about the end times]].
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Maledict, in many more ways than one. He's willing to unleash horrific atrocities upon millions to keep peace in the Demon Empire and stop the Metarex uprising.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Maledict, in many more ways than one. He's willing to unleash horrific atrocities upon millions to keep peace in the Demon Empire and stop the Metarex uprising.uprising.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "They are coming"]]. Doubles as TheStinger
* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "They are coming"]]. Doubles as TheStinger
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**[[spoiler: And guess what happens when Dark Tails is defeated?]]
**[[spoiler: And guess what happens when Dark Tails is defeated?]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. And then [[spoiler: [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the Forerunners return]]]]...
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. [[TheStinger And then then]] [[spoiler: [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the Forerunners return]]]]...
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. And then [[spoiler: the Forerunners return]]...
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Tails]] is dead, but [[spoiler: Dark Tails]] is defeated and the universe is saved. Maledict pardons the Metarex and [[spoiler:Tsali]] as well, ending the war. And then [[spoiler: [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the Forerunners return]]...return]]]]...
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* DisproportionateRetribution: [[spoiler: Tsali was tortuously turned into a combat android by Cosmo's father Luke]] in order to stop the Demon invasion of the Seedrian homeworld. His response? [[spoiler:''Exterminating the entire Seedrian race by himself'']].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: [[spoiler: Tsali was tortuously turned into a combat android by Cosmo's father Luke]] in order to stop the Demon invasion of the Seedrian homeworld. His response? [[spoiler:''Exterminating the entire Seedrian race by himself'']].himself'' and hunting the survivors across the galaxy]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. The galaxy is being torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be considered a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The third season of Sonic X was dark on its own, and this fic takes it [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]. The Much of galaxy is being in ruins, torn about by civil war and malevolent gods. Gorn and [[NightmareFuel Nightmare Fuel]] are quite prevalent. It gets grim to the point it could charitably be considered a LighterAndSofter Sonic version of ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* Badass: Pretty much everyone. [[WorldHalfEmpty They have to be]].
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* Badass: BadAss: Pretty much everyone. [[WorldHalfEmpty They have to be]].
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* Badass: Pretty much everyone. [[WorldHalfEmpty They have to be]].
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* TheFederation: The Angel Federation, led in name by Jesus Desjiliac Christos (yes, ''that'' Jesus) was originally a group that rebelled against the Demons in ancient times. The Federation also composes two other nations, the Israeli Republic of the Tribes and the Emirate of Mecca. The Emirate and Republic [[TeethClenchedTeamwork are often at]] [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything each other's throats]]; only the Angels keep them together against their common enemy. Jesus decides to not take an active part in the conflict between Sonic and Tsali, but he sends his trusted servant Tephiroth investigate it.
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* TheFederation: The Angel Federation, led in name by Allysion and Jesus Desjiliac Christos (yes, ''that'' Jesus) Jesus), was originally a group that rebelled against the Demons in ancient times. The Federation also composes two other nations, the Israeli Republic of the Tribes and the Emirate of Mecca. The Emirate and Republic [[TeethClenchedTeamwork are often at]] [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything each other's throats]]; only the Angels keep them together against their common enemy. Jesus decides to not take an active part in the conflict between Sonic and Tsali, Tsali on Allysion's advice, but he sends his trusted servant Tephiroth to investigate it.
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* TheFederation: The Angel Federation, led in name by Jesus Desjiliac Christos (yes, ''that'' Jesus) was originally a group that rebelled against the Demons in ancient times. The Federation also composes two other nations, the Israeli Republic of the Tribes and the Emirate of Mecca. The Emirate and Republic [[TeethClenchedTeamwork are often at]] [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything each other's throats]]; only the Angels keep them together against their common enemy. Jesus decides to not take an active part in the conflict between Sonic and Tsali, but he sends his trusted servant Tephiroth investigate it.
