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* CrackFicCrackFic: BIG time.
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* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, plays basketball, talks on a cell phone and gets new pants at a Target store.
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* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 [=PS3=] and Xbox 360, plays basketball, talks on a cell phone and gets new pants at a Target store.
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* CountryMatters: John gets so angry at Irish for throwing up on his PS3 that he calls him "cunt faced", [[ClusterFBomb among many other derogatory names.]]
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* CountryMatters: John gets so angry at Irish for throwing up on his PS3 [=PS3=] that he calls him "cunt faced", [[ClusterFBomb among many other derogatory names.]]
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--> ''A/N: I played red ded readempshun and it had a gay ending. So i wrote this and this will be a better story.''
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7157007/1/Red_Dead_Redemption_But_With_A_Good_Ending Red Dead Redemption But With A Good Ending]] is a ''RedDeadRedemption'' fanfic by {{THE PETE PETERSON EXPERIENCE}}.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7157007/1/Red_Dead_Redemption_But_With_A_Good_Ending Red Dead Redemption But With A Good Ending]] is a ''RedDeadRedemption'' fanfic by {{THE PETE PETERSON EXPERIENCE}}.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7157007/1/Red_Dead_Redemption_But_With_A_Good_Ending Red Dead Redemption But With A Good Ending]] is a
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* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, plays basketball, and talks on a cell phone.
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* AbusiveParents: John often beats up Jack and generally treats him like crap. This line pretty much sums it up:
--> '''"Jhroarn"''': Stop fucking calling me pop or I'll pop you in the face with a shotgun.
* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, plays basketball,and talks on a cell phone.phone and gets new pants at a Target store.
--> '''"Jhroarn"''': Stop fucking calling me pop or I'll pop you in the face with a shotgun.
* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, plays basketball,
* BondOneLiner: After John flips over the table at Thanksgiving dinner and gets the food all over his wife, he quips "Dinner is fucking served".
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* CoolCar: John's Ferrari. It can even split into two separate Ferraris!
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* NoNameGiven: Harold [=MacDougal=] and Edgar Ross are only referred to as "the professor" and "the government guy"/"governing dude"/"government", respectively.
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* NoNameGiven: Harold [=MacDougal=] and [=MacDougal=], Edgar Ross Ross, and Nigel West Dickens are only referred to as "the professor" and professor", "the government guy"/"governing dude"/"government", dude"/"government" and "that purple suit guy with the lotions", respectively.
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* PottyFailure: John craps himself after finding out that the book Jack is reading is about "fusing".
* SadisticChoice: "Haveeair Eskuwayla" gives one to John: Either walk away and let the "fusing" continue, or destroy the tower and lose his Ferrari. John [[TakeAThirdOption takes a third option]] and shoots "Haveeair"'s [[GroinAttack balls off]] before escaping with Landon in their Ferraris as the whole place blows.
* SadisticChoice: "Haveeair Eskuwayla" gives one to John: Either walk away and let the "fusing" continue, or destroy the tower and lose his Ferrari. John [[TakeAThirdOption takes a third option]] and shoots "Haveeair"'s [[GroinAttack balls off]] before escaping with Landon in their Ferraris as the whole place blows.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Towards both homosexuals and Mexicans.
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* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, and plays basketball.basketball, and talks on a cell phone.
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* BigNo: The Kool-Aid Man when John kills him. Later, John drops another one when he finds out he'll have to have Thanksgiving dinner with his family.
* CountryMatters: John gets so angry at Irish for throwing up on his PS3 that he calls him "cunt faced", [[ClusterFBomb among many other derogatory names.]]
* GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere: A giant crab monster (named "Garbenov") shows up from out of nowhere in chapter 2.
* LadyLooksLikeADude: The schoolteacher, aptly named Mrs. Manly.
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* OOC{{OOC}}
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* ClusterFBomb: Frequently
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* ClusterFBomb: FrequentlyCoolCar: John's Ferrari.
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--> ''A/N: I played red ded readempshun and it had a gay ending. So i wrote this and this will be a better story.''
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7157007/1/Red_Dead_Redemption_But_With_A_Good_Ending Red Dead Redemption But With A Good Ending]] is a ''RedDeadRedemption'' fanfic by {{THE PETE PETERSON EXPERIENCE}}.
The story starts with a bored John Marston [[AnachronismStew driving his Ferrari]] around in the desert, when he decides to play videogames with "his best friends" Irish and the Professor. After their gaming session goes horribly wrong, John and the Professor decided to take a train to Mexico to get some tacos. After their train ride goes horribly wrong and results in John killing the Professor and everybody else on the train, he arrives in Mexico and meets with Landon Rickets, and they decide to go into a "taco mine". This [[RuleOfThree goes horribly wrong]] too. And the story gets even more insane from there - even featuring [[GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere a giant crab monster]].
Needless to say, it's every bit as [[CrackFic bizarre]] as his other stories.
!!Tropes:
* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, and plays basketball.
* AssShove: John shoves a stick of dynamite up Irish's ass and blows it off!
* BadassFingerSnap: "The government guy" sends John back to high school by snapping his fingers.
* ButtMonkey: Irish. Not only does he get his ass blown off by a stick of dynamite, he also gets his house crushed by the giant crab monster and [[GroinAttack his dick shot]] by John.
* CampGay: The conductor.
* ComedicSociopathy
* ClusterFBomb: Frequently
* CrackFic
* GroinAttack: Happens to Irish in chapter 3.
* NoNameGiven: Harold MacDougal and Edgar Ross are only referred to as "the professor" and "the government guy"/"governing dude"/"government", respectively.
* OOC
* TakeThat: One chapter opens with an author's note saying "Fuck Jessica. Bitch."
* UnfortunateImplications: Towards both homosexuals and Mexicans.
* VillainProtagonist: John Marston is a complete psychopath who kills several people and animals, often for no reason whatsoever.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7157007/1/Red_Dead_Redemption_But_With_A_Good_Ending Red Dead Redemption But With A Good Ending]] is a ''RedDeadRedemption'' fanfic by {{THE PETE PETERSON EXPERIENCE}}.
The story starts with a bored John Marston [[AnachronismStew driving his Ferrari]] around in the desert, when he decides to play videogames with "his best friends" Irish and the Professor. After their gaming session goes horribly wrong, John and the Professor decided to take a train to Mexico to get some tacos. After their train ride goes horribly wrong and results in John killing the Professor and everybody else on the train, he arrives in Mexico and meets with Landon Rickets, and they decide to go into a "taco mine". This [[RuleOfThree goes horribly wrong]] too. And the story gets even more insane from there - even featuring [[GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere a giant crab monster]].
Needless to say, it's every bit as [[CrackFic bizarre]] as his other stories.
!!Tropes:
* AnachronismStew: John drives a Ferrari, flies on a jetpack, plays PS3 and Xbox 360, and plays basketball.
* AssShove: John shoves a stick of dynamite up Irish's ass and blows it off!
* BadassFingerSnap: "The government guy" sends John back to high school by snapping his fingers.
* ButtMonkey: Irish. Not only does he get his ass blown off by a stick of dynamite, he also gets his house crushed by the giant crab monster and [[GroinAttack his dick shot]] by John.
* CampGay: The conductor.
* ComedicSociopathy
* ClusterFBomb: Frequently
* CrackFic
* GroinAttack: Happens to Irish in chapter 3.
* NoNameGiven: Harold MacDougal and Edgar Ross are only referred to as "the professor" and "the government guy"/"governing dude"/"government", respectively.
* OOC
* TakeThat: One chapter opens with an author's note saying "Fuck Jessica. Bitch."
* UnfortunateImplications: Towards both homosexuals and Mexicans.
* VillainProtagonist: John Marston is a complete psychopath who kills several people and animals, often for no reason whatsoever.
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