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* NotNowKiddo: In chapter 10, while Twilight is holding court (alongside Celestia), one of the petitioners is the mayor of Cloudsdale, protesting the rejection of the city's bid to host the Equestria Games. Long-term cloud-walking spells would be needed for both non-pegasus visitors and for most of the needed equipment, but the cost is too high to be practical. Nyx, in attendance as part of a "Take Your Foal to Work Day" program, comes up with an idea but is repeatedly shushed by Twilight, who eventually tells her to hold on to her question and ask it later. Nyx eventually sends Twilight a note [[StatingTheSimpleSolution suggesting an easy answer]]: cast the cloud-walking spell on the ''clouds'' instead. With help from Zecora, Twilight converts the effect into a potion that can be sprayed onto clouds or mixed into them at the weather factory, potentially revolutionizing commerce and tourism all over Equestria. Having recognized her mistake in ignoring Nyx, Twilight makes a point of publicly acknowledging her idea while showing off the potion.

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* NotNowKiddo: In chapter 10, while Twilight is holding court (alongside Celestia), one of the petitioners is the mayor of Cloudsdale, protesting the rejection of the city's bid to host the Equestria Games. Long-term cloud-walking spells would be needed for both non-pegasus visitors and for most of the needed equipment, but the cost is too high to be practical. Nyx, in attendance as part of a "Take Your Foal to Work Day" program, comes up with an idea but is repeatedly shushed by Twilight, who eventually tells her to hold on to her question and ask it later. After court is dismissed, Nyx eventually sends Twilight a note [[StatingTheSimpleSolution suggesting an easy answer]]: cast the cloud-walking spell on the ''clouds'' instead. With help from Zecora, Twilight converts the effect into a potion that can be sprayed onto clouds or mixed into them at the weather factory, potentially revolutionizing commerce and tourism all over Equestria. Having recognized her mistake in ignoring Nyx, Twilight makes a point of publicly acknowledging her idea while showing off the potion.

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* NotNowKiddo: In chapter 10, while Twilight is holding court (alongside Celestia), one of the petitioners is representing Cloudsdale and protesting their city's being passed over to host the Equestria Games, since they'd need to cast special cloudwalking spells on most of the normally ground-bound species who would want to attend, but can't afford the massive cost. Nyx, who is also in attendance (it's "Take Your Foal to Work Day") comes up with an idea, but Twilight just shushes her, and finally asks her to just hold onto her question and ask it later. To her credit, when she later gets a note from Nyx with a basic solution to the problem (casting the cloudwalking spell on the clouds), she not only realizes her earlier mistake even before reading it (and does apologize to her daughter), it forms the basis of a permanent solution: converting the unicorn enchantment into a potion -- with Zecora's help -- that can be sprayed on clouds for temporary work, or added to the cloud mixer so it lasts as long as the cloud does.

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* NotNowKiddo: In chapter 10, while Twilight is holding court (alongside Celestia), one of the petitioners is representing Cloudsdale and the mayor of Cloudsdale, protesting their the rejection of the city's being passed over bid to host the Equestria Games, since they'd need to cast special cloudwalking Games. Long-term cloud-walking spells on would be needed for both non-pegasus visitors and for most of the normally ground-bound species who would want to attend, needed equipment, but can't afford the massive cost. cost is too high to be practical. Nyx, who is also in attendance (it's as part of a "Take Your Foal to Work Day") Day" program, comes up with an idea, idea but Twilight just shushes her, and finally asks is repeatedly shushed by Twilight, who eventually tells her to just hold onto on to her question and ask it later. To her credit, when she later gets Nyx eventually sends Twilight a note from Nyx with a basic solution to [[StatingTheSimpleSolution suggesting an easy answer]]: cast the problem (casting the cloudwalking cloud-walking spell on the clouds), she not only realizes her earlier mistake even before reading it (and does apologize to her daughter), it forms ''clouds'' instead. With help from Zecora, Twilight converts the basis of a permanent solution: converting the unicorn enchantment effect into a potion -- with Zecora's help -- that can be sprayed on onto clouds for temporary work, or added to mixed into them at the cloud mixer so it lasts as long as weather factory, potentially revolutionizing commerce and tourism all over Equestria. Having recognized her mistake in ignoring Nyx, Twilight makes a point of publicly acknowledging her idea while showing off the cloud does. potion.



* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Twilight turns down a proposal to have Cloudsdale host the Equestria Games because long-term cloud-walking spells would be too expensive to cast on both non-pegasus visitors and the needed equipment. After several tries, Nyx manages to pass a suggestion on to her: cast the spell on the ''clouds'' instead. Converted to potion form and either sprayed on clouds or mixed into them as they're made at the Cloudsdale weather factory, it has the potential to revolutionize commerce and tourism all over Equestria.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Twilight turns down a proposal to have Cloudsdale host the Equestria Games because long-term cloud-walking spells would be too expensive to cast on both non-pegasus visitors and the needed equipment. After several tries, Nyx manages to pass a suggestion on to her: cast the spell on the ''clouds'' instead. Converted to potion form and either sprayed on clouds or mixed into them as they're made at the Cloudsdale weather factory, it has the potential to revolutionize commerce and tourism all over Equestria.
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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5466782 Tirek Gets A Righteous Beatdown]]'': After the events of ''Alicornundrum'', Tirek begins his rampage. He is going to get [[CurbStompBattle curbstomped]]. Complete.

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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5466782 Tirek Gets A a Righteous Beatdown]]'': After the events of ''Alicornundrum'', Tirek begins his rampage. He is going to get [[CurbStompBattle curbstomped]]. Complete.



** The "little black dress" and Earrings that Twilight dons in Chapter 6 for the Nightmare Night Ball bears a striking similarity to what her character [[KickingAssInAllHerFinery wore]] in ''Fanfic/EakinsHardReset''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow Dash's comment on seeing her dress.

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** The "little black dress" and Earrings earrings that Twilight dons in Chapter 6 for the Nightmare Night Ball bears bear a striking similarity to what her character [[KickingAssInAllHerFinery wore]] in ''Fanfic/EakinsHardReset''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow Dash's comment on seeing her dress.

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* CrazyPrepared: Duke Blueblood writes [[spoiler:his plans for deposing the Princesses]] on magic-proof paper so they can't be teleported or fire-mailed anywhere.



** [[spoiler:If Duke Blueblood hadn't left the safe containing his plans for [[TakeOverTheWorld world domination]] unlocked and open, the Royal Brats wouldn't have gotten their hoofs on them. Which later led to his son Prince Blueblood discovering them when he catches the foals in the act.]]

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** [[spoiler:If Duke Blueblood hadn't left the safe briefcase containing his plans for [[TakeOverTheWorld world domination]] unlocked and open, sitting on his desk in plain sight, the Royal Brats wouldn't have gotten their hoofs on found them. Which later led to his son Prince Blueblood discovering them when he catches the foals in the act.]]
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** His third is when he successfully drains Bright Eyes' magic turret and pins Spike..... only for Bright Eyes to reveal he has a pair of ''Vulcan Cannons'' as backup. Tirek then gets hit with [[MoreDakka ''3900 rounds per minute to the face''.]]

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** His third is when he successfully drains Bright Eyes' magic turret and pins Spike..... only for Bright Eyes to reveal he has a pair of ''Vulcan Cannons'' as backup. Tirek then gets hit with [[MoreDakka ''3900 ''[[MoreDakka 3900 rounds per minute to the face''.]]face]]''.



* ShoutOut: Celestia opts to stay at the Palace of The Moon and not in Canterlot, mostly due to [[UpperClassTwit the Nobility]] panicking about Tirek... just a week after he was defeated.

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* ShoutOut: Celestia opts to stay at the Palace of The the Moon and not in Canterlot, mostly due to [[UpperClassTwit the Nobility]] panicking about Tirek... just a week after he was defeated.



* TakeThat: Twilight still gets her crystal castle replacement for the library, as per canon... and everyone writes it off as an eyesore, before it gets magically transformed back into a (very large) tree/mansion via Earth Pony Magic.

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* TakeThat: Twilight still gets her crystal castle replacement for the library, as per canon... and everyone writes it off as an eyesore, before it gets magically transformed back into a (very large) tree/mansion via Earth Pony Magic.earth pony magic and a few acorns that Nyx saved from the old tree.
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*** He tells a few servants who incur his wrath that they'll never work in Canterlot again, and they don't. They do, however, end up winning big money in a sweepstakes.

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*** He tells a few servants who incur his wrath that they'll never work in Canterlot again, and they don't. They do, however, end up don't -- because they're too busy enjoying life after winning a big money cash prize in a sweepstakes.
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* FamilyThemeNaming: Killdeer, a young royal griffin Nyx meets at the summit, has a family tradition that gives the names of bird species to their griffin bodies and snake species names to their sentient snake tails, with Killdeer's snake tail being named Adder.
* FateWorseThanDeath: The nobles caught up in the conspiracy, if and when convicted, will have their names and titles stripped and punished accordingly. [[spoiler:Duke Blueblood, after being found out, had a stroke and will be treated in a nursing home as a child for the rest of his natural life. Compassion of the Crown was granted to his wife, who will most likely be his primary caretaker.]]

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* FamilyThemeNaming: Killdeer, a young royal griffin Nyx meets at the summit, has a family tradition that gives the names of bird species to their griffin bodies and snake species names to their Royal griffins have sentient snake tails, with Killdeer's and are named after both the bird species of their bodies and the snake tail being species of their tails. For example, their Emperor of the High Winds is named Adder.
Eagle-Cobra, while his grandson whom Nyx meets at the summit is Killdeer-Adder.
* FateWorseThanDeath: The nobles caught up in the conspiracy, if and when convicted, will have their names and titles stripped and punished accordingly. [[spoiler:Duke Blueblood, after being found out, had has a stroke and will be treated in a nursing home as a child for the rest of his natural life. Compassion of the Crown was is granted to his wife, who will most likely be his primary caretaker.]]
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*** Tired of the "uppity" behavior of one of Prince Blueblood's cousins, he talks her father into marrying her off to a stallion with a history of alcoholism and abusing mares. Said stallion gets eaten by crocodiles during their honeymoon, and she inherits his entire estate.[[note]]That cousin turns out to be Daring Do, or A.K. Yearling.[[/note]]

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*** Tired of the "uppity" behavior of one of Prince Blueblood's cousins, he talks her father into marrying her off to a stallion with a history of alcoholism and abusing mares. Said stallion gets eaten by crocodiles a crocodile during their honeymoon, and she inherits his entire sizable estate.[[note]]That cousin turns out to be Daring Do, or A.K. Yearling.[[/note]]
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** In ''Nyx's Family'', Nyx, Bright Eyes, and the family watch the first film in Equestria's version of ''The Hobbit''. Here, she watches the second one with her old and new friends.

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** In ''Nyx's Family'', Nyx, Bright Eyes, and the family watch the first film in Equestria's version of ''The Hobbit''. Here, she watches the first and second one with films back-to-back during a party for her old and new friends.

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** BigBadWannabe: Ponies whom Duke Blueblood attempts to ruin tend to wind up better off through mysterious circumstances. Servants told they'd never work in Canterlot again win massive sweepstakes prizes, guards ReassignedToAntarctica get diverted to the verdant Crystal Empire... You'd think he would have realized he was [[OutGambitted outclassed by several orders of magnitude]] when that "uppity" cousin he married off to a brutish wife beater found herself a rich widow after a sudden crocodile attack.[[note]]Said cousin turned out to be A.K. Yearling/Daring Do.[[/note]]

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** BigBadWannabe: Ponies whom Duke Blueblood attempts He keeps trying to ruin tend ponies' lives, only for them to wind up better off through mysterious circumstances. Servants told they'd turns of events, and he never work in Canterlot again win massive sweepstakes prizes, guards ReassignedToAntarctica get diverted to the verdant Crystal Empire... You'd think he would have realized he was realizes that he's been [[OutGambitted outclassed by several orders every time]]. To wit:
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of magnitude]] when that the "uppity" cousin behavior of one of Prince Blueblood's cousins, he married talks her father into marrying her off to a brutish wife beater found herself stallion with a rich widow after a sudden crocodile attack.[[note]]Said history of alcoholism and abusing mares. Said stallion gets eaten by crocodiles during their honeymoon, and she inherits his entire estate.[[note]]That cousin turned turns out to be Daring Do, or A.K. Yearling/Daring Do.[[/note]]Yearling.[[/note]]
*** When he tries to destroy another mare's reputation with a smear campaign, she parlays it into a public image of outrageous behavior and becomes one of the biggest pop stars in Equestria.[[note]]Sapphire Shores.[[/note]]
*** Soldiers that he tries to have [[ReassignedToAntarctica transferred to the frozen north]] get posted to the ''much'' more hospitable Crystal Empire instead.
*** He tells a few servants who incur his wrath that they'll never work in Canterlot again, and they don't. They do, however, end up winning big money in a sweepstakes.
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* ChekhovsGun: Flitter's LogicBomb gives Twilight an idea [[spoiler:on how to fix the mess they're in. Twilight even references it during the unveiling]].

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* ChekhovsGun: Flitter's Gossamer's LogicBomb gives Twilight an idea [[spoiler:on how to fix the mess they're in. Twilight even references it during the unveiling]].

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* {{Blackmail}}: [[spoiler: After Twilight gets out of the ArrangedMarriage, Lord Blueblood convinces his son to help him do this instead to gain control of her.]]

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* BizarreTasteInFood: This is business as usual during a tea party attended by Nyx, Discord, and Pinkie Pie. Cookies that taste like pizza or tofu hot dogs, cupcakes flavored as daisy burgers or lemon sherbet, and at one point Discord eats his teacup (raspberry flan).
* {{Blackmail}}: [[spoiler: After Twilight gets out of the ArrangedMarriage, Lord Duke Blueblood convinces his son to help him do this instead to gain control of her.]]
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** Prince Blueblood does this to his father, the Duke, [[spoler:exposing the latter's plan to depose Celestia and Luna and use the sun and moon as a superweapon]].

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** Prince Blueblood does this to his father, the Duke, [[spoler:exposing [[spoiler:exposing the latter's plan to depose Celestia and Luna and use the sun and moon as a superweapon]].
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** Prince Blueblood does this to his father, the Duke, [[spoler:exposing the latter's plan to depose Celestia and Luna and use the sun and moon as a superweapon]].

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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:The CMC and the Royal Brats are the ones who ultimately foil Duke Blueblood's scheme]].



* ​SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: This occurs with [[spoiler:Nyx causing an extended night in ''Fanfic/PastSins'']], ThereAreNoGlobalConsequences being entirely averted. * SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:The CMC and the Royal Brats are the ones who ultimately foil Duke Blueblood's scheme]].

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* ​SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: This occurs with [[spoiler:Nyx causing an extended night in ''Fanfic/PastSins'']], ThereAreNoGlobalConsequences being entirely averted. * SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:The CMC and the Royal Brats are the ones who ultimately foil Duke Blueblood's scheme]].

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* RealityEnsues: This occurs with [[spoiler:Nyx causing an extended night in ''Fanfic/PastSins'']], ThereAreNoGlobalConsequences being entirely averted.



* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:The CMC and the Royal Brats are the ones who ultimately foil Duke Blueblood's scheme]].


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* ​SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: This occurs with [[spoiler:Nyx causing an extended night in ''Fanfic/PastSins'']], ThereAreNoGlobalConsequences being entirely averted. * SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:The CMC and the Royal Brats are the ones who ultimately foil Duke Blueblood's scheme]].
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* ChainsawGood: Apple Bloom wields one at the ready in order for her to get her Cutie Mark back from Tirek by force. She immediately tries to rev it up when [[TooDumbToLive Diamond Tiara insults her]], [[AvertedTrope only to find out that it's out of gas]].

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* ChainsawGood: Apple Bloom wields one at the ready in order for her to get her Cutie Mark back from Tirek by force. She immediately tries to rev it up when [[TooDumbToLive Diamond Tiara insults her]], [[AvertedTrope only to find out that it's out of gas]].



* ImprobableWeaponUser: Ink Spot used a novelty quill to [[EyeScream stab Tireks' right eye]]. Said quill was a gift from the Firebird, and was "the size of a surfboard."

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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Ink Spot used a novelty quill to [[EyeScream stab Tireks' right Tirek in the eye]]. Said quill was a gift from the Firebird, and was "the size of a surfboard."

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* BadassAdorable: The CMC try to get in on said beatdown of Tirek (armed with a baseball bat, a board full of nails, and a ''chainsaw'') due to him stealing their Cutie Marks.

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* BadassAdorable: The CMC try to get in on said beatdown of Tirek (armed with a baseball bat, a board full of nails, with a nail through it, and a ''chainsaw'') due to him stealing their Cutie Marks.



* ChainsawGood: Apple Bloom wields one at the ready in order for her to get her Cutie Mark back from Tirek by force. She immediately tries to rev it up when [[TooDumbToLive Diamond Tiara insults her]], [[AvertedTrope only to find out that it's out of gasoline]].

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* ChainsawGood: Apple Bloom wields one at the ready in order for her to get her Cutie Mark back from Tirek by force. She immediately tries to rev it up when [[TooDumbToLive Diamond Tiara insults her]], [[AvertedTrope only to find out that it's out of gasoline]].gas]].


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** Last but not least is when he realizes that the Cutie Mark Crusaders have armed up and are ready to tear him limb from limb if he doesn't return their cutie marks.
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** His third is when he succesfully drains Bright Eyes' magic turret and pin Spike..... only for Bright Eyes to reveal he had ''Vulcan Cannons'' as backup. He then gets hit with the [[MoreDakka ''6000 rounds per minute'' cannon.]]

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** His third is when he succesfully successfully drains Bright Eyes' magic turret and pin pins Spike..... only for Bright Eyes to reveal he had has a pair of ''Vulcan Cannons'' as backup. He Tirek then gets hit with the [[MoreDakka ''6000 ''3900 rounds per minute'' cannon.minute to the face''.]]
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* NotTheIntendedUse: Based on Spike's success in teleporting dragons with his mail-sending flame in ''Nyx's Family'', Rock Steady and his men get to work on a way to use it for moving troops. They can't stay at their destination for more than a few minutes before the magic snaps them back to where they started, but it works great for hit-and-run attacks and for getting casualties off the battlefield in a hurry.
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* DopeSlap: Twilight Velvet gives one to a hung-over Night Light in Chapter 7 when he (semi-playfully) objects to Ink Spot's marriage proposal to Twilight Sparkle.

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* DopeSlap: Twilight Velvet gives one two of them to a hung-over Night Light in Chapter 7 -- first as she describes the party that led up to the drunken signing of a marriage contract, and again when he Night Light (semi-playfully) objects to Ink Spot's marriage proposal to Twilight Sparkle.
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* DopeSlap: Twilight Velvet gives one to a hung-over Night Light in Chapter 7 when he (semi-playfully) objects to Ink Spot's marriage proposal to Twilight Sparkle.
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* HauledBeforeASenateSubcommittee: The second half of the story revolves around The Princesses being brought before the Council of Celestial Stewards in-regards to the damage that Nyx inadvertently caused when she made Night Eternal over Equestria: causing the Sun to stay frozen in place above the other side of the planet.
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* TooGoodToBeTrue: Fire opals. [[spoiler: If a dragon eats enough of them they can grow into massive kaiju like beasts, but most dragons no better than to stuff themselves because the power only lasts as long as the opals are in your stomach and have some extremely bad side effects once the power starts to wear off.]]

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* TooGoodToBeTrue: Fire opals. [[spoiler: If a dragon eats enough of them they can grow into massive kaiju like beasts, but most dragons no know better than to stuff themselves because the power only lasts as long as the opals are in your stomach and have some extremely bad side effects side-effects once the power starts to wear off.]]
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Wrong "inn".


* DomesticApplianceDisaster: After an accident with an inkwell, Nyx tries to wash her aunt and uncle's fancy outfits in one washing machine, and the bedspread inn another, but dumps an entire box of soap pods into each machine because she can't believe just one pod is enough for an entire ink-stained load. The laundry room floods with both water and foam as a result, and Nyx herself has to be rescued because she can't see through all the foam.

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* DomesticApplianceDisaster: After an accident with an inkwell, Nyx tries to wash her aunt and uncle's fancy outfits in one washing machine, and the bedspread inn in another, but dumps an entire box of soap pods into each machine because she can't believe just one pod is enough for an entire ink-stained load. The laundry room floods with both water and foam as a result, and Nyx herself has to be rescued because she can't see through all the foam.
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* AuthorFilibuster: Chapter 11, where we are treated to a flashback of Celestia and Luna using a magic mirror to consult HUMAN economists in order to create Equestria's economic system.(According to the author, because it was too much of a pain in the behind trying to "ponify" the names of various economists so as to be recognizable.) From that point on, no mention is made of the topics in that chapter. Word of God is these elements may reappear in future stories, however.

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* AuthorFilibuster: Chapter 11, where we are treated to a flashback of Celestia and Luna using a magic mirror to consult HUMAN economists in order to create Equestria's economic system.system (According to the author, because it was too much of a pain in the behind trying to "ponify" the names of various economists so as to be recognizable.) recognizable). From that point on, no mention is made of the topics in that chapter. Word of God is these elements may reappear in future stories, however.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Nyx's'entire character arc in the story revolves around this: [[Fanfic/PastSins Having already experienced firsthand how tedious and aggravating running a nation like Equestria is by herself]], Nyx does ''not'' like the fact that she is now once again made into one of the nation's rulers [[AllForNothing despite Celestia and Luna's promise to Twilight to leave them both out of politics and power plays]]. Even going as far as to keep repeating the phrase [[InsistentTerminology "not a princess"]] to anypony that tries calling her one.

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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Nyx's'entire Nyx's entire character arc in the story revolves around this: [[Fanfic/PastSins Having already experienced firsthand how tedious and aggravating running a nation like Equestria is by herself]], Nyx does ''not'' like the fact that she is now once again made into one of the nation's rulers [[AllForNothing despite Celestia and Luna's promise to Twilight to leave them both out of politics and power plays]]. Even going as far as to keep repeating the phrase [[InsistentTerminology "not a princess"]] to anypony that tries calling her one.
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Cut as per TRS, also natter


** It's worth noting that RC likes to envision Snails as a GeniusDitz if not TheRainman.
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--> '''Night Light''': "Don't mess with me, boy. I am one of Equestria's fierce beasts. I am the ''original'' steam powered animal; I have dual pistons and a built-in cowcatcher and I will roll over your tiny ego like a herd of pie-crazed buffalo. I have SEEN horseapples."

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--> '''Night Light''': Light:''' "Don't mess with me, boy. I am one of Equestria's fierce beasts. I am the ''original'' steam powered animal; I have dual pistons and a built-in cowcatcher and I will roll over your tiny ego like a herd of pie-crazed buffalo. I have SEEN horseapples."



-->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Whoa. You sure you don't wanna borrow my [[BatterUp baseball]] [[ICallItVera bat]], Twi?"

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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dash:''' "Whoa. You sure you don't wanna borrow my [[BatterUp baseball]] [[ICallItVera bat]], Twi?"



-->'''Scootaloo''': Of all the times and places in the world, you had to pick THIS one to get smart...

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-->'''Scootaloo''': -->'''Scootaloo:''' Of all the times and places in the world, you had to pick THIS one to get smart...



* BigEntrance: When Ink Spot hears about the above mentioned ArrangedMarriage, he uses a network of unicorn teleportation to get to Canterlot, and bursts into the throne room wearing gryphon armor (loaned by a sympathetic gryphon), and challenges Prince Blueblood to a duel for Twilight's hoof in marriage. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Even though the whole thing had been resolved already]]; it's still impressive.
-->'''Spike''': (''to Bright Eyes'') That's how you make an entrance, dude.
* BigSisterInstinct: Luna feels protective towards Nyx, and [[spoiler:verbally rips Triton a new one when his poor word choice made her think she had accidentally killed ''thousand'' of sentient beings]].

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* BigEntrance: When Ink Spot hears about the above mentioned ArrangedMarriage, he uses a network of unicorn teleportation to get to Canterlot, and bursts into the throne room wearing gryphon armor (loaned by a sympathetic gryphon), and challenges Prince Blueblood to a duel for Twilight's hoof in marriage. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Even though the whole thing had been resolved already]]; already]], it's still impressive.
-->'''Spike''': -->'''Spike:''' (''to Bright Eyes'') That's how you make an entrance, dude.
* BigSisterInstinct: Luna feels protective towards Nyx, and [[spoiler:verbally rips Triton a new one when his poor word choice made her think she had accidentally killed ''thousand'' ''thousands'' of sentient beings]].



* IJustWantToBeNormal: Nyxs' entire character arc in the story revolves around this: [[Fanfic/PastSins having already experienced firsthand how tedious and aggravating running a nation like Equestria is by herself]]; Nyx does not like the fact that she is now once again made into one of the nations' rulers [[AllForNothing despite Celestia and Lunas' promise to Twilight to leave them both out of politics and power plays.]] Even going as far as to keep repeating the phrase ''[[InsistentTerminology "Not A Princess"]]'' to anypony that tries calling her one.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: [[spoiler:The reason why Songhili didn't reveal the fact that he's the Selkie King to his friends right away. He didn't want the kids to give him special treatment, so he kept his royal heritage a secret until Chapter 25 during the Canterlot Breakfast]].

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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Nyxs' entire Nyx's'entire character arc in the story revolves around this: [[Fanfic/PastSins having Having already experienced firsthand how tedious and aggravating running a nation like Equestria is by herself]]; herself]], Nyx does not ''not'' like the fact that she is now once again made into one of the nations' nation's rulers [[AllForNothing despite Celestia and Lunas' Luna's promise to Twilight to leave them both out of politics and power plays.]] plays]]. Even going as far as to keep repeating the phrase ''[[InsistentTerminology "Not A Princess"]]'' [[InsistentTerminology "not a princess"]] to anypony that tries calling her one.
* IJustWantToHaveFriends: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler: The reason why Songhili didn't reveal the fact that he's the Selkie King to his friends right away. He didn't want the kids to give him special treatment, so he kept his royal heritage a secret until Chapter 25 during the Canterlot Breakfast]].



* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:Songhili is the Selkie King]].

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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:Songhili [[spoiler: Songhili is the Selkie King]].King.]]



** [[spoiler:Twilight later discovers that the Celestial Council has a history of doing this themselves. Apparently, while many natural disasters are coincidental or designed to release pressure (like Pele causing small earthquakes to prevent large and destructive ones, etc.), a number of them are caused by the Council members screwing up at their duties [[PaintingTheFrostOnWindows guiding nature]]. For example, Pele messing up (by means of a scheduling conflict) caused this universe's version of the Krakatoa eruption, or Jormungandr causing the freeze from the Hearth's Warming tale, etc.]]

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** [[spoiler:Twilight [[spoiler: Twilight later discovers that the Celestial Council has a history of doing this themselves. Apparently, while many natural disasters are coincidental or designed to release pressure (like Pele causing small earthquakes to prevent large and destructive ones, etc.), a number of them are caused by the Council members screwing up at their duties [[PaintingTheFrostOnWindows guiding nature]]. For example, Pele messing up (by means of a scheduling conflict) caused this universe's version of the Krakatoa eruption, or Jormungandr causing the freeze from the Hearth's Warming tale, etc.]]

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