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* {{Tomboy}}: Rainbow Dash, obviously.
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* {{Tomboy}}: Rainbow Dash, obviously.obviously.
* {{Woobie}}: Brownie.
* {{Woobie}}: Brownie.
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* BadDreams: The beginning of chapter 3.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Twileycorn.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: Rainbow Dash and Brownie.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: An early chapter gives a few of these surounding Brownie's name.
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* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her MeaningfulName.
* SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a few words, the writer turned into a pony down to his personality, talent and [[spoiler: asthma]].
* SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a few words, the writer turned into a pony down to his personality, talent and [[spoiler: asthma]].
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* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is appearances are unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her MeaningfulName.
*SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a ShipperOnDeck: Twileycorn.
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* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: Occurs in chapter eight. Nothing sexual happens.
* TheTease: Mecha has aspects of this. It's an act, mostly.
* TheTease: Mecha has aspects of this. It's an act, mostly.
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* {{Tomboy}}: Rainbow Dash, obviously.
* WishFulfillment: This fanfic was written because the author never had a relationship.obviously.
* WishFulfillment: This fanfic was written because the author never had a relationship.
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* ADatewithRosiePalms: Rainbow Dash catches Brownie in the act [[spoiler: during a dream sequence.]]
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* ADatewithRosiePalms: ADateWithRosiePalms: Rainbow Dash catches Brownie in the act [[spoiler: during a dream sequence.]]
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* ADatewithRosiePalms: Rainbow Dash catches Brownie in the act [[spoiler: during a dream sequence.]]
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* ContinuityNod: "Draw me like one of your french mares".
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* ExiledToTheCouch: Rainbow Dash replaces the couch with Spike's basket, far too small for Brownie to sleep inside. She then feels pity for him and allows Brownie to sleep in the bed with her.
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* PutOnABus: This happens to [[spoiler: Twilight after becoming a Princess.]]
** TheBusCameBack: But she makes a comeback to [[spoiler: help Rainbow Dash and Brownie to solve their problem.]]
** TheBusCameBack: But she makes a comeback to [[spoiler: help Rainbow Dash and Brownie to solve their problem.]]
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* [[StealthHibye Stealth Hi/Bye]]: Done by Pinkie Pie during a few of her encounters with Brownie.
* ThreesomeSubtext: Mecha suggests this to Brownie to try and cheer him up.
* ThreesomeSubtext: Mecha suggests this to Brownie to try and cheer him up.
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* SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a few words, the writer turned into a pony down to his personality, talent and [[spoiler: asthma]]. If he made up or left something out, it's yet to be mentioned.
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* SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a few words, the writer turned into a pony down to his personality, talent and [[spoiler: asthma]]. If he made up or left something out, it's yet to be mentioned.
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* SelfInsert: Brownie is, in a few words, the writer turned into a pony down to his personality, talent and [[spoiler: asthma]]. If he made up or left something out, it's yet to be mentioned.
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* WishFulfillment: This fanfic was written because the author never had a relationship.
* WishFulfillment: This fanfic was written because the author never had a relationship.
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* AuthorAvatar: Brownie is this for the writer.
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* MythologyGag: Several, so much so that the [[WordOfGod author]] and the [[WordOfDante editor]] are made chaper 9 commentary on it
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* MythologyGag: Several, Several. There's so much so many that the [[WordOfGod author]] and the [[WordOfDante editor]] are made chaper 9 commentary on it released a ninth chapter containing information about the characters and such during the development of the fanfic.
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* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her Meaningfulname.
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* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her Meaningfulname.MeaningfulName.
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* CelebCrush: That's the plot of the story. Subverted in that Rainbow has not yet become really famous, yet.
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* CelebCrush: That's the plot of the story. Subverted in that Rainbow has not yet become really famous, yet.
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* OppositesAttract: Brownie Cupcake and Rainbow Dash could not be much more obviously dissimilar at first glance.
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* OppositesAttract: Brownie Cupcake and Rainbow Dash could not be much more obviously dissimilar at first glance.glance.
* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her Meaningfulname.
* RecognitionFailure: Played with. The Mane Six are famous all over Equestria, but their real appearance is unknown. Brownie only managed to recognize Rainbow Dash thanks to her Meaningfulname.
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* MythologyGag: Several, so much so that the [[WordOfGod author]] and the [[WordOfDante editor]] are making a commentary on it
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* MythologyGag: Several, so much so that the [[WordOfGod author]] and the [[WordOfDante editor]] are making a made chaper 9 commentary on it
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* FlorenceNightengaleEffect: Chapter six.
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* FlorenceNightengaleEffect: FlorenceNightingaleEffect: Chapter six.
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* CelebCrush: That's the plot of the story.
* CelebCrush: That's the plot of the story. Subverted in that Rainbow has not yet become really famous, yet.
* CrashIntoHello: How Brownie and Pinkie Pie meet.
* DeadpanSnaker: Brownie, especially in the first two chapters, which were the most heavily edited.
* CrashIntoHello: How Brownie and Pinkie Pie meet.
* DeadpanSnaker: Brownie, especially in the first two chapters, which were the most heavily edited.
* FlorenceNightengaleEffect: Chapter six.
* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
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* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
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* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.OppositesAttract: Brownie Cupcake and Rainbow Dash could not be much more obviously dissimilar at first glance.
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** The Ponyville arcade includes such games as [[CallOfDuty Call of Cutie]] and [[MetalSlug Metal Bug]].
** A few books from the library that appear in chapter 8 are from HarryPotter.
** A few books from the library that appear in chapter 8 are from HarryPotter.
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* ShoutOut: A few examples.
** The Heavy Metal bands Brownie listens to are like [[IronMaiden Iron Mare]], [[GunsNRoses Hooves and Roses]], [[Main/{{Megadeth}} Megaspell]], [[Main/{{Gorillaz}} Poniez]], [[Main/{{Sabaton}} Saddleton]], Blue Berets and [[Main/{{Metallica}} Maretallica]].
** The Heavy Metal bands Brownie listens to are like [[IronMaiden Iron Mare]], [[GunsNRoses Hooves and Roses]], [[Main/{{Megadeth}} Megaspell]], [[Main/{{Gorillaz}} Poniez]], [[Main/{{Sabaton}} Saddleton]], Blue Berets and [[Main/{{Metallica}} Maretallica]].
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Rainbow experiences this once she learns that Brownie pushed himself too hard in the running of the leaves.
* ArcWords/TitleDrop: Rainbow in thedark. dark.
* BigDamnKiss: The ending.
* ArcWords/TitleDrop: Rainbow in the
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* DidTheResearch/ShownTheirWork: Rainbows can appear during the night, too. The only difference is that they're perceived as monochrome.
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* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.title.
* SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: Rainbow Dash and Brownie.
* Tomboy: Rainbow Dash, obviously.
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* GratuitousSpanish: A few examples.
** “¡¿Q-Que?!”
** "Arco iris en la oscuridad."
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** "Arco iris en la oscuridad."
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** “¡¿Q-Que?!”
** "Arco iris en la oscuridad."
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* BilingualBonus: Brownie says a few sentences and words in Spanish. The most important one is "Arco iris en la oscuridad" (Rainbow in the dark).
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* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with CelebCrush: That's the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside plot of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.story.
* GratuitousGerman: Mecha insults Brownie calling him a "Dummkopf".
* GratuitousSpanish: A few examples.
** “¡¿Q-Que?!”
** "Arco iris en la oscuridad."
* GratuitousSpanish: A few examples.
** “¡¿Q-Que?!”
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** The reference to the Afghneighnka in chapter 6 is related to a similar story by the author's editor called FanFic/RacerAndTheGeek, where that is a common military uniform.
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** The reference to the Afghneighnka in chapter 6 is related to a similar story by the author's editor called FanFic/RacerAndTheGeek, where that is a common military uniform.uniform.
* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
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* CanonImmigrant: Mecha was a character that first starred in another fic by the same aouthor, but she turned into a secondary character because the story was cancelled and he didn't want to waste her character.
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* CanonImmigrant: Mecha was a character that first starred in another fic by the same aouthor, author, but she turned into a secondary character because the story was cancelled and he didn't want to waste her character.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73406/rainbow-in-the-dark Rainbow in the dark]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction story describing the romance between Rainbow Dash and Brownie, a new pony who recently moved to Ponyville. At first Brownie and Rainbow Dash act like friends, but it doesn't take long before the main character develops a crush on Rainbow Dash, while at the same time trying to adapt to a new town full of ponies he knows nothing about while trying to win her heart. Not to be confused with the famous song by RonnieJamesDio.
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* MythologyGag: The reason Brownie wears clothes is that during the development phase his body was full of scars from an attack by timberwolves when he was a foal. This is referenced in chapter 7.
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** The reason Brownie wears clothes is that during the development phase his body was full of scars from an attack by timberwolves when he was a foal. This is referenced in chapter 7.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/73406/rainbow-in-the-dark Rainbow in the dark]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction story describing the romance between Rainbow Dash and Brownie, a new pony who recently moved to Ponyville. At first Brownie and Rainbow Dash act like friends, but it doesn't take long before the main character develops a crush on Rainbow Dash, while at the same time trying to adapt to a new town full of ponies he knows nothing about while trying to win her heart. Not to be confused with the famous song by RonnieJamesDio.
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* [[spoiler: BiTheWay: Mecha is revealed to be this after Rainbow Dash wrongfully accuses her of being Brownie's girlfriend.]]
* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
* CanonImmigrant: Mecha was a character that first starred in another fic by the same aouthor, but she turned into a secondary character because the story was cancelled and he didn't want to waste her character.
* MythologyGag: The reason Brownie wears clothes is that during the development phase his body was full of scars from an attack by timberwolves when he was a foal. This is referenced in chapter 7.
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* [[spoiler: BiTheWay: Mecha is revealed to be this after Rainbow Dash wrongfully accuses her of being Brownie's girlfriend.]]
* IThoughtItMeant: This fanfic doesn't have any relation with the popular song by RonnieJamesDio aside of the title. The author confirmed that it was inspired on the song with the same title.
* CanonImmigrant: Mecha was a character that first starred in another fic by the same aouthor, but she turned into a secondary character because the story was cancelled and he didn't want to waste her character.
* MythologyGag: The reason Brownie wears clothes is that during the development phase his body was full of scars from an attack by timberwolves when he was a foal. This is referenced in chapter 7.
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