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** In "Ponies in Space 4", Sundance brings up the possibility of teleporting rockets around the launch pad, and Luna replies that they're not going to try that [[HalfLife2 "after what happened with the cat."]] Also, Rarity thinks painting Luna's design for a giant robot red will [[{{Warhammer 40000}} make it go faster]].



** In "Ponies in Space 4", Sundance brings up the possibility of teleporting rockets around the launch pad, and Luna replies that they're not going to try that [[HalfLife2 "after what happened with the cat."]]
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** In "Ponies in Space 4", Sundance brings up the possibility of teleporting rockets around the launch pad, and Luna replies that they're not going to try that [[HalfLife2 "after what happened with the cat."]]
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* HumongousMecha: Luna built a giant robot alicorn dubbed "Mechapony 1" to push and pull rockets. Since she based it on a robot she built 1000 years ago for the purpose of killing Celestia, Mechapony 1 also comes equipped with eyebeams and thrusters (with missile launchers coming in the following week). When [[OnlySaneMan Twilight]] asks why [[SuperPoweredRobotMeterMaids a robot built for moving rockets needs so many weapons]], everyone else asks "Why not?"


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* MadScientist: Luna becomes a good-natured one in the "PONIES! IN! SPAAAACE!" chapters.
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* AdultFear: PlayedForLaughs, but Sundance's fear that [[spoiler:Discord's reign of chaos might have affected her unborn foal]] definitely counts.
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* AndIMustScream: In "Luna versus the Dreamlands" Part 2, [[spoiler:Luna traps Discord's dreamself in stone, leaving him petrified in a physical and mental sense.]]


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* VillainousBreakdown: In "Luna versus the Dreamlands" Part 2, [[spoiler:Discord completely falls apart when Luna turns him to stone in the dreamworld.]]
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** Luna also doesn't take too kindly to others messing with Sundance, as Prince Blueblood discovers in "Ponies in Space Part 2", and [[spoiler: Discord discovers in "Luna vs. the Dreamlands, Part 2" after he apparently messes with Sundance's dreams.]]

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** Luna also doesn't take too kindly to others messing with Sundance, her subjects as numerous characters discover: a Kong and Rex who threaten the Cutie Mark Crusaders in "Luna vs. Ponyville Part 7", Prince Blueblood discovers after he shamelessly hits on Sundance in "Ponies in Space Part 2", and [[spoiler: Discord discovers in "Luna vs. the Dreamlands, Dreamlands Part 2" after he apparently messes with Sundance's dreams.2".]]

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** Luna also doesn't take too kindly to others messing with Sundance, as Prince Blueblood discovers in "Ponies in Space Part 2", and [[spoiler: Discord discovers in "Luna vs. the Dreamlands, Part 2" after he apparently messes with Sundance's dreams.]]



* [[spoiler: MorningSickness: At the start of "Ponies in Space", Sundance is introduced recovering from a bout of nausea she brushes off as 'something I ate'. Sure enough, [[IKnewIt as many fans suspected]], Sundance turns out to be with foal in "Luna vs. the Dreamlands, Part 2".]]



* [[MamaBear Sister Bear]]: Celestia over Luna, [[spoiler: especially over Luna in the non-canon side story "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7171216/1/Progress_Side_Story_Luna_Vs_the_Threesome Luna versus the Threesome]]" when she comes in to work wearing an eyepatch after an accident of [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean cooking with Hoyden and Sundance.]]]]



** "Luna vs Ponyville 9" gets a massive one for Warhammer40K... by Pinkie Pie's parents:
-->".. Ma, ah do believe those damn dragons is throwin’ rocks at us again," the stallion said. The mare nodded, got off her rocking chair and hit a secret control lever on the side of the door.\\
"We must enact the Tenant of our simple faith and crush the Xenos that dare threaten our livelihoods!" She said in a spirited but matter of fact way as two saddles with machine guns and chainsaws attached to them emerged from a hidden trapdoor in the porch. The old stallion nodded, girded on his weapon, and helped his wife do the same before tugging on the start cords on his weapons, firing them up.\\
"DEATH TO THE UNBELIEVERS!"\\
"FOR THE GLORY OF GODDESS QUEEN CELESTIA!"
:::[[ItRunsInTheFamily Apparently]], [[FascinatingEyebrow it runs in the family.]]

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** "Luna vs Ponyville 9" gets a massive one for Warhammer40K... by Pinkie Pie's parents:
-->".. Ma, ah do believe those damn dragons is throwin’ rocks at us again," the stallion said. The mare nodded, got off her rocking chair
parents, who bust out heavy weapons and hit a secret control lever on the side of the door.\\
"We must enact the Tenant of our simple faith and crush the Xenos that dare threaten our livelihoods!" She said in a spirited but matter of fact way as two saddles with machine guns and chainsaws attached to them emerged from a hidden trapdoor
shout about exterminating "xenos" in the porch. The old stallion nodded, girded on his weapon, and helped his wife do the same before tugging on the start cords on his weapons, firing them up.\\
"DEATH TO THE UNBELIEVERS!"\\
"FOR THE GLORY OF GODDESS QUEEN CELESTIA!"
:::[[ItRunsInTheFamily
name of God-Queen Celestia when they think their farm house is under attack by dragons. [[ItRunsInTheFamily Apparently]], [[FascinatingEyebrow it runs in the family.]]



*** In addition, Luna mentions her plan for a fusion-driven starship to deal with [[StarFox1 killer space monkeys]] and [[KnownSpace killer space tigers]], the latter of which they'd teach a [[WeaponizedExhaust lesson with their fusion drives...]]

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*** In addition, Luna mentions her plan for a fusion-driven starship to deal with [[StarFox1 [[StarFox killer space monkeys]] and [[KnownSpace killer space tigers]], the latter of which they'd teach a [[WeaponizedExhaust lesson with their fusion drives...]]


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* [[MamaBear Sister Bear]]: Celestia over Luna, [[spoiler: especially over Luna in the non-canon side story "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7171216/1/Progress_Side_Story_Luna_Vs_the_Threesome Luna versus the Threesome]]" when she comes in to work wearing an eyepatch after an accident of [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean cooking with Hoyden and Sundance.]]]]
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* {{Badass}}: The unnamed warrior colt from Luna Vs. Storytelling, see the {{CrowningMomentofAwesome}} page for this fanfic for details.
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* YourMom: Sundance responds to [[PrinceCharmless Prince Blueblood]]'s attempts to hit on her in faux-French by firing off genuine French at him. Naturally, this allows her to insult him without him being the wiser. This culminates in "''Ta mere suce des ours dans la foret''." ("Your mother sucks bears in the forest.")
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* HeadDesk: In "Luna vs. Ponyville, Part 7", Luna makes a BadassBoast to a T. rex and a giant ape... who, much to her frustration, completely fail to recognize her. Cue this trope.
-->Both tyrannosaur and megaprimate were treated to the rare sight of a deity in wrath beating her head against the wall.


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* LongList: The baseball fan paraphernalia offered to Luna during "Luna vs. Baseball".
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** She also mentions in "Luna vs. The Microwave" that she had a great deal of confusion over the first airplane, wondering why it's wings didn't move and it didn't have feathers.
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** When he lists off the other positions he's held, making a big deal out of them, Luna notes that he's never held any of them more than a ''week''.
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* IKnewIt: This fic actually managed to get quite a few things right about the canon version of Luna, such as her status as a FishOutOfTemporalWater and {{Adorkable}} personality, as well as her using a VoiceOfTheLegion at one point, among other things.
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* IKnewIt: This fic actually managed to get quite a few things right about the canon version of Luna, such as her status as a FishOutOfTemporalWater and {{Adorkable}} personality, as well as her using a VoiceOfTheLegion at one point, among other things.
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*** In addition, Luna mentions her plan for a fusion-driven starship to deal with [[Starfox killer space monkeys]] and [[KnownSpace killer space tigers]], the latter of which they'd teach a [[WeaponizedExhaust lesson with their fusion drives...]]

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*** In addition, Luna mentions her plan for a fusion-driven starship to deal with [[Starfox killer space monkeys]] and [[KnownSpace killer space tigers]], the latter of which they'd teach a [[WeaponizedExhaust lesson with their fusion drives...]]


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* VoiceOfTheLegion: Luna in "Luna versus Lodging Part 2" when she nuked the bar.
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** In "Ponies in Space 3", Selene's tour group gets caught in "Situation 18", a training scenario that involves the possibility of [[Film/{{Apollo 18}} hostile, crab-like aliens on the moon.]]

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** In "Ponies in Space 3", Selene's Cherilee's tour group gets caught in "Situation 18", a training scenario that involves the possibility of [[Film/{{Apollo 18}} hostile, crab-like aliens on the moon.]]



*** In ''Celestia vs. Time,'' reference is made to ''[[HomePage Trope's Library of Literary Tools]],'' and two guards discuss the likelihood of [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrrow an alternate universe where everypony has their gender swapped male for female and visa-versa.]]

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*** In ''Celestia vs. Time,'' reference is made to ''[[HomePage Trope's Library of Literary Tools]],'' and two guards discuss the likelihood of [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrrow [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrow an alternate universe where everypony has their gender swapped male for female and visa-versa.]]
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*** In ''Celestia vs. Time,'' reference is made to ''[[HomePage Trope's Library of Literary Tools]],'' and two guards discuss the likelihood of an [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-on-cross-and-arrow.html alternate universe where everypony has their gender swapped male for female and visa-versa.]]

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*** In ''Celestia vs. Time,'' reference is made to ''[[HomePage Trope's Library of Literary Tools]],'' and two guards discuss the likelihood of [[Fanfic/OnACrossAndArrrow an [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-on-cross-and-arrow.html alternate universe where everypony has their gender swapped male for female and visa-versa.]]
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** In "Ponies in Space 3", Selene's tour group gets caught in "Situation 18", a training scenario that involves the possibility of [[Film/{{Apollo 18}} hostile, crab-like aliens on the moon.]]

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* AccidentalInnuendo: Luna guiding Applebloom through the astronaut training simulator in "Ponies in Space 3", much to the amusement of Snips and Snails.


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* DoubleEntendre: Luna guiding Applebloom through the astronaut training simulator in "Ponies in Space 3", much to the amusement of Snips and Snails.

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* AccidentalInnuendo: Luna guiding Applebloom through the astronaut training simulator in "Ponies in Space 3", much to the amusement of Snips and Snails.



* EvenTheGuysWantHim: According to the non-canon fanmade sidestory "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7171216/1/Progress_Side_Story_Luna_Vs_the_Threesome Luna versus the Threesome]]", Big Macintosh. Even ''Hoyden'' has had fantasies about Big Mac [[spoiler:and somehow knows Big Mac [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean lives up to his name]]]].

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* EvenTheGuysWantHim: According to the non-canon fanmade sidestory "[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7171216/1/Progress_Side_Story_Luna_Vs_the_Threesome Luna versus the Threesome]]", Big Macintosh. Even ''Hoyden'' has had fantasies about Big Mac [[spoiler:and somehow knows Big Mac [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean lives up to his name]]]].name]]]].
* TheExitIsThatWay: In "Ponies in Space 3", Luna offers to show the Cutie Mark Crusaders the simulator room where they train astronauts, and the Crusaders eagerly rush through the nearest door... which turns out to be the janitor's closet.
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* Jossed: Somewhat averted. After the premiere of Luna's own episode, "Lunar Eclipsed", the author declared Progress to take place after the Nightmare Night episode. Given My Little Pony's [[OutOfOrder weird episode chronology]], the author hopes it's not too much of a stretch.
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* Jossed: Somewhat averted. After the premiere of Luna's own episode, "Lunar Eclipsed", the author declared Progress to take place after the Nightmare Night episode. Given My Little Pony's [[OutOfOrder weird episode chronology]], the author hopes it's not too much of a stretch.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Blueblood's family founded and run a charity foundation, a wildlife preserve, a homeless shelter and a food market chain.
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** Luna's speech when getting a room with Sundance in "Luna vs. Lodging 1" is extremely reminiscent of when [[DoctorWho The]] [[TheNthDoctor 11th]] [[DoctorWho Doctor]] was getting a flat in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E11TheLodger "The Lodger."]]

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** Luna's speech when getting a room with Sundance in "Luna vs. Lodging 1" is extremely reminiscent of when [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho The]] [[TheNthDoctor 11th]] [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Doctor]] was getting a flat in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E11TheLodger "The Lodger."]]
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It was Courtly Love (basically).


* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: This is what happened to Luna's unnamed late husband about a thousand years ago (pre-Nightmare Moon) according to Luna Vs. Storytelling. In the "Progressverse," the smooze from the G1 movie was pretty much how it would be if it was a real EldritchAbomination, and it attempted to devour Equestria during that time. When it was revealed that he sacrificed himself to by time for all the ponies to be saved, ManlyTears were shed along with any possible tears that Luna, Sundance, or Hoyden shed.]]

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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: This is what happened to Luna's unnamed late husband suitor about a thousand years ago (pre-Nightmare Moon) according to Luna Vs. Storytelling. In the "Progressverse," the smooze from the G1 movie was pretty much how it would be if it was a real EldritchAbomination, and it attempted to devour Equestria during that time. When it was revealed that he sacrificed himself to by time for all the ponies to be saved, ManlyTears were shed along with any possible tears that Luna, Sundance, or Hoyden shed.]]
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** Chapter 21 features the ponified {{MythBusters}} as scientists in the space program.
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** Luna's speech when getting a room with Sundance in "Luna vs. Lodging 1" is extremely reminiscent of when [[DoctorWho The]] [[TheNthDoctor 11th]] [[DoctorWho Doctor]] was getting a flat in [[Recap/DoctorWhoS31E11TheLodger "The Lodger."]]
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* EroticEating: In "Luna vs. Ponyville, Part 2", Luna faints with embarrassment after reading a racy romance novel then watching Applejack eat an apple.

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