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* NoConservationOfEnergy: Sommerhoffnung points out the sheer impracticality of energy-mass conversion, to which Ywiu mentions that their powers have ElementalBaggage and that she shouldn't be so concerned.
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* OffscreenTeleportation: Invoked/Parodied. "If no one's observing you, you can get to places faster than you should be able to, is it not said…?"said…?" Also done when [[spoiler: Spadotto]] shows up near the end of the Childless fight in the sixth chapter.
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* WaxingLyricalWaxingLyrical: When Sommerhoffnung names Draysoph and her guns, she sings lyrics from the relevant bands. The mystery speaker in chapter four sings ''Don't Say A Word'' from [[strike: Sonata Arctica]] Concerto Sahara when leaving [[spoiler: Spadotto]].
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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]]
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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]]]] "Negotiating from such a position of weakness... is not."
* InertiaIsAHarshMistress: Mentioned as a problem Ken-ba-ne experiences.
** [[TheDarkKnightSaga "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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*** "but we are... outside context, I think you can say?"
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** [[XWingSeries "To win, you must fight with heart and brains and your entire being!"]]
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* [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=]: Muesterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
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* [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=]: Muesterteklang Musterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
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** GratuitousGerman: Sommerhoffnung ''is'' half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], but she lapses into it pretty often. Muesterteklang Musterteklang too.
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** Muest finishes off his first Childless with a [[GuiltyGear Potemkin Buster]].
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** Muest Must finishes off his first Childless with a [[GuiltyGear Potemkin Buster]].
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* OCStandIn: This appears to be why everyone is a CaptainErsatz.
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* PatchworkKids: Nyarsrof has Ymia and Eywon's cowlicks.cowlicks, as well as Eywon's hair and eye colours. "Sommerhoffnung had the feeling that things did not work that way, but who was she to question it?"
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Sommerhoffnung had the odd feeling that the Reyrcses had forgotten to do something. [[GlassesPull Something about eyewear]] [[CSIMiamithat [[CSIMiami that she just could not pin down.]]
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** [[Memes/StreetFighter "Return to your abode and be a family person..."]]
** [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS3E2TheShakespeareCode "Why waitest we upon stale custom for consummation?"]]
** [[Recap/DoctorWhoNSS3E2TheShakespeareCode "Why waitest we upon stale custom for consummation?"]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Author's notes for chapter eight mention that Nyarsrof was meant to have a smaller role and Ymia and Eywon were not supposed to exist.
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* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[strike: [[YukariTamura Midori]]]] Su-qi-wu-la says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
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* AcrophobicBird: When [[spoiler: the library basement floor breaks open, Ywiu doesn't fly her way out. Given narrator's justification immediately afterward.]]
* ActorAllusion: At one point,[[strike: [[YukariTamura Midori]]]] Su-qi-wu-la Su-qi-wu-la]] says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]]]
** [[SanaeKobayashi Ymia]] talking about "[[ElfenLied [beheading] you with invisible psychic arms]]" and Eywon saying that she "is definitely not [[{{Madlax}} insane or relaxed]]".
* ActorAllusion: At one point,
** [[SanaeKobayashi Ymia]] talking about "[[ElfenLied [beheading] you with invisible psychic arms]]" and Eywon saying that she "is definitely not [[{{Madlax}} insane or relaxed]]".
* BlackBestFriend: Spadotto and Veerasamy, though the latter is technically [[strike: Indian]] Curriyan.
* CrackPairing: [[spoiler: Ymia and Eywon are CaptainErsatz of Reinforce Eins and Yuuno from ''Nanoha'', so...]]
* CurseCutShort: '"I know you've heard this before, Som, but how do you live with," she pointed at Winterhandlung, "such a du..."' Fill in your own blanks as to whether it's meant to be dummkopf, dumbass/arse or something else!
** [[spoiler: Wedey stands for "Weaponised Enhanced Demolishing Evolutionary prototYpe".]]
* HappilyMarried: Ymia and Eywon.
* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: "a shadow resolved into a horrible monster that exposed more teeth than… than… than some family that cannot quite be recalled at the moment."
** Ymia makes a joke about feeling "like dusty old tomes". [[spoiler: Remember that Ymia is a CaptainErsatz of Reinforce Eins from ''Nanoha''.]]
** "Lucky you not some sick bird, else sure big problem one!" [[spoiler: In the original, Takumi was pretty much a GenderFlip IllGirl.]]
** "Lucky you not some sick bird, else sure big problem one!" [[spoiler: In the original, Takumi was pretty much a GenderFlip IllGirl.]]
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* OhCrap: He-mu-la has one in the seventh chapter. [[spoiler: What exactly he's shitting bricks about is currently unclear.]]
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* OhCrap: He-mu-la has one in the seventh chapter. [[spoiler: What exactly he's shitting bricks about is currently unclear.]] He has another in the eighth [[spoiler: when Wedey activates her BladeBelowTheShoulder.]]
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--> "Sommerhoffnung, we believe we've told you before to call us by our first names," Ymia said. "Calling us Herr und Frau Reyrcs makes us feel like... like..."\\
"Yes, dear?" Eywon asked.\\
"[[MythologyGag Like dusty old tomes.]]"\\
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--> "Sommerhoffnung, we believe we've told you before to call us by our first names," Ymia said. "Calling us Herr und Frau Reyrcs makes us feel like... like..."\\
"Yes, dear?" Eywon asked.\\
"[[MythologyGag Like dusty old tomes.]]"\\
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** [[MortalKombat "Finish him!"]]
** [[KellyClarkson "Because... of me?]] [[LampshadeHanging This... isn't about the Kelly Clarkson song right?"]]
** [[MemeticMutation "Daughter, I am disappoint"]]
** [[{{Ne-Yo}} "Monster!" "Beautiful monster... wait, a monster? T-that's so mean. That's so mean, Su-zu-shi-luo, that's so mean"]]
** [[ModernWarfare "Five years ago, Shou-qin Enterprises faced insolvency… and you all just fucking watched. Tomorrow… There will be no shortage of volunteers, no shortage of loyal shareholders. We know you understand."]]
** The emcee said something about the next performance, something about the band [[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Abismal]] [[AbysmalDawn Dusk]]?
** [[{{Bioshock}} "Would you kindly move?"]]
** [[LeeroyJenkins "Alright, chums, let's do this... GOHROY… WESKINS!"]] [[spoiler: For added irony, they're ''running away'' from danger.]]
** "[[PulpFiction I thought 'What?']] when they told me the fate of the world and they were kind enough to not [[PulpFiction ask me if I spoke Kinglish.]]"
** [[Film/IronMan "Let's face it, this not the worst thing you caught me doing, yah?"]]
** [[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike Having the feeling that something was off, Hei-gu-la-shi looked at her, then at Rondeng, then back at her, before looking back to Rondeng again. She had the feeling that something was off and it was certainly not just the fact that Wedey was not her.]]
** [[KellyClarkson "Because... of me?]] [[LampshadeHanging This... isn't about the Kelly Clarkson song right?"]]
** [[MemeticMutation "Daughter, I am disappoint"]]
** [[{{Ne-Yo}} "Monster!" "Beautiful monster... wait, a monster? T-that's so mean. That's so mean, Su-zu-shi-luo, that's so mean"]]
** [[ModernWarfare "Five years ago, Shou-qin Enterprises faced insolvency… and you all just fucking watched. Tomorrow… There will be no shortage of volunteers, no shortage of loyal shareholders. We know you understand."]]
** The emcee said something about the next performance, something about the band [[Disney/{{Aladdin}} Abismal]] [[AbysmalDawn Dusk]]?
** [[{{Bioshock}} "Would you kindly move?"]]
** [[LeeroyJenkins "Alright, chums, let's do this... GOHROY… WESKINS!"]] [[spoiler: For added irony, they're ''running away'' from danger.]]
** "[[PulpFiction I thought 'What?']] when they told me the fate of the world and they were kind enough to not [[PulpFiction ask me if I spoke Kinglish.]]"
** [[Film/IronMan "Let's face it, this not the worst thing you caught me doing, yah?"]]
** [[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike Having the feeling that something was off, Hei-gu-la-shi looked at her, then at Rondeng, then back at her, before looking back to Rondeng again. She had the feeling that something was off and it was certainly not just the fact that Wedey was not her.]]
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* SmallGirlBigGun: Sommerhoffnung isn't exactly small, but U3 and Airmaker are modelled after Colt Anacondas.
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* SorryILeftTheBGMOn:SorryILeftTheBGMOn: Played with. [[MagicRealism Something]] plays [[MemeticMutation Fitting Music]] in-universe at appropriate times, with characters aware of this.
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* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''[[strike:GetBackers]] [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a ''[[strike:{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' character?"
* OhCrap: He-mu-la has one in the seventh chapter. [[spoiler: What exactly he's shitting bricks about is currently unclear.]]
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** “come 'come out of [[{{Firefly}} gorram]] nowhere”nowhere'
** [[TeamFortress2 "Let's have a go at it!"]]
** [[TeamFortress2 "Let's have a go at it!"]]
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* StealthPun: Shortly after He-mu-la mentioned "bad girl", Sommerhoffnung hums a bit of "Pleather for Breakfast", [[spoiler: the theme of Bad Girl from ''NoMoreHeroes''.]]
* StealthPun: Shortly after He-mu-la mentioned "bad girl", Sommerhoffnung hums a bit of "Pleather for Breakfast", [[spoiler: the theme of Bad Girl from ''NoMoreHeroes''.]]
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** "We'll show you some proper, ah, [[TheCulture use of weapons]]!"
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* ImpossiblyCoolWeapon: Ywiu's wrist-rings can shrink into knuckledusters and the "commas" are {{Absurdly Sharp Blade}}d hooks.
* InTheBack: How [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader.]]
* InTheBack: How [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader.]]
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* NeverBringAKnifeToAFistfight: Double subverted in Ywiu's fight with the gangsters. First subversion is that she uses her own bladed knuckledusters and some of the knife-using thugs manage to scratch her. Double subversion comes when some other thugs with metal poles tag in and she flies into an UnstoppableRage, demolishing them and turning their weapons against them. Possibly a response to Singaporean incidents where thugs with metal poles fatally wounded innocents.
* NotUsingTheZWord[=/=]WritingAroundTrademarks: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get{{Na rm}}ful.{{Narm}}ful.
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* RetiredBadass: Asuoui's proficiency with a knife, combined with some self-admittedly loose-tongued comments, suggest that he once carried out wetwork for Mother Sharo. Whether he served in GRU, KGB-now-FSB, Spetznaz or something else has not been revealed.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Prebr, pretty damn hard.
* ShoutOut: Many. The tagline doesn't contain "Reference-filled" for nothing. [[ViewersAreGeniuses Whether you recognise them at first glance]], though... A (currently) cursory examination will reveal:
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Prebr, pretty damn hard.
* ShoutOut: Many. The tagline doesn't contain "Reference-filled" for nothing. [[ViewersAreGeniuses Whether you recognise them at first glance]], though... A (currently) cursory examination will reveal:
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* RetiredBadass: Asuoui's [[spoiler: Asuoui's]] proficiency with a knife, combined with some self-admittedly loose-tongued comments, suggest that he once carried out wetwork for Mother Sharo. Whether he served in GRU, KGB-now-FSB, Spetznaz or something else has not been revealed.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Prebr, pretty damnhard.
hard. Kan-za-ji usually shies away from contractions too.
* ShoutOut: Many. The tagline doesn't contain "Reference-filled" for nothing. [[ViewersAreGeniuses Whether you recognise the better-hidden of them at first glance]], though... A (currently) cursory examination will reveal:
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Prebr, pretty damn
* ShoutOut: Many. The tagline doesn't contain "Reference-filled" for nothing. [[ViewersAreGeniuses Whether you recognise the better-hidden of them at first glance]], though... A (currently) cursory examination will reveal:
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader]] with a spine-stab, throat stab-and-slash, then heart-stab. Might not be instant death stab, but almost all muggles will go to the morgue after that. He then stabs the victim a few more times so that it looks more random and less "professional, if anyone experienced sees they might be suspicious." Might even be CruelAndUnusualDeath.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''{{Mai-HiME}}'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows the BroadStrokes without adhering tightly to it.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''{{Mai-HiME}}'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows the BroadStrokes TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly to it.
tightly.
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* CreatorProvincialism: Possibly the only reason why the setting was moved to [[strike: Singapore]] [[IstanbulNotConstantinople Merliona]].
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* HannibalLecture: When Sommerhoffnung tries to do a [=~What The Hell, Hero?~=] in chapter seven, Ywiu and Romea shoot her down.
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* HannibalLecture: When Sommerhoffnung tries to do a [=~What The Hell, Hero?~=] in chapter seven, Ywiu and Romea shoot her down.down harshly.
* InsaneTrollLogic[=/=]MoonLogicPuzzle: Frequent and the reason why ViewersAreGeniuses is what it is here. For example, Ywiu's name.[[hottip:*:The kanji for Mai's name, if read as if Chinese characters, are pronounced "Wu-yi", with Ywiu being an anagram of that. Mai is... well, Mai, while Tou-qi-ha is a transliteration of "Tokiha" into Chinese.]]
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* MoonLogicPuzzle: Frequent and the reason why ViewersAreGeniuses is what it is here. For example, Ywiu's name.[[hottip:*:The kanji for Mai's name, if read as if Chinese characters, are pronounced "Wu-yi", with Ywiu being an anagram of that. Mai is... well, Mai, while Tou-qi-ha is a transliteration of "Tokiha" into Chinese.]]
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: And how! To state just one point, how many of the ShoutOuts will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: And how! To state just one point, how many of the more disguised/subtle ShoutOuts will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
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** Sommerhoffnung's hair colour comment on the ferry marks her as GenreSavvy.
** Ywiu proves to be a foul-mouthed ActionGirl early enough.
** Ken-ba-ne's near-nonstop sass as a (attempted?) DeadpanSnarker.
** Muest's refusal of help revealing his [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=] attitude.
** Sommerhoffnung's hair colour comment on the ferry marks her as GenreSavvy.
** Ywiu proves to be a foul-mouthed ActionGirl early enough.
** Ken-ba-ne's near-nonstop sass as a (attempted?) DeadpanSnarker.
** Muest's refusal of help revealing his [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=] attitude.
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On the way to school on the day before the new school year begins, Sommerhoffnung Crugah finds that someone wants her away from the premises. Once she actually gets there, she finds that she is to be part of a monster-fighting group. However, at least two factions seek to subjugate her powers for their own uses.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: "little lilac... loli"
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler: Sommerhoffnung. Implied in the sixth chapter when she seems disappointed that the Childless missed her, made explicit in the seventh.]]
* [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=]: Muesterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
* [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=]: Muesterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
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** GratuitousGerman: Sommerhoffnung ''is'' half-[[strike: German]][[IstanbulNotConstantinople Gothofurtoan]], but she lapses into it pretty often. Muesterteklang too.
* HannibalLecture: When Sommerhoffnung tries to do a [=~What The Hell, Hero?~=] in chapter seven, Ywiu and Romea shoot her down.
* MusicalAssassin: Mei-ya-nuo-kou-qi's power.
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* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative.
* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative.
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** “come out of [[{{Firefly}} gorram]] nowhere”
nowhere”
** "Does he still [[{{Ptitleqggcng93}} Remembah]] [[MemeticMutation Me]]?"
** Ken-ba-ne likes the term [[{{Touhou}} nineball]].
** Muest finishes off his first Childless with a [[GuiltyGear Potemkin Buster]].
** [[OrderOfTheStick "Treasure Type O"]]
** [[ThreeHundred ".... give them nothing, but take from them everything?"]]
** [[SchlockMercenary "There is no such thing as overkill, only open fire and I need to reload?"]]
** [[AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder Are you dense? What, are you retarded? Who the hell do you think you are?]]
** ".... Sometimes the world dun like us to [[RussellPeters be a man, do the right thing.]]"
* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative. Also done when [[spoiler: Ywiu agrees with Romea's HannibalLecture against Sommerhoffnung.]]
* SingleStrokeBattle: Ken-ba-ne kills his first Childless this way.
** "Does he still [[{{Ptitleqggcng93}} Remembah]] [[MemeticMutation Me]]?"
** Ken-ba-ne likes the term [[{{Touhou}} nineball]].
** Muest finishes off his first Childless with a [[GuiltyGear Potemkin Buster]].
** [[OrderOfTheStick "Treasure Type O"]]
** [[ThreeHundred ".... give them nothing, but take from them everything?"]]
** [[SchlockMercenary "There is no such thing as overkill, only open fire and I need to reload?"]]
** [[AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder Are you dense? What, are you retarded? Who the hell do you think you are?]]
** ".... Sometimes the world dun like us to [[RussellPeters be a man, do the right thing.]]"
* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative. Also done when [[spoiler: Ywiu agrees with Romea's HannibalLecture against Sommerhoffnung.]]
* SingleStrokeBattle: Ken-ba-ne kills his first Childless this way.
* SophisticatedAsHell: The gang leader in the seventh chapter. Broken English, more broken English, [[spoiler: ''OrderOfTheStick'' reference]], {{Poirot Spe|ak}}- ''What?''
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* SurroundedByIdiots: [[spoiler: Sommerhoffnung says this in GratuitousGerman in the fourth chapter.]]
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* SurroundedByIdiots: [[spoiler: Sommerhoffnung says this in GratuitousGerman in the fourth chapter. Ywiu does this in the seventh in Spanish.]]
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* RetCon: The ''Nanoha'' parody was originally called '''''Mundane''' Girl Tonedeaf Gigaha'', but was changed to '''''Empath''' Girl'' after the author used the latter in another, unconnected work of his.
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* RetCon: The ''Nanoha'' parody was originally called '''''Mundane''' '' '''Mundane''' Girl Tonedeaf Gigaha'', but was changed to '''''Empath''' Girl'' after the author used the latter in another, unconnected work of his.
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* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[strike: [[YukariTamura Midori]]]] Su-qi-wu-la says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer.
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* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[strike: [[YukariTamura Midori]]]] Su-qi-wu-la says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer. Later in that same chapter, she is referred to as having [[BGataHKei 100 fuck buddies.]]
* BroadStrokes: Name changes aside, when the first chapter ends with [[spoiler: Sommerhoffnung NOT waking up in the middle of a school field with Dai-Ming]], you know this is not going to be a faithful adaptation.
* BroadStrokes: Name changes aside, when the first chapter ends with [[spoiler: Sommerhoffnung NOT waking up in the middle of a school field with Dai-Ming]], you know this is not going to be a faithful adaptation.
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* NotUsingTheZWord: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get {{Narm}}ful.
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* NotUsingTheZWord: MythologyGag: Sommerhoffnung's default outfit is based on that of Dark [=HiME=] Natsuki from the ''Manga/{{Mai-Otome}}'' manga.
* NotUsingTheZWord[=/=]WritingAroundTrademarks: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get{{Narm}}ful.{{Na rm}}ful.
* NotUsingTheZWord[=/=]WritingAroundTrademarks: The fanfic. The author's efforts to avoid invoking the canonical names can get
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: "AsYouKnow – and I wasn’t being facetious in emphasising those three words...."
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Prebr, pretty damn hard.
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** Kan-za-ji said as he shifted [[{{Starcraft}} “You want a pair piece of unfortunately non-[[DawnOfWar METALlic BOXES]].m-”]]
** [[TheLegendOfZeldaCDiGames “You want it?”]]
** [[TheDarkKnightSaga “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?”]] .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
** [[StreetFighter “Oh-ho-ho! This is delicious!” ... “Yes! Yes!”]]
** Kan-za-ji said as he shifted a pair of unfortunately non-[[DawnOfWar METALlic BOXES]].
** [[TheDarkKnightSaga “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?”]] .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
** [[StreetFighter “Oh-ho-ho! This is delicious!” ... “Yes! Yes!”]]
** Kan-za-ji said as he shifted a pair of unfortunately non-[[DawnOfWar METALlic BOXES]].
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** “come out of [[{{Firefly}} gorram]] nowhere”
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* ActorAllusion: At one point, [[strike: [[YukariTamura Midori]]]] Su-qi-wu-la says [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Maximum]] [[CatchPhrase Power]], and later her summon uses the [[strike: Starlight Breaker]] Moonlight Fixer.
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** Kan-za-ji said as he shifted a pair of unfortunately non-[[DawnOfWar METALlic BOXES]].
** [[{{Discworld}} Fabricati Diem Pvnc expression]]
** “Is this some [[MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re involved in....?”
** [[TheDarkKnightSaga “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”]].... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid
** Susanoo's beatdown of the sixth chapter's Childless riffs on the game version of [[JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando's ZA WARUDO combo]].
** [[strike: [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Giga Drill]] [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Starlight Breaker]]]][[hottip:*:not coincidentally also a reference to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwKEQSYnYnY this video]], given that Warp Obscura and [=MaxAndEmilytate=] are friends]] Pico Wrench Moonlight Fixer
** [[{{Discworld}} Fabricati Diem Pvnc expression]]
** “Is this some [[MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re involved in....?”
** [[TheDarkKnightSaga “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”]].... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid
** Susanoo's beatdown of the sixth chapter's Childless riffs on the game version of [[JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando's ZA WARUDO combo]].
** [[strike: [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Giga Drill]] [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Starlight Breaker]]]][[hottip:*:not coincidentally also a reference to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwKEQSYnYnY this video]], given that Warp Obscura and [=MaxAndEmilytate=] are friends]] Pico Wrench Moonlight Fixer
