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!!Tropes contained within "Pokemon: Storm Clouds" include:

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!!Tropes contained within the original "Pokemon: Storm Clouds" include:



** [[spoiler:It's less "YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness" and more "[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel You Have Outlived Your Capacity To Amuse Me.]]"]]

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!! Tropes contained within the sequel, "Storm Clouds II", include:

* Animorphism: Looks to continue as a theme in the story, though not in the same way as the first part.
* GenerationXerox: After Dan's father passed away during the interim, Dan inherited his old pawn shop.
** [[spoiler: Missy's son with Dan, Ivan, has inherited more than his fair share of unusual abilities thanks to his mother's own altered genetics.]]
* HeroWorshipper: The younger generation in the town of Fox Grove, who know that Missy and Dan are regarded as heroes [[spoiler: for when they saved the town from Masque 19 years ago]], but aren't given details. This is done to [[JustifiedTrope keeping outsiders from investigating the town]].
* [[spoiler: IJustWantToBeNormal: Not a straight example, but Missy has been struggling to keep too many people from learning about her ... unique condition. She left university after two years to return to Fox Grove because she was having to work even harder to hide than she had to in her hometown]].
* OlderAndWiser: Everyone's getting this to some degree, but Artemis in ''particular'' has really calmed down over the years. Nemo is this of the more self-confident variety, and Ruby looks to be considerably calmer.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: [[spoiler: Missy and Dan's son, Ivan, can turn into a Vulpix at will.]]
* WordOfGod: The author's notes have provided something of a detailed summary for what has happened in the interim without revealing anything major about the plot.

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*** TheDragon: Rico. Also doubles as [[spoiler: a HeelFaceMole]].

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*** TheDragon: Rico. Also doubles as [[spoiler: a HeelFaceMole]].ReverseMole]].



* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler: Masque]]



* ManipulativeBastard: Masque's greatest achievements come from his ability to read and manipulate other people as well as pokemon. In his finest moments (his [[spoiler:murder of Giovanni]] and [[spoiler:the way he busts out of prison]] he borders on [[MagnificentBastard magnificence.]]



* [[spoiler: TheStarscream: Masque, though not for the [[AmbitionIsEvil usual]] [[ForTheEvulz reasons]].

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Armor; Dan; Artemis; Missy. Basically any character who's usually quite kind can be dangerous if you look at them wrong.



** At the end of the fic, [[spoiler: everyone's come to visit Missy in hospital except for Dan. Missy calls him in, and he's so embarrassed and ashamed of himself for not knowing who she was and his treatment of her while she was a pokemon - including making her sleep on the floor. Missy just kisses him softly, assures him that she doesn't hate him and it's alright, and falls asleep out of exhaustion - content for the first time in a long while]].
** Blaine telling Dan that he considers him a surrogate son and that he always has a home at Cinnebar island if he never finds his way back to Earth.
** The other pokemon all working together to break Missy out of her HeroicBSOD.



** The Hypno, who [[spoiler:delivered a ''brutal'' MindRape to Missy when he could have just knocked her out instead.]]

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** The Hypno, who [[spoiler:delivered [[spoiler: delivered a ''brutal'' MindRape to Missy when he could have just knocked her out instead.]]



* DracoInLeatherPants: Can a character be both the EnsembleDarkhorse and a [[spoiler:CompleteMonster]]? Masque says ''yes!''

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* DefrostingIceQueen: Take a wild guess. [[spoiler: It's Ruby - and not only towards Missy, but also to the other Pokemon]].
* [[spoiler: DiscOneFinalBoss: Giovanni]]
* DracoInLeatherPants: Can a character be both the EnsembleDarkhorse and a [[spoiler:CompleteMonster]]? [[spoiler: CompleteMonster]]? Masque says ''yes!''''yes!''
** Granted, a lot of people like Masque precisely ''because'' he's what he is. Just like [[spoiler: TheJoker]], he's so damn entertaining that we find him amusing precisely because he's an antagonist, not because we want to make him 'better'.



** To be fair, he had developed such a considerable fanbase thanks to being a hugely entertaining EvillyAffable WildCard that it's not really a surprise it managed to withstand [[spoiler:him crossing the MoralEventHorizon.]]
** The incredible amount of entries on this page pertaining to this one character should give you an idea of how popular he is. In fact he actually isn't ''that'' prevalent of a character [[spoiler:until the final chapters]] as you'd think from the sheer amount of tropes dedicated to him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Giovanni [[spoiler:has a strong interest in human culture as seen when he criticises the heroes for damaging the ruins underneath Saffron City. He also seems to show horror when he finally glimpses the true depths of Masque's madness, right before Masque murders him]].

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** To be fair, he had developed such a considerable fanbase thanks to being a hugely entertaining EvillyAffable WildCard that it's not really a surprise it managed to withstand [[spoiler:him [[spoiler: him crossing the MoralEventHorizon.]]
** The incredible amount of entries on this page pertaining to this one character should give you an idea of how popular he is. In fact he actually isn't ''that'' prevalent of a character [[spoiler:until [[spoiler: until the final chapters]] as you'd think from the sheer amount of tropes dedicated to him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Giovanni [[spoiler:has [[spoiler: has a strong interest in human culture as seen when he criticises the heroes for damaging the ruins underneath Saffron City. He also seems to show horror when he finally glimpses the true depths of Masque's madness, right before Masque murders him]].



* FiveBadBand:
** 1st half of the story:
*** TheBigBad: Giovanni
*** TheDragon: Rico. Also doubles as [[spoiler: a HeelFaceMole]].
*** TheEvilGenius: Masque. Also doubles as [[spoiler: TheStarscream]].
*** TheBrute: The Scyther.
*** TheDarkChick: [[spoiler: Sabrina, largely due to MoreThanMindControl]]
** 2nd half of the story:
*** TheBigBad: [[spoiler: Masque]]
*** TheDragon: [[spoiler: The Scyther]]
*** TheEvilGenius: [[spoiler: The Hypno]]
*** TheBrute: [[spoiler: The Aerodactyl]]



** TheHero: Missy, naturally.

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** TheHero: Missy, naturally. (The author even said, during a Q&A time, that Dan was a DecoyProtagonist in the early chapters including the opening, and that Missy herself is the story's main protagonist).



* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Masque's murder of Giovanni]] is treated as a ''major'' KickTheDog moment or even a borderline crossing of the MoralEventHorizon in-universe...but the readers cheered because let's face it, [[spoiler:Giovanni]] had it coming.

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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Masque's murder of Giovanni]] is treated as a ''major'' KickTheDog moment or even a borderline crossing of the MoralEventHorizon in-universe...but the readers cheered because let's face it, [[spoiler:Giovanni]] [[spoiler: Giovanni]] had it coming.


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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 19 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of his version of the Pokemon world over a thirteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He has recently posted [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/37159706/ A Q&A about the characters, the plot, and the writing process, with all questions asked by fans]]. The first chapter of the sequel [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/art/Storm-Clouds-II-Ch-01-194703762 is up]].

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** Missy [[spoiler: breaks free from the Hypno's {{The Many Deaths Of You}} through sheer WILLPOWER and takes him down]].

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** Missy [[spoiler: breaks free from the Hypno's {{The Many Deaths Of You}} MindRape through sheer WILLPOWER and takes him down]].



* DracoInLeatherPants: Can a character be both the EnsembleDarkhorse and a [[spoiler:CompleteMonster]]? Masque says ''yes!''



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Giovanni has a strong interest in human culture as seen [[spoiler: when he criticises the heroes for damaging the ruins underneath Saffron City. He also seems to show horror when he finally glimpses the true depths of Masque's madness, right before Masque murders him]].

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** The incredible amount of entries on this page pertaining to this one character should give you an idea of how popular he is. In fact he actually isn't ''that'' prevalent of a character [[spoiler:until the final chapters]] as you'd think from the sheer amount of tropes dedicated to him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Giovanni has [[spoiler:has a strong interest in human culture as seen [[spoiler: when he criticises the heroes for damaging the ruins underneath Saffron City. He also seems to show horror when he finally glimpses the true depths of Masque's madness, right before Masque murders him]].him]].
**[[spoiler:Of course, the terror he displays is less because Masque is crazy and evil and more because he's about to get murdered and '''''he knows it.''''']]
* EvilIsHammy + EvilIsStylish: A large part of why Masque is so beloved.



* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Masque's murder of Giovanni]] is treated as a ''major'' KickTheDog moment or even a borderline crossing of the MoralEventHorizon in-universe...but the readers cheered because let's face it, [[spoiler:Giovanni]] had it coming.
** The sheer ''[[EvilIsStylish style]]'' with which [[spoiler:Masque]] managed to pull it off certainly didn't hurt either.



* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Several, but the 2 that stand out for this troper is the rather scathing one the [[spoiler:Scyther]] delivers to [[spoiler:Ruby]] during the [[spoiler:tournament]] in Chapter [[spoiler:15]],

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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Several, but the 2 that stand out for this troper a standout is the rather scathing one the [[spoiler:Scyther]] delivers to [[spoiler:Ruby]] during the [[spoiler:tournament]] in Chapter [[spoiler:15]],[[spoiler:15]].




and later in [[spoiler:chapter 24]] the one the [[spoiler:Scyther]] himself gets one from [[spoiler:Missy]], it's a very epic one.

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** [[spoiler:Masque]] gives one to [[spoiler:Giovanni]] in a great scene that illustrates the difference between a BigBad and a mere [[BigBadWannabe Wannabe]]. (There are a lot of these in the fic.)
-->[[spoiler:'''Masque''']]:Are you so shocked by murder, [[spoiler:Giovanni]]? Pitiful. You are like a vulture flying high above a pack of predators, waiting to pick off whatever they leave you. You can’t kill. You’ve ordered plenty of deaths to be carried out, but you’ve never done it yourself. Any weakling can order an execution, but it takes a certain caliber to actually join the firing squad. You should have known your ambitions would attract souls much blacker than yours.
-->'''[[spoiler:Giovanni]]''' attempts to attack [[spoiler:'''Masque''']] with his pokemon, which refuses to obey him.
-->[[spoiler:'''Masque''']]:Just like most of the fighters in this organization, that pokemon had been conditioned by me. Over the process I instilled a desire to serve you, to be sure, but behind that I hid something else. The pokemon of [[spoiler:Team Rocket]] will never act against me…Do you remember what I once told you? ‘You cannot control a marionette with only one string’. You dared to think you controlled me?! All of your enforcers have been conditioned by me before they see use. That’s one string. You allowed terror of me to grow within your organization, so that many of your followers feared me more than you. Another string. Despite the fact that I often acted against your interests, you never took action, signaling to me and to others that I had a certain leeway out of your jurisdiction. That's a third. You never did the dirty work yourself, instead delegating it to those even more amoral than you…like myself. That’s four. I’ve made you dance this way and that for years now, [[spoiler:Giovanni]]. You were my plaything. Well, now you and your organization bore me. [[PreMortemOneLiner I’ll cut your strings.]]
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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Several, but the 2 that stand out for this troper is the rather scathing one the Scyther delivers to Ruby during the tournament in Chapter 15,
-->'''Scyther''': You know, I would tell you to not bother, that by overexerting yourself with a wound like that you could very likely keel over from exhaustion, except that I don't care and I'd love to see you suffer. I ''hate'' your type, little Ponyta, do you know that? All your talk about training and practice and striving to be the best day after day after day...hah! All that training was for one reason only: to hide your shameful weakness. You started off '''weak''', you little meal! It took quite a bit of effort to reach where you are now. Whereas I-I was born strong. Before my first birthday I had an impressive number of victories chalked up against powerful wild pokemon. Powerful pokemon; pokemon that ''hunted'' my species! I showed them that I am no prey. Before my first year passed I had ''killed'', weakling! Killed! Human and pokemon alike! ''Legions'' of pokemon have fled from my blade. And what do you have to your name, weak one? A few victories in one-on-one battles in the safe haven humanity provides for you with their little rules? With their honor and ethics and all their safety? And even those slight triumphs were only earned after effort on your part. Do not hide what you are. The weak should not masquerade as the strong!

and later in chapter 24 the one the Scyther himself gets one from Missy, it's a very epic one.
-->'''Scyther''': Hide while you can, foolish one, you can't crouch there forever. And when you come out, my blade will be waiting.
-->'''Missy''': How it must sting to be you, to be such a useless pokemon.
-->'''Scyther''': Useless? You dare say that to me? You, who cowers beneath a shield even as we speak? You, who has never done anything but run or hide? You, who-
-->'''Missy''': I know which pokemon Masque really trusts: the one he relied on to get him out of prison. The Hypno. Your master trusted him over you.
-->'''Scyther''':...That, has a remarkably simple answer. The Hypno's abilities were special-no, not special, he is ''not'' better than I am-they were just...just better suited for that particular situation.
-->'''Missy''': Really? Do you honestly think you couldn't have handled it?
-->'''Scyther''': I-
-->'''Missy''': You know you could have, didn't you brag to me when we first met that you have killed humans and pokemon in abundance? That uncountable numbers had fled from you in terror? You could have broken in there handily, and killed Masque's oppressors before they knew what was happening. But you didn't-because Masque doesn't value you like you want him to. To him, you're just a tool, and not a particularly useful one at that. To him you're just a rusted, dull, blunt-
-->'''Scyther''': Lord Masque thinks highly of me, more highly than anyone or anything else! How dare you say that? Get out from under there so I can ''rip you to pieces!''
-->'''Missy''': Masque thinks your garbage, and do you know why? Because of ''me''. For all your claims to be invincible, for all your bragging and pride, I've beaten you twice. That's why you searched me out in this rain; not for revenge, but to prove to yourself that I'm not better than you. My victories over you eat you alive, and you know it. And even if you do kill me, even if I'm dead and gone, your damaged, imperfect blade will always be there: an eternal reminder of my triumph over you.

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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: Several, but the 2 that stand out for this troper is the rather scathing one the Scyther [[spoiler:Scyther]] delivers to Ruby [[spoiler:Ruby]] during the tournament [[spoiler:tournament]] in Chapter 15,
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-->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]:
You know, I would tell you to not bother, that by overexerting yourself with a wound like that you could very likely keel over from exhaustion, except that I don't care and I'd love to see you suffer. I ''hate'' your type, little Ponyta, [[spoiler:Ponyta]], do you know that? All your talk about training and practice and striving to be the best day after day after day...hah! All that training was for one reason only: to hide your shameful weakness. You started off '''weak''', you little meal! It took quite a bit of effort to reach where you are now. Whereas I-I was born strong. Before my first birthday I had an impressive number of victories chalked up against powerful wild pokemon. Powerful pokemon; pokemon that ''hunted'' my species! I showed them that I am no prey. Before my first year passed I had ''killed'', weakling! Killed! Human and pokemon alike! ''Legions'' of pokemon have fled from my blade. And what do you have to your name, weak one? A few victories in one-on-one battles in the safe haven humanity provides for you with their little rules? With their honor and ethics and all their safety? And even those slight triumphs were only earned after effort on your part. Do not hide what you are. The weak should not masquerade as the strong!

and later in chapter 24 [[spoiler:chapter 24]] the one the Scyther [[spoiler:Scyther]] himself gets one from Missy, [[spoiler:Missy]], it's a very epic one.
-->'''Scyther''': -->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]: Hide while you can, foolish one, you can't crouch there forever. And when you come out, my blade will be waiting.
-->'''Missy''': -->[[spoiler:'''Missy''']]: How it must sting to be you, to be such a useless pokemon.
-->'''Scyther''': -->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]: Useless? You dare say that to me? You, who cowers beneath a shield even as we speak? You, who has never done anything but run or hide? You, who-
-->'''Missy''': -->[[spoiler:'''Missy''']]: I know which pokemon Masque [[spoiler:Masque]] really trusts: the one he relied on to get him out of prison. The Hypno.[[spoiler:Hypno]]. Your master trusted him over you.
-->'''Scyther''':...-->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]:...That, has a remarkably simple answer. The Hypno's [[spoiler:Hypno]]'s abilities were special-no, not special, he is ''not'' better than I am-they were just...just better suited for that particular situation.
-->'''Missy''': -->[[spoiler:'''Missy''']]: Really? Do you honestly think you couldn't have handled it?
-->'''Scyther''': -->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]: I-
-->'''Missy''': -->[[spoiler:'''Missy''']]: You know you could have, didn't you brag to me when we first met that you have killed humans and pokemon in abundance? That uncountable numbers had fled from you in terror? You could have broken in there handily, and killed Masque's [[spoiler:Masque]]'s oppressors before they knew what was happening. But you didn't-because Masque [[spoiler:Masque]] doesn't value you like you want him to. To him, you're just a tool, and not a particularly useful one at that. To him you're just a rusted, dull, blunt-
-->'''Scyther''': -->[[spoiler:'''Scyther''']]: Lord Masque [[spoiler:Masque]] thinks highly of me, more highly than anyone or anything else! How dare you say that? Get out from under there so I can ''rip you to pieces!''
-->'''Missy''': Masque -->[[spoiler:'''Missy''']]: [[spoiler:Masque]] thinks your garbage, and do you know why? Because of ''me''. For all your claims to be invincible, for all your bragging and pride, I've beaten you twice. That's why you searched me out in this rain; not for revenge, but to prove to yourself that I'm not better than you. My victories over you eat you alive, and you know it. And even if you do kill me, even if I'm dead and gone, your damaged, imperfect blade will always be there: an eternal reminder of my triumph over you.
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* The Reason You Suck Speech: Several, but the 2 that stand out for this troper is the rather scathing one the Scyther delivers to Ruby during the tournament in Chapter 15,
-->'''Scyther''': You know, I would tell you to not bother, that by overexerting yourself with a wound like that you could very likely keel over from exhaustion, except that I don't care and I'd love to see you suffer. I ''hate'' your type, little Ponyta, do you know that? All your talk about training and practice and striving to be the best day after day after day...hah! All that training was for one reason only: to hide your shameful weakness. You started off '''weak''', you little meal! It took quite a bit of effort to reach where you are now. Whereas I-I was born strong. Before my first birthday I had an impressive number of victories chalked up against powerful wild pokemon. Powerful pokemon; pokemon that ''hunted'' my species! I showed them that I am no prey. Before my first year passed I had ''killed'', weakling! Killed! Human and pokemon alike! ''Legions'' of pokemon have fled from my blade. And what do you have to your name, weak one? A few victories in one-on-one battles in the safe haven humanity provides for you with their little rules? With their honor and ethics and all their safety? And even those slight triumphs were only earned after effort on your part. Do not hide what you are. The weak should not masquerade as the strong!

and later in chapter 24 the one the Scyther himself gets one from Missy, it's a very epic one.
-->'''Scyther''': Hide while you can, foolish one, you can't crouch there forever. And when you come out, my blade will be waiting.
-->'''Missy''': How it must sting to be you, to be such a useless pokemon.
-->'''Scyther''': Useless? You dare say that to me? You, who cowers beneath a shield even as we speak? You, who has never done anything but run or hide? You, who-
-->'''Missy''': I know which pokemon Masque really trusts: the one he relied on to get him out of prison. The Hypno. Your master trusted him over you.
-->'''Scyther''':...That, has a remarkably simple answer. The Hypno's abilities were special-no, not special, he is ''not'' better than I am-they were just...just better suited for that particular situation.
-->'''Missy''': Really? Do you honestly think you couldn't have handled it?
-->'''Scyther''': I-
-->'''Missy''': You know you could have, didn't you brag to me when we first met that you have killed humans and pokemon in abundance? That uncountable numbers had fled from you in terror? You could have broken in there handily, and killed Masque's oppressors before they knew what was happening. But you didn't-because Masque doesn't value you like you want him to. To him, you're just a tool, and not a particularly useful one at that. To him you're just a rusted, dull, blunt-
-->'''Scyther''': Lord Masque thinks highly of me, more highly than anyone or anything else! How dare you say that? Get out from under there so I can ''rip you to pieces!''
-->'''Missy''': Masque thinks your garbage, and do you know why? Because of ''me''. For all your claims to be invincible, for all your bragging and pride, I've beaten you twice. That's why you searched me out in this rain; not for revenge, but to prove to yourself that I'm not better than you. My victories over you eat you alive, and you know it. And even if you do kill me, even if I'm dead and gone, your damaged, imperfect blade will always be there: an eternal reminder of my triumph over you.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Mr. Shadow, one of the supernatural inhabitants of [[HauntedHouse Pokemon Tower]]. He's a pretty nice guy, if somewhat creepy and obviously [[EldritchAbomination eldritch]] in nature. [[spoiler:Which makes sense, as he turns out to be ''[[DontFearTheReaper the Grim Reaper]]''.]]
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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 19 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of his version of the Pokemon world over a thirteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing the impact and effectiveness of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]

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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 19 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of his version of the Pokemon world over a thirteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing has recently posted [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/37159706/ A Q&A about the impact characters, the plot, and effectiveness the writing process, with all questions asked by fans]]. The first chapter of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Nightshade]]
* [[spoiler: HoistByHisOwnPetard: Masque is slaughtered by his own loyal Scyther while it's in a worked-up frenzy courtesy of Missy, and when he meets Death himself, he is terrified to see himself for the monster he always was]].
* IronWoobie: Poor, poor Tuber [[spoiler: aka: ''Nightshade'']]

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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Nightshade]]
[[spoiler:Nightshade]]
* [[spoiler: HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:HoistByHisOwnPetard: Masque is slaughtered by his own loyal Scyther while it's in a worked-up frenzy courtesy of Missy, and when he meets Death himself, he is terrified to see himself for the monster he always was]].
* IronWoobie: Poor, poor Tuber [[spoiler: aka: [[spoiler:aka: ''Nightshade'']]



* JerkassFacade: [[spoiler: Rico plays this so well - including actually ''capturing'' Missy in a PokeBall when he learns Dan doesn't own her - that it was quite a shock to learn he was actually a mole in Team Rocket and a fairly decent guy. He later apologised for his actions towards Dan]].

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* JerkassFacade: [[spoiler: Rico [[spoiler:Rico plays this so well - including actually ''capturing'' Missy in a PokeBall when he learns Dan doesn't own her - that it was quite a shock to learn he was actually a mole in Team Rocket and a fairly decent guy. He later apologised for his actions towards Dan]].



* LovableCoward: Nemo. [[spoiler: Subverted in that he shows signs of great courage when he needs to, and along with Missy, has the best [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments]] throughout the story.]]

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* LovableCoward: Nemo. [[spoiler: Subverted [[spoiler:Subverted in that he shows signs of great courage when he needs to, and along with Missy, has the best [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments]] throughout the story.]]



* MindRape: [[spoiler: See AllTheMyriadWays, above.]]

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* MindRape: [[spoiler: See [[spoiler:See AllTheMyriadWays, above.]]



* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Masque]] crossed this ''hard'' when he [[spoiler: blackmailed Luke into creating technology that would allow him to traverse worlds and create chaos for the sake of it. Arguably, he's already crossed the line when he sent his brainwashed Pokemon to slaughter innocent people in Dan and Missy's hometown indiscriminately]].
* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler: Sabrina is shown to have deep insecurities regarding herself and her friendship with Erika, which Team Rocket exploits to take control of her. [[IGotBetter She gets better]], fortunately]].

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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Masque]] [[spoiler:Masque]] crossed this ''hard'' when he [[spoiler: blackmailed [[spoiler:blackmailed Luke into creating technology that would allow him to traverse worlds and create chaos for the sake of it. Arguably, he's already crossed the line when he sent his brainwashed Pokemon to slaughter innocent people in Dan and Missy's hometown indiscriminately]].
* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler: Sabrina [[spoiler:Sabrina is shown to have deep insecurities regarding herself and her friendship with Erika, which Team Rocket exploits to take control of her. [[IGotBetter She gets better]], fortunately]].



* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Dan delivers one [[spoiler: when Rico has captured Missy - he only relents when Rico gives him the PokeBall]].
* [[spoiler: NotQuiteBackToNormal]] [[spoiler: Missy. This is treated as a good thing because becoming completely human would have resulted in death.]]

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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Dan delivers one [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when Rico has captured Missy - he only relents when Rico gives him the PokeBall]].
* [[spoiler: NotQuiteBackToNormal]] [[spoiler: Missy.[[spoiler:Missy. This is treated as a good thing because becoming completely human would have resulted in death.]]



* ReverseMole: [[spoiler: None other than Rico.]]

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* ReverseMole: [[spoiler: None [[spoiler:None other than Rico.]]



* [[spoiler:SealedWithAKiss:Mm-hmm.]]

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* [[spoiler:SealedWithAKiss:Mm-hmm.[[spoiler:SealedWithAKiss: Mm-hmm.]]



* XanatosGambit: Masque uses one [[spoiler: when he allows himself to be imprisoned. He has his Hypno hypnotize the guards into releasing him and then has it wipe their memories so that they forget he was there. Thereby allowing him to move around freely while everyone thinks he's imprisoned.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Masque pulls this on Giovanni, cementing himself as TheStarscream and the story's BigBad.]]

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* XanatosGambit: Masque uses one [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when he allows himself to be imprisoned. He has his Hypno hypnotize the guards into releasing him and then has it wipe their memories so that they forget he was there. Thereby allowing him to move around freely while everyone thinks he's imprisoned.]]
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Masque [[spoiler:Masque pulls this on Giovanni, cementing himself as TheStarscream and the story's BigBad.]]
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** The Aerodactyl, who led his gang of pokemon to attack a school full of children (on [[spoiler:Masque's]] orders, to be sure, but he ha0d no problem with it.

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* {{Animorphism}}: Missy's transformation into an Eevee is part of the premise.

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* {{Animorphism}}: Missy's transformation into an Eevee is part One of the premise.main characters gets turned into a pokemon in the first chapter. The main conflict for most of the story is her attempts to deal with the change and her quest to find a way back to normal. [[spoiler: Coming back home does not, by itself, help. She finally learns that she can only return to her previous form by dying. She ends up in a state of near death but is hospitalised and lives. As a result, Missy mostly regains her human form, but several traits from her Pokemon body carry over, which she finds herself happy with]].



* {{Animorphism}}: One of the main characters gets turned into a pokemon in the first chapter. The main conflict for most of the story is her attempts to deal with the change and her quest to find a way back to normal. [[spoiler: Coming back home does not, by itself, help. She finally learns that she can only return to her previous form by dying. She ends up in a state of near death but is hospitalised and lives. As a result, Missy mostly regains her human form, but several traits from her Pokemon body carry over, which she finds herself happy with]].

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* {{Animorphism}}: Missy's transformation into an Eevee is part of the premise.



* InvoluntaryShapeshifting: It's kind of the premise.

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* [[spoiler:AllTheMyriadWays: At the end of the third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape. Almost all of them end with her dying tragically, [[FateWorseThanDeath and the ones that don't...]]]]



*** By [[spoiler:knocking it into a raging river and punching the shit out of it.]]



* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants to create chaos and slaughter people indiscriminately ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] may also count. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].
** What about [[spoiler: the Aerodactyl? If I remember correctly, Masque didn't explicitly tell it to go kill all the children in that school; it came up with that idea ''all on its own.'']] Also, YourMileageMayVary regarding [[spoiler:the Scyther]]. He at least has one redeeming element; [[spoiler:he seems genuinely attached and loyal to Masque and desperately wants his approval.]]

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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants The most notable is probably [[spoiler:Masque, who sees sentient beings as playthings existing solely to create chaos amuse him. His ultimate goal is to have the capacity to ruin as many lives as possible whenever he feels like it, because death and slaughter people indiscriminately ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] destruction makes him smile.]] A few pokemon may also count. qualify:
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The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].
** What
Scyther, an AxCrazy maniac who brags about [[spoiler: the Aerodactyl? If I remember correctly, Masque didn't explicitly tell it to go kill all the children in that school; it came up with that idea ''all on its own.'']] Also, YourMileageMayVary regarding [[spoiler:the Scyther]]. He at least has one having killed dozens of humans and pokemon and whose only redeeming element; [[spoiler:he seems genuinely attached and loyal quality is loyalty to Masque and desperately wants his approval.]]trainer.
** The Hypno, who [[spoiler:delivered a ''brutal'' MindRape to Missy when he could have just knocked her out instead.]]
** The Aerodactyl, who led his gang of pokemon to attack a school full of children (on [[spoiler:Masque's]] orders, to be sure, but he ha0d no problem with it.



* TheDragon: Both Masque and Rico to Giovanni.

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* TheDragon: [[CoDragons Both Masque and Rico Rico]] to Giovanni.



** To be fair, he had developed such a considerable fanbase thanks to being a hugely entertaining EvillyAffable WildCard that it's not really a surprise it managed to withstand [[spoiler:him crossing the MoralEventHorizon.]]



* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape. Almost all of them end with her dying tragically, [[FateWorseThanDeath and the ones that don't...]]]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler: See TheManyDeathsOfYou, above.]]

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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape. Almost all of them end with her dying tragically, [[FateWorseThanDeath and the ones that don't...]]]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler: See TheManyDeathsOfYou, AllTheMyriadWays, above.]]



* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Masque pulls this on Giovanni, cementing himself as TheStarscream and the story's BigBad.]]

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Masque pulls this on Giovanni, cementing himself as TheStarscream and the story's BigBad.]]]]
** [[spoiler:It's less "YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness" and more "[[HighOctaneNightmareFuel You Have Outlived Your Capacity To Amuse Me.]]"]]
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** LawfulNeutral: Ruby starts out as this but eventually mellows into LawfulGood through BreakTheHaughty. [[spoiler: Sabrina]] is this at first and even has shades of LawfulEvil [[spoiler:thanks to MoreThanMindControl]] but [[IGotBetter she gets better]] and is LawfulGood by the end.

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** LawfulNeutral: Ruby starts out as this but eventually mellows into LawfulGood through BreakTheHaughty. [[spoiler: Sabrina]] is this at first and even has shades of LawfulEvil [[spoiler:thanks thanks to MoreThanMindControl]] MoreThanMindControl but [[IGotBetter she gets better]] and is LawfulGood by the end.
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** LawfulNeutral: Ruby starts out as this but eventually mellows into LawfulGood through BreakTheHaughty. [[spoiler: Sabrina]] is this at first and even has shades of LawfulEvil thanks to MoreThanMindControl but [[IGotBetter she gets better]] and is LawfulGood by the end.

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** LawfulNeutral: Ruby starts out as this but eventually mellows into LawfulGood through BreakTheHaughty. [[spoiler: Sabrina]] is this at first and even has shades of LawfulEvil thanks [[spoiler:thanks to MoreThanMindControl MoreThanMindControl]] but [[IGotBetter she gets better]] and is LawfulGood by the end.
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* CharacterAlignment: Various characters run the whole gamut.
** LawfulGood: Blaine, Erika, and presumably most other Gym Leaders naturally fall into this. Ruby and [[spoiler: Sabrina]] start off as LawfulNeutral but become LawfulGood through CharacterDevelopment. [[spoiler: Rico]] is also LawfulGood.
** NeutralGood: Missy, and indeed most of Dan's pokemon, with the exception of Ruby who is LawfulGood and Nightshade who is borderline ChaoticGood. Dan is also NeutralGood though he borders on StupidGood sometimes.
** ChaoticGood: Nightshade straddles the fence between this and NeutralGood. He doesn't actively buck authority but has no compunction against fighting dirty (''how'' many times did he use the "spores in their eyes" trick?) and mostly cares about achieving Good ends in his own fashion than following the orders of a trainer.
** LawfulNeutral: Ruby starts out as this but eventually mellows into LawfulGood through BreakTheHaughty. [[spoiler: Sabrina]] is this at first and even has shades of LawfulEvil thanks to MoreThanMindControl but [[IGotBetter she gets better]] and is LawfulGood by the end.
** TrueNeutral: Various minor characters, best exemplified in the cowardly one-shot character imprisoned with Dan whose top priority is his own safety.
** ChaoticNeutral: Probably the only alignment not to be represented.
** LawfulEvil: Giovanni, Rico, and indeed most members of Team Rocket. [[spoiler: Rico is actually a ReverseMole and LawfulGood.]]
** NeutralEvil: Most enemy pokemon that are not [[PunchClockVillain PunchClockVillains]]. [[AxeCrazy The Scyther]] is this, as it takes great enjoyment in violence and is prone to blind rages but still worships Masque and follows his orders.
** ChaoticEvil: Masque, so much so its not even funny. Hell, the guy's ''stated goal'' is [[spoiler: to wreck up the established order and ruin as many lives as possible because he finds it amusing.]]


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* FiveManBand: Dan's Pokemon.
** TheHero: Missy, naturally.
** TheLancer: Ruby, of the [[TheRival rival]] variant.
** TheBigGuy: Armor. Nemo may also fit here in that he has the mannerisms of a [[TheChick Chick]] but is a wrecking ball in battle.
** TheSmartGuy: Nightshade.
** TheChick: Artemis. Nemo is a bizarre mix of TheBigGuy and this.


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* LesYay: An incredible amount between Sabrina and Erika. There's also some [[TheRival Rival-fueled]] FoeYay between Missy and Ruby.
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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape--and almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]

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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape--and almost MindRape. Almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]tragically, [[FateWorseThanDeath and the ones that don't...]]]]
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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 19 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of the Pokemon world over a fourteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing the impact and effectiveness of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]

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* ArchEnemy: Near the end of the fanfic, [[AxeCrazy the Scyther]] tends to regard Missy as his. It's unclear whether she returns the "favor".



* GuileHero: Missy herself. All of her defeats over the Scyther (and a good deal of her other victory's as well) basically revolve around exploiting or tricking an opponent into doing themselves in. Of course, given that she's not actually a pokemon, this is probably her best option in taking on the world.



* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the penultimate chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape--and almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]

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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the penultimate third-to-last chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken in a MindRape--and almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]]]
* MindRape: [[spoiler: See TheManyDeathsOfYou, above.]]
* MindScrew: In his little weekly tidbits for the sequel, WordOfGod has generally presented information that, if vague, is still comprehensible enough. And then week seven gives us [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/34785202/#comments this]]. Bwuh?
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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 20 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of the Pokemon world over a fourteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing the impact and effectiveness of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]

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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 20 19 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of the Pokemon world over a fourteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing the impact and effectiveness of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]



** JerkassFacade: [[spoiler: Rico plays this so well - including actually ''capturing'' Missy in a PokeBall when he learns Dan doesn't own her - that it was quite a shock to learn he was actually a mole in Team Rocket and a fairly decent guy. He later apologised for his actions towards Dan]].
** Until BreakTheHaughty kicks in
* LovableCoward: Nemo. [[spoiler: Subverted in that he shows signs of great courage when he needs to, and along with Missy, has the best [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments]] throughout the story.
* LikeASonToMe: Blaine says this word-for-word to Dan - he allows him to keep searching for a way hope because he doesn't want to "deprive another father of a son", but assures Dan that he's welcome to stay on Cinnebar Island if he never finds a way back home. Dan is notably touched by the gesture.

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** Until BreakTheHaughty kicks in, anyways...
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JerkassFacade: [[spoiler: Rico plays this so well - including actually ''capturing'' Missy in a PokeBall when he learns Dan doesn't own her - that it was quite a shock to learn he was actually a mole in Team Rocket and a fairly decent guy. He later apologised for his actions towards Dan]].
** Until BreakTheHaughty kicks in
* LovableCoward: Nemo. [[spoiler: Subverted in that he shows signs of great courage when he needs to, and along with Missy, has the best [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments]] throughout the story.
story.]]
* LikeASonToMe: Blaine says this word-for-word to Dan - he allows him to keep searching for a way hope home because he doesn't want to "deprive another father of a son", but assures Dan that he's welcome to stay on Cinnebar Cinnabar Island if he never finds a way back home. Dan is notably touched by the gesture.



* NoHoldBarredBeatdown: Dan delivers one [[spoiler: when Rico has captured Missy - he only relents when Rico gives him the PokeBall]].

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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]]

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This fanfic is completed, the final chapters posted on May 26, 2010. [[http://deeman45.deviantart.com/journal/33636764/ A sequel was just announced.]] WordOfGod is tight-lipped about the story involved, but it is confirmed to be set 20 years after the events of the first story. He is also currently posting weekly updates about 'elements' of the Pokemon world over a fourteen-week period, which are likely to play a major role. He also revealed that [[spoiler: he will not be resurrecting Masque for fear of diminishing the impact and effectiveness of the character, but that Masque's 'legacy' may not be quite as dead ...]]



* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants to create chaos and slaughter people indiscriminately ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] also counts. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].

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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants to create chaos and slaughter people indiscriminately ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] may also counts.count. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].



* TheDitz: Artemis.



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Giovanni has a strong interest in human culture as seen [[spoiler: when he criticises the heroes for damaging the ruins underneath Saffron City. He also seems to show horror when he finally glimpses the true depths of Masque's madness, right before Masque murders him]].



** [[spoiler: Said Scyther has his scythe cracked and broken in battle with Missy. He's initially angry about this, but later comes to appreciate it for making him more unique, ''and'' for making the scythe sharper and deadlier as a result]].



* {{Jerkass}}: ''[[MostTriumphantExample Ruby]].'' What a bitch.

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* {{Jerkass}}: ''[[MostTriumphantExample Ruby]].'' What [[spoiler: HoistByHisOwnPetard: Masque is slaughtered by his own loyal Scyther while it's in a bitch.worked-up frenzy courtesy of Missy, and when he meets Death himself, he is terrified to see himself for the monster he always was]].



* {{Jerkass}}: ''[[MostTriumphantExample Ruby]].'' What a bitch.
** JerkassFacade: [[spoiler: Rico plays this so well - including actually ''capturing'' Missy in a PokeBall when he learns Dan doesn't own her - that it was quite a shock to learn he was actually a mole in Team Rocket and a fairly decent guy. He later apologised for his actions towards Dan]].
** Until BreakTheHaughty kicks in
* LovableCoward: Nemo. [[spoiler: Subverted in that he shows signs of great courage when he needs to, and along with Missy, has the best [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments]] throughout the story.
* LikeASonToMe: Blaine says this word-for-word to Dan - he allows him to keep searching for a way hope because he doesn't want to "deprive another father of a son", but assures Dan that he's welcome to stay on Cinnebar Island if he never finds a way back home. Dan is notably touched by the gesture.



* {{Nakama}}: Dan's other Pokemon become this for Missy. It's a {{Crowning Moment of Heartwarming}} when all of them, even Ruby, strive to bring her out of her {{Heroic BSOD}}. It becomes even more moving when you realise that they sacrificed their homeworld, their own sense of normalcy, and their chances of finding potential mates and having children in order to follow Dan and Missy back home, even when they don't need to. All they need is a cheesy speech

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* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler: Sabrina is shown to have deep insecurities regarding herself and her friendship with Erika, which Team Rocket exploits to take control of her. [[IGotBetter She gets better]], fortunately]].
* {{Nakama}}: Dan's other Pokemon become this for Missy. It's a {{Crowning Moment of Heartwarming}} when all of them, even Ruby, strive to bring her out of her {{Heroic BSOD}}. It becomes even more moving when you realise that they sacrificed their homeworld, their own sense of normalcy, and their chances of finding potential mates and having children in order to follow Dan and Missy back home, even when they don't need to. All they need now is a cheesy speechspeech.
* NiceGuy: Armor has a bit of a temper, but when he's calm he's the most level-headed member of Dan's team and one of the best friends you can have. ''Beautifully'' ironic, considering he's a Muk and one of the least-liked Pokemon species.
* NoHoldBarredBeatdown: Dan delivers one [[spoiler: when Rico has captured Missy - he only relents when Rico gives him the PokeBall]].

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* AxeCrazy: The Scyther is this to a tee.



* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants to create chaos ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] also counts. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].

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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, it turns out, just wants to create chaos and slaughter people indiscriminately ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] also counts. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of Missy]].Missy]].
** What about [[spoiler: the Aerodactyl? If I remember correctly, Masque didn't explicitly tell it to go kill all the children in that school; it came up with that idea ''all on its own.'']] Also, YourMileageMayVary regarding [[spoiler:the Scyther]]. He at least has one redeeming element; [[spoiler:he seems genuinely attached and loyal to Masque and desperately wants his approval.]]



* EnsembleDarkhorse: Masque, so much that [[spoiler: when the author announced a sequel, some fans were clamouring for him to return despite being killed off at the end]].
* EvillyAffable: Masque is so eloquent, melodramatic, and occaisionally downright ''funny'' its easy to forget that he's a completely unsympathetic, hateful bastard.

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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Masque, so much that [[spoiler: when the author announced a sequel, some fans were clamouring for him to return despite him being a horrible CompleteMonster who was killed off at the end]].
* EvillyAffable: Masque is so eloquent, melodramatic, and occaisionally occasionally downright ''funny'' its easy to forget that he's a completely unsympathetic, hateful bastard.bastard. [[spoiler: At least until the final chapters, when he [[MoralEventHorizon shows his]] [[CompleteMonster true colors.]]]]
* FridgeBrilliance: [[spoiler: One of the major themes of the story is identity, particularly in the form of Missy's attempts to return to normal and come to grips with her new form as a Pokemon. What better BigBad than Masque, a man who not only brainwashes Pokemon (thus taking away their individuality and identities) but also literally hides behind his own mask the entire story?]]



* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the penultimate chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken--and almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]

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* TheManyDeathsOfYou: [[spoiler:At the end of the penultimate chapter, Missy is shown visions of the various paths her life might have taken--and taken in a MindRape--and almost all of them end with her dying tragically.]]


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* RuleOfSymbolism: Is Masque--with his strange speech, strange mannerisms, and even stranger dress--completely at odds with the Pokemon world as we see it? Yeah. Why do we accept his presence in the story so readily? Well...see FridgeBrilliance, above.

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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Missy ends up going through a lot of crap throughout the entire story. [[spoiler: It's not until the very end that the author finally allows her to [[EarnYourHappyEnding Earn That Happy Ending]]]].



* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, a surprising effective example of when this blends well with {{Evilly Affable}}]].

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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Masque, a surprising effective example it turns out, just wants to create chaos ForTheEvulz. His [[AxeCrazy Scyther]] also counts. The Hypno might also qualify, considering his MindRape of when this blends well with {{Evilly Affable}}]].Missy]].


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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Masque, so much that [[spoiler: when the author announced a sequel, some fans were clamouring for him to return despite being killed off at the end]].


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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Masque]] crossed this ''hard'' when he [[spoiler: blackmailed Luke into creating technology that would allow him to traverse worlds and create chaos for the sake of it. Arguably, he's already crossed the line when he sent his brainwashed Pokemon to slaughter innocent people in Dan and Missy's hometown indiscriminately]].
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** It helps, of course, that the story was hugely inspired by Pokemon Special, the {{Darker And Edgier}} canon counterpart of both the Tv Series AND the games.

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** It helps, of course, that the story was hugely inspired by Pokemon Special, PokemonSpecial, the {{Darker And Edgier}} canon counterpart of both the Tv Series AND the games.

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