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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:Twilight plans to become immortal after instituting her new world order, simply because ''she's afraid her successors won't use the same methods.'']]
* FromBadToWorse: Thought Twilight just wanted to isolate the elements from her friends by breaking their spirits, right? Well, [[spoiler:turns out she won't be finished until she's wiped out every single organism without the proper genetic traits for harmony.]]
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* NecessarilyEvil: Twilight genuinely believes that [[spoiler:killing her friends and extracting their Elements from them will destroy chaos and allow harmony to reign]].
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: [[spoiler:Twilight. After she figures out what the genetic component for the Elements of Harmony is, her plan is to commit total genocide on anything without those genes. ''On a universal level.'']]
* NecessarilyEvil: Twilight genuinely believes that [[spoiler:killing herfriends and friends, extracting their Elements from them, and killing off everything without the potential to exhibit them will destroy chaos and allow harmony to reign]].
* NecessarilyEvil: Twilight genuinely believes that [[spoiler:killing her
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* {{Gorn}}: The whole ENTIRE fanfic up to its current point (Chapter 9 currently) - in a very scientific matter.
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* {{Gorn}}: The whole Quite a bit of the ENTIRE fanfic up to its current point (Chapter 9 10 currently) - in a very scientific matter.matter. The gore always has a purpose in context however, and the meticulousness of it just makes things worse.
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* TwoPlusTortureMakesFive: Twilight does this to [[spoiler:Applejack]]. Complete with 1984-esque ElectricTorture.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: Possibly to The experiments of Twilight Sparkle. Albeit a much better written one
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** This happens to Apple Bloom as well, right before she discovers that [[spoiler: Applejack is missing]].
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos? What does it take to keep harmony secure?
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of representing the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos? What does it take to keep harmony secure?
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Research, [[ColdBloodedTorture procedures from]] [[MindRape the pits of Tartarus]], and a "harmonious plan" that [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans promises to bring about a new world]], that's what.
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* '''[[GrimDark GRIMDARK AS TARTARUS]]'''.
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* '''[[GrimDark '''''[[GrimDark GRIMDARK AS TARTARUS]]'''.TARTARUS]]'''''.
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* HopeSpot: Rainbow Dash has one after Twilight finishes using a machine to briefly electrocute her .[[spoiler:Only for Twilight to reveal she was testing it to make sure it can administer jolts of electricity to Dash's brain properly]].
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* HopeSpot: Rainbow Dash has one after Twilight finishes using a machine to briefly electrocute her .her. [[spoiler:Only for Twilight to reveal she was testing it to make sure it can administer jolts of electricity to Dash's brain properly]].
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos? What does it take to keep harmony around?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony and protect the future, and how will the fate of her friends play into it
They'll be put through meticulous scientific procedures in order to bring about her harmonious plan, that's what.
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony and protect the future, and how will the fate of her friends play into it
They'll be put through meticulous scientific procedures in order to bring about her harmonious plan, that's what.
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos? What does it take to keep harmony around?
secure?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony and protect the future, and how will the fate of her friends play intoit
They'll be put through meticulous scientificit?
Research, [[ColdBloodedTorture proceduresin order from]] [[MindRape the pits of Tartarus]], and a "harmonious plan" that [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans promises to bring about her harmonious plan, a new world]], that's what.
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony and protect the future, and how will the fate of her friends play into
They'll be put through meticulous scientific
Research, [[ColdBloodedTorture procedures
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* BreakTheCutie: WordOfGod says that Fluttershy is going to get the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also, for a more meta reason, because Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* BreakTheCutie: WordOfGod says that Fluttershy is going to get gets the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also, for a more meta reason, because Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* TheConscience: Twilight's manifests as another version of herself,who retains Twilight's normal appearence despite the MadnessMakeover and SanitySlippage that the real Twilight progressively goes through, attempting (and failing) to act as a MoralityChain
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* TheConscience: Rather than being a specific other character that is this in a narrative sense, Twilight's ''literal'' conscience manifests as another version of herself,who herself, who retains Twilight's normal appearence despite the MadnessMakeover and SanitySlippage that the real Twilight progressively goes through, attempting (and failing) to act as a MoralityChain
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* ShoutOut: During Rainbow Dash's {{Mind Rape}} torture, [[spoiler: the story slightly mentions both Rainbow Factory and Cupcakes, two other well-known gorefics. While Cupcakes is only slightly alluded to with Pinkie in one of Rainbow's MindRape visions threatening to hack her wings off, the Rainbow Factory mention is quite blatant... and it makes everything much worse]].
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* ShoutOut: During Rainbow Dash's {{Mind Rape}} torture, [[spoiler: the story slightly mentions both Rainbow Factory ''FanFic/RainbowFactory'' and Cupcakes, ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', two other well-known gorefics. While Cupcakes is only slightly alluded to with Pinkie in one of Rainbow's MindRape visions threatening to hack her wings off, the Rainbow Factory mention is quite blatant... and it makes everything much worse]].
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* MadScientist: Twilight Sparkle, to the extent of [[spoiler:experimenting on her friends to extract their Elements]]. And it's implied with her talk of purity that her plan goes ''[[ItGotWorse beyond that]]''.
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* MadScientist: Twilight Sparkle, to the extent of [[spoiler:experimenting on her friends to extract their Elements]]. And it's implied with her talk of purity that her plan goes ''[[ItGotWorse beyond that]]''.''beyond that''.
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony in Equestria and protect the future, and what will become of her friends in the process?
They'll be put through meticulous scientific procedures from Tartarus, that's what.
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony in Equestria and protect the future, and what will become of her friends in the process?
They'll be put through meticulous scientific procedures from Tartarus, that's what.
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of chaos?
chaos? What does it take to keep harmony around?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserveharmony in Equestria harmony and protect the future, and what how will become the fate of her friends in the process?
play into it
They'll be put through meticulous scientific proceduresfrom Tartarus, in order to bring about her harmonious plan, that's what.
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve
They'll be put through meticulous scientific procedures
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* ForScience: Twilight uses this to justify what she's doing,claiming her experiments are necessary to strengthen Equestria's defense mechanism of friendship.
* FreudianExcuse: Rainbow Dash is the most evident example after Twilight uses mental manipulation on her to [[spoiler: rewrite her memories and destroy any sense of loyalty]].
* FreudianExcuse: Rainbow Dash is the most evident example after Twilight uses mental manipulation on her to [[spoiler: rewrite her memories and destroy any sense of loyalty]].
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* ForScience: Twilight uses this to justify what she's doing,claiming doing, claiming her experiments are necessary to strengthen Equestria's defense mechanism of friendship.
friendship and harmony.
* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: RainbowDash Dash]] is the most evident example after example. After Twilight uses mental manipulation on her to [[spoiler: rewrite her memories and destroy any sense of loyalty]]. loyalty, and she dies soon after]], she swears to get revenge on Twilight by getting her to die and burn in [[{{Hell}} Tartarus]] for all eternity.
* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: Rainbow
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* HopeSpot: Rainbow Dash has one after Twilight finishes using a machine to electrocute her.[[spoiler:Only for Twilight to reveal she was testing it to make sure it can administer jolts of electricity to Dash's brain properly]].
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* MadScientist: Twilight Sparkle, to the extent of [[spoiler:experimenting on her friends to extract their Elements.]]
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* NecessaryEvil: Twilight genuinely believes that [[spoiler:killing her friends and extracting their elements from them will destroy chaos and allow harmony to reign]].
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* VillainProtagonist: Twilight, obviously. [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] can also count as this.
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* WouldHurtAChild:Two of the characters that have been killed by Twilight have been [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle and Spike.]] Not because they were essential to Twilight's plan,But because Twilight thought [[HeKnowsTooMuch they posed a potential threat to her.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild:Two of the characters that have been killed by Twilight have been [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle and Spike.]] Not because they were essential to Twilight's plan,But plan, but because Twilight thought [[HeKnowsTooMuch they posed a potential threat to her.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Two of Twilight's victims have been[[spoiler:Sweetie Belle and Spike.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Two WouldHurtAChild:Two of the characters that have been killed by Twilight have been [[spoiler:Sweetie Belle and Spike.]] Not because they were essential to Twilight's victims have been[[spoiler:Sweetie Belle and Spike.plan,But because Twilight thought [[HeKnowsTooMuch they posed a potential threat to her.]]
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* EvilCounterpart: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Twilight, the VillainProtagonist, is introduced first, while her [[TheConscience mirror-image conscience]] begins to show up around Chapter 4, trying to get her to see the error of her ways.
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* EyeScream: When Twilight tortures [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle and then brainwashes Rarity into killing the little filly.]] Fluttershy gets a hot plate pressed against her eye as part of the procedure to extract her Element.
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* EyeScream: When Twilight tortures [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle and then brainwashes Rarity into killing the little filly.]] Fluttershy also gets [[spoiler: a hot plate pressed against her eye eye]] as part of the procedure to extract her Element.
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* ElectricTorture: Used on [[spoiler: Applejack]] as a form of conditioning to [[spoiler: make her lie and thus lose her Element]].It also gets used on[[spoiler:Rainbow Dash earlier in the story as a method of shattering her loyalty.]]
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* ElectricTorture: Used on [[spoiler: Applejack]] as a form of conditioning to [[spoiler: make her lie and thus lose her Element]].It also gets used on[[spoiler:Rainbow briefly on [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash earlier in the story as a method of shattering her loyalty.]]
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* PlayingWithSyringes: Twilight Sparkle, and each of them does something completely different.
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* PlayingWithSyringes: Twilight Sparkle, and each of them does something completely different.
* RedOniBlueOni: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is the red to Twilight's blue, though the character alignment is [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] with Twilight being the more villainous of the two.
* RedOniBlueOni: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is the red to Twilight's blue, though the character alignment is [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] with Twilight being the more villainous of the two.
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* VillainProtagonist: Twilight.Twilight, obviously. [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] can also count as this.
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* ForScience: Twilight uses this to justify what she's doing and to explain her actions.
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* ForScience: Twilight uses this to justify what she's doing and to explain doing,claiming her actions. experiments are necessary to strengthen Equestria's defense mechanism of friendship.
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* ElectricTorture: Used on [[spoiler: Applejack]] as a form of conditioning to [[spoiler: make her lie and thus lose her Element]].
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* AxeCrazy: Twilight Sparkle. [[spoiler: And Rainbow Dash after her MindRape.]]
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* AxeCrazy: AxCrazy: Twilight Sparkle. [[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And Rainbow Dash after her MindRape.]]
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* [[BigShutUp Big]] "'''''[[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]'''''": Twilight shouts this at her conscience-self after the insistence that what she's doing is wrong.
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* [[BigShutUp Big]] "'''''[[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]'''''": Twilight shouts this at [[IgnoredEpiphany her conscience-self conscience-self]] after the insistence that what she's doing is wrong.
* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Twilight herself betrays all of her friends, one by one.
* IgnoredEpiphany: Twilight ignores her conscience after she starts her plans of taking the Elements.
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Started on July 25, 2012, by Shadowed Rainbow, Pages of Harmony is a grimdark fanfic and contains extremely graphic content. The story itself can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5882/pages-of-harmony here ]], a reading is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWzw-htT_KY here]], and a short movie trailer can also be found [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iIw8QmE8pr8 here ]]. But BE WARNED you'd better know what you're getting into.
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Started on July 25, 2012, by Shadowed Rainbow, Pages of Harmony is a grimdark MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic and contains extremely graphic content. The story itself can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5882/pages-of-harmony here ]], a reading is [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWzw-htT_KY here]], and a short movie trailer can also be found [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iIw8QmE8pr8 here ]]. But BE WARNED you'd better know what you're getting into.
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* BadDreams: Twilight begins suffering from them after killing[[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]]
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* BadDreams: Twilight begins suffering from them after killing[[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]] killing [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]], beginning the cycle of communicating with her other victims as they're killed.
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** In a non-MLP example, Pinkie's gesture language and Rainbow Dash's interpretation of it is an allusion to Literature/HarounAndTheSeaOfStories.
* ShownTheirWork: The amount of research put into this fic is astonishing,To elaborate it describes actual scientific procedures and forms of torture among other things.
* ShownTheirWork: The amount of research put into this fic is astonishing,To elaborate it describes actual scientific procedures and forms of torture among other things.
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** In a non-MLP example, Pinkie's gesture language and Rainbow Dash's interpretation of it is an allusion reference to Literature/HarounAndTheSeaOfStories.
Literature/HarounAndTheSeaOfStories, when Mudra the Shadow Warrior communicates to the Storyteller Rashid in this manner.
* ShownTheirWork: The amount of research put into this fic isastonishing,To astonishing. To elaborate it describes actual scientific procedures and forms of torture torture, among other things.
* ShownTheirWork: The amount of research put into this fic is
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* EyeScream: When Twilight tortures [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle and then brainwashes Rarity into killing the little filly.]] Fluttershy gets a hot plate pressed against her eye as part of her Element extraction process.
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* EyeScream: When Twilight tortures [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle and then brainwashes Rarity into killing the little filly.]] ]] Fluttershy gets a hot plate pressed against her eye as part of the procedure to extract her Element extraction process. Element.
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* AxeCrazy: Twilight Sparkle. [[spoiler: And Rainbow Dash after her MindRape.]]
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* BadDreams: Twilight begins suffering from them after killing[[spoiler:Rainbow Dash.]]
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of choas?
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of choas?
chaos?
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered: Where did the Elements come from? Who created them and for what purpose. and what should happen if the natures of the Elements are not passed on? And what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers, But how far will she go to preserve harmony in Equestria and protect the future, and what will become of her friends in the process?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and their bearers, But how far will she go to preserve harmony in Equestria and protect the future, and what will become of her friends in the process?
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The Elements of Harmony. For generations these ancient artifacts have served as the physical manifestations of Equestria's most important principles: Loyalty, honesty, generosity, kindness, laughter, and the magic of friendship itself. However, only specific ponies are capable of harnessing the Elements' power and little information on them exists in Equestrian literature. And many questions remain unanswered: Where did the Elements come from? Who created them and for what purpose. and what should happen if the natures of the Elements are not passed on? And unanswered, but there is one above all else: what qualities, spiritual or biological, are needed to allow a pony to control the artifacts of the Elements that protect the world?
world, and thus assure that the world is not destroyed by the seeds of choas?
Twilight Sparkle doesn't know, but she intends to find out by creating her own research on the Elements and theirbearers, bearers in order to achieve her own WellIntentionedExtremist goals. But how far will she go to preserve harmony in Equestria and protect the future, and what will become of her friends in the process?
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* FlayingAlive: Done to [[spoiler: Spike]].
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* FlayingAlive: Done to each one of the other Element-bearers in the form of scalping, but done in a more complete sense to [[spoiler: Spike]].
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* BreakTheCutie: {{WordOfGod}} says that Fluttershy is going to get the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also she knows that Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* BreakTheCutie: {{WordOfGod}} WordOfGod says that Fluttershy is going to get the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also she knows that Also, for a more meta reason, because Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].
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* BreakTheCutie: {{WordOfGod}} says that Fluttershy is going to get the worst of Twilight's experiments because her Element is the hardest to break. Also she knows that Fluttershy getting hurt is generally considered [[LogicalWeakness the fandom's collective weakness]].