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* SongFic: Every chapter ends with a two-line stanza loosely related to the chapter's events.[[hottip:*:Each comes from a song with the same title: "Antidote".]]
* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve.[[hottip:*:In fact, note that the word "Ivysaur" never appears on this page outside of this hottip, even when referring to post-evolution events.]] [[spoiler:The one given name is not looked upon favorably.]]
* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve.[[hottip:*:In fact, note that the word "Ivysaur" never appears on this page outside of this hottip, even when referring to post-evolution events.]] [[spoiler:The one given name is not looked upon favorably.]]
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* SongFic: Every chapter ends with a two-line stanza loosely related to the chapter's events.[[hottip:*:Each [[note]]Each comes from a song with the same title: "Antidote".]]
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* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve.[[hottip:*:In [[note]]In fact, note that the word "Ivysaur" never appears elsewhere on this page outside of this hottip, page, even when referring to post-evolution events.]] [[/note]] [[spoiler:The one given name is not looked upon favorably.]]
* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve.
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* [[spoiler:DemonicPossession of Marty]]
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* [[spoiler:DemonicPossession of Marty]][[spoiler:DemonicPossession: Of Marty.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the whole concept of {{Mon}}s. Telling a story with Pokemon requires them to have humanlike intelligence and character. However, the idea of a human trainer only makes sense if the Mons aren't intelligent. This contradiction drives most of the story.
* EasyAmnesia: Marty even forgot his goal. Unusually for this trope, Marty has difficulty forming new memories as well and can't really remember things unless something reminds him.
* EasyAmnesia: Marty even forgot his goal. Unusually for this trope, Marty has difficulty forming new memories as well and can't really remember things unless something reminds him.
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the whole concept of {{Mon}}s. Telling a story with Pokemon requires them to have humanlike [[AnthropomorphicShift human-like intelligence and character. characteristics]]. However, the idea of a human trainer only makes sense if the Mons aren't intelligent.''aren't'' so intelligent... This contradiction drives most of the story.
* EasyAmnesia: Marty even forgot his goal. Unusually for thistrope, story, Marty has difficulty forming new memories as well and can't really remember things unless something else reminds him.
* EasyAmnesia: Marty even forgot his goal. Unusually for this
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* [[spoiler:DemonicPossession]][[spoiler:DemonicPossession of Marty]]
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* [=~Screw This, I'm Outta Here~=]: [[spoiler:Zubat eventually abandons the group.]]
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* [=~Screw This, I'm Outta Here~=]: ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Zubat eventually abandons the group.]]
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* ItGotWorse: At first it looks like this might play out like a typical underdog story and he'll still be able to reach his goal. [[spoiler:Then Marty loses his Pokedex, and all of its knowledge]]. A setback, but with determination they can still make it right? [[spoiler:Then it becomes clear that his memory is deteriorating, and it's already bad enough that he forgets things within thirty seconds]]. At that point all hope of success is out the window.
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* ItGotWorse: At first it looks like this might play out like a typical underdog story and he'll still be able to reach his goal. [[spoiler:Then Marty loses his Pokedex, and all of its knowledge]]. A setback, but with determination they can still make it right? [[spoiler:Then it becomes clear that his memory is deteriorating, and it's already bad enough that he forgets things within thirty seconds]]. At that point all hope of success is out the window.It doesn't really stop getting worse from there, either.
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* ItGotWorse: At first it looks like this might play out like a typical underdog story and he'll still be able to reach his goal. [[spoiler:Then Marty loses his Pokedex, and all of its knowledge]]. A setback, but with determination they can still make it right? [[spoiler:Then it becomes clear that his memory is deteriorating, and it's already bad enough that he forgets things within thirty seconds]]. At that point all hope of success is out the window.
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** Even among the fanbase, it seems. [[spoiler:Consider that the word "Ivysaur" doesn't appear on this page outside of this sentence, even when referring to events post-evolution.]]
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Heh.
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* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve. [[spoiler:The one given name is not looked upon favorably.]]
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* SpeciesSurname: Every Pokemon is referred to by their species. This causes confusion, especially when some of them evolve. [[hottip:*:In fact, note that the word "Ivysaur" never appears on this page outside of this hottip, even when referring to post-evolution events.]] [[spoiler:The one given name is not looked upon favorably.]]
** Even among the fanbase, it seems. [[spoiler:Consider that the word "Ivysaur" doesn't appear on this page outside of this sentence, even when referring to events post-evolution.]]
** Even among the fanbase, it seems. [[spoiler:Consider that the word "Ivysaur" doesn't appear on this page outside of this sentence, even when referring to events post-evolution.]]
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder: Bulbasaur was just tying to help Marty by sharing the Antidote, but it not only failed to work because he was human, it compounded the problem.]]
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder: Bulbasaur was just tying trying to help Marty by sharing the Antidote, but it not only failed to work because he was human, it compounded the problem.]]
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* FantasticRacism: Not really, but Bulbasaur's understandably finds it difficult to trust Beedrill. He also is wary of Poison-types.
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* FantasticRacism: Not really, but Bulbasaur's Bulbasaur understandably finds it difficult to trust Beedrill. He also is wary of Poison-types.
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** The beedrills in the beginning.
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** The beedrills Beedrill in the beginning.
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* FantasticRacism: Not really, but Bulbasaur's understandably finds it difficult to trust Beedrill. He also is wary of poison types.Poison-types.
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* HeroicBSOD: Bulbasaur's realization of his poison-type, and all of its implications, as he freezes up and [[OnceMoreWithClarity recalls memories from the rest of the story]].
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* HeroicBSOD: Bulbasaur's realization of his poison-type, Poison-type, and all of its implications, as he freezes up and [[OnceMoreWithClarity recalls memories from the rest of the story]].
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* TomatoInTheMirror: Bulbasaur did not realize he is part poison-type.
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* TomatoInTheMirror: Bulbasaur did not realize he is part poison-type.Poison-type.
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That was before the Beedrills came.
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That was before the Beedrills Beedrill came.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Bulbasaur assumes this about the Beedrill at first, leading to FantasticRacism. [[spoiler: Ulimately {{Subverted}} completely when the swarm's reasons for attacking are revealed. To say nothing of Beedrill's status as TheWoobie.]]
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Bulbasaur assumes this about the Beedrill at first, leading to FantasticRacism. [[spoiler: Ulimately {{Subverted}} Ultimately {{subverted}} completely when the swarm's reasons for attacking are revealed. To say nothing of Beedrill's status as TheWoobie.]]
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* CarnivoreConfusionCarnivoreConfusion: Most wild Pokémon eat other Pokémon to survive. The acts of training against wild Pokémon and hunting them for food are repeatedly compared. And then there's Ekans, [[spoiler:especially once Bulbasaur discovers that he has eaten at least one human.]]
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* SongFic: Every chapter ends with a two-line stanza loosely related to the chapter's events.[[hottip:*:And each comes from a song with the same title: "Antidote".]]
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* SongFic: Every chapter ends with a two-line stanza loosely related to the chapter's events.[[hottip:*:And each [[hottip:*:Each comes from a song with the same title: "Antidote".]]
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* ToBeAMaster: was Mary's goal, till he forgot it.
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* ToBeAMaster: was Mary's Was Marty's goal, till until he forgot it.
* TomatoInTheMirror: Bulbasaur did not realize he ispart-posion type.part poison-type.
* TomatoInTheMirror: Bulbasaur did not realize he is
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Author\'s elaboration: The antidote didn\'t poison him. The sting did that. The antidote merely added the suffocation/coughing/fainting problem.
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder: Bulbasaur was just tying to help Marty by sharing the Antidote, but it not only failed to work because he was human, it caused him to die.]]
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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Averted with, of all things, [[spoiler: antidotes. It was the ''Antidote'' that caused Marty's problems, not the beedrill sting.]]
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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Averted with, of all things, [[spoiler: antidotes. It was the ''Antidote'' that caused Marty's problems, not the beedrill sting.]]
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* TearJerker: So, ''so'' many.
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* [[spoiler: AccidentalMurder: Bulbasaur was just tying to help Marty by sharing the Antidote, but it not only failed to work because he was human, it caused him to die.]]
* EasyAmnesia: Marty even forgot his goal. Unusually for this trope, Marty has difficulty forming new memories as well and can't really remember things unless something reminds him.
* EverythingsWorseWithBees:
** The beedrills in the beginning.
** Subverted with the Beedrill who joins the group.
* FantasticRacism: Not really, but Bulbasaur's understandably finds it difficult to trust Beedrill. He also is wary of poison types.
** The beedrills in the beginning.
** Subverted with the Beedrill who joins the group.
* FantasticRacism: Not really, but Bulbasaur's understandably finds it difficult to trust Beedrill. He also is wary of poison types.
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* NoBiochemicalBarriers: Averted with, of all things, antidotes.[[spoiler: antidotes. It was the ''Antidote'' that caused Marty's problems, not the beedrill sting.]]
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* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: [[spoiler: Subverted. Ekans/Arbok is not as bad as he appears at first.]]
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* ToBeAMaster: was Mary's goal, till he forgot it.
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* DeconstructionFicDeconstructionFic: Of the whole concept of {{Mon}}s. Telling a story with Pokemon requires them to have humanlike intelligence and character. However, the idea of a human trainer only makes sense if the Mons aren't intelligent. This contradiction drives most of the story.
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Some tropes simply apply to this fic.
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* PoisonIsEvil: Type-wise, the main cast averts this, but the implications of using it and possible alternatives in battle are discussed frequently.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: {{Justified}} later on.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4390479/1/No_Antidote No Antidote]] is a 2008 ''[=~Pokémon~=]'' fanfic by {{Tropers/FalconPain}}.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4390479/1/No_Antidote No Antidote]] is a 2008 ''[=~Pokémon~=]'' ''{{Pokemon}}'' fanfic by {{Tropers/FalconPain}}.
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''"We're going to give it our all! No one will ever say that we gave up! Agreed?"''
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The only people who are going to see the super secret spoiler are the ones who edit this page.
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[[supersecretspoiler:And at what point he should be allowed to stop.]]
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Every Pokemon the group catches is at least partially Poison-type. This is never justified. One of them [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it later.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Every Pokemon the group catches is at least partially Poison-type. This is never justified. One of them [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it later.later, saying he thought they were going for a theme.
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[[spoiler:And at what point he should be allowed to stop.]]
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* DecoyProtaganist: [[spoiler: Marty]]
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* DecoyProtaganist: [[spoiler: [[spoiler:DecoyProtagonist: Marty]]
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* [[spoiler: RousseauWasRight: Every character remotely played up as evil or scary (with the possible exception of Ekans's first trainer and a few hungry predators) winds up being a good guy. There are ''no villains'' present.]]
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* [[spoiler: RousseauWasRight: Every character remotely played up as evil or scary (with the possible exception of Ekans's first trainer and a few hungry predators) winds up being a good guy. There are ''no villains'' ''[[NoAntagonist no villains]]'' present.]]