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* BreakingTheFourthWall: [[spoiler: In the last chapter, Rainblood actually learns that he is a fictional character created by [[Creator/MonicaGilbeyBieber a muggle named James Smith]].]]
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: [[spoiler: In the last chapter, Rainblood actually learns that he is a fictional character created by [[Creator/MonicaGilbeyBieber a muggle Muggle named James Smith]].]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: Beatrice, the Couture Kvlt saleswoman who also turns out to be a [[spoiler: Time Lord who will help Rainblood know who he is and who brought about his existence]].
* ChivalrousPervert: Rainblood. He shamelessly ogles beautiful metalhead women, but when he finds out that Cho Chang has been taken advantage of, he would do anything and everything to save her.
* ChivalrousPervert: Rainblood. He shamelessly ogles beautiful metalhead women, but when he finds out that Cho Chang has been taken advantage of, he would do anything and everything to save her.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Beatrice, the Couture Kvlt saleswoman who also turns out to be a [[spoiler: Time Lord Lord, who will help helps Rainblood know who he is and who brought about his existence]].
* ChivalrousPervert: Rainblood. He shamelessly ogles beautiful metalhead women, but when he finds out that Cho Chang has been taken advantage of, hewould do does anything and everything to save her.
* ChivalrousPervert: Rainblood. He shamelessly ogles beautiful metalhead women, but when he finds out that Cho Chang has been taken advantage of, he
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ''My Metal'' is definitely heavier in content and is more explicit than the original.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ''My Metal'' is definitely heavier in content and is more explicit than the original.
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* MinimalisticCoverArt: My Metal's cover is similar to that of Music/{{Metallica}}'s [[http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&biw=1366&bih=663&tbm=isch&tbnid=hYrF5xqLwyqYzM:&imgrefurl=http://www.marshallofrock.com/metallica-news-30th-birthday-shows-download-2012-plans-rihanna-samples-wherever-i-may-roam/&docid=1gFFMK4ggq--vM&imgurl=http://www.marshallofrock.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Metallica-Metallica-BlackAlbum1.jpg&w=320&h=320&ei=rozRTrL-NaGTiQLoiZDeCw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=173&vpy=168&dur=480&hovh=225&hovw=225&tx=95&ty=121&sig=117959524861203066345&page=1&tbnh=130&tbnw=130&start=0&ndsp=23&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:0 eponymous black album]].
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* MinimalisticCoverArt: My Metal's ''My Metal'''s cover is similar to that of Music/{{Metallica}}'s [[http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&biw=1366&bih=663&tbm=isch&tbnid=hYrF5xqLwyqYzM:&imgrefurl=http://www.marshallofrock.com/metallica-news-30th-birthday-shows-download-2012-plans-rihanna-samples-wherever-i-may-roam/&docid=1gFFMK4ggq--vM&imgurl=http://www.marshallofrock.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Metallica-Metallica-BlackAlbum1.jpg&w=320&h=320&ei=rozRTrL-NaGTiQLoiZDeCw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=173&vpy=168&dur=480&hovh=225&hovw=225&tx=95&ty=121&sig=117959524861203066345&page=1&tbnh=130&tbnw=130&start=0&ndsp=23&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:0 eponymous black album]].
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* SceneryPorn: The settings are also described quite vividly in-story.
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* SceneryPorn: The settings are also described quite vividly in-story.
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* WaxingLyrical: This quote from Gibbet (Willow), as an added explanation of how Gibbet would show up one chapter after Ignacïo confesses to Rainblood that he killed Gibbet. This is in reference to the scene in ''My Immortal'' where Willow is brought back to life without explanation.
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* WaxingLyrical: This quote from Gibbet (Willow), as an added explanation of how Gibbet would he could show up one chapter after Ignacïo confesses to Rainblood that he killed Gibbet. This is in reference to the scene in ''My Immortal'' where Willow is brought back to life without explanation.
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** Hilariously, Music/AvengedSevenfold is considered a poser (My Metal's equivalent of a prep) band in this fanfic.
** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse they're not a vampire, but they feels like one]] when Tom asked them how they drank all the blood of a lady in the movie theater. Just like Avenged Sevenfold, Falling in Reverse is also, hilariously, a poser band in this fanfic.
* WholePlotReference: Lampshaded by the [[spoiler: Unholy Tome of Unholiness, and is actually a plot device of My Metal itself.]]
** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse they're not a vampire, but they feels like one]] when Tom asked them how they drank all the blood of a lady in the movie theater. Just like Avenged Sevenfold, Falling in Reverse is also, hilariously, a poser band in this fanfic.
* WholePlotReference: Lampshaded by the [[spoiler: Unholy Tome of Unholiness, and is actually a plot device of My Metal itself.]]
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** Hilariously, Music/AvengedSevenfold is considered a poser (My Metal's (''My Metal'''s equivalent of a prep) band in this fanfic.
** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse they're not a vampire, but theyfeels feel like one]] when Tom asked asks them how they drank all the blood of a lady in the movie theater. Just like Avenged Sevenfold, Falling in Reverse is also, hilariously, a poser band in this fanfic.
* WholePlotReference: Lampshaded by the[[spoiler: Unholy [[spoiler:Unholy Tome of Unholiness, and is actually a plot device of My Metal ''My Metal'' itself.]]
** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse they're not a vampire, but they
* WholePlotReference: Lampshaded by the
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* ActorAllusion: [[Creator/RobertPattinson This]] is the [[Literature/{{Twilight}} reason]] why James chose Cho Chang to play the role of Draco in the remake.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Beatrice, the Couture Kvlt saleswoman who also turns out to be a [[spoiler: time lord who will help Rainblood know who he is and who brought about his existence]].
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* ChekhovsGunman: Beatrice, the Couture Kvlt saleswoman who also turns out to be a [[spoiler: time lord Time Lord who will help Rainblood know who he is and who brought about his existence]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: My Metal is definitely heavier in content and is more explicit than the original.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: My Metal ''My Metal'' is definitely heavier in content and is more explicit than the original.
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''My Metal'' is a HeavyMetal {{Parody}} of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' written by Creator/MonicaGilbeyBieber. It stars a Marty Stu named [[{{Music/Slayer}} Rainblood]] [[{{Music/Mayhem}} Öystein]] Cross [[HeavyMetalUmlaut Vülture]] [[Music/TheAgonist White]], and instead of the goffik sorrow in My Immortal, My Metal often references gore, heavy metal music, and tr00 kvlt awesomeness.
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''My Metal'' is a HeavyMetal {{Parody}} of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' written by Creator/MonicaGilbeyBieber. It stars a Marty Stu named [[{{Music/Slayer}} Rainblood]] [[{{Music/Mayhem}} Öystein]] Cross [[HeavyMetalUmlaut Vülture]] [[Music/TheAgonist White]], and instead of the goffik sorrow in My Immortal, My Metal of ''My Immortal'', ''My Metal'' often references gore, heavy metal music, and tr00 kvlt awesomeness.
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** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse he's not a vampire, but he feels like one]] when Tom asked him/her how s/he drank all the blood of a lady in the movie theater. Just like Avenged Sevenfold, Falling in Reverse is also, hilariously, a poser band in this fanfic.
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** Also, Rainblood/Chäntal mentions that [[Music/FallingInReverse he's they're not a vampire, but he they feels like one]] when Tom asked him/her them how s/he they drank all the blood of a lady in the movie theater. Just like Avenged Sevenfold, Falling in Reverse is also, hilariously, a poser band in this fanfic.
