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* CatchPhrase: As well as the ones from the original series, North has a habit of going "Jesus Christ on a unicycle!" Or substituting unicycle for another mode of transport.
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* AndCallHimGeorge: Caboose towards many pigeons.
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* MoodWhiplash: Occurs often. The backstories are notable for this, as they'll start with Church's part, which is often depressing and/or bloody, and end with Donut's, which is usually fluffy and cheerful. Wash lampshades the mood whiplash in a conversation with York, which started off about dancing and ended at the subject of York's dead wife.
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* PaedoHunt: Played with during a con in Tucker's backstory. In the con, they used the fact that Tucker looked much younger than he really was to set up a situation that made their target look like a pedophile, so they could blackmail him with the pictures.
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* SerialKiller: O'Malley. It's stated that he managed to keep killing for roughly twenty years before being caught.
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* WorldsSmallestViolin: Church does this in honor of Donut's 'most recent shitstorm.'
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* ForcefulKiss: O'Malley to Doc. [[spoiler: He also does this to Donut once, although he was hallucinating that he was Doc. That time, [[TongueTrauma it doesn't end well...]]]]
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Grif to Sister.
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Grif to Grif. [[spoiler:He was locked up because (with the help of Simmons) he killed someone who had hospitalized Sister.]]
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: O'Malley tends to get a lot of audience sympathy directed his way, despite being a mass-murdering raping psychopath.
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** When he was a kid, O'Malley had a [[ToyStory pink teddy who he named 'Dr. Strawberry.']]
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* FreudianExcuse: While some of the main characters, like Church, certainly had crappy childhoods which led them to become criminals, this is completely averted with O'Malley, who had a completely normal, happy childhood apart from the fact that he liked to kill animals.
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* GroinAttack: A very vicious, non-comedic example. [[spoiler:Grif and Simmons killed the guy who beat up Sister this way.]]
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* GroinAttack: A very vicious, non-comedic example. [[spoiler:Grif and Simmons killed the guy who beat up Sister this way.by cutting off his junk.]]
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: No-one is completely clean in this. But there's usually worse people out there.
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* BloodierAndGorier: Definitely more bloody than the source material, especially in later chapters.
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:The man Grif and Simmons killed wasn't quite dead when they buried him...]]
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:The man Grif and Simmons killed wasn't quite dead when they buried him...]]
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* GroinAttack: A very vicious, non-comedic example. [[spoiler:Grif and Simmons killed the guy who beat up Sister this way.]]
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* TongueTrauma: [[spoiler:O'Malley gets a chunk of his tongue bitten off by Donut.]]
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*** Drawing attention to the fact that Wash is [[spoiler: afraid of the dark]] is a sure way to get punched in the face.
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* DisguisedInDrag: Tucker has disguised himself as a girl more than once in the past, for conning purposes.
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* RecursiveCrossdressing: [[spoiler:C.T, who at one point ends up dressed in a very girly fashion, while still keeping Tucker convinced that she's really a guy.]]
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* ALadyOnEachArm: Occurred during a con that Tucker was apart of, although he was one of the 'ladies.'
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* DisappearedDad: Neither Grif nor Tucker knew their father.fathers. And Donut can't remember his biological one, instead being adopted by two mothers.
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** It is briefly mentioned that Church tried to hang himself at least once.
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* MummiesAtTheDinnerTable: Caboose keeps trying to catch live pigeons for pets and killing them in the process... and he ends up keeping the dead ones and talking to them.
** Averted with Caboose, as long as you don't sleep with more than one of his sisters. Like Tucker did.
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* NormaBates: Caboose keeps trying to catch live pigeons for pets and killing them in the process... and he ends up keeping the dead ones and talking to them.
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler: O'Malley clearly had this on his mind when he mistook Donut for Doc in a drug-induced haze. He was stopped by Donut biting a chunk of his tongue off.]]
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* HiredGuns: [[spoiler: Church worked as one for Delta for a few years. Also, Carolina and Wash were hired guns for the Director.]]
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* HiredGuns: [[spoiler: Church worked as one for Delta for a few years. Also, Carolina and Carolina, Wash and South were hired guns for the Director.]]
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* VillainousBreakdown: O'Malley has one after [[spoiler:Doc leaves the prison.]] It's the catalyst for a lot of screaming, wall-punching and bloody attacks.
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: O'Malley tends to get a lot of audience sympathy directed his way, despite being a mass-murdering raping psychopath.
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*** Drawing attention to the fact that Wash is [[spoiler: afraid of the dark]] is a sure way to get punched in the face.
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* BerserkButton: Quite a few. Considering most of the people in this fic are criminally insane, this isn't a surprise.
** Wash is probably one of the most spectacular examples (and he isn't even an inmate!) ''Existing'' is enough to push his buttons [[spoiler: especially if you are [[ButtMonkey Donut]]]]
** Wash is probably one of the most spectacular examples (and he isn't even an inmate!) ''Existing'' is enough to push his buttons [[spoiler: especially if you are [[ButtMonkey Donut]]]]
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**Doubles as a {{Crowning Moment Of Funny}}. There were icons!
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* INever: Occurs with prison alcohol jail-made pruno between the main six inmates.
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--> [[spoiler:'''Caboose:''' You will stay away from them. If you do hurt them again... you will not just fall over. Do you understand? I. Will. Kill. You.]]
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler:Church and Epsilon killed their father.Epsilon.]]
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* SlasherSmile: O'Malley, pretty much all the time. Caboose does this on occasion.
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* {{Fingore}} [[spoiler: Caboose breaks all of Miller's fingers, and Doc mangles them further through his incompetence at medicine.]]
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