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* {{Malaproper}}: Flavia "castigates" a minotaur.
** Also, she must "deduce" Cupid.
** Also, she must "deduce" Cupid.
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* {{Malaproper}}: Flavia "castigates" a minotaur.
**minotaur. Also, she must "deduce" Cupid.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: "It was Sick and wrong and you should never do this,ever!"
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: BreakingTheFourthWall:
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** "It was Sick and wrong and you should never do this,ever!"
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* HumanSacrifice: Attempted ([[spoiler: and eventually realised]]) several times, by the ''[[WhatTheHellHero protagonists]]'', in spite of the fact that [[Myth/ClassicalMythology hellenic religion]] strictly forbade human sacrifice (just take a look at what Zeus did to the people who tried it, like Lycaon).
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* HumanSacrifice: Attempted ([[spoiler: and eventually realised]]) several times, by the ''[[WhatTheHellHero protagonists]]'', in spite of the fact that [[Myth/ClassicalMythology hellenic Hellenic religion]] strictly forbade human sacrifice (just take a look at what Zeus did to the people who tried it, like Lycaon).
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* LukeIAmYourFather: Kronos is Flavia's father...sort of. [[InsaneTrollLogic Artemis's hatred for Kronos was so strong that it overflowed and Flavia was born.]]
** Since Artemis is the daughter of Zeus, the son of Kronos, Kronos is technically also Flavia's great-grandfather.
** Since Artemis is the daughter of Zeus, the son of Kronos, Kronos is technically also Flavia's great-grandfather.
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* LukeIAmYourFather: Kronos is Flavia's father...sort of. [[InsaneTrollLogic [[ThePowerOfHate Artemis's hatred for Kronos was so strong that it overflowed and Flavia was born.]]
**]] Since Artemis is the daughter of Zeus, the son of Kronos, Kronos is technically also Flavia's great-grandfather.
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* NeverTrustATitle: Chapter 57 is called "Death in the Courtroom." No one dies.
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* NeverTrustATitle: NeverTrustATitle:
** Chapter 57 is called "Death in the Courtroom." No one dies.
** Chapter 57 is called "Death in the Courtroom." No one dies.
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** "You fucker, I hate you."
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** "One simple word...DEATH"
** [[AWizardDidIt Because Hecate.]]
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* SpiritualSuccessor: To ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Cresent Stag disappears a few chapters after he shows up. More glaringly, Nico disappears after Chapter 24 and is never mentioned again.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: WhatHappenedToTheMouse:
** Cresent Stag disappears a few chapters after he shows up. More glaringly, Nico disappears after Chapter 24 and is never mentioned again.
** Cresent Stag disappears a few chapters after he shows up. More glaringly, Nico disappears after Chapter 24 and is never mentioned again.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Flavia kills Ivy for kissing Percy and later blows up a mall full of people...but it's okay because they're "preps."
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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
** Flavia kills Ivy for kissing Percy and later blows up a mall full of people...but it's okay because they're "preps."
** Flavia kills Ivy for kissing Percy and later blows up a mall full of people...but it's okay because they're "preps."
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* WritersCannotDoMath: "Albaster spoke teh most powerful 3 words in the world…. [[EpicFail "I do"]]
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* WritersCannotDoMath: "Albaster spoke teh most powerful 3 words in the world…. [[EpicFail "I do"]]do"
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* BalefulPolymorph: Annabeth gets turned into a "grape with no soul" for catching Mr. D. on a "child pr0n" site.
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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess,"]] found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess here]]. Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess,"]] Godess," found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess here]]. Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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-->-- [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9552184/22/Moon-Daughter Moon Daughter Chapter 22]]
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-->-- [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9552184/22/Moon-Daughter Moon Daughter Daughter, Chapter 22]]
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Aphrodite offers Flavia a spell that will kill Kronos, but Flavia refuses because Aphrodite is blonde and therefore a slut and untrustworthy.
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->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK]] [[YeOldeButcheredEnglish THOU!”]] She yelled.
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->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK]] [[YeOldeButcheredEnglish THOU!”]] “FUCK THOU!” She yelled.
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** Since Artemis is the daughter of Zeus, the son of Kronos, Kronos is technically also Flavia's [[IncestIsRelative great-grandfather]].
* MacGuffin: The Word of Death.
* MacGuffin: The Word of Death.
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** Since Artemis is the daughter of Zeus, the son of Kronos, Kronos is technically also Flavia's [[IncestIsRelative great-grandfather]].
*great-grandfather.
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* {{Patricide}}: Flavia does this to Kronos in Chapter 42.
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Flavia gets a white streak in her hair from Brittany bullying her.
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* SkunkStripe: Flavia gets a white streak in her hair from Brittany bullying her.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: [[spoiler:Nico]] is canonically gay, yet in this fanfic he is straight in order for the author to pair him with her OC. Though, to be fair, this story started slightly before ''House Of Hades'', and the revelation of his sexuality might very well be why he doesn't appear in later chapters.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: [[spoiler:Nico]] Nico is canonically gay, yet in this fanfic he is straight in order for the author to pair him with her OC.Flavia. Though, to be fair, this story started slightly before ''House Of Hades'', and the revelation of his sexuality might very well be why he doesn't appear in later chapters.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9552184/1/Moon-Daughter Moon Daughter]] is a SoBadItsGood ''Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4953061/xxMoonlitexx xxMoonlitexx]], otherwise known simply as Hanna. The first chapter was posted on August 1st, 2013, and the 72nd and final chapter was posted on November 20, 2014.
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed spork can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson ''Percy Jackson'' fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed spork can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of aGodess."]][[https://www.Godess,"]] found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess here]]. Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a
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** Flavia apparently thinks you lose your virginity by kissing. Also, Artemis is still a virgin after having Flavia.
*** This one is justified in cannon - Athena had many virgin births, being, y'know, a goddess. Of course, those were predicated on her falling in love with her child's father (see Annabeth, who was conceived this way), while Artemis seems to be both asexual and aromantic...
*** This one is justified in cannon - Athena had many virgin births, being, y'know, a goddess. Of course, those were predicated on her falling in love with her child's father (see Annabeth, who was conceived this way), while Artemis seems to be both asexual and aromantic...
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** Flavia apparently thinks you lose your virginity by kissing. Also,
** Artemis is still a virgin after havingFlavia.
*** ThisFlavia, though this one is justified in cannon canon - Athena had many virgin births, being, y'know, a goddess. Of course, those were predicated on her falling in love with her child's father (see Annabeth, who was conceived this way), while Artemis seems to be both asexual and aromantic...
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*** This
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* BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy: [[{{My Little Pony Friendship is Magic}} Bronies]] are all secretly members of the "Futtershy Mystry Brother Hood," an ancient religion dedicated to pacifism.
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* BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy: [[{{My Little Pony Friendship is Magic}} [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Bronies]] are all secretly members of the "Futtershy Mystry Brother Hood," an ancient religion dedicated to pacifism.
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* DullSurprise: Flavia's reaction to being told that [[{{LukeIAmYourFather}} Kronos is her father?]] "Well fuck."
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* GratuitousJapanese: [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment "KAWAAAAAIIIII! KAWAAAAIIIII!" Yelled a empusa in japanse."]]]]
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* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Annabeth is a bullying "prep" who listens to [[Music/OneDirection 1D]], Percy smokes pot and cheats on Annabeth, Chiron is an Emo Teen, Mr. D is a pedophile, Kronos shops Hot Topic, and Jason is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic brony.]]
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* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Annabeth is a bullying "prep" who listens to [[Music/OneDirection 1D]], Percy smokes pot and cheats on Annabeth, Chiron is an Emo Teen, Mr. D is a pedophile, Kronos shops Hot Topic, and Jason is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic brony.]]
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* SpiritualSuccessor: To ''FanFic/MyImmortal''.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: To ''FanFic/MyImmortal''.''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSoD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSoD HeroicBSOD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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*** This one is justified in cannon - Athena had many virgin births, being, y'know, a goddess. Of course, those were predicated on her falling in love with her child's father (see Annabeth, who was conceived this way), while Artemis seems to be both asexual and aromantic...
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed [[MST spork]] can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed [[MST spork]] spork can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed [[MST spork]] can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading on YouTube [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. A completed [[MST spork]] can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is also a complete DramaticReading on YouTube here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].