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* BaldWomen: Athene and the other Super Soldiers (of both sexes) have shaved heads. The "baldness as a symbol of independence" part is inverted though, since as she begins to break away from the organisation that created her, she starts to let her hair grow.
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* BaldWomen: BaldHeadOfToughness: Athene and the other Super Soldiers (of both sexes) have shaved heads. The "baldness as a symbol of independence" part is inverted though, since as As she begins to break away from the organisation that created her, she starts to [[ExpositoryHairstyleChange let her hair grow.grow]].
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* {{Asexuality}}: The process of creationg the supersoldiers renders them asexual and infertile.
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* BellyOfTheWhale: When Athene [[spoiler: returns to Forge and faces possible brainwashing in order to try and save her fellow supersoldiers]].
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* BellyOfTheWhale: CantRefuseTheCallAnymore: When Athene [[spoiler: returns to Forge and faces possible brainwashing in order to try and save her fellow supersoldiers]].
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''[[http://mechatalk.net/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=13678 Mobile Suit Gundam Storm]]'' is a fanfic by Vent Noir, posted on the Mechatalk forum. It was originally planned as a ''{{Gundam 00}}'' fic, and specifically a response to the way the series handled the character of Soma Peiris, but was changed to become a self-standing alternate universe.
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''[[http://mechatalk.net/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=13678 Mobile Suit Gundam Storm]]'' is a fanfic by Vent Noir, posted on the Mechatalk forum. It was originally planned as a ''{{Gundam 00}}'' ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam00'' fic, and specifically a response to the way the series handled the character of Soma Peiris, but was changed to become a self-standing alternate universe.
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* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved head.
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* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam00 Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved head.
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* SuperSoldier: Athene, Pallas, Ares, and Hippolyta have had significant roles so far, and there are several more back at Sparta Base.
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* SuperSoldier: Athene, Pallas, Ares, and Hippolyta have had significant roles so far, and there are several more back at Sparta Base.Base.
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* FeministFantasy: One of the author's goals is to take ''Gundam'''s "Artificial Newtype" concept and, to quote JossWhedon, "create someone who was a hero where she had always been a victim".
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* FeministFantasy: One of the author's goals is to take ''Gundam'''s "Artificial Newtype" concept and, to quote JossWhedon, Creator/JossWhedon, "create someone who was a hero where she had always been a victim".
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* ActualPacifist: Khadija.Khadija is a member of this universe's equivalent of the Red Cross and a committed pacifist. Naturally, she and Athene don't get along.
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* GenderIsNoObject: The supersoldiers see no difference between males and females - superiors are always addressed as "Sir", and they refer to each other as "siblings", never "brothers" or "sisters".
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* GenderIsNoObject: The supersoldiers see no difference between males and females - superiors are always addressed as "Sir", and they refer to each other as "siblings", never "brothers" or "sisters". At their home base they have mixed-gender barracks and showers.
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* GenderIsNoObject: The supersoldiers see no difference between males and females - superiors are always addressed as "Sir", and they refer to each other as "siblings", never "brothers" or "sisters".
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* LittleMissBadass: Hippolyta and the rest of the second-generation supersoldiers are fourteen. And we haven't seen them in action yet, but the third-generation ones are ''ten'', and Athene says they are better trained than most soldiers.
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* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved head.
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* AttackDrone: The Storm Cell's [=MUBs=] (Multi-Use Bits), although they can function defensively as well.
* BaldWomen: Athene and the other Super Soldiers (of both sexes) have shaved heads. The "baldness as a symbol of independence" part is inverted though, since as she begins to break away from the organisation that created her, she starts to let her hair grow.
* BellyOfTheWhale: When Athene [[spoiler: returns to Forge and faces possible brainwashing in order to try and save her fellow supersoldiers]].
* DarkActionGirl: [=Pallas=] to an extent, although apart from being on the other side, she isn't all that much darker than Athene. And then [[spoiler: Athene herself after she is Brainwashed.]]
* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shavedhead.head.
* FeministFantasy: One of the author's goals is to take ''Gundam'''s "Artificial Newtype" concept and, to quote JossWhedon, "create someone who was a hero where she had always been a victim".
* LetsYouAndHimFight: Shane speculates that it's awfully convenient that tensions between the Commonwealth and Lunapact broke out into war just as the supersoldiers were about to become ready. [[spoiler: He's proven to be right.]] More directly, [[spoiler: Athene and Pallas are brainwashed into thinking they're from opposite sides, so that they will fight each other.]]
* PhlebotinumGirl: The supersoldiers. Note that there are no "natural" Newtypes or similar in this universe.
* ShoutOut: Most of the chapter titles are songs from ''Gundam'' or other mecha shows.
* SuperPrototype: Naturally, since it's a ''Gundam'' story.
* SuperSoldier: Athene, Pallas, Ares, and Hippolyta have had significant roles so far, and there are several more back at Sparta Base.
* BaldWomen: Athene and the other Super Soldiers (of both sexes) have shaved heads. The "baldness as a symbol of independence" part is inverted though, since as she begins to break away from the organisation that created her, she starts to let her hair grow.
* BellyOfTheWhale: When Athene [[spoiler: returns to Forge and faces possible brainwashing in order to try and save her fellow supersoldiers]].
* DarkActionGirl: [=Pallas=] to an extent, although apart from being on the other side, she isn't all that much darker than Athene. And then [[spoiler: Athene herself after she is Brainwashed.]]
* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved
* FeministFantasy: One of the author's goals is to take ''Gundam'''s "Artificial Newtype" concept and, to quote JossWhedon, "create someone who was a hero where she had always been a victim".
* LetsYouAndHimFight: Shane speculates that it's awfully convenient that tensions between the Commonwealth and Lunapact broke out into war just as the supersoldiers were about to become ready. [[spoiler: He's proven to be right.]] More directly, [[spoiler: Athene and Pallas are brainwashed into thinking they're from opposite sides, so that they will fight each other.]]
* PhlebotinumGirl: The supersoldiers. Note that there are no "natural" Newtypes or similar in this universe.
* ShoutOut: Most of the chapter titles are songs from ''Gundam'' or other mecha shows.
* SuperPrototype: Naturally, since it's a ''Gundam'' story.
* SuperSoldier: Athene, Pallas, Ares, and Hippolyta have had significant roles so far, and there are several more back at Sparta Base.
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''[[http://mechatalk.net/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=13678 Mobile Suit Gundam Storm]]'' is a fanfic by Vent Noir, posted on the Mechatalk forum. It was originally planned as a ''{{Gundam 00}}'' fic, and specifically a response to the way the series handled the character of Soma Peiris, but was changed to become a self-standing alternate universe.
The story begins with SuperSoldier Athene Gold transferring to the Commonwealth battleship ''Gallipoli'', joining BigBrotherMentor Alan [=McDermott=] and talented youngster Shane Yamada in a new squadron piloting the prototype MS known as Gundams in their war with [=LunaPact=]. As the war progresses, Athene discovers more about herself, and must help decide the fate of her fellow supersoldiers...
!!''Gundam Storm'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* AcePilot: Most of the named pilots in the series. Even Khadija is a skilled pilot, although she operates a rescue MS rather than a combat one.
* ActionGirl: Athene, and any other female supersoldier. Also Lunapact pilot Nicole Perez.
* ActualPacifist: Khadija.
* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved head.
The story begins with SuperSoldier Athene Gold transferring to the Commonwealth battleship ''Gallipoli'', joining BigBrotherMentor Alan [=McDermott=] and talented youngster Shane Yamada in a new squadron piloting the prototype MS known as Gundams in their war with [=LunaPact=]. As the war progresses, Athene discovers more about herself, and must help decide the fate of her fellow supersoldiers...
!!''Gundam Storm'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* AcePilot: Most of the named pilots in the series. Even Khadija is a skilled pilot, although she operates a rescue MS rather than a combat one.
* ActionGirl: Athene, and any other female supersoldier. Also Lunapact pilot Nicole Perez.
* ActualPacifist: Khadija.
* {{Expy}}: Athene is one of many "Artificial Newtype" characters in ''Gundam'', most specifically [[{{Gundam 00}} Soma Peiris]], although deliberate contrasts were introduced - for example, where Soma is very pale and has long hair, Athene is black with a shaved head.
