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No need to bring that Flame Bait up.
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* AuthorAvatar: Ian, surprise surprise. Leads to a bit of Author Appeal (though not like MarySue levels).
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* AuthorAvatar: Ian, surprise surprise. Leads to a bit of Author Appeal (though not like MarySue levels). AuthorAppeal.
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** Ian makes a joke about engraving [[Franchise/DevilMayCry ''Ebony'' and ''Ivory'']] on his dual pistols, thinks about how he doesn't have a sword on his back to back him up, and lets loose this gem when Tali says he's stuttering.
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** Ian makes a joke about engraving [[Franchise/DevilMayCry [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry ''Ebony'' and ''Ivory'']] on his dual pistols, thinks about how he doesn't have a sword on his back to back him up, and lets loose this gem when Tali says he's stuttering.
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* TookALevelInBadass: From the nerves of his first real fight on the Citadel in an electronics store, Ian has improved in leaps and bounds in the years between then and where he is now. Even [[spoiler: dying for a minute]] can’t stop him.
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* ThisLoserIsYou: Ian’s not some kind of elite commando, despite the fact he’d quite like to be. He can’t shoot for shit when he initially tries firing a pistol, has his shoulder dislocated and is almost killed when fighting Caltan Xenvalis, only saved by a timely intervention from Garrus, falls over when trying to drop stealthily from an air vent, actually [[spoiler:gets killed at one point]] (only for a minute, mind), and didn't win the kill competition with Wrex, Garrus and himself. He’s improving quickly, though…* TookALevelInBadass: From the nerves of his first real fight on the Citadel in an electronics store, Ian has improved in leaps and bounds in the years between then and where he is now. Even [[spoiler: dying for a minute]] can’t stop him.
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* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: Plenty of cliffhanger endings during Masses to Masses as a series ensure this. No point even giving an example, just pick a random chapter and you’ll probably find one.
* YouSuck: Ian’s not some kind of elite commando, despite the fact he’d quite like to be. He can’t shoot for shit when he initially tries firing a pistol, has his shoulder dislocated and is almost killed when fighting Caltan Xenvalis, only saved by a timely intervention from Garrus, falls over when trying to drop stealthily from an air vent, actually [[spoiler:gets killed at one point]] (only for a minute, mind), and didn't win the kill competition with Wrex, Garrus and himself. He’s improving quickly, though…
* YouSuck: Ian’s not some kind of elite commando, despite the fact he’d quite like to be. He can’t shoot for shit when he initially tries firing a pistol, has his shoulder dislocated and is almost killed when fighting Caltan Xenvalis, only saved by a timely intervention from Garrus, falls over when trying to drop stealthily from an air vent, actually [[spoiler:gets killed at one point]] (only for a minute, mind), and didn't win the kill competition with Wrex, Garrus and himself. He’s improving quickly, though…
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* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: Plenty of cliffhanger endings during Masses to Masses as a series ensure this. No point even giving an example, just pick a random chapter and you’ll probably find one.
* YouSuck: Ian’s not some kind of elite commando, despite the fact he’d quite like to be. He can’t shoot for shit when he initially tries firing a pistol, has his shoulder dislocated and is almost killed when fighting Caltan Xenvalis, only saved by a timely intervention from Garrus, falls over when trying to drop stealthily from an air vent, actually [[spoiler:gets killed at one point]] (only for a minute, mind), and didn't win the kill competition with Wrex, Garrus and himself. He’s improving quickly, though…one.
* YouSuck: Ian’s not some kind of elite commando, despite the fact he’d quite like to be. He can’t shoot for shit when he initially tries firing a pistol, has his shoulder dislocated and is almost killed when fighting Caltan Xenvalis, only saved by a timely intervention from Garrus, falls over when trying to drop stealthily from an air vent, actually [[spoiler:gets killed at one point]] (only for a minute, mind), and didn't win the kill competition with Wrex, Garrus and himself. He’s improving quickly, though…
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: When Ian makes a joke involving a character from ''StarWars'', Shepard, Garrus and Kaidan all find it funny, showing they’ve actually seen those films. Garrus also enjoys Film/{{Inception}} when he watches it with Ian.
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: When Ian makes a joke involving a character from ''StarWars'', ''Franchise/StarWars'', Shepard, Garrus and Kaidan all find it funny, showing they’ve actually seen those films. Garrus also enjoys Film/{{Inception}} when he watches it with Ian.
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** Ian's [[ASongOfIceAndFire albino varren is named Ghost, just like Jon Snow's]]
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** Ian's [[ASongOfIceAndFire [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire albino varren is named Ghost, just like Jon Snow's]]
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Not a trope - Command Roster potholes The Marine to this
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** TheMarine: Butler
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** TheMarine: TheBigGuy: Butler
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** ArbyNTheChief is referenced at one point in Masses to Masses 3.
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** ArbyNTheChief ''Machinima/ArbyNTheChief'' is referenced at one point in Masses to Masses 3.
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: When Ian makes a joke involving a character from ''StarWars'', Shepard, Garrus and Kaidan all find it funny, showing they’ve actually seen those films. Garrus also enjoys {{Inception}} when he watches it with Ian.
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* AlienArtsAreAppreciated: When Ian makes a joke involving a character from ''StarWars'', Shepard, Garrus and Kaidan all find it funny, showing they’ve actually seen those films. Garrus also enjoys {{Inception}} Film/{{Inception}} when he watches it with Ian.
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''Masses to Masses 3'' came out on June 24th 2011, and is set (for the most part) on Omega, covering the actions of Archangel in the two year gap between ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'' and ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''. ''Masses to Masses 4'' was released February 4th 2013, and follows the events of ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
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''Masses to Masses 3'' came out on June 24th 24th, 2011, and is set (for the most part) on Omega, covering the actions of Archangel in the two year two-year gap between ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'' and ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''. ''Masses to Masses 4'' was released February 4th 4th, 2013, and follows the events of ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
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The series is posted on fanfiction.net and Website/DeviantART (as well as several pieces of fan art), and WordOfGod has dictated it will be a five part saga. Masses to Masses 2 can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6375545/1/Masses_to_Masses_2 here]], Masses to Masses 3 is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7113874/1/Masses_to_Masses_3 here]] and Masses to Masses 4 can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8977886/1/ here]].
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The series is posted on fanfiction.net and Website/DeviantART (as well as several pieces of fan art), and WordOfGod has dictated it will be a five part five-part saga. Masses to Masses 2 can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6375545/1/Masses_to_Masses_2 here]], Masses to Masses 3 is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7113874/1/Masses_to_Masses_3 here]] and Masses to Masses 4 can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8977886/1/ here]].
here]]. The first one has received a rewrite, which you can find it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12215638/1/Masses-to-Masses-Redux here]].
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All three finished works have been released in [=eBook=] format: [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=YRWZFCST Masses to Masses 1]], [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=6HV6B4WE Masses to Masses 2]], and [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=SAHSE7NE Masses to Masses 3]]. The first one has received a rewrite, which you can find it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12215638/1/Masses-to-Masses-Redux here]].
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All three finished works have been released in [=eBook=] format: [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=YRWZFCST Masses to Masses 1]], [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=6HV6B4WE Masses to Masses 2]], and [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=SAHSE7NE Masses to Masses 3]]. The first one has received a rewrite, which you can find it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12215638/1/Masses-to-Masses-Redux here]].
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All three finished works have been released in [=eBook=] format: [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=YRWZFCST Masses to Masses 1]], [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=6HV6B4WE Masses to Masses 2]], and [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=SAHSE7NE Masses to Masses 3]]
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All three finished works have been released in [=eBook=] format: [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=YRWZFCST Masses to Masses 1]], [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=6HV6B4WE Masses to Masses 2]], and [[http://www.epubbud.com/book.php?g=SAHSE7NE Masses to Masses 3]]
3]]. The first one has received a rewrite, which you can find it [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12215638/1/Masses-to-Masses-Redux here]].
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The sequel covers Ian and Garrus joining Shepard's crew as Mass Effect 1 events begin, and subsequently follows the general plot of that, although deviations in canon do occur which could change things to come.
Masses to Masses 3 came out on June 24th 2011, and is set (for the most part) on Omega, covering the actions of Archangel in the two year gap between VideoGame/MassEffect1 and VideoGame/MassEffect2. Masses to Masses 4 was released February 4th 2013, and follows the events of VideoGame/MassEffect2.
Predominantly an Action/Comedy series, the serious moments tend to be balanced out by jokes, one-liners, bizarre situations, action scenes and copious amounts of {{bromance}}, though the balance is shifting by Masses to Masses 3. See CerebusSyndrome below.
Masses to Masses 3 came out on June 24th 2011, and is set (for the most part) on Omega, covering the actions of Archangel in the two year gap between VideoGame/MassEffect1 and VideoGame/MassEffect2. Masses to Masses 4 was released February 4th 2013, and follows the events of VideoGame/MassEffect2.
Predominantly an Action/Comedy series, the serious moments tend to be balanced out by jokes, one-liners, bizarre situations, action scenes and copious amounts of {{bromance}}, though the balance is shifting by Masses to Masses 3. See CerebusSyndrome below.
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The sequel covers Ian and Garrus joining Shepard's crew as Mass ''Mass Effect 1 1'' events begin, and subsequently follows the general plot of that, although deviations in canon do occur which could change things to come.
Masses ''Masses to Masses 3 3'' came out on June 24th 2011, and is set (for the most part) on Omega, covering the actions of Archangel in the two year gap between VideoGame/MassEffect1 ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'' and VideoGame/MassEffect2. Masses ''VideoGame/MassEffect2''. ''Masses to Masses 4 4'' was released February 4th 2013, and follows the events of VideoGame/MassEffect2.
''VideoGame/MassEffect2''.
Predominantly an Action/Comedy series, the serious moments tend to be balanced out by jokes, one-liners, bizarre situations, action scenes and copious amounts of {{bromance}}, though the balance is shifting byMasses ''Masses to Masses 3.3''. See CerebusSyndrome below.
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* IndyHatRoll: Garrus and Ian both slide under a falling shutter in a burning building. Ian even makes a mental reference to Indiana Jones as he continues running away.
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* IndyHatRoll: Garrus and Ian both slide under a falling shutter in a burning building. Ian even makes a mental reference to Indiana Jones ''Franchise/IndianaJones'' as he continues running away.
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** IndianaJones esque escape sequence from a building, complete with sliding under a closing door.
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** IndianaJones ''Franchise/IndianaJones'' esque escape sequence from a building, complete with sliding under a closing door.