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* LetUsNvereSpeakOfThisAgain: The one thing that Angel and Rainbow Dash could agree on at the end of "Honeymoon in The Everfree Forest" was to never speak of this again
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* LetUsNvereSpeakOfThisAgain: LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: The one thing that Angel and Rainbow Dash could agree on at the end of "Honeymoon in The Everfree Forest" was to never speak of this again
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A very large monster that looks like toast attacks Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and The Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy's terrifying when she gets angry.
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* CuteAndPsycho: Sweetie Belle, when she chops trees, shows shades of this
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* FacePalm: Angel, while trying to pantomime the fact that Rainbow and FLuttershy ended up in Everfree together, ends up doing this a few times.
* [[FeudEpisode Feud Cahpter]]: Chapter 6 has Rainbow and Fluttershy feuding quite a bit.
* [[FeudEpisode Feud Cahpter]]: Chapter 6 has Rainbow and Fluttershy feuding quite a bit.
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** Chapter 6 foreshadows "Read It and Weep," with Rainbow saying “Seriously, I’ve about as much chance breaking my wing as I do enjoying a book, it just isn’t going to happen.”
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* GirlWithPsychoWeapon: Sweetie Belle gets an axe, and becomes very excited when trying to be a lumberjack.
* GuiltComplex: Twilight suffers from one through much of the story.
* GuiltComplex: Twilight suffers from one through much of the story.
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* LetUsNvereSpeakOfThisAgain: The one thing that Angel and Rainbow Dash could agree on at the end of "Honeymoon in The Everfree Forest" was to never speak of this again
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* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Sweetie Belle when she gets her axe.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: They drop the toast monster they encounter into a very deep pit, and drop a lot of rocks on top of it to keep it from chasing them. Apparently, Angel, a three inch tall rabbit, built the trap.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: They drop the toast monster they encounter into a very deep pit, and drop a lot of rocks on top of it to keep it from chasing them. Apparently, Angel, a three inch tall rabbit, built the trap.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Rainbow yells "My! Wing! Is! Not! Broken!" at the end of chapter 6.
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* StunnedSilence: After Fluttershy says that she keeps Angel around because he [[spoiler:reminds her of Rainbow Dash]], this is the inevitable result.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Angel's biggest attempt to get rid of Rainbow was, according to WordOfGod, like launching the duo to a pre-set candlelight dinner.
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* PrimalScene: Pinkie flashes back to one, while yelling out disturbing details.
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* BoundAndGagged: Well, bound anyway, when Fluttershy and Rainbow try to leave the library after [[spoier:Twilight gets her sanity back, she stops them this way. Sadly Fluttershy;s mout works faster than her brain at this point, for some awkward humor]].
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* BoundAndGagged: Well, bound anyway, when Fluttershy and Rainbow try to leave the library after [[spoier:Twilight [[spoiler:Twilight gets her sanity back, she stops them this way. Sadly Fluttershy;s mout Unfortunately for Fluttershy, her mouth works faster than her brain at this point, for some awkward humor]].
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* ActorAllusion: Pinkie speaks with Fluttershy's voice, saying it's easy. [[spoiler:less explainable is Pinkie speaking with Rainbow's voice]].
* AlmostKiss: Pinkie interrupts [[spoiler:Fluttershy's attempt to kiss Rainbow Dash]].
* BoundAndGagged: Well, bound anyway, when Fluttershy and Rainbow try to leave the library after [[spoier:Twilight gets her sanity back, she stops them this way. Sadly Fluttershy;s mout works faster than her brain at this point, for some awkward humor]].
* DeathGlare: Rainbow and Angel trade these constantly.
* EscalatingWar: Rainbow and Angel.
* FriendlyTickleTorture: During the prank spree.
* OhCrap: Fluttershy's reaction after Angel [[spoiler:catapults Rainbow into the Everfree Forest]].
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** Fluttershy has one at the spa, which leads to even more awkwardness, as they have to explain to their spa partners why they have to go together.
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on.
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on.
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** Fluttershy has one at the spa, which leads to even more awkwardness, as they have to explain to their spa partners why they have to go together.
together, and Applejack walks in as they leave the toilet.
* ThePrankster: Three of them working together. Specifically Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and...Fluttershy?
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on. [[spoiler:She gets better without help]].
* ThePrankster: Three of them working together. Specifically Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and...Fluttershy?
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on. [[spoiler:She gets better without help]].
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* SliceOfLife: Part two is basically a slice of life, if said life involves two people having to touch every five seconds, one of them has a crush on the other, and animals come and go from the house as they please.
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* SliceOfLife: Part two The fic itself is basically a very much slice of life, if said life involves two people having to touch every five seconds, one of them has a crush on the other, and animals come and go from the house as they please.awkwardness ensues constantly.
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* ButtMonkey: Angel suffers a lot of pain during the spa scene, while trying to break into said spa.
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* ButtMonkey: Because of their mutual hatred of each other, Angel suffers a lot of pain during the spa scene, while trying to break and Rainbow turn ''each other'' into said spa.these.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapter names.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four. It turns out to be a nightmare.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four. It turns out to be a nightmare.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four. It turns out to be a nightmare. All played for laughs.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four. It turns out to be a nightmare. All played for laughs.
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* LaxativePrank: [[spoiler:Angel does this to Rainbow]], causing quite the stink to come out of the bathroom.
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* LaxativePrank: [[spoiler:Angel does this Much to Rainbow]], causing quite the stink to come out of the bathroom.Rainbow's discomfort
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage. Made worse by Rainbow Dash's explanations.
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Angel expected this to happen when he put laxatives in Rainbow's soup, so he put the poisoned soup in front of FLuttershy]].
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Angel expected this to happen when he put laxatives in Rainbow's soup, so he put the poisoned soup in front of FLuttershy]].
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage. Made worse by Rainbow Dash's explanations.
explanations, and the fact that Applejack keeps stumbling upon them at the most inopportune times.
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo:[[spoiler:Angel expected this to happen when he put laxatives in Rainbow's soup, so he put the poisoned Happens with soup that has laxative in front it, though only one of FLuttershy]].the consumers of said food had any idea something might be off.
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** Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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** Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. She Fluttershy is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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* LaxativePrank: [[spoiler:Angel does this to Rainbow]], causing quite the stink to come out of the bathroom.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage. Made worse by Rainbow Dash's explanations.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage. Made worse by Rainbow Dash's explanations. explanations.
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Angel expected this to happen when he put laxatives in Rainbow's soup, so he put the poisoned soup in front of FLuttershy]].
* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: [[spoiler:Angel expected this to happen when he put laxatives in Rainbow's soup, so he put the poisoned soup in front of FLuttershy]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Rarity goes with a nudge, nudge, wink, wink approach with Fluttershy, after hearing about their more compromising moments.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four. It turns out to be a nightmare. All played for laughs.
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* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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* PottyEmergency: Rainbow PottyEmergency:
**Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward thanthat.that.
** Fluttershy has one at the spa, which leads to even more awkwardness, as they have to explain to their spa partners why they have to go together.
**Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than
** Fluttershy has one at the spa, which leads to even more awkwardness, as they have to explain to their spa partners why they have to go together.
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* DoesThisRemondYouOfAnything: Angel's imaginings about what's going on in the spa do invoke certain...images, before proving to be more innocent.
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* DoesThisRemondYouOfAnything: DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Angel's imaginings about what's going on in the spa do invoke certain...images, before proving to be more innocent.
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* BathtubScene: recounted in detail by Rainbow Dash during the spa scene.
* ButtMonkey: Angel suffers a lot of pain during the spa scene, while trying to break into said spa.
* ButtMonkey: Angel suffers a lot of pain during the spa scene, while trying to break into said spa.
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** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
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** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.antics.
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow'sInnocentInnuendo.InnocentInnuendo.
* DoesThisRemondYouOfAnything: Angel's imaginings about what's going on in the spa do invoke certain...images, before proving to be more innocent.
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's
* DoesThisRemondYouOfAnything: Angel's imaginings about what's going on in the spa do invoke certain...images, before proving to be more innocent.
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** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
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** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.
antics.** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
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* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find a way to get the bracelets off, looks completely psycho, never mind that the makeover gets worse as she speaks.
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* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find a way to get the bracelets off, off after having spent three days awake previously, looks completely psycho, never mind that the makeover gets worse as she speaks.
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* NoSenseofPersonalSpace: While it is necessary to keep touching, Rainbow has a tendency to get a bit...intimate without realizing it.
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* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: The whole bathroom thing is topped by the awkwardness of their sleeping in the same bed, and Fluttershy's thoughts on the matter.
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* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: The whole bathroom thing is topped by the awkwardness of their sleeping in the same bed, and Fluttershy's thoughts on the matter. This is justified by the fact that they have to constantly touch, however.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.
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* DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight'santics.antics.
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
** Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's
** Rarity loves to snark at all of Rainbow's InnocentInnuendo.
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->'''Rainbow Dash''' (oblivious to the double meaning): Now we buck.
->'''Fluttershy''' (much more sexually aware): The clouds!
->'''Fluttershy''' (much more sexually aware): The clouds!
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** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting the bracelets off by cutting off their limbs. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected. And a lot less about sex (the latter justified by the fact that she slept through sex ed).
* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshaed, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected. And a lot less about sex (the latter justified by the fact that she slept through sex ed).
* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshaed, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
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** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting [[spoiler:getting the bracelets off by cutting off their limbs.limbs]]. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyoneexpected. And a lot less about sex (the latter justified by the fact that she slept through sex ed).
expected.
* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Raritylampshaed, lampshades this, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone
* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity
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* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find a way to get the bracelets off.
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* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find a way to get the bracelets off.off, looks completely psycho, never mind that the makeover gets worse as she speaks.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage.
cottage. Made worse by Rainbow Dash's explanations.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house.Her [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. bathroom]]. She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.that.
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house.
* SanitySlippage: Twilight becomes more and more unhinged as time goes on.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies. From innuendo laden conversation after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee while they're attached, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies.
From innuendo laden conversation after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee while they're attached, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
From innuendo laden conversation after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee while they're attached, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
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** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting the breacelets off by cutting off their limbs. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.
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** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting the breacelets bracelets off by cutting off their limbs. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected. And a lot less about sex (the latter justified by the fact that she slept through sex ed).
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected. And a lot less about sex (the latter justified by the fact that she slept through sex ed).
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* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. Also serves as a way to keep her out of the story for a while, because she needs to catch up on her sleep.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for a week.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for a week.
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* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. Also serves as a way It gets worse when the bracelets get stuck to keep her out of the story for a while, because two friends, and she needs to catch up insists on her solving their problem before getting any sleep.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Angel.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks.
* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find aweek. way to get the bracelets off.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Angel.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks.
* MadnessMakeover: Twilight, after studying all night to find a
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest inher.her.
** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting the breacelets off by cutting off their limbs. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
** Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in
** Rainbow and Fluttershy joke, in chapter 1, about Twilight getting the breacelets off by cutting off their limbs. Guess what Twilight proposes to do in chapter 3?
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* ThrowTheBookAtThem: When Rainbow enters Twilight's house, she gets a book in the face.
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* ThrowTheBookAtThem: When Rainbow first enters Twilight's house, she gets a book in the face.
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* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill Fluttershy, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. Rainbow is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill Fluttershy, her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. Rainbow She is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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* SliceofLife: Part is slice of life, if said life involves two people having to touch every five seconds, one of them has a crush on the other, and animals come and go from the house as they please.
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* SliceofLife: SliceOfLife: Part two is basically a slice of life, if said life involves two people having to touch every five seconds, one of them has a crush on the other, and animals come and go from the house as they please.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies. From AccidentalInnuendo after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies. From AccidentalInnuendo innuendo laden conversation after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee, pee while they're attached, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
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* SliceofLife: Part is slice of life, if said life involves two people having to touch every five seconds, one of them has a crush on the other, and animals come and go from the house as they please.
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[innocentInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[innocentInnuendo [[InnocentInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
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* StuckItems: The bracelets
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[AccidentalInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[AccidentalInnuendo [[innocentInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshaed, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
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->'''Spike''': So those bracelets have turned Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash into magnets?
->'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but pretty much.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[AccidentalInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies. From AccidentalInnuendo after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
* ChainedHeat: The bracelets function as this.
* CrazyJealousGuy: Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.
* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. Also serves as a way to keep her out of the story for a while, because she needs to catch up on her sleep.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for a week.
* MadScientist: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Rarity imagine Twilight as one in regards to her sleep deprived mind trying to get the bracelets off. Played for laughs, of course.
* NonSequiturThud: After crashing into Rainbow, while holding onto Fluttershy, Twilight says, "yes mommy I would like syrup with my pancakes" before falling over again.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill Fluttershy, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. Rainbow is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
* StuckItems: The bracelets
* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: The whole bathroom thing is topped by the awkwardness of their sleeping in the same bed, and Fluttershy's thoughts on the matter.
* ThrowTheBookAtThem: When Rainbow enters Twilight's house, she gets a book in the face.
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->'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but pretty much.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[AccidentalInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies. From AccidentalInnuendo after a failed attempt to break the link ends up with them in front of Rarity's house to Rainbow Dash needing a pee, their lives are made very difficult by the bracelets, and it doesn't help that Fluttershy has a crush on Rainbow Dash.
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
* ChainedHeat: The bracelets function as this.
* CrazyJealousGuy: Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
* DeadpanSnarker: Rainbow is quite the snarker, especially in regards to Twilight's antics.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.
* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.
* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. Also serves as a way to keep her out of the story for a while, because she needs to catch up on her sleep.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for a week.
* MadScientist: Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Rarity imagine Twilight as one in regards to her sleep deprived mind trying to get the bracelets off. Played for laughs, of course.
* NonSequiturThud: After crashing into Rainbow, while holding onto Fluttershy, Twilight says, "yes mommy I would like syrup with my pancakes" before falling over again.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: Quite literally constantly, from Rainbow Dash tackling Fluttershy and saying that they need to constantly touch to them looking very intimate at Fluttershy's cottage.
* PottyEmergency: Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill Fluttershy, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom. Rainbow is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
* StuckItems: The bracelets
* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: The whole bathroom thing is topped by the awkwardness of their sleeping in the same bed, and Fluttershy's thoughts on the matter.
* ThrowTheBookAtThem: When Rainbow enters Twilight's house, she gets a book in the face.
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