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* TragicKeepsake: [[spoiler: Gwen keeps a blue stuffed bear. Ben has a stuffed lion. Both were going to be Ken's toys if he had lived.]]
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You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]].
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* SlapSlapKiss: How their relationship starts out, but slowly phases out as the story goes on.
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* EscalatingWar: Chapter 10. This Means War.
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Originally meant to be a bridge between ''{{Ben 10}}'' the Original Series and ''Ben10AlienForce'', this fic took our two favorite cousins and gave them a fluffy story together. Ben and Gwen try to find their place back in normal life, all the while opening up to each other. [[spoiler:And behind the scenes, Grandpa Max has to deal with an unusual new alien menace: DN Aliens.]]
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Originally meant to be a bridge between ''{{Ben 10}}'' the Original Series and ''Ben10AlienForce'', this fic took our two favorite cousins and gave them a fluffy story together. Ben and Gwen try to find their place back in normal life, all the while opening up to each other. [[spoiler:And behind the scenes, Grandpa Max has to deal with an unusual new alien menace: DN Aliens.]]
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Originally meant to be a bridge between the Ben 10 the Original Series and Ben 10 Alien Force, this fic took our two favorite cousins and gave them a fluffy story together. Ben and Gwen try to find their place back in normal life, all the while opening up to one another. [[spoiler: And behind the scenes, Grandpa Max has to deal with an unusual new alien menace: DN Aliens.]]
However, the story diverged from the 'canon' story line by a bit and this new timeline now has a sequel: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point Breaking Point]].
You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]]
However, the story diverged from the 'canon' story line by a bit and this new timeline now has a sequel: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point Breaking Point]].
You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]]
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Originally meant to be a bridge between the Ben 10 ''{{Ben 10}}'' the Original Series and Ben 10 Alien Force, ''Ben10AlienForce'', this fic took our two favorite cousins and gave them a fluffy story together. Ben and Gwen try to find their place back in normal life, all the while opening up to one another. [[spoiler: And each other. [[spoiler:And behind the scenes, Grandpa Max has to deal with an unusual new alien menace: DN Aliens.]]
However, the story diverged from the 'canon' story line by a bit and this new timeline now has a sequel: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-PointBreaking Point]].
"Breaking Point"]].
You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/here]]
here]].
However, the story diverged from the 'canon' story line by a bit and this new timeline now has a sequel: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point
You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/
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Originally meant to be a bridge between the Ben 10 the Original Series and Ben 10 Alien Force, this fic took our two favorite cousins and gave them a fluffy story together. Ben and Gwen try to find their place back in normal life, all the while opening up to one another. [[spoiler: And behind the scenes, Grandpa Max has to deal with an unusual new alien menace: DN Aliens.]]
However, the story diverged rather
You can find it on Fanfiction.net [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]]
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!! [Little Moments] contains examples of:
* KissingCousins: you should know this by now.
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