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* CatchPhrase: [=TWW!Link's=] overuse of "Com'on!", which is a reference to the fact that those were actually Link's only spoken words, in any game, ever.
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* AlternateTimeline: As confusing as ever. Not even the sages are 100% sure how it works.
* BadassAdorable: The Links, naturally.
* BadassAdorable: The Links, naturally.
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* CharacterizationMarchesOn: [=OoT!Link=]
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* MagicMusic
* MotorMouth: Eyne, whenever she wants to tell the boys to ''hurry''.
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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Both Links and Tetra. [=TP!Link=] and Zelda as well.
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* TheyCallHimSword: See GratuitousJapanese above.
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* BalefulPolymorph: Medli's spell crystal turns out to be [[spoiler: The "FAIRY"-spell from ''VideoGame/ZeldaIITheAdventureOfLink'', after Aryll accidently uses it on her brother...]] HilarityEnsues.
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* ForcedTransformation: Medli's spell crystal turns out to be [[spoiler: The "FAIRY"-spell from ''VideoGame/ZeldaIITheAdventureOfLink'', after Aryll accidently uses it on her brother...]] HilarityEnsues.
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-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest."
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-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest."
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-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest."
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Originally written and published in German on [[http://www.fanfiktion.de Fanfiktion.de]] ([[XtremeKoolLetterz Yes, that's how it's spelt]]) under the title [[CompletelyDifferentTitle "Unify]][[GratuitousEnglish -Breaking the frontiers"]], where it is, with 66 chapters, still ongoing, the English version is basically the author trying to expand and enhance the original story, by filling it's PlotHoles and improving the pacing, as well as the dialogue. Earlier chapters suffer from RougeAnglesOfSatin though, due to the (non-native-speaker) author being too impatient to let her beta-reader catch up, but newer chapters resolved this issue by "hiring" a second beta-reader. [[MoodWhiplash The prose and mood of the story change a lot between chapter 20 and 30]]
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Originally written and published in German on [[http://www.fanfiktion.de Fanfiktion.de]] ([[XtremeKoolLetterz Yes, that's how it's spelt]]) under the title [[CompletelyDifferentTitle "Unify]][[GratuitousEnglish -Breaking the frontiers"]], where it is, with 66 chapters, still ongoing, the English version is basically the author trying to expand and enhance the original story, by filling it's PlotHoles {{Plot Hole}}s and improving the pacing, as well as the dialogue. Earlier chapters suffer from RougeAnglesOfSatin though, due to the (non-native-speaker) author being too impatient to let her beta-reader catch up, but newer chapters resolved this issue by "hiring" a second beta-reader. [[MoodWhiplash The prose and mood of the story change a lot between chapter 20 and 30]]
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* TechnicolorEyes: [=Tww!Link=]'s eyes appear different in color, depending on the angle you look into them. It's supposed to be a reference to a change his artwork received in ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaPhantomHourglass Phantom Hourglass]]'' (making his eyes look blue-greenish in the upper half of the iris/pupil and brownish in the lower half.), but there's supposedly also another reason behind this. Regardless, the [[CommonMarySueTraits clishee-ness]] of this is promptly {{Lampshaded}}.
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* TechnicolorEyes: [=Tww!Link=]'s eyes appear different in color, depending on the angle you look into them. It's supposed to be a reference to a change his artwork received in ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaPhantomHourglass Phantom Hourglass]]'' (making his eyes look blue-greenish in the upper half of the iris/pupil and brownish in the lower half.), but there's supposedly also another reason behind this. Regardless, the [[CommonMarySueTraits clishee-ness]] clishee-ness of this is promptly {{Lampshaded}}.
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* GratuitousJapanese: The two Links take on nicknames based on both the magical items they are most well-known for, as well as their respective titles, in order to avoid confusion. Plotwise, the nicknames are supposed to be in ancient Hylian Language. In TheRealWorld, they are merely the japanese words for "Time" ("Toki") and "Wind" ("Kaze").
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* GratuitousJapanese: The two Links take on nicknames based on both the magical items they are most well-known for, as well as their respective titles, in order to avoid confusion. Plotwise, the nicknames are supposed to be in ancient Hylian Language. In TheRealWorld, RealLife, they are merely the japanese Japanese words for "Time" ("Toki") and "Wind" ("Kaze").
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker The Wind Waker]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker The Wind Waker]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaPhantomHourglass Phantom Hourglass]]''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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* TechnicolorEyes: [=Tww!Link=]'s eyes appear different in color, depending on the angle you look into them. It's supposed to be a reference to a change his artwork received in ''PhantomHourglass'' (making his eyes look blue-greenish in the upper half of the iris/pupil and brownish in the lower half.), but there's supposedly also another reason behind this. Regardless, the [[CommonMarySueTraits clishee-ness]] of this is promptly {{Lampshaded}}.
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* TechnicolorEyes: [=Tww!Link=]'s eyes appear different in color, depending on the angle you look into them. It's supposed to be a reference to a change his artwork received in ''PhantomHourglass'' ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaPhantomHourglass Phantom Hourglass]]'' (making his eyes look blue-greenish in the upper half of the iris/pupil and brownish in the lower half.), but there's supposedly also another reason behind this. Regardless, the [[CommonMarySueTraits clishee-ness]] of this is promptly {{Lampshaded}}.
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* TheThreeFacesOfEve: Zelda(Mother), Midna(Seductress) and Ilia(Child).
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker TheWindWaker]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker TheWindWaker]]'' The Wind Waker]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker TheWindWaker]]]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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Roughly a year after the events of ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker TheWindWaker]]]]'' TheWindWaker]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
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''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' Fanfiction, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1292951/Nenilein Nenilein]], ''aka'' [[Tropers/MeikyuButterfly Meikyu Butterfly]]. It is best described as a CrossOver, starting out covering ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker'' and ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', but eventually expanding to ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTwilightPrincess'', while continuing to incorporate more and more elements of most of the other games as well, like ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask'' and even ''VideoGame/ZeldaIITheAdventureOfLink''.
Roughly a year after the events of ''TheWindWaker'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
Meanwhile, the Triforce suddenly reappears, Tetra starts having visions of ancient Hyrule and Ganondorf, which obviously can't be a good sign and the two Links realize that moving away from each other for some reason causes [=OoT!Link=] to get his energy drained and slowly fade into oblivion.
Roughly a year after the events of ''TheWindWaker'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
Meanwhile, the Triforce suddenly reappears, Tetra starts having visions of ancient Hyrule and Ganondorf, which obviously can't be a good sign and the two Links realize that moving away from each other for some reason causes [=OoT!Link=] to get his energy drained and slowly fade into oblivion.
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''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' Fanfiction, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1292951/Nenilein Nenilein]], ''aka'' [[Tropers/MeikyuButterfly Meikyu Butterfly]].Tropers/MeikyuButterfly. It is best described as a CrossOver, starting out covering ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker'' and ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', but eventually expanding to ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTwilightPrincess'', while continuing to incorporate more and more elements of most of the other games as well, like ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask'' and even ''VideoGame/ZeldaIITheAdventureOfLink''.
Roughly a year after the events of''TheWindWaker'' ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaTheWindWaker TheWindWaker]]]]'' (and half a year after the events of ''PhantomHourglass''), Link and Tetra return to Outset Island, in order to celebrate a traditional festival. One of the stories told there, however, gets Link curious for the fate of the legendary Hero of Time and tempts him to go and try how far the powers of the [[MagicMusic ancient kingdom's music and his baton]] actually reach. The next day, he wakes up to face a completely clueless second boy in green clothes in his room, who insists that he's called "Link" and the Hero of Time.
Time.
Meanwhile, the Triforce suddenly reappears, Tetra starts having visions of ancient Hyrule and Ganondorf, which obviously can't be a good sign and the two Links realize that moving away from each other for some reason causes [=OoT!Link=] to get his energy drained and slowly fade intooblivion.
oblivion.
Roughly a year after the events of
Meanwhile, the Triforce suddenly reappears, Tetra starts having visions of ancient Hyrule and Ganondorf, which obviously can't be a good sign and the two Links realize that moving away from each other for some reason causes [=OoT!Link=] to get his energy drained and slowly fade into
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!!Linked Chronicles provides examples of:
* AlternateTimeline: As confusing as ever. Not even the sages are 100% sure how it works.
* AlternateTimeline: As confusing as ever. Not even the sages are 100% sure how it works.
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!!Linked Chronicles provides examples of:
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* AlternateTimeline: As confusing as ever. Not even the sages are 100% sure how it works.
* AlternateTimeline: As confusing as ever. Not even the sages are 100% sure how it works.
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* CatchPhrase: [=TWW!Link's=] overuse of "Com'on!", which is a reference to the fact that those were actually Link's only spoken words, in any game, ever.
* ChaosArchitecture: Both {{Lampshaded}} and {{Subverted}} through [=OoT!Link=] comparing the Islands of the Great Sea to the Hyrule of his era.
* ChaosArchitecture: Both {{Lampshaded}} and {{Subverted}} through [=OoT!Link=] comparing the Islands of the Great Sea to the Hyrule of his era.
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* CatchPhrase: [=TWW!Link's=] overuse of "Com'on!", which is a reference to the fact that those were actually Link's only spoken words, in any game, ever.
ever.
* ChaosArchitecture: Both {{Lampshaded}} and {{Subverted}} through [=OoT!Link=] comparing the Islands of the Great Sea to the Hyrule of his era.
* ChaosArchitecture: Both {{Lampshaded}} and {{Subverted}} through [=OoT!Link=] comparing the Islands of the Great Sea to the Hyrule of his era.
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* CuteWitch: Wizrova, [[spoiler: except she's an EnfantTerrible]]. Earlier on, [=TWW!Link=] envisions his sister Aryll as one, when it is mentioned that she might have a lot of potential for casting magic.
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* CuteWitch: Wizrova, [[spoiler: except she's an EnfantTerrible]]. Earlier on, [=TWW!Link=] envisions his sister Aryll as one, when it is mentioned that she might have a lot of potential for casting magic.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [=OoT!Link=]. MedievalStasis helps to avoid many of the usual characteristics of this trope though.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [=OoT!Link=]. MedievalStasis helps to avoid many of the usual characteristics of this trope though.
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* HeyThatsMyLine: When Aryll snatches an item and does Link's standart ''Item Get!''-stance.
* IdiotBall: The second half of Chapter 27 has the Links acting incredibly naive twice in a row. It is {{Lampshaded}} and the author herself has [[ShrugOfGod no explanation]] for it either, except for ''"They should have seen it coming; Let's say it wasn't their day."''
* IncrediblyLamePun: Just take look at the title and do the math.
* IdiotBall: The second half of Chapter 27 has the Links acting incredibly naive twice in a row. It is {{Lampshaded}} and the author herself has [[ShrugOfGod no explanation]] for it either, except for ''"They should have seen it coming; Let's say it wasn't their day."''
* IncrediblyLamePun: Just take look at the title and do the math.
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* HeyThatsMyLine: When Aryll snatches an item and does Link's standart ''Item Get!''-stance.
Get!''-stance.
* IdiotBall: The second half of Chapter 27 has the Links acting incredibly naive twice in a row. It is {{Lampshaded}} and the author herself has [[ShrugOfGod no explanation]] for it either, except for ''"They should have seen it coming; Let's say it wasn't their day."''
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Just take look at the title and do the math.
* IdiotBall: The second half of Chapter 27 has the Links acting incredibly naive twice in a row. It is {{Lampshaded}} and the author herself has [[ShrugOfGod no explanation]] for it either, except for ''"They should have seen it coming; Let's say it wasn't their day.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Just take look at the title and do the math.
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* LittleMissSnarker: Tetra.
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* LittleMissSnarker: Tetra.
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* MotorMouth: Eyne, whenever she wants to tell the boys to ''hurry''.
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* MotorMouth: Eyne, whenever she wants to tell the boys to ''hurry''.
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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Both Links and Tetra. [=TP!Link=] and Zelda as well.
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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Both Links and Tetra. [=TP!Link=] and Zelda as well.
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* SelfDeprecation: Eyne, who keeps calling herself a "low-tier fairy" and at one point even smiles while stating that nobody would want to be a fairy.
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* SelfDeprecation: Eyne, who keeps calling herself a "low-tier fairy" and at one point even smiles while stating that nobody would want to be a fairy.
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* SplitPersonalityMerge: Saria uses this on the Links in order to prove to them that they're [[{{Reincarnation}} Reincarnations]], but ends up almost accidently [[MindRape crushing their individual minds]] by doing so.
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* SplitPersonalityMerge: Saria uses this on the Links in order to prove to them that they're [[{{Reincarnation}} Reincarnations]], but ends up almost accidently [[MindRape crushing their individual minds]] by doing so.
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* TradeSnark:
-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest."
-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest."
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* TradeSnark:
TradeSnark:
-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest." "
-> "Oh, I get it, let me guess! The [[TheHero Great Mighty Hero™]] can't help but feel humiliated, because I refuse to play the role of the [[PrincessClassic Fair Pure Princess™]], who [[StayInTheKitchen nicely stays behind]] and waits until he's done with boosting his ego on some stupid quest.
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A ''TheLegendOfZelda'' Fanfiction, written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1292951/Nenilein Nenilein]], ''aka'' [[Tropers.MeikyuButterfly Meikyu Butterfly]]. It is best described as a CrossOver, starting out covering ''TheWindWaker'' and ''OcarinaOfTime'', but eventually expanding to ''TwilightPrincess'', while continuing to incorporate more and more elements of most of the other games as well, like ''MajorasMask'' and even ''TheAdventureOfLink''.
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* BalefulPolymorph: Medli's spell crystal turns out to be [[spoiler: The "FAIRY"-spell from TheAdventureOfLink, after Aryll accidently uses it on her brother...]] HilarityEnsues.
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* BalefulPolymorph: Medli's spell crystal turns out to be [[spoiler: The "FAIRY"-spell from TheAdventureOfLink, ''VideoGame/ZeldaIITheAdventureOfLink'', after Aryll accidently uses it on her brother...]] HilarityEnsues.
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Badass Angster is redirected per TRS.
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* BadassAngster: Asking [=OoT!Link=] to talk about [[MajorasMask Termina]] is not really a good idea.
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Axed Understatement Sinkhole(s).
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Originally written and published in german on [[http://www.fanfiktion.de Fanfiktion.de]] ([[XtremeKoolLetterz Yes, that's how it's spelt]]) under the title [[CompletelyDifferentTitle "Unify]][[GratuitousEnglish -Breaking the frontiers"]], where it is, with 66 chapters, still ongoing, the English version is basically the author trying to expand and enhance the original story, by filling it's PlotHoles and improving the pacing, as well as the dialogue. Earlier chapters suffer from RougeAnglesOfSatin though, due to the (non-native-speaker) author being too impatient to let her beta-reader catch up, but newer chapters resolved this issue by "hiring" a second beta-reader. [[{{Understatement}} The prose and mood of the story change]] [[MoodWhiplash a lot between chapter 20 and 30]]
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Originally written and published in german German on [[http://www.fanfiktion.de Fanfiktion.de]] ([[XtremeKoolLetterz Yes, that's how it's spelt]]) under the title [[CompletelyDifferentTitle "Unify]][[GratuitousEnglish -Breaking the frontiers"]], where it is, with 66 chapters, still ongoing, the English version is basically the author trying to expand and enhance the original story, by filling it's PlotHoles and improving the pacing, as well as the dialogue. Earlier chapters suffer from RougeAnglesOfSatin though, due to the (non-native-speaker) author being too impatient to let her beta-reader catch up, but newer chapters resolved this issue by "hiring" a second beta-reader. [[{{Understatement}} [[MoodWhiplash The prose and mood of the story change]] [[MoodWhiplash change a lot between chapter 20 and 30]]
