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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], several [[Anime/FullMetalPanic Arm Slaves]], a [[Anime/ValvraveTheLiberator Valvrave]] unit, and a [[Franchise/MetalGearSolid Metal Gear RAY]], the latter of which is said to belong to the [[{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}} Fenrir mercenary company]].
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 [[{{Anime/Gundam00}} Exia Gundam]], several [[Anime/FullMetalPanic Arm Slaves]], a [[Anime/ValvraveTheLiberator Valvrave]] unit, and a [[Franchise/MetalGearSolid Metal Gear RAY]], the latter of which is said to belong to the [[{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}} Fenrir mercenary company]].
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* CanonWielding: Drops references to works that don't play a big part in the story itself, including:
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] unit, and a Metal Gear RAY, the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa Fenrir mercenary company]].
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], several [[Anime/FullMetalPanic Arm Slaves]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] [[Anime/ValvraveTheLiberator Valvrave]] unit, and a [[Franchise/MetalGearSolid Metal Gear RAY, RAY]], the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa [[{{VisualNovel/Danganronpa}} Fenrir mercenary company]].
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] unit, and a Metal Gear RAY, the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNoval/Danganronpa Fenrir mercenary company]].
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] unit, and a Metal Gear RAY, the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNoval/Danganronpa [[VisualNovel/Danganronpa Fenrir mercenary company]].
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** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] unit, and a Metal Gear RAY, the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNoval/Danganronpa Fenrir mercenary company]].
** Several mechs located in [[SecretGovernmentWarehouse Siege Perilous]], including the remains of the [[Anime/Gundam00 Exia Gundam]], a [[Anime/ValveraveTheLiberator Valverave]] unit, and a Metal Gear RAY, the latter of which is said to belong to the [[VisualNoval/Danganronpa Fenrir mercenary company]].
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* PlotTailoredToTheParty: Parodied. [[spoiler:Cowboy Bebop]] has an overly-elaborate setup that can only be thwarted by a bunch of arbitrary things that the main characters just happen to be good at.
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* PlotTailoredToTheParty: Parodied. [[spoiler:Cowboy Bebop]] has an overly-elaborate setup that can only be thwarted by a bunch of arbitrary things that the main characters just happen to be good at. Their first instinct, however, is to each do the wrong things.
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* PlotTailoredToTheParty: Parodied. [[spoiler:Cowboy Bebop]] has an overly-elaborate setup that can only be thwarted by a bunch of arbitrary things that the main characters just happen to be good at.
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* CowboyBebopAtHisComputer: [[spoiler: Subverted; the Big Bad turns out to be an OC named "Cowboy Bebop", who is indeed at his computer.]]
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* AntiAntiChrist: Lighting used to be this, but no longer counts.
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* AntiAntiChrist: Lighting Lightning used to be this, but no longer counts.
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** [[Webcomic/{{Megatokyo}} Masamichi Sonoda]] makes a brief appearance in the second chapter to [[KickedUpstairs demote Lighting to paperwork duty]].
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* KnightInSourArmor: Detective Ikari, Lighting.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Detective Ikari, Lighting.Lightning.
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* OmnidisciplinaryScientist: Averted. Lighting studied forensics and criminology, Shulk studies [[SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic magic]] and [[AdventureArchaeologist archaeology]] related to magic with some skill with {{Magitek}}, Nia is a [[TheMedic physician]], and Simon is an [[TheEngineer expert mechanic]].
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* OmnidisciplinaryScientist: Averted. Lighting Lightning studied forensics and criminology, Shulk studies [[SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic magic]] and [[AdventureArchaeologist archaeology]] related to magic with some skill with {{Magitek}}, Nia is a [[TheMedic physician]], and Simon is an [[TheEngineer expert mechanic]].
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* NamesTheSame: OriginalCharacter Hope and the Hope from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII''. Falls under OneSteveLimit though, as the ''Final Fantasy XIII'' Hope is not a main character.
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* NamesTheSame: OriginalCharacter Hope and the Hope from ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII''. Falls under OneSteveLimit though, as the ''Final Fantasy XIII'' Hope is not a main character. No big loss though, since the DCU's Lightning isn't a terribly popular character.
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** Also, in an Omake chapter, Samuel [=McGoober=], the son of the cousin of the butler of the boss of the guy who does the laundry for the best friend of [[JojosBizzareAdventure Dio Brando]].
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** Also, in an Omake chapter, Samuel [=McGoober=], the son of the cousin of the butler of the boss of the guy who does the laundry for the best friend of [[JojosBizzareAdventure [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando]].
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** The AprilFoolsDay chapter is a ''JoJosBizzareAdventure'' fanfic written by Rivalz. It contains a handful of these.
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** The AprilFoolsDay chapter is a ''JoJosBizzareAdventure'' ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fanfic written by Rivalz. It contains a handful of these.
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** The Stands that [[spoiler:Rivalz invents for his ''JojosBizzareAdventure'' fic]] are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam. Notable in that these are songs that Edrobot considers GuiltyPleasures at best.
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** The Stands that [[spoiler:Rivalz invents for his ''JojosBizzareAdventure'' ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fic]] are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam. Notable in that these are songs that Edrobot considers GuiltyPleasures at best.
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* KentBrockmanNews: Features ''Channel 52'' backup segments, including including [[Series/DoctorWho The Doctor]] as the station's foreign correspondent.
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* KentBrockmanNews: Features ''Channel 52'' backup segments, including including [[Series/DoctorWho The Doctor]] as the station's foreign correspondent.
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** Hexagon discovers he can surf through the air on his shield. Or rather, he could if he could keep his balance...
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An in-progress story written by Edrobot for Camp UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo 2013. A crossover between the DCU and all kinds of Anime and Video Games, including [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Gurren Lagann]], VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII, VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}, Franchise/CodeGeass, VisualNovel/FateStayNight, Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion, Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica, and Fullmetal Alchemist.
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An in-progress story written by Edrobot for Camp UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo 2013. A crossover between the DCU and all kinds of Anime and Video Games, including [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann ''[[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Gurren Lagann]], VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII, VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}, Franchise/CodeGeass, VisualNovel/FateStayNight, Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion, Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica, Lagann]]'', ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII'', ''VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}'', ''Franchise/CodeGeass'', ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'', ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', and Fullmetal Alchemist.
''Fullmetal Alchemist''.
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** [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Harvey Bullock]], ComicBook/TheQuestion, [[ComicBook/{{Hellblazer}} JohnConstantine]], [[ComicBook/FrankensteinAgentOfSHADE Frankenstein]], [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi Springfield]], [[Manga/DeathNote L]], and WebVideo/{{Phelous}} appear in "Channel 52" segments, while Anime/CaptainHarlock, [[Anime/CoyoteRagtimeShow Mister]] and [[Franchise/OnePiece Monkey D. Luffy]] get brief mentions.
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** [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Harvey Bullock]], ComicBook/TheQuestion, [[ComicBook/{{Hellblazer}} JohnConstantine]], John Constantine]], [[ComicBook/FrankensteinAgentOfSHADE Frankenstein]], [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi Springfield]], [[Manga/DeathNote L]], and WebVideo/{{Phelous}} appear in "Channel 52" segments, while Anime/CaptainHarlock, [[Anime/CoyoteRagtimeShow Mister]] and [[Franchise/OnePiece Monkey D. Luffy]] get brief mentions.
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* ClosetGeek: WordOfGod says that Milly is a huge fan of Anime/GaoGaiGar.
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* ClosetGeek: WordOfGod says that Milly is a huge fan of Anime/GaoGaiGar.''Anime/GaoGaiGar''.
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** The most dramatic change in canon has to be Shulk from VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}, who in this continuity is an archaeologist employed by the [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Mages Association]].
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** The most dramatic change in canon has to be Shulk from VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}, ''VideoGame/{{Xenoblade}}'', who in this continuity is an archaeologist employed by the [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Mages Association]].
* MotorMouth: [[Anime/ExcelSaga Excel]].
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* MotorMouth: [[Anime/ExcelSaga Excel]].
* NamesTheSame: OriginalCharacter Hope and the Hope from VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII. Falls under OneSteveLimit though, as the VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII Hope is not a main character.
* NamesTheSame: OriginalCharacter Hope and the Hope from VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII. Falls under OneSteveLimit though, as the VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII Hope is not a main character.
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** Also, in an Omake chapter, Samuel McGoober, the son of the cousin of the butler of the boss of the guy who does the laundry for the best friend of [[JojosBizzareAdventure Dio Brando]].
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** Also, in an Omake chapter, Samuel McGoober, [=McGoober=], the son of the cousin of the butler of the boss of the guy who does the laundry for the best friend of [[JojosBizzareAdventure Dio Brando]].
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** Lightning's powerset is based on her appearance in FinalFantasyXIII, but her costumes come from LightningReturnsFinalFantasyXIII.
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** Lightning's powerset is based on her appearance in FinalFantasyXIII, ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIII'', but her costumes come from LightningReturnsFinalFantasyXIII.''VideoGame/LightningReturnsFinalFantasyXIII''.
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** The AprilFoolsDay chapter is a JoJosBizzareAdventure fanfic written by Rivalz. It contains a handful of these.
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** The AprilFoolsDay chapter is a JoJosBizzareAdventure ''JoJosBizzareAdventure'' fanfic written by Rivalz. It contains a handful of these.
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** Detective Ikari accuses Detective Maniwa of watching too much "[[Series/LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit Special Victims Unit]]".
*** Later on, a Channel 52 sequence shows off a scene from "[[BlandNameProduct Lawyers and Orderlies: Sensational Victims Unit]]". The discrepancy is eventually retconned by revealing that the latter show is a [[TheMockbuster Mockbuster]] produced by Uwe [[Creator/EdWood Wood]].
*** Later on, a Channel 52 sequence shows off a scene from "[[BlandNameProduct Lawyers and Orderlies: Sensational Victims Unit]]". The discrepancy is eventually retconned by revealing that the latter show is a [[TheMockbuster Mockbuster]] produced by Uwe [[Creator/EdWood Wood]].
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** Detective Ikari accuses Detective Maniwa of watching too much "[[Series/LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit ''[[Series/LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit Special Victims Unit]]".
Unit]]''.
*** Later on, a Channel 52 sequence shows off a scene from"[[BlandNameProduct ''[[BlandNameProduct Lawyers and Orderlies: Sensational Victims Unit]]".Unit]]''. The discrepancy is eventually retconned by revealing that the latter show is a [[TheMockbuster Mockbuster]] produced by Uwe [[Creator/EdWood Wood]].
*** Later on, a Channel 52 sequence shows off a scene from
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* StylisticSuck: Lawers and Orderlies: Sensational Victims Unit. An in-universe {{Mockbuster}} of LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit featuring over-the-top acting, an ObviouslyEvil villain named Ivan McNasty, and a plot that's very obviously RippedFromTheHeadlines.
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* StylisticSuck: Lawers and Orderlies: Sensational Victims Unit. An in-universe {{Mockbuster}} of LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit ''Series/LawAndOrderSpecialVictimsUnit'' featuring over-the-top acting, an ObviouslyEvil villain named Ivan McNasty, [=McNasty=], and a plot that's very obviously RippedFromTheHeadlines.
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* TranslationConventions: Everyone is assumed to be speaking Japanese translated into English unless stated otherwise. One of the authors notes explains that Edrobot didn't refer to a police station as a Koban because few Americans know what that word means.
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* TranslationConventions: TranslationConvention: Everyone is assumed to be speaking Japanese translated into English unless stated otherwise. One of the authors notes explains that Edrobot didn't refer to a police station as a Koban because few Americans know what that word means.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rivalz not only aquires a Stand out of nowhere, [[spoiler: but it also evolves into Side of a Bullet Requiem]] for no clear reason.
* OriginalCharacter: Xerxes Tireiron Dada
* OriginalCharacter: Xerxes Tireiron Dada
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rivalz not only aquires a Stand out of nowhere, [[spoiler: but it also evolves into Side of a Bullet Requiem]] for no clear reason.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rivalz not only aquires a Stand out of nowhere, [[spoiler: but it also evolves into Side of a Bullet Requiem]] for no clear reason.
* Running Gag: "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Jotaro/Xerxes/Dio knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
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** The Stands that [[spoiler:Rivalz invents for his JojosBizzareAdventure ''JojosBizzareAdventure'' fic]] are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam. Notable in that these are songs that Edrobot considers GuiltyPleasures at best.
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Almost]] everything T.K. says is a line from a song of some sort.
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheSandman Destruction]]. It's implied that this is yet another attempt to do be something other than his namesake. And he's really bad at it.]]
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheSandman Destruction]]. It's implied that this is yet another attempt to do be something other than his namesake. And he's really bad at it.]]
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* ForcedIntoEvil: Inverted. Teddy Bomber was threatening to blow up a maid cafe before he was mistaken for a member of the JSJ, and was then drafted into the Howling Dynamite Beef Brigade in spite of his protests.
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* ForcedIntoEvil: Inverted. Teddy Bomber was threatening to blow up a maid cafe before he was mistaken for a member of the JSJ, and was then drafted into the Howling Dynamite Beef Brigade in spite of his protests.protests.
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheSandman Destruction]]. It's implied that this is yet another attempt to do be something other than his namesake. And he's really bad at it.]]
* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Almost]] everything T.K. says is a line from a song of some sort.
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheSandman Destruction]]. It's implied that this is yet another attempt to do be something other than his namesake. And he's really bad at it.]]
* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Almost]] everything T.K. says is a line from a song of some sort.
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* DubNameChange: Lampshaded with [[Anime/DragonBallZ Hercu- I mean Mr. Satan]].
* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Almost]] everything T.K. says is a line from a song of some sort.
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/TheSandman Destruction]]. It's implied that this is yet another attempt to do be something other than his namesake. And he's really bad at it.]]
* FiveManBand: A much more clearly-defined example than in the main fic.
** TheLeader: [[Anime/MegamanNTWarrior Commander Beef]]
** TheLancer: [[Series/StreetFighter Dan Hibiki]]
** TheBigGuy: [[Anime/AngelBeats T.K.]]
** TheChick: [[Anime/ArcadeGamerFubuki Fubuki]]
** TheSmartGuy: [[Anime/CowboyBebop Teddy Bomber]]
* ForcedIntoEvil: Inverted. Teddy Bomber was threatening to blow up a maid cafe before he was mistaken for a member of the JSJ, and was then drafted into the Howling Dynamite Beef Brigade in spite of his protests.
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** Also, in an Omake chapter, Samuel McGoober, the son of the cousin of the butler of the boss of the guy who does the laundry for the best friend of [[JojosBizzareAdventure Dio Brando]].
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Sayaka gets hit with this a lot harder than in canon. Not only does Hitomi snatch Kyosuke, but she then gets a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown by Sho Minamimoto, and THEN she gets kidnapped by a bunch of monsters after trying to rescue Milly, gets thrown into a prison cell.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Sayaka gets hit with this a lot harder than in canon. Not only does Hitomi snatch Kyosuke, but she then gets a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown by Sho Minamimoto, and THEN she gets kidnapped by a bunch of monsters after trying to rescue Milly, gets thrown into a prison cell.cell, and most likely goes insane.]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: Sayaka's plight is still based on The Little Mermaid, but the "changeling" arc is based on TabletopGames/ChangelingTheLost.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Sayaka gets hit with this a lot harder than in canon. Not only does Hitomi snatch Kyosuke, but she then gets a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown by Sho Minamimoto, and THEN she gets kidnapped by a bunch of monsters after trying to rescue Milly.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Sayaka gets hit with this a lot harder than in canon. Not only does Hitomi snatch Kyosuke, but she then gets a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown by Sho Minamimoto, and THEN she gets kidnapped by a bunch of monsters after trying to rescue Milly.Milly, gets thrown into a prison cell.]]
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** Lightning's powerset is based on her appearance in FinalFantasyXIII, but her costumes come from LightningReturnsFinalFantasyXIII.
* ThePiratesWhoDontDoAnything: Averted with Lightning; as of chapter 9, we finally get to see her at work as a detective.
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** [[spoiler:Astute readers might notice that [[OriginalCharacter Hope]] is a Manga/FullmetalAlchemist-style Homunculus who has severely-weakened versions of the powers of seven other homunculi, including the manga version of Pride and the 2003 anime version of Sloth.]]
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** [[spoiler:Astute readers might notice that [[OriginalCharacter Hope]] is a Manga/FullmetalAlchemist-style Homunculus who has severely-weakened versions of the powers of seven other homunculi, including the manga version of Pride and the 2003 anime version of Sloth.Sloth, both of which belong to mutually-exclusive continuities.]]
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* TimeTravel
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* SeriesContinuityError: Despite what Joseph claims, Dio is not and has never been his "Evil Twin Stepbrother". However, this claim just adds to the StylisticSuck.
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** In the AprilFoolsDay chapter, the Stands Rivalz invents for his JojosBizzareAdventure fic are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam.
** "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Character X knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
** "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Character X knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
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* UsefulNotes/WorldWarII: Downplayed, at least compared to the JSA. The team was originally conceived in the aftermath of WWII as a way of getting around Japan's ban on armed forces, though the team was never actually created.
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* UsefulNotes/WorldWarII: Downplayed, at least compared to the JSA. The team was originally conceived in the aftermath of WWII as a way of getting around Japan's ban on armed forces, though the team was never actually created.created.
!Rivaz's Bizarre Adventure (A one-shot written for April Fools Day) contains the following tropes:
* AuthorAppeal: [[spoiler: In-universe example. Rivalz writes a story about rescuing Milly, who then falls in love with him. A great amount of attention is paid to describing her breasts.]]
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Parodied with Xerxes Tireiron Dada, a character who was given a name that only Rivalz thinks is cool [[spoiler:because he invented him]].
* BigBad: Dio Brando
* CanonDiscontinuity: This story doesn't fit into the ongoing continuity at all. [[spoiler:Even the real world scene has no connection to the main fic's plot.]]
* DemonKingNobunaga: Revived as a Stand-using Zombie by Dio.
* FetishRetardant: [[spoiler:Rivalz]] describes Milly's breasts as being "softball-sized".
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of course, Dio says that he isn't quite ''that'' [[EvenEvilHasStandards evil]]...
* OriginalCharacter: Xerxes Tireiron Dada
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rivalz not only aquires a Stand out of nowhere, [[spoiler: but it also evolves into Side of a Bullet Requiem]] for no clear reason.
* ShoutOut
** The Stands that [[spoiler:Rivalz invents for his JojosBizzareAdventure fic]] are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam. Notable in that these are songs that Edrobot considers GuiltyPleasures at best.
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
*Running Gag: "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Jotaro/Xerxes/Dio knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
* TimeTravel
!Rivaz's Bizarre Adventure (A one-shot written for April Fools Day) contains the following tropes:
* AuthorAppeal: [[spoiler: In-universe example. Rivalz writes a story about rescuing Milly, who then falls in love with him. A great amount of attention is paid to describing her breasts.]]
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Parodied with Xerxes Tireiron Dada, a character who was given a name that only Rivalz thinks is cool [[spoiler:because he invented him]].
* BigBad: Dio Brando
* CanonDiscontinuity: This story doesn't fit into the ongoing continuity at all. [[spoiler:Even the real world scene has no connection to the main fic's plot.]]
* DemonKingNobunaga: Revived as a Stand-using Zombie by Dio.
* FetishRetardant: [[spoiler:Rivalz]] describes Milly's breasts as being "softball-sized".
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Of course, Dio says that he isn't quite ''that'' [[EvenEvilHasStandards evil]]...
* OriginalCharacter: Xerxes Tireiron Dada
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Rivalz not only aquires a Stand out of nowhere, [[spoiler: but it also evolves into Side of a Bullet Requiem]] for no clear reason.
* ShoutOut
** The Stands that [[spoiler:Rivalz invents for his JojosBizzareAdventure fic]] are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam. Notable in that these are songs that Edrobot considers GuiltyPleasures at best.
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
*Running Gag: "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Jotaro/Xerxes/Dio knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
* TimeTravel
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* Crossover: With Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000, before the first chapter was even finished, no less!
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* Crossover: {{Crossover}}: With Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000, before the first chapter was even finished, no less!
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** Sho Minamimoto is a member of [[SCPFoundation Are We Cool Yet?]], and claims to have created several SCP items.
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** The AprilFoolsDay chapter is a JoJosBizzareAdventure fanfic written by Rivalz. It contains a handful of these:
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** In the AprilFoolsDay chapter, the Stands Rivalz invents for his JojosBizzareAdventure fic are called [[{{Music/LMFAO}} Party Rock Anthem]], [[{{Music/Nickelback}} Side of a Bullet]], and SpaceJam.
** "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Character X knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
** "But it was a lie. For in his heart, Character X knew that Rivalz would be his greatest rival."
** The character Xerxes Tireiron Dada was named after a character from the obscure anime "Magnos the Robot".
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There is also [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1067110 a side-story]] set in the same universe
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There is also [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1067110 a side-story]] set in the same universe
universe, as well as a non-canon AprilFoolsDay [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1405942 chapter]].
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* MotorMouth: [[ExcelSaga Excel]].
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* MotorMouth: [[ExcelSaga [[Anime/ExcelSaga Excel]].